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Contents
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Connecting ideas using Writing complications
because.. .................................................... 50 for stories................................................ 80
Connecting ideas using so................ 51 Writing resolutions for stories......... 81
Connecting ideas using so and Analysing the elements
because.. .................................................... 52 of a story.. ................................................. 82
NAPLAN-style test................................ 53 Considering the audience
Writing task: Connecting ideas for a story................................................. 83
in texts.. ..................................................... 54 Planning stories.................................... 84
Writing story conversation in
CHAPTER 7 Writing conversation ......... 55 paragraphs.............................................. 85
Using speech marks to write Writing play scripts.. ............................ 86
conversation........................................... 55
Using words instead of said in a CHAPTER 10 Persuasive texts. . ..................... 88
conversation.......................................... 60 Writing opinions.. ................................. 88
Writing conversation........................... 61 Recognising point of view............... 90
NAPLAN-style test................................ 62 Writing an opposite point
Writing task: Writing of view. . ..................................................... 91
conversation........................................... 63 Writing different points
of view. . ..................................................... 92
SECTION 2 Writing reasons for a point
of view. . ..................................................... 93
CHAPTER 8 Informative texts .................... 64
Using persuasive words..................... 95
Writing paragraphs in reports........ 64
Sequencing arguments. . ................... 96
Summarising paragraphs in
reports.. ..................................................... 65 Writing argument texts...................... 97
Sorting sentences into Writing advertisements. . .................... 98
paragraphs for a report..................... 66
SECTION 3
Using pronouns to replace
nouns. . ....................................................... 67
CHAPTER 11 Puzzle pages. . ............................ 102.
Sequencing events in recounts.. ..... 69
Writing acrostic poems.. .................. 102
Sequencing steps in recipes.. ........... 72
Writing nouns for animals.............. 103
Writing the method in recipes........ 73
Spotting the adjectives in
Writing recipes. . ..................................... 74 find-a-word puzzles. . ........................ 104
Solving noun crossword
CHAPTER 9 Imaginative texts................... 75
puzzles................................................... 105
Creating characters for stories.. ....... 75
Writing proper nouns for
Creating settings for stories............. 77 people’s names.. ................................. 106
Judging a story plot.. ........................... 78
Matching titles to stories................... 79 Answers..................................................................... 107
Contents iii
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About this book
The aim of this book is to teach children the skills they need to become
effective writers for different purposes and audiences.
Children are taught how to write a variety of informative, imaginative and
persuasive texts, and they are taught grammar and punctuation skills in the
context of effective written communication.
The learning sequence presented in this book begins with teaching children
how to recognise and use different kinds of sentences. This sequence
establishes the role of sentences in making meaning. Subsequent chapters
teach children about parts of a sentence: words and word groups; then how
to link ideas across sentences and paragraphs; and finally how to construct
whole texts for different purposes.
The sample texts provided in this book can be used as models for children’s
independent writing.
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SECTION 1
Chapter 1 Sentences—statements
C hapter 1 S entences—statements 1
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Adding punctuation to statements
Rewrite each statement correctly. Begin with a capital letter and end
with a full stop.
A trip to the dentist
1 my sister went to the dentist yesterday
5 Write two sentences about your last trip to the dentist or doctor.
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Adding punctuation to statements
3 my birthday is in May
8 we love bananas
C hapter 1 S entences—statements 3
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Fact or opinion?
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We went to Freshwater Beach.
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My little brother played with his plastic sea animals.
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We had ice-cream on the way home.
Note: You can agree or disagree with an opinion but not a fact.
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Word order in statements
C hapter 1 S entences—statements 5
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Word order in statements
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Word order in statements
C hapter 1 S entences—statements 7
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NAPLAN-style test
What have you learnt about statements?
1 Which sentence is correct?
A the worker ants do all the work B the worker ants do all the work.
C The worker ants do all the work. D The worker ants the work do all.
2 Which sentence is correct?
A Platypuses are eaten by snakes. B platypuses are eaten by snakes.
C Platypuses by snakes eaten. D Platypuses eaten are by snakes.
3 Which sentence is correct?
A platypuses are active at night. B Platypuses are active at night.
C Platypuses active are at night. D Platypuses are active at night
4 Which sentence is correct?
A female ants don’t have wings. B Female have wings ants don’t.
C Female ants don’t have wings. D Wings don’t have female ants.
5 Which statement is a fact?
A My brother has black hair. B My brother runs faster than anyone.
C I love my brother. D My brother is funny.
6 Which statement is a fact?
A Cherries are delicious. B Cherries are my favourite fruit.
C Cherries grow on trees. D The big dark ones are the best.
7 Which statement is an opinion?
A I am seven. B I live in a house.
C I have a sister. D My sister can be annoying.
8 Which statement is an opinion?
A My brother reads science fiction. B I read every night.
C I think funny stories are the best. D My brother reads every night.
9 Write the words in the correct order to make a statement. Use a capital letter to
begin and a full stop at the end.
to the shop the boy ran
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Writing task: Writing statements
Write about yourself. Finish each statement.
My name is ___________________________________________.
C hapter 1 S entences—statements 9
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Sentences—questions,
Chapter 2 commands and
exclamations
Adding punctuation to questions
Note: These questions begin with Who. They ask for the names of story characters.
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Adding punctuation to questions
Tip! Q
uestions often begin with ‘wh’ words: what, when, where,
who, which, why.
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Linking parts of questions
5 How much
6 How many
7 How often
8 How far
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Adding punctuation to commands
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ommands are sentences that tell you to do something.
Commands in recipes usually end with a full stop.
3 stir well
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Adding punctuation to exclamations
Rewrite each exclamation. Begin with a capital letter and end with an
exclamation mark.
Note: Speakers use a strong voice, gestures and facial expression for exclamations.
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Adding punctuation to exclamations
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Note: Say each exclamation out loud. Use a strong voice, gestures and facial expression.
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Questions and exclamations
7 help me 8 go away
Questions Exclamations
Note: The questions begin with who, what, where and why.
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NAPLAN-style test
What have you learnt about questions, commands and exclamations?
10
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Writing task: Writing questions
1 Question:
2 Question:
3 Question:
4 Question:
5 Question:
Question:
Answer:
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Chapter 3 Every sentence
has a verb
Tip! Doing verbs are used for actions, e.g. hop, skip, jump.
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Adding doing verbs to statements
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Adding doing verbs to statements
Choose a doing verb from the box for Tom’s action in each statement.
1 Tom __________________________________
along the path.
2 Tom _________________________
along the path.
3 Tom ___________________________
4
along the path.
4 Tom ______________________________
along the path.
5
5 Tom __________________________________
along the path.
Note: The doing verbs make a big difference to the meaning of each sentence.
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Adding saying verbs to statements
Tip! Saying verbs let readers know that something is being said.
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Adding doing and saying verbs
oing verbs and saying verbs tell how a character in a story behaves.
D
Note:
The saying verbs above are purred and yowled.
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Checking each sentence for a verb
Not a
Sentence sentence
4 It jumped up.
8 on its paw.
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Writing sentences correctly
1
the girl ate her apple
2
the children raced to the tree
3
the children at the concert
4
the boy and his bike to school
Note: A statement begins with a capital letter and ends with a full stop.
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NAPLAN-style test
What have you learnt about verbs? Which word in each sentence is the verb?
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Writing task: Writing verbs
Write a verb from the box on each line. You can use any verb more
than once.
Now the puppy ____________ her loudest bark of all. She ______________
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Chapter 4 Noun groups
Tip! Nouns are words for people, places, animals, ideas and
things, e.g. girl, school, mouse, peace, backpack.
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Using capital letters for proper nouns
Tip! P
roper nouns are names of particular people, places, animals,
ideas and things, e.g. George, Australia, Golden Bell Frog,
Chinese New Year.
A proper noun begins with a capital letter. Write the proper nouns
correctly.
1 These are proper nouns for people:
blake youngman
alexandra cowan
collins street
uluru
july
monday
december
tuesday
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Adding punctuation to recounts
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Using adjectives in descriptions
1 2
sharp blunt sad happy
3 4
big small soft hard
5 This is a _________________________,
_____________________ tree.
6 This is a ______________________,
__________________ kitten.
7 This is a ______________________,
__________________ apple.
__________________ hat.
Note: Adjectives (describing words) tell readers what something is like.
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Using adjectives in descriptions
________________ zebra.
This is a ,
elephant.
Note: Adjectives (describing words) help readers imagine exactly what something is like.
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Recognising adjectives
Note: Adjectives (describing words) help readers imagine what something is like.
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Adding adjectives to texts
The teacher sat on his chair at the front of the class. He looked at
his students.
Note: djectives (describing words) express the writer or speaker’s point of view about a
A
subject, e.g. a story could be boring to one person but great to another.
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NAPLAN-style test
What have you learnt about noun groups?
8 9
Your
Test topics: Common and proper nouns, adjectives, sentence punctuation
Mark: 10
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Writing task: Writing sentences with noun groups
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Sentences that tell
Chapter 5 how, where or
when
Adding words that tell how
Write a word in each space to add meaning to the verb. Use the words
in the box or words of your own.
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Adding words that tell how
Hold on _______________________________.
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Adding words that tell where
Note: Each phrase begins with a preposition, e.g. in, on, onto, under, between, across, around.
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Adding words that tell where
Write your own sentence beginnings for the phrases that tell where.
7 on the roller-coaster.
Note: ach phrase begins with a preposition, e.g. beneath, near, behind, inside, through,
E
onto, on, under.
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Adding words that tell where
1 Daisy galloped .
2 Sally jumped .
3 Jim tumbled .
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Adding words that tell when
7 I have to do my homework
Note: ach phrase that tells when begins with a preposition, e.g. at, during, after, before,
E
until, since, on, in.
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Writing texts in logical order
Cycling
I like cycling for a number of reasons.
___________________, cycling is fun.
___________________, cycling is great exercise.
___________________, cycling is faster than walking.
And ___________________, cycling is better for the environment than
using a car.
2 Write your own opinion text about something you like, e.g. reading,
hiking, swimming, dancing or a board game. Think of four reasons
why you like it. List the most important reason first.
(Title)
I like for a number of reasons.
Firstly, is .
Secondly, is .
Thirdly, is .
Finally, is .
Note: Each text gives reasons for an opinion.
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NAPLAN-style test
What have you learnt about sentences?
Which words complete the sentences to tell how?
Your
Test topics: Words and phrases that tell how, where and when
Mark: 10
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Writing task: Writing phrases to tell where and when
2 Imagine you are writing a scary story. Write some ‘where’ and
‘when’ phrases you could use to make your story spooky.
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Chapter 6 Connecting ideas in
sentences
Join the sentences using and. Write the new sentences on the lines.
1 We had a barbecue. We cooked sausages.
6 The boy crossed the street. The boy walked into the shop.
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Connecting items in lists using commas
Tip! U se a comma between items in a list. Use and before the last
item instead of a comma, e.g.
I will take pencils and a sharpener to school. I will take books to school.
I will take pencils, a sharpener and books to school.
Note: se a before nouns starting with a consonant sound, e.g. a towel. Use an before nouns
U
starting with a vowel sound, e.g. an umbrella.
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Connecting ideas using but
Tip! Use but to join sentences when you compare ideas, e.g.
I like eating flowers but I like fruit better.
Join the sentences using but. Write the new sentences on the lines.
1 Orangutans prefer to eat fruit. They also eat flowers.
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Connecting ideas using or
Tip! Use or to indicate a choice, e.g.
Benji might eat the soup now.
Benji might save the soup for later.
Benji might eat the soup now or save the soup for later.
Join the sentences using or. Write the new sentences on the lines.
1 I could send you an email. I could phone you.
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Connecting ideas using because
Tip! Use because when you join sentences by adding a reason for
something, e.g.
I like chimpanzees. They look like people.
I like chimpanzees because they look like people.
Join the sentences using because. Write the new sentences on the lines.
1 I like my beanie. It keeps my ears warm.
__________________________________________________________________.
__________________________________________________________________.
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Connecting ideas using so
Tip! Use so to tell how one thing leads to another, e.g.
Why did the spider cross the road?
The spider crossed the road so it could get to its website.
Join the sentences using so. Write the new sentences on the lines.
1 It looked like rain. We couldn’t go to the beach.
6 Write your own sentence using so to tell how one thing leads
to another.
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Connecting ideas using so and because
Write about your favourite animal. Use the sample text as a model.
Title
Opening statement
Reasons
I like __________________________________ because:
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NAPLAN-style test
What have you learnt about connecting ideas? Circle the correct answers.
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Writing task: Connecting ideas in texts
Dance or gymnastics?
I like dancing and gymnastics.
Mum says I can do dancing ______ gymnastics after school this year
_______ not both.
I want to do both ______ Mum will only pay for one.
They are both fun ____ I prefer the dancing teacher to the gymnastics
teacher.
They are both good exercise ______ gymnastics is harder than dancing.
I have friends in both classes _________ my best friend does the dance
class.
I will do dancing this year.
Note: r is used in the first sentence to introduce the choice the writer has to make between
o
two things; but is used to compare the choices.
Test topics: U
sing connectives (but, or) to join sentences
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Chapter 7 Writing conversation
Colour the sentence in each pair that correctly uses speech marks.
1 “I eat whatever I can catch, bragged the big goanna.”
“I eat whatever I can catch,” bragged the big goanna.
2 “I mostly eat fruit and leaves, said” the skink.
“I mostly eat fruit and leaves,” said the skink.
3 “I eat other lizards,” said the goanna.
“I eat other lizards,” said the goanna.”
4 “I will eat you, announced the goanna.
“I will eat you,” announced the goanna.
5 “You won’t catch me,” replied the skink.
“You won’t catch me,” replied the skink.”
6 Come out of that hollow log so I can eat you, “said the goanna.”
“Come out of that hollow log so I can eat you,” said the goanna.
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Using speech marks to write conversation
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Using speech marks to write conversation
Tip! W
hen writing a conversation, a comma separates the part
that is spoken from the rest of the sentence.
Write the conversation from each speech bubble onto the lines. Use
speech marks.
Alice walked into the kitchen.
Hello, Mum.
It was.
Good.
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Using speech marks to write conversation
Note: Speech marks go before and after the part that is spoken in each sentence.
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Using speech marks to write conversation
Tip! Q
uestion marks, full stops and exclamation marks are used
even when the spoken words don’t make a sentence,
e.g. “No!” yelled Samantha.
Note: F ull stops, exclamation marks and question marks tell the reader how the words
are spoken.
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Using words instead of said in a conversation
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Writing conversation
Note: Using different words for said helps to make stories more interesting.
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NAPLAN-style test
What have you learnt about writing conversation?
Circle the answers with the correct punctuation.
Test topics:
Writing conversation, sentence punctuation, saying verbs, Your
interjections Mark: 10
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Writing task: Writing conversation
Write what the characters could be saying. Use speech marks and
saying verbs.
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SECTION 2
Chapter 8 Informative texts
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Summarising paragraphs in reports
Tip! A
paragraph is one or more sentences based on the same
idea. Every paragraph begins on a new line.
Write an answer from the box on each line to tell what the paragraphs
in the report are about.
Numbats
Paragraph 1 A numbat is a furry 1 This paragraph
Australian marsupial. It has a tells
pointy nose, stripes on its body
and a long bushy tail.
.
Paragraph 2 Numbats mainly eat termites. 2 This paragraph
An adult numbat eats tells
thousands of termites every day.
.
Paragraph 3 Numbats are endangered. 3 This paragraph
They are endangered because tells
too many are killed by foxes,
cats and bushfires. They are
also endangered because they
have nowhere to live when
their forests are cleared. .
In this report the first sentence in each paragraph lets readers know what the
Note:
paragraph will be about.
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Sorting sentences into paragraphs for a report
It
hunts at night for insects such as moths, as well as lizards, snails
and worms.
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Using pronouns to replace nouns
Tip! P
ronouns are words that replace nouns. Pronouns include
I, we, you, he, she, they, them, him and her.
has two mice. The mice play on their wheel. 2 ____________ climb their
6 ____________.
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Using pronouns to replace nouns
They She He
Lions live in groups called prides. One male is the boss of the pride.
______________ guards his territory. The females are the hunters.
______________ hunt at night. ______________ usually work as a team
to kill their prey.
Young male lions are forced out of the pride when ______________
are around two years old. ______________ form groups to hunt
together. When a young male is big and strong ______________ will
take over a pride for himself.
hey replaces the plural nouns lions and females. He replaces the singular nouns lion
T
Note:
and young male.
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Sequencing events in recounts
Write the events in the box in the correct order for the recount.
After looking for sea stars we had our picnic lunch.
Then we climbed around the rocks to look for sea stars.
We left the beach when it started to get dark.
The first thing we did was go for a swim.
Events
ords and phrases that sequence events in time include: Last Saturday, After,
W
Note:
Then, when, The first thing.
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Sequencing events in recounts
Write the sentences in the boxes in the correct order in the text. The
introduction and conclusion have been done for you.
She said that blue-tongues eat snails and beetles.
This morning I looked for snails and beetles in our garden but I didn’t find any.
The blue-tongue lizard must have eaten them all.
Yesterday I asked Mum what blue-tongues eat.
Note: his recount uses the time expressions Yesterday and This morning, the connecting word
T
but and the pronoun She.
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Sequencing events in recounts
Tip! R
ecounts use time words and connecting words to
sequence events.
Word bank
yesterday last weekend after school last night after dinner
after that next and then so finally now
Title: ___________________________________________
Introduction
Sequence of events
Conclusion
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Sequencing steps in recipes
The method in each recipe has been muddled. Number the steps in the
correct order.
1 Breakfast parfait
Ingredients Method
20 g rolled oats Eat cold.
1
2 cup coconut milk Top with berries and/or banana slices.
1
4 teaspoon ground cinnamon
Mix all ingredients together in a bowl.
1 teaspoon honey
1
Place in fridge for 20 minutes to soak.
2 apple, grated
2 Breakfast muesli
Ingredients Method
Repeat layers.
Note: The method is a series of commands. Commands usually begin with verbs.
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Writing the method in recipes
Tip! R
ecipes tell you how to make something. They include a list
of ingredients and a method.
Rewrite the recount as a recipe. The method has been started for you.
Recount: we made scones
First we turned on the oven to 220° and then we mixed 2 cups of self-raising
1 1 1
flour and 4 cup caster sugar in a large bowl. Then we stirred in 2 cup cream, 2 cup
lemonade and 2 tablespoons of milk. Then we tipped the dough onto a floured
board and kneaded it. After that, we rolled out the dough and cut it into pieces. We
put the scones on a greased oven tray and baked them for 15 minutes. We ate the
scones with jam and cream while they were still hot. They were delicious.
Recipe: scones
Ingredients Method
2 cups self-raising flour 1 Heat oven to 220°.
1
4 cup caster sugar 2 ix the flour and caster sugar in a large
M
bowl.
1
2 cup cream
3 Stir
1
2 cup lemonade
4
2 tablespoons milk
5
jam and cream to serve
6
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Writing recipes
Brain juice
This juice will make you a Spelling Bee Winner!
Ingredients Method
30 g chia seeds 1 Soak chia seeds in the apple juice for
1 cup apple juice 10 minutes.
Note: The method is written in a logical order. Each command starts with a doing verb.
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Chapter 9 Imaginative texts
3
an astronaut
in a science-
fiction story
4
a detective in a
mystery story
5
someone in
history
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Creating characters for stories
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Creating settings for stories
Write as many different settings as you can for each kind of story.
Each one has been started for you.
Narrative Settings
1 adventure a wild flooded river
7 mystery a classroom
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Judging a story plot
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Matching titles to stories
Write each story title in the box under the illustration that
matches it.
1 2
3 4
This is a story about a frog named Frogga. Frogga persuades all the
forest animals to help her find out who is polluting her creek. In the
end Frogga saves the creek.
5 Title: ____________________________________________________________
6 Title: ____________________________________________________________
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Writing complications for stories
Complication Suddenly…
3 Draw an
illustration
to match.
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Writing resolutions for stories
Write the rest of the story. Then give the story a title.
Title: __________________________________________________________
The boy walked through the woods. He was carrying some soup for his
sick grandmother. His father had told him to beware of the wolf. His
mother had told him not to talk to the wolf. They had both told him
to go around the woods and not through the woods. The boy walked
through the woods. The boy was not afraid of the wolf.
Just then he heard a noise in the trees beside the path. Out jumped the
wolf!
“Hello there,” chuckled the wolf.
“What do you want?” demanded the boy who was unafraid.
“I want you for dinner!” said the wolf.
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Analysing the elements of a story
Note: The events in the story help the three bears learn a lesson.
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Considering the audience for a story
1 Read the story. Give the story a title to gain the readers’ interest.
Title: _____________________________________________________________
One day when Rolf went to the park there was red spray paint on his
favourite tree.
His mother said, “The red paint marks the trees that are to be chopped
down by the Council.”
Rolf could not believe it! His favourite tree was to be chopped down. He
decided he would have to save his tree.
After school the next day Rolf and his mother went to the Council offices.
Rolf was told that the Council was worried the tree might fall over and hurt
someone.
Rolf’s mother helped Rolf do some research on the internet. Rolf found some
ways to save the tree. He found out that trees can be pruned, their trunks
supported by cables, and their roots encouraged to grow back with deep
watering. Rolf told everyone at his school about the ways to save the tree.
Rolf’s school wrote to the Council about the tree. The Council members had
a meeting and decided to save the tree.
Now Rolf is very happy. He climbs his tree every day after school and gives
it a big hug.
Note: he last box contains the coda. A coda is what happens after a story has been
T
resolved.
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Planning stories
“Please
help me.”
Note: haracters have to overcome their problem (the complication) for a story to have a
C
resolution.
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Writing story conversation in paragraphs
The text below has not been written correctly. There should be five
paragraphs. Rewrite the text correctly on the lines.
Back in time
The time machine landed in a field. “Look! There’s a stegosaurus,”
said Freya. “I can see some triceratops too,” said Mark, excitedly. “We
should get out and go for a walk,” suggested Freya. “I hope we don’t
run into a T-rex,” said Mark in a worried voice.
Paragraphs
1 Introduction
2 Freya speaks
3 Mark speaks
4 Freya speaks
5 Mark speaks
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Writing play scripts
Tip! When you write a play script each new speaker begins on a
new line, e.g.
Harry: Why did the chicken cross the playground?
Jane: I don’t know.
Harry: To get to the other slide.
Jane (laughing): Ha ha.
Harry: I have another joke.
Jane: OK, tell me.
You don’t need to use speech marks in play scripts.
Greta:
Freddy:
Note: S ometimes play scripts tell actors how to say their lines,
e.g. Jane (laughing): Ha ha.
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Writing play scripts
How do the children feel? What are they thinking? What might have
happened to make the children look like this? Write a play script for
the scene.
Play script
Title:
Note: lay scripts can include instructions for actors telling them how to act their roles
P
e.g. (angry voice).
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Chapter 10 Persuasive texts
Writing opinions
2 I (like / don’t like) it when the teacher lets children choose who will
.
Note: It’s important to have reasons to support a point of view.
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Writing opinions
Tip! P
ersuasive texts try to persuade others to agree with a
point of view.
Eat vegetables! Vegetables are good for you. Everyone should eat
at least five helpings of vegetables every day.
Note: ach text tries to persuade readers to do something or to agree with the writer
E
about something.
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Recognising point of view
Cross out the sentence in each paragraph that does not belong.
1 Zoos are not good for animals. It is cruel to keep animals in zoos.
Animals are meant to live freely in nature. Animals in zoos have
no chance to live a normal life. They must get very bored. Imagine
being a lion in a zoo. You cannot run anywhere. I would love to be
a lion in a zoo. People should leave animals in the wild.
3 Funny stories are the best kinds of stories. They are boring.
My brother likes funny stories too. We read them every night before
bed. It’s good to laugh at the silly things the characters do and say.
Note: ach statement that does not belong gives an opposite point of view to the rest
E
of the paragraph.
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Writing an opposite point of view
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Writing different points of view
because .
because .
because .
Bedtime
2 Teacher’s opinion:
Child’s opinion:
Parent’s opinion:
Going to the dentist
3 Dentist’s opinion:
Child’s opinion:
Parent’s opinion:
Note: People can change their opinions.
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Writing reasons for a point of view
Middle statements: Some leaves just taste like nothing. They have no flavour
reasons for opinion at all. Some leaves taste bitter and horrible.
Mum says leaves are good for me. She says I need to eat
them. I tell her that I am not a zebra. Zebras eat leaves.
Conclusion I think leaves should be left for animals and not fed to
humans. I don’t like to eat leaves.
Write about something you do not like. Use the sample text as a model.
Persuade others to agree with your point of view.
Title: _________________________________________________________________
Middle statements—
give your reasons.
Conclusion—restate
your opinion.
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Writing reasons for a point of view
Reasons Nana loves to cook for her family. Her kitchen always
smells good. We sit around her big old timber dining
table in the kitchen and she feeds us. We laugh and talk
and eat good food.
Describe a place where you feel happy. Persuade others that it is a good
place. Use the sample text as a model.
Title: _________________________________________
Opening statement—
state your opinion on
the topic.
Middle statements—
give your reasons.
Conclusion—restate
your opinion.
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Using persuasive words
Tip! W
ords such as definitely, very, really, must, should and
always are persuasive.
Write an argument text for or against allowing bare feet at school. Use
the sample text as a model.
Topic: Bare feet at school
Opening statement
Reason 1
Reason 2
Reason 3
Conclusion
Note: Did you give reasons and end with a command like the sample text?
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Sequencing arguments
Read the text below. Write the labels from the box in the table below to
label the parts of the text.
Labels
Dogs
I hate dogs in my neighbourhood.
Firstly, dogs make a mess. On the
footpath where I live there are always dog
droppings. Sometimes I forget to watch
where I put my feet. I once stepped in dog
poo and my mother had to throw out my
sneakers. They were really stinky and she
couldn’t get the poo out of the tread on the
soles.
Secondly, dogs are noisy. They bark all
the time. It is really annoying. Some dogs
bark for no reason at all. I think they just
get bored locked up inside all day.
Thirdly, dogs bite. My friend was bitten
by her own dog. You can’t trust dogs.
Finally, dogs are smelly. My friend’s
house smells like her dog. It makes me
sneeze.
I hate dogs. I think dogs should only be
allowed to live on farms where they help
with the sheep.
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Writing argument texts
Write three reasons and a conclusion for the text below. The opening
statement has been written for you.
Dogs
Opening
I love dogs.
statement
Reason 1
Reason 2
Reason 3
Conclusion
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Writing advertisements
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Writing advertisements
Ea s y t o us
e! Electric scooter L igh t
! f rame
G re at f u n For children aged 8+
Reach speeds of up to 16 km an hour.
a ble
Hand-operated front brake R e c h a rg e
b a t te r y
On sale NOW only $49. Buy Now!
Would you be interested in buying this scooter? Write your opinion.
Give four reasons.
Opinion I would/would not buy this scooter for the following
statement reasons:
Reason 1
Reason 2
Reason 3
Reason 4
Conclusion
Note: A successful advertisement will make you want to buy or use a product.
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Writing advertisements
Title: _________________________________________________________________
Opening opinion
statement
Reasons to try it
Conclusion/
command
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Writing advertisements
Think about something you could do to earn money, e.g. walk the dog, rake some
leaves or help wash the car.
Write an advertisement to sell your service. Use the sample text as a model.
Service
Cost
Address/phone number
Note: he promise at the end of the sample text is used to make readers feel
T
confident about the service.
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SECTION 3
Chapter 11 Puzzle pages
Tip! An acrostic poem has a special pattern. Letters from the
poem form a word or a phrase.
Bill Gibb
Best friend Goes to his dad’s every Saturday.
In the world. Is good at spelling and soccer
Loves animals and sausage sizzles. But not so good at maths,
Lives with his mum and his dog. Bill Gibb.
Write the name of a friend or family member down the page. Start
each line of the poem with a letter from the name. You can choose to
use only the first name or both the first and family names.
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Writing nouns for animals
Tip! U
se common nouns (e.g. monkey) or proper nouns
(e.g. Uakari monkey).
Think of an animal for each letter of the alphabet. Some have been
done for you.
A N
B O
C P
D Quokka
E R
F S
G T
H Uakari monkey
I Vulture
J W
K X-ray tetra
L Yak
M Z
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Spotting the adjectives in find-a-word puzzles
B E A U T I F U L
I X S B H S O U R
T C W L G R E E N
T D E L I C A T E
E E E U R Y Y G G
R Q T D B M N K U
G I G A N T I C H
S M O O T H T A I
X Q Y L E V O L C
C B S H I N Y B Y
Note: These are words that describe how something looks, tastes or feels.
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Solving noun crossword puzzles
Use the clues to solve the crossword puzzle. The answers are places in
nature (hill, creek, island, valley, waterfall, desert, river, ocean, forest,
beach).
Clues 1
Across
2
3 where water flows steeply
down 3
4 a small river
5 a place with many trees 4
sand or rocks 10
6 water flowing over land
7 a large area of salt water
9 smaller than a mountain
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Writing proper nouns for people’s names
Think of a boy’s name or a girl’s name for each letter of the alphabet.
A N
B O
C P
D Q
E R
F S
G T
H U
I V
J W
K X
L Y
M Z
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Answers
SECTION 1 5 We add our own choice of toppings.
6 Our homemade pizzas are delicious.
Chapter 1 Sentences—statements Page 7
1 Crocodiles are large reptiles.
Page 1 2 Saltwater crocodiles are dangerous.
1 Ants 2 They 3 Most ant species 3 Saltwater crocodiles eat anything.
4 Different ants 5 A colony 6 Worker ants 4 They can swim a long way out to sea.
7 Worker ants 8 Only males and the queen 5 The females guard their nests.
Page 2 6 Many baby crocodiles are eaten by goannas.
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6 Answers will vary. ‘How many’ questions ask 5 Who is your teacher? or What is your teacher’s
about the number of an item and end with a name?
question mark. 6 Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check.
7 Answers will vary. ‘How often’ questions ask
about the frequency of an event and end with a
question mark. Chapter 3 Every sentence has
8 Answers will vary. ‘How far’ questions ask about a verb
an aspect of distance and end with a question
mark. Page 19
Page 13 1 chopped 2 danced 3 blew 4 ate 5 built
1 Pour one cup of milk into a saucepan. 6 followed 7 spilt 8 landed
2 Add one cup of oats. Page 20
3 Stir well.
1 stretched 2 splashed 3 swam 4 plucked
4 Heat gently until cooked.
5 watched 6 grazed 7 clung
5 Serve with milk and sliced banana or honey.
8 The elephant splashed water onto its back.
Page 14
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1 We miss you! 2 Here it is!
1 meandered 2 rode 3 ran 4 hopped
3 That’s great news! 4 We love it!
5 cartwheeled
5 That’s horrible! 6 Our team won!
7 That makes me happy! 8 That’s horrible!
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1 howled 2 trumpeted 3 squeaked 4 hooted
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5 barked 6 hissed 7 The dog barked.
1 Look out! 2 Stop! 3 Go over there!
8 Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check.
4 Come back! 5 Sit down! 6 Be careful!
7 Hold this! 8 Be careful! or Look out! or Stop!
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1 stretched 2 rolled 3 purred 4 slept
Page 16
5 jumped 6 strolled 7 yowled 8 ate
Questions
2 Who rode a bike to school today?
Page 24
4 What time is it? 1 doing verb: licked—a sentence
5 Where is your hat? 2 doing verb: scratched—a sentence
6 Why are you late? 3 no verb—not a sentence
Exclamations 4 doing verb: jumped—a sentence
1 Come here! 5 doing verb: raced—a sentence
3 Watch out! 6 saying verb: barked—a sentence
7 Help me! 7 doing verb: wagged—a sentence
8 Go away! 8 no verb—not a sentence
Page 17 Page 25
1 A 2 D 3 D 4 B 1 The girl ate her apple.
5 How far can you run? 2 The children raced to the tree.
6 How long will it take? 3 The children sang at the concert.
7 and 8 Answers will vary but need to begin with a 4 The boy rode his bike to school.
capital letter and end with full stops. Page 26
9 and 10 Answers will vary but need to begin with a 1 B 2 B 3 C 4 C 5 C 6 D 7 A 8 C
capital letter and end with question marks.
9 Answers will vary, e.g. climbed, tumbled,
Page 18 flopped, crawled.
1 What is your name? 10 Answers will vary, e.g. screamed, cried, yelled,
2 How old are you? wailed.
3 Which food or vegetable don’t you like? Page 27
4 What is your favourite fruit? looked, saw, heard, sniffed, barked, ran, looked,
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barked, listened, barked, heard, opened, said, Page 34
barked, ran, whirled, grabbed, gave
Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check, e.g. The
kind/happy/young teacher sat on his chair at the
Chapter 4 Noun groups front of the class. He looked at his happy/young
students.
He said, “I have an interesting/exciting story to read
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to you today. It is about a brave/clever girl who has
1 an exciting/interesting adventure. I think you will
head
hair enjoy this great/interesting/exciting story.”
ankle
toes
2 Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check, e.g.
arm, foot, leg, eye, stomach, mouth, chin.
Page 29
1 Blake Youngman, Alexandra Cowan, Australian
Prime Minister, Aboriginal and Torres Strait Betty Sammy
Islander
big, strong, smart, cute, small, little,
2 Collins Street, Great Barrier Reef, Uluru, Sydney brave, clever smart, bright, cheeky,
Harbour Bridge mischievous
3 Major Mitchell’s Cockatoo, Kuranda Tree Frog
Betty is a big brave Sammy is a cheeky
4 July, Monday, December, Tuesday
police dog. little dog.
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1 Last Tuesday 2H went on an excursion to
Taronga Zoo.
2 Our guide, Wally, told us Dreaming Stories.
3 We learnt about the Aboriginal history of
Sydney.
Picasso Mozart
4 Then we got to meet a snake named Fred.
5 After lunch Wally walked around the zoo with us. playful, cute, little, tired, sleepy, old,
6 Our teacher, Ms Harris, said it was a really good naughty, mischievous loving, quiet, kind
excursion. Picasso is a playful Mozart is a sweet old
Page 31 little kitten. house cat.
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1 carefully 2 tightly 3 neatly 1 Answers will vary, e.g. in a cave, under a log,
4 gently 5 gracefully across the quicksand, under the tallest tree, on
6 Answers will vary, e.g. Carry the hot tea top of the mountain, under the biggest rock,
carefully. through the waterfall, inside the hollow tree.
2 Answers will vary, e.g. through the gloomy
Page 39 forest, at midnight, late at night, by the creek,
1 on a rock. in the dark, at the cemetery, in the basement,
2 onto the moon. under the rotting deck, in a cellar, at the
3 around the bend. graveyard.
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5 I might write a story or read a book. 6 “Come out of that hollow log so I can eat you,”
6 Will we watch television or play a board game? said the goanna.
7 Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check, e.g.
Page 50
“I am hungry,” said the goanna.
1 I like my beanie because it keeps my ears warm.
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2 I don’t like beans because they taste awful.
3 I like my friend James because he is funny. 1 “Will you let me ride your bike?” asked Hani.
4 I like books about dinosaurs because dinosaurs 2 “Why can’t I have a turn?” asked Hani.
are interesting. 3 “Should I put my helmet on now?” asked Hani.
5 Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check. 4 “May I have a turn, too?” asked Mark.
6 Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check. 5 “Would you like a turn?” offered Frankie.
6 “Will you give me a turn?” asked Mark.
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7 Hani asked, “When will I get a turn?”
1 It looked like rain so we couldn’t go to the beach.
8 “You can each have a turn,” said Frankie.
2 It looked like rain so Mum said to take a
raincoat. Page 57
3 It was getting dark so Dad said it was time to go 1 “Hello, Mum,”
home. “Hello. Did you have a good time at Jenny’s?”
4 The bananas were really ripe so we made a 2 “Yes. We played with her baby sister,”
banana cake. “That sounds like fun,”
5 It is cold so I will wear a jumper. 3 “It was,”
6 Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check. “Good,”
Page 52 Page 58
Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check. 1 “Go!” cheered the parents.
Page 53 2 “Help!” shouted Dad as the ladder began to
1 A 2 B 3 D 4 C 5 A 6 C 7 A 8 C slide.
9 B 10 B 3 “Watch out!” yelled Mum as Lauren stepped
onto the road.
Page 54
4 “Don’t do that!” yelled Sanjay when his brother
1 I like dancing and gymnastics. Mum says I can scribbled on his homework.
do dancing or gymnastics after school this year 5 “I’m home!” called Justin.
but not both.
6 “We’re in the kitchen!” shouted Jonathan.
I like both but Mum will only pay for one.
7 “Look at that!” exclaimed the teacher.
They are both fun but I prefer the dancing
8 Lisa shouted, “I can’t find my watch!”
teacher to the gymnastics teacher.
They are both good exercise but gymnastics is Page 59
harder than dancing. 1 “Thank you. I love my new shoes,” said Marty.
I have friends in both classes but my best friend 2 ”Ouch! That hurt,” said Riku.
does the dance class. 3 “Hooray! We won,” said Denny.
I will do dancing this year. 4 “Wow! That’s amazing,” said Ian.
2 Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check. 5 “Hurry! The bus leaves in five minutes,” said
Rebecca.
Chapter 7 Writing conversation 6 “Huh? What do you mean?” asked Lilly.
7 “Wow!” exclaimed Steven.
Page 55 8 Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check, e.g.
“Uh-oh!” said Matt when he spilt his drink.
1 “I eat whatever I can catch,” bragged the big
goanna. “Oops!” said Mum.
2 “I mostly eat fruit and leaves,” said the skink. “Good job!” said Dad when Matt carefully wiped
up the spilt drink.
3 “I eat other lizards,” said the goanna.
4 “I will eat you,” announced the goanna.
5 “You won’t catch me,” replied the skink.
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Page 60 [1] When it stands very still it looks like a tree branch.
1 shouted 2 declared/announced 3 requested [2] The Tawny Frogmouth eats meat.
4 whispered 5 chirped 6 announced/declared [2] It hunts at night for insects such as moths, as
well as lizards, snails and worms.
7–8 Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check, e.g.
“I hope so,” said Mother Magpie. [3] Tawny Frogmouths are often killed by cars.
“I can’t wait,” said Father Magpie. [3] They chase flying insects into the headlights of
oncoming cars.
Page 61
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1 Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check, e.g.
“We need to look before we cross,” Mum advised. 1 He 2 They 3 They 4 them 5 He
“Look to the right, look to the left, look to the 6 them 7 Parent/teacher to check.
right again,” sang Corey. Page 68
2 Answers will vary, e.g. 1 He 2 She 3 They
“Push me higher!” demanded Abby. 4 Lions live in groups called prides. One male is
“Okay,” replied Dad. the boss of the pride. He guards his territory. The
3 “You played really well,” announced the coach. females are the hunters. They hunt at night.
“Thanks coach,“ replied Penny. They usually work as a team to kill their prey.
Young male lions are forced out of the pride
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when they are around two years old. They form
1 B 2 C 3 D 4 A 5 B 6 D 7 B groups to hunt together. When a young male
8 B 9 C is big and strong he will take over a pride for
10 Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check, e.g. himself.
“Yes! That’s a great idea,” said the teacher. Page 69
Page 63 The first thing we did was go for a swim.
Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check. Then we climbed around the rocks to look for sea
stars.
SECTION 2 After looking for sea stars we had our picnic lunch.
We left the beach when it started to get dark.
Chapter 8 Informative texts Page 70
1 Yesterday I asked Mum what blue-tongues eat.
Page 64 2 She said that blue-tongues eat snails and beetles.
Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check Each 3 This morning I looked for snails and beetles in
paragraph should consist of a number of sentences our garden but I didn’t find any.
that focus on one idea, e.g. 4 The blue-tongue lizard must have eaten them
Paragraph 1: My name is Sebbie. I am 7 years old. I all.
have brown hair and brown eyes.
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Paragraph 2: I live with my mother, my grandma
and my sister, Scarlet. My mother works at the Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check.
bakery. She leaves home very early in the morning Page 72
so Gran gets us breakfast and takes us to school.
1 [4 3 1 2]
Paragraph 3: My friend’s name is Tim. Tim is in my
2 [2 5 3 1 4]
class at school. We play soccer.
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3 Stir in the cream, lemonade and milk.
1 what numbats look like
5 Knead the dough on a floured board.
2 what numbats eat
6 Roll out the dough and cut into pieces.
3 why numbats are endangered
7 Place scones on a greased oven tray.
Page 66 8 Bake for 15 minutes.
[1] The Tawny Frogmouth is a nocturnal bird. 9 Eat with jam and cream.
[1] It has a wide beak like a frog.
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[1] It has big yellow eyes to see in the dark.
Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check.
[1] It has mottled brown feathers.
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have the wolf eat the boy because the boy had not
Chapter 9 Imaginative texts listened to his parents’ advice. You might also use
the fact that the wolf is chuckling or decide that
the wolf is laughing at a boy who is not afraid of
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wolves.
Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check.
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1 The three bears and a girl
Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check.
2 The home of the bears
Page 77 3 The porridge was too hot to eat.
Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check, e.g. 4 The girl ran away.
1 snow-covered mountains 5 The bears learned to lock their doors and
2 a very strict classroom, a family home windows when they went out.
3 a spooky old house Page 83
4 a cold planet far away 1 Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check, e.g.
5 in the convict days, an old building in the past, Rolf starts a fight; The doomed tree; Rolf saves
when grandparents were children his favourite tree.
6 a magical cave, the land of the elves, the land of 2 Readers would be happy with the resolution
the giants because Rolf was happy. He had saved his
7 a police station, a home, a park favourite tree.
3 Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check, e.g.
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Rolf hugging a huge tree.
1 Plot B because this story is more exciting. The
police and army arrive. The aliens come out of Page 84
their ship. The story builds to a climax. Readers 1 A boy and a girl. The stegosaurus could also be a
wonder how the police and the army might character in the story.
capture the aliens or whether the school girl 2 A museum
might get hurt by the aliens. The story has a
3–5 Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check, e.g.
satisfying conclusion.
3 The stegasaurus speaks to the children. It could
2 Answers will vary.
need a home or want to go back to its own time.
Page 79 4 The children might have to try to solve the
1 The Scratchies leave home stegasaurus’s problem. They might help it find
a better home than the museum or they might
2 Harriet gets lost
help it get back to its own time.
3 Return to the castle of Skey
5 The story will end when the problem is resolved
4 Jarrod says goodbye
and the stegosaurus is happy.
5 Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check, e.g.
Frogga saves her creek; Frogga’s mission. Page 85
6 Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check, e.g. 1 The time machine landed in a field.
Possum rescuers; Help for a possum; No cats 2 “Look! There’s a stegosaurus,” said Freya.
allowed. 3 “I can see some triceratops too,” said Mark,
Page 80 excitedly.
4 “We should get out and go for a walk,”
Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check, e.g.
suggested Freya.
1 Suddenly she tripped over and rolled down the
5 “I hope we don’t run into a T-rex,” said Mark in
hill into a ditch.
a worried voice.
2 This answer needs to suit the title of the story,
Amazing rescue. Marnie could be carried home Page 86
by eagles or forest creatures or elves; a dog could Freddy: I have a good riddle.
find her then fetch help.
Greta: OK. What is it?
Page 81 Freddy: What word becomes shorter when you add
Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check, e.g. two letters to it?
Title: ‘The Foolish Boy’ or ‘The Brave Boy’ The story Greta: I give up.
says the boy is not afraid of the wolf so you can Freddy (laughing): Short.
have him defeat the wolf in some way. Or you can
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Page 87 4 I hate getting a needle because it hurts too much.
Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check. The 5 I go swimming when there are bluebottles
children have had a disagreement about something. because I don’t care about getting stung.
They are both angry. They need to say what they Page 92
are angry about.
Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check, e.g.
1 Homework
Chapter 10 Persuasive texts Teacher’s opinion: Homework is good because
children do extra practice.
Page 88 Or, Homework is a waste of time because it’s just
extra work.
Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check, e.g.
Child’s opinion: Homework is good because
1 I like getting a haircut because I don’t like my
some children need extra practice.
hair in my eyes.
Or, Homework is a waste of time because
I don’t like getting a haircut because I want to
children should have time to play after school.
grow my hair long.
Parent’s opinion: Homework is good because
2 I like it when the teacher lets children choose
children get extra practice.
who will be on their teams because my friends
pick me. Or, Homework is a nuisance because my child
and I just argue about it.
I don’t like it when the teacher lets children
choose who will be on their teams because I hate 2 Bedtime
to get chosen last. Teacher’s opinion: Children should go to bed
3 I like colouring in because it’s easy and it looks early so that they are fresh for school each day
nice. and ready to work.
I don’t like colouring in because it’s boring. Child’s opinion: Children should only go to bed
when they are tired, so they fall asleep quickly.
4 I like balloons because they make a room
colourful. Parent’s opinion: Children should go to bed at a
set time so that they get enough sleep.
I don’t like balloons because they float away
and end up causing pollution. 3 Going to the dentist
5 I like bees because they help flowers spread Dentist’s opinion: Children should visit the
seeds. dentist regularly to have their teeth checked.
I don’t like bees because they hurt when they Child’s opinion: Children should visit the dentist
sting you. regularly so that they have good teeth.
6 I like 3D movies because they look close up and Parent’s opinion: Children should visit the
exciting. dentist regularly so that their teeth are properly
cared for.
I don’t like 3D movies because the glasses hurt
my nose. Page 93
Page 89 Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check.
1 that soccer is better to play than cricket Page 94
2 to eat vegetables Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check.
3 to buy a trampoline
Page 95
Page 90 Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check, e.g.
1 I would love to be a lion in a zoo. Children should be able to have bare feet at
2 I would never choose to go to the beach. school. It is more comfortable, especially on hot
3 They are boring. days. Children with bare, cool feet will be able to
concentrate on their schoolwork better. It is hard to
4 People who litter are thinking about the
concentrate on schoolwork when your feet are hot.
environment.
Schools should let children take off their school
Page 91 shoes and be comfortable.
1 I hate medicine because it tastes awful. Or,
2 I do not like homework because it uses up my Children should not have bare feet at school. It is
after-school time. dangerous. They might step on something sharp
3 I dislike broccoli because it tastes horrible. and hurt their feet.
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It is unhygienic to allow bare feet at school because Page 103
children might have foot germs.
Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check.
Some children have smelly feet so the classroom
would smell if children were allowed to have bare Page 104
feet.
Children should be made to keep their shoes on at B E A U T I F U L
school.
I X S B H S O U R
Page 96
Title, Opening statement, Reason 1, Reason 2, T C W L G R E E N
Reason 3, Reason 4, Conclusion
Page 97 T D E L I C A T E
Answers will vary. Parent/teacher to check, e.g.
E E E U R Y Y G G
Reason 1: Dogs are good company. They can play
games with you. You can take them for walks so
R Q T D B M N K U
you get exercise. Dogs are good fun.
Reason 2: Dogs are smart. They can save your life.
G I G A N T I C H
They can wake you up if your home is on fire in the
night. They can protect your home from burglars.
S M O O T H T A I
They can work for the police and at airports.
Reason 3: Dogs are gentle. They help the elderly or
X Q Y L E V O L C
people who are blind.
Conclusion: Dogs make great pets. I love dogs. C B S H I N Y B Y
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Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check. Answer Page 105
should be based on the sample text. Across 3 waterfall 4 creek 5 forest 8 beach 10 island
Page 99 Down 1 valley 2 desert 6 river 7 ocean 9 hill
1
Answers will vary. Teacher/parent to check, e.g. v
I would buy this scooter because it is on sale. It goes 2
fast. It is light. It has a rechargeable battery. It is d a
3
fun and easy to use. It does not cost very much. w a t e r f a l l
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I would not buy this scooter because it goes too
4
fast. I don’t think it would be as easy to use as the c r e e k e
advertisement says. It costs too much. I am less
than 8 years old. My parents won’t let me have an r y
5 6
electric scooter. f o r e s t
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sample text. Teacher/parent to check.
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