A2 Revised
A2 Revised
A2 Revised
Carla Rust
Composition 150
A2 Argumentative
1 November 2019
“I have not given, received, or used any unauthorized assistance on my writing project.”
When it comes to environmental issues, well known and well advocated topics generally
come to the average person’s mind, such as global warming and pollution. These issues are not
easily resolved and making a change can be difficult for citizens without political or large-scale
power, so individuals often feel helpless in this regard. However, the subject of overfishing is not
a topic of discussion nearly as much as it should be, and a solution could potentially be easy with
the help of every day consumers. The effect of overfishing stretches much further from the coast
than most believe, but it is also potentially very easily resolved, unlike the other highly vocalized
issues. As recent generations are becoming more and more health-conscious, people have begun
to choose fish and seafood as a substitute for red meat, increasing the global demand of fish. An
article by Julia Mason, an oceanographer and marine biologist in “Nereus Program” explains
how this problem came to be, and what can be done to solve it. The consumer demand has
increased so much that the industry has had no choice but to fish in larger numbers in more
efficient ways. These industries also drive the global demand for seafood which encourages the
mass fishing or target populations (Mason). This demand pushes for the fishing industry to use
these advances and catch more fish to meet the demand do not leave enough time for the fish to
repopulate and replenish the dwindling numbers within their species. This commercial industrial
overfishing is detrimental to the cost and supply of seafood available to consumers, destruction
of marine ecosystems and the livelihood of small-scale fishermen around the world. However,
simple changes in the consumers’ shopping habits can have a significant and long-lasting impact.
that have been made in order to enable fishing vessels to catch fish and seafood in bulk. In the
previous years, fishermen did not have access to the means of mass fishing. They simply fished
for survival and a minimal source of income (Mason.) However, commercial fishing industries
nowadays use giant fishing vessels along with trawling and drifting nets in order to catch the
most amount of fish possible in the least amount of time in order to meet the growing global
demand for seafood. In a scholarly article on “Marine Science Today,” a database for researchers
to publish their scholarly sources, written by Krysten Jetson, the changes that technology has
enforced in regard to commercial fishing are analyzed and explained. Jetson explains that this
multimillion-dollar industry has the capability to explore new fishing territories and deeper
waters in order to meet the consumer demand. Without this technology, catching massive
amounts of seafood would be much more difficult, take more manpower, and much more time.
They use massive nets that allow vessels to catch fish in large numbers by sweeping the ocean
floor and enclosing a large space, removing the species quicker than they can repopulate, causing
a massive drop in the numbers of fish (Jetson.) These technological advances are highly
unrestricted, and the government has not, and may not be able to put policies in place to limit the
number of fish that can be caught, only certain areas that are protected from the fishing. Even
then, the policies are not enforced as the local communities usually do not have the money or
means to restrict such a massive global scale industry, and as sea life decreases in the largely
fished areas, the commercial fishing fleets often move to those restricted areas. The
unsustainable fishing practices are to blame because before these technological advancements,
there was a plentiful supply of fish for everyone in the picture, including the fishing industry,
consumers, and small-scale fishermen (Jetson.) As this is a recently developed issue, and is not
often covered by the media, it does not receive nearly the amount of attention it deserves. This
problem will only grow as will the demand, as more and more people begin to follow a health-
conscious diet and choose to eat fish as a significant part of their diets, unknowingly supporting
the beginning of what could turn into a mass extinction. Educating consumers on the effects and
the alternatives of this detrimental situation is the first step in making a lasting change and
Marine ecosystems have become very well adapted, accounting for every organism in the
habitat. The species rely on each other for balance within that ecosystem, each species having a
place in the food chain. Because of the high demand for some kinds of fish, certain species are
being removed from their ecosystems, throwing off the balance, and impacting the other
organisms (Jetson.) Without a vital piece of the puzzle, other species can lack their source of
food or become very overpopulated, which in either instance can then be detrimental to their
food sources or predators, and so on. A research article published on “Plos One,” a database for
scientific peer reviewed research articles, by Marta Coll explains the real effects of the
commercial fishing industry on the ecosystem and its’ native populations. Coll reiterates the fact
that taking one species out is very dangerous to not only the stability of their population, but that
of all the organisms in the ecosystem. The marine habitats are also being impacted by a
secondhand factor of this large-scale fishing caused by the new technology the industry has used.
The nets used to capture fish do not account for the other species that may be coexisting with the
targeted species, so many other animals are captured as the ocean floor is swept, such as turtles,
dolphins, and many unwanted fish (Jetson.) When they arrive at the surface and are dragged into
the fishing vessels, many of them have already died in the struggle, and they are simply thrown
back into the ocean, having been captured and killed with no purpose (Coll.) The bycatch issue
only arose due to the technological advancements that have played the leading role in turning
commercial fishing into overfishing. These organisms, along with the targeted fish populations
are being harmed only because of the greed of the fishing industry, having no regard that
trawling nets and other technology may be efficient but is in no way ethical. This not only affects
the ecosystem but it effects consumers as well because in just a few years, some of the seafood
people use as staples in their diets such as tuna could be overfished to the point of extinction or
near extinction.
As consumer demand and the commercial fishing industry grows, the availability of the
targeted species dwindles. This pushes the companies to fish outside their usual areas,
approaching the fishing territories of developing nations. As the companies are pushed to fish
there, the fish supply available to those developing coastal nations decreases (Coll.) Fishing
being these local people’s only means of nutrition and income, this is a detrimental result of
commercial overfishing on a global scale. Many of these people have relied on fishing as their
primary food source since they were established thousands of years ago. Having to change their
way of life after so long because of an industry’s greed shows the range of the impact, as the
effects are not only from an environmental standpoint. Finding a new source of income is the
least of these people’s worries, as many of them rely on fish as a primary food source and would
not be able to eat without it. As previously mentioned, there are often policies put in place
banning or limiting foreign fishing fleets from entering certain waters, but these developing
nations rarely have the money or law enforcement presence to enforce these policies and punish
those who disobey, leaving them in a helpless situation. Without the supply of seafood that
consumers are demanding, prices could skyrocket, forcing people to find other options to
Most consumers are unaware of the impact they have by continuously buying their fish
from unsustainable companies instead of fisheries. Between the wild-caught and farm raised
options, the common misconception is that one is of better taste or quality than the other. People
believe wild-caught fish are better and healthier because they thrive in their natural environment,
where they have their natural food source and have been evolving for generations. An article on
Scientific Reports written by Trevor D. Davies and Julia K. Baum clears this misconception up
through the explanation of the real differences between the origins of the fish and how fisheries
are more sustainable and cost efficient. In terms of quality and taste, there is little to no
difference. In terms of sustainability, farm-raised fish are by far the better choice for the future of
our planet’s oceans. As the demand continues to grow and the wild fish supply continues to
dwindle, the price will increase, making it harder for the consumer to form their diet around fish
(Davies, Baum.) The cheaper, more sustainable way for consumers to buy fish is through
fisheries that maintain their numbers and prices, as well as their ecological footprint. They only
fish a certain number of their population in order to maintain the numbers, and only remove the
fish after reproduction in order to maintain a steady supply for consumers at market price
(Davies, Baum.) These farmed fish are available nearly everywhere wild-caught fish are sold,
such as grocery stores and markets, making the change a very simple and effortless action that, if
done in mass, can make a significant impact on marine ecosystems and small-scale fishermen.
This would considerably decrease the commercial fishing industry’s demand to a number that
would not remove the fish more quickly than they can repopulate. If consumers are educated
about their choices and began to choose farmed fish over wild caught fish, they would benefit in
the long run in the aspects of cost, being able to eat their favorite seafood, and knowing they are
taking action to preserve our oceans for further generations. This step forward benefits
consumers because their seafood prices would remain constant, they would have a plentiful
supply, and they would not have to find alternatives to their favorite kinds of seafood. Taking
action in such way that is effortless to consumers can be the deciding factor in whether or not
overfishing will continue to threaten the well-being of small-scale fishermen along with the other
Coll, Marta. “Ecosystem Overfishing in the Ocean.” PLOS ONE, Public Library of Science, 10
Davies, Trevor D., and Julia K. Baum. “Extinction Risk and Overfishing: Reconciling
Conservation and Fisheries Perspectives on the Status of Marine Fishes.” Nature News,
Jetson, Krysten. “Impact of Overfishing on Human Lives.” Marine Science Today, 8 Apr. 2014,
http://marinesciencetoday.com/2014/04/09/impact-of-overfishing-on-human-lives/.
Mason, Julia. “Overfishing & Overpopulation: Too Many Fishers Chasing Too Few Fish?” Nereus
overpopulation-too-many-fishers-chasing-too-few-fish/.