Ink Bridge 9781742376691 TN
Ink Bridge 9781742376691 TN
Ink Bridge 9781742376691 TN
Teachers’ Notes
by Fran Knight
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Introduction ............................................. 2
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LITERATURE
BEFORE YOU START
Classroom
Set aside a large area of pin-up board space.
Have the class brain storm what they know about Afghanistan and Afghan people. Put
their responses onto paper to have around the classroom, or set up a Wiki, or use the
electronic white board to tabulate their ideas.
Hang a map of the Middle East in the classroom.
Have a map of the world and South East Asia ready for work.
Ask the class to collect any novels from the library about the Middle East (ask your
teacher librarian to do a bulk loan for your classroom).
Collect any articles about the Middle East to pin up in the classroom.
Ask the students to access any websites about the Middle East which they think will help
the class in its work. Have these displayed for all to see. Perhaps students could
evaluate the website and add comments.
Community
Check to see if there are any refugee support groups your class can access in your area.
Check to see if there are support groups for people from the Middle East in your area.
List any Middle East shops/restaurants/places of worship that your class can access.
Are there any staff or friends of staff who would be happy to talk to your class about
their experiences?
Wider community
Check out websites (particularly government funded) which support Afghan people in
Australia.
Have each student or group of Have each group check out Ask each group to prepare a
students draw a map of Afghanistan, different aspects of Afghanistan brochure about Afghanistan to
adding the main cities and towns, to present to the class (weather present to the class, showing
rivers and mountains. and climate, topography, what they have learnt.
currency, clothing, industries,
tourist venues etc)
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READING THE NOVEL
Introduce the students to the novel, ensuring that they understand that there are
sections which will be confronting and, at the same time, informative.
You may like to read the first chapter aloud, to get the students into the story and allow
for any questions to be asked, and ideas shared.
Perhaps ask the students to keep a notepad in their book to jot down unfamiliar names,
places and events to enable them to share their questions with the rest of the class.
Perhaps draw up a timeline with the class, allowing them to pace their own reading and
discuss with the class.
Allow a lesson a week for the group to share what they have read, to go over chapters,
events and ideas they may be unsure of and to do some of the work suggested.
What is the meaning of the word What motivates the Taliban to Reread Chapter 2, about Omed’s
xenophobia? blow up the Stone People? father.
(Chapter One)
Use dictionaries, Wikipedia and How did he come to be killed?
encyclopedias to find its meaning Why do they cut out Omed’s
How does this reflect
and derivation. tongue?
xenophobia?
Sharia Law is mentioned several Why is Omed initially suspicious In Part Two, Chapter 2, we meet
times in the novel. of the Poet of Kandahar? Splinter the foreman at the
candle factory.
What is it?
What is his attitude to the
What examples of its use are
workers at the factory?
shown in the novel?
Splinter’s generalisations about Later in Part Two, Chapter 2, Hec In Part Two, Chapter 5, we see
the workers reflect some attitudes is watching a news program an appalling sight of exploitation.
prevalent in the world today. about a town where refugees are
What has happened?
going to be living.
What do his generalisations say
How have these people been
about Splinter? Paraphrase the arguments put
brought to Australia?
forward by some of the
townspeople in wanting and not What may happen to them?
wanting them there.
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ASYLUM SEEKERS
Note: This topic may raise some contentious issues and divided opinions in the
classroom. Be prepared.
The incident in the opening pages of Reread Chapter One and put the details of the incident in
Chapter 1 reveals the reasons for chronological order. What may have happened to his family?
Omed’s flight.
The Poet of Kandahar is in What does the poet tell Omed about his reasons to flee
Chapter 2 in the refugee camp with Afghanistan? Why does he wish to go to Australia?
Omed.
Omed keeps meeting the Snake. Why does the Snake wish to get to Australia?
2. As the novel is read, note all the different groups of immigrants to Australia that are
mentioned.
The man who picks up Omed and the Is this a common story? How many Afghans came to Australia
Snake near Maree after they escape in the mid-nineteenth century? Where are their descendants
detention explains how he came to be today? What part did they play in Australia’s history?
an Australian. (p 106)
The fisherman on the pontoon near the What is the story he tells of his decision to come to Australia?
West Gate Bridge.
(p 158)
Hec’s family Hec realises that he knows nothing of his background. Why is
this important?
3. As the novel is read, note the different stories of the people Omed mixes with in
Australia, and their yearning for a better life.
The woman and her children on the Why is she travelling to Australia? What happens to her and
boat to Australia her children? Why does Omed feel guilty?
And others....
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4. It may be appropriate to look at the laws regarding asylum seekers as a class after
the book is read. Put students into groups to research the websites and then come
back to the class with their findings.
The Australian Human Rights Commission gives a large amount of information which will need some
direction to the class to use. http://www.hreoc.gov.au/human_rights/immigration/asylum_seekers.html
Where does the Commission’s opinion differ from that of the Australian Government?
5. Neil Grant plainly shows the range of people who profit from the needs of asylum
seekers, from the Snake to those in Lahore, Kuala Lumpur and Java who help the
asylum seekers on their way and finally at the candle factory in Melbourne, where
the Snake again has made contacts and pursued his trade of people smuggling.
Writing a report (A report must be factual: who, what, when, where, why and how)
Write a report on the activities of the Snake to present to the authorities who have
caught him in Melbourne.
OR
Write a report about the activities of the people smugglers who put Omed on the boat in
Lombok.
OR
Write a report on the activities of the manager of the candle factory, Merrick Hope.
Classwork
Reread the fist section of the What information is given to the What is their importance to the
book where the statues are reader about the stone statues? region?
destroyed
What has happened to them? Why did the Taliban blow them What opposition did they
up? receive?
What is happening to the stone How did Omed and Zakir view Why could the local people do
statues now? the destruction? nothing about it?
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Think of the world outrage if this had been the Pyramids of Egypt or the Golden Temple
at Amritsar or the Sydney Harbour Bridge. But how can these be protected?
Classwork
Some sites around the world are The United Nations has collated The United Nations has collated
considered as belonging to lists of the Seven Ancient a list of World Heritage Sites (930
everyone. Compile a list of these Wonders of the World, and the in all).
sites - the class could brainstorm Seven Modern Wonders of the http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/World
this. World. _Heritage_Site
Check the World Heritage Read particularly the section What can the United Nations do
websites to find how many are on called The legal status of heritage when a government or terrorists
the official list and compare this sites, on the Wikipedia site attempt to destroy such a site?
with the one the class above.
brainstormed earlier.
WAR
War is ever present in Part One, Omed’s story, and although not with the same intensity
as Part One, Part Three certainly reflects the vestiges of war.
Class work
Revise the history at the start of From Kinglake to Kabul (pp. 3-6). This potted
overview of thousands of years of Afghanistan’s history shows just how their country has
been framed by war. For more detail, go to the USA Department of State’s website at
http://www.state.gov/r/pa/ei/bgn/5380.htm
1. Draw up a timeline of the wars that have ravaged Afghanistan.
2. What have been the results of these wars?
3. Why did Russia invade? What is the legacy of this war?
4. Can Afghanistan’s unsettled nature be attributed to decades of war?
5. What are the physical legacies of these wars?
6. How has Afghanistan’s geographical position dictated its history?
7. What vestiges of war do your read about in The Ink Bridge?
Individual work
Comparing stories in The Ink Bridge with personal stories in From Kinglake to Kabul.
1. Reread some of the stories in From Kinglake to Kabul.
2. Can you find instances of similar stories told in The Ink Bridge?
3. Evaluate the differences between each telling.
4. How does each affect the reader?
5. Which is more successful in telling the reader what the effect of war upon the
individual is like?
6. Why do you think this is?
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was found 14 months later and awarded several military honours and is now the subject
of a book, Saving Private Sarbi by Sandra Lee (Allen and Unwin, 2011)
Apart from its obvious interest to all animal lovers, the book, Saving Private Sarbi
gives a background look at the war in Afghanistan, the dangers not only facing our
troops, but the ordinary people, and the work of the specialised sniffer dogs and their
handlers.
Sarbi now has a Facebook page and a page on the Australian Government website
http://www.defence.gov.au/sarbi/index.htm
Class work
1. An account of the story can be found at the BBC site
http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/8356224.stm (put this up on the electronic whiteboard
to read and discuss with the class)
2. With all the horror of the war and its effect on ordinary people trying to live out their
lives, discuss why this story was given so much publicity?
3. Students may like to debate a topic around the story of Sarbi. Possible topics are:
• Saving Sarbi was a waste of tax payer’s money.
• There are more important things to concentrate on than a dog.
• Sarbi is an inspiration to us all.
• The cost of training and keeping Sarbi is more than justified.
Group work
Some students may like to read sections of the book, sharing the story in a reading
circle, or using the book as one of the Literature Circle books.
WOMEN
A less obvious theme within the book which interested me was that of women. There are
women presented in the book whose situations are quite different.
• Omed’s mother
• Hec’s mother
• Hec’s tour guide, Arezu (Part Three)
• Omed’s sister, Leyli, (Part Three, Chapter 3)
Individual work
Reread the sections above which tell the reader about these women characters. Choose
one woman who appeals to you.
1. Fill in the six-box proforma (BLM 1) found at the end of these notes, filling it with
information about one of the women.
2. Use the information gathered to write a report about that woman and her life.
3. Some of the stories in From Kinglake to Kabul also give glimpses of women’s lives
in Afghanistan today.
4. Use these stories to compare your life with one of theirs.
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LANGUAGE
LANGUAGE IN AFGHANISTAN
Two official languages are used in Afghanistan, Persian (Dari) and Pashto. Wikipedia’s
entry about Afghanistan includes a section on language which will give some background
to this exercise.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Afghanistan
Neil Grant uses the Dari language throughout his novel, expecting in the main that the
reader will be able to elicit the meaning from the context.
Examples are on page 3 badam, or page 14, chaikhana, where we can understand from
the context what each is.
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POETRY
Neil Grant includes poetry in his book, especially in Chapter 2, where Omed shares a
tent at the refugee camp with a poet.
1. One of Persia’s famous poets, known widely in the west, is Omar Khayyam.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rubaiyat_of_Omar_Khayyam
Many stanzas from this poem are well known. He is famous for having written over 1000
rubaiyat or quatrains, and was first translated into English in the seventeenth century
and then more famously by Edward Fitzgerald in the nineteenth century. He is revered
for his imagery and economy of style, alliteration and themes. The rubaiyat, or ruba,
contains four lines in a particular rhythmic scheme.
a) When did this man live?
b) What else was he famous for?
c) Why is he remembered in the West?
d) Find several of his quatrains, and work out the rhythmic nature of the lines.
e) Are there poets you know of who use the quatrain form?
f) Find some examples of the quatrain form being used in English.
(you can find examples on the Wikipedia site,
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Quatrain which deals with quatrains)
g) Find some of the poems mentioned in the Wikipedia article on quatrains. Perhaps
learn one as an example to read out aloud to demonstrate the quatrain form.
h) Practice the form to write some of your own.
2. In the companion book, From Kinglake to Kabul, some of the work done by the
students in both those communities is poetic.
Relook at some of their work.
(The three-lined poems by some of the Australian students are known as haiku.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku)
• Can you find any poems in this book from the Afghan students?
• How different is this poetry?
• Can you explain the difference to another member of your class?
2. Why has the author called the novel, The Ink Bridge? Revise the sections in the
book where bridges are spoken of. What other titles could have been used? Justify
Grant’s use of The Ink Bridge as a title.
3. Some asylum seekers see the people smugglers as their saviours. Are there any
such stories on the Internet? One I found that was brief and to the point was the article
by Bob Ellis http://www.abc.net.au/unleashed/30770.html which made me rethink what
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I had heard. You may like to read it and others and present an argument to the class
that people smugglers are neither heroes nor villains.
4. Take a closer look at Shaun Tan’s The Arrival. Can you link any of the images
found in that book to the characters in the novel, The Ink Bridge? You may like to
enlarge some of the images and display them with a title that relates to The Ink
Bridge.
5. Take a close look at the cover of the book. How has it been produced?
• What image does this cover present to you? Do you think it successfully conveys
the ideas of the book to its audience? Would it impel a reader to pick up the
book?
• Given the opportunity, what sort of cover would you have designed for this book?
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4. Neil Grant lives in an artist’s colony outside Melbourne.
• What is an artist’s colony? Can you find out more information about one?
• Have there been any others in Australia that have been well known? What are the
benefits of living with others of like mind? Can you think of any drawbacks?
5. What other authors have you read that may be similar to Neil Grant?
6. Can you make an addition to his web page that lists other similar authors and their
novels? Some libraries give out a bookmark, If you liked this author, then you may
like...with a list of authors and novels similar to the one just read. Prepare one for
your library.
7. On a map of South East Asia and the Middle East, pin point the places that Neil
Grant travelled to as a young man; where his novels are set; and where he went to
gather information for his most recent novel.
8. It is intriguing that writers like Neil Grant do not follow the worn path of completing
Year 12, going to university and then settling down to a working life. His life has
been quite different. Do you know of any other authors for whom the straight and
narrow path was not followed?
9. Many authors say that to experience a wide variety of work places, countries and
people enhances their writing. How is this reflected in Neil Grant’s writing?
LITERATURE CIRCLE
A Literature Circle occurs when a class is divided into small groups, each group reading
one of a number of books similar to the one being studied. It is important that each
group set the rules of the group and assess themselves. It is expected that each group
read one book over 6 or so weeks, keep records about what they like about that book
and report back to the class. Ask your teacher-librarian for help with this as they may be
able to suggest other works to include, and give a book talk to your class to help the
groups select their book. I usually have 6 or so copies of each of the books ready for the
groups to select and allow each group to select which novel they will read. I usually ask
volunteers to come in and read with each group to help keep them on task.
Once selected, the groups will have a lesson a week to read in class, and the leader of
the group will allocate how much of the book will be read between lessons. At each
session, the group discusses what has been read so far and works out things like plot,
story, characters and theme(s), to present to the class. Proformas are available as
Blackline Masters at the end of these notes (BLM 2 & BLM 3).
Each group is then able to make a presentation at the end to showcase in some way the
book they have read.
There are a number of books that have been written around the theme of refugees and
asylum seekers. Some are for younger readers (Soraya the storyteller, To the boy in
Berlin and Boy overboard, for example) and some are picture books (The littlest refugee,
Ziba came on a boat and The arrival, for example) and could be used in this unit.
Each group takes one novel to read, but one group may like to look at several aimed at
younger readers, or look at a group of picture books on the theme.
RELATED TITLES:
The arrival (Shaun Tan, Lothian, 2006)
This award winning picture book will stun its readers when they see the pictures showing
immigration in all its aspects, from single people, families and children leaving the places
they were born to find a new life. Their sufferings, their dreams, the realities of moving
from one country to another are exposed here. Working with a group of young New
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Arrivals in a school I was amazed at how much they recognised and the discussions
which came out of their reading this wordless book.
From Kinglake to Kabul (Neil Grant and David Williams, Allen and Unwin, 2011)
Children traumatised by the bushfires of 2009 in Victoria were part of a project writing
short stories and poetry along with a group of children in Kabul, living in the midst of
war. The two groups opened their hearts to each other through their writing and
eventually some of the group from Kabul visited Australia in 2010. This book is a
collection of their writings showing each group’s tenacity and hope.
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sniffing out explosives and deployed to Afghanistan. When she goes missing in a battle
with the Taliban, it is thought she is dead, but surprisingly she is found 14 months later.
To the boy in Berlin (Elizabeth Honey and Heike Brandt, Allen and Unwin, 2007)
When Henni makes contact with a boy in Berlin, Leo, with the same name of the family
which once owned her house, she is ecstatic, but over the months the prejudice which
she uncovered directed at her house’s family 100 years ago, seems to be happening all
over again in Germany with the Guest Workers, the son of one being Leo’s best friend.
The parallels in both countries make fascinating reading for middle school readers.
Ziba came on a boat (Liz Lofthouse, illustrated by Robert Ingpen, Penguin, 2007)
A story about refugees for younger readers, this has Ziba on a unseaworthy fishing
vessel being taken across the sea, dreaming of her father telling stories, of gunfire and
running away and then of happy smiling faces welcoming her to her new land.
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ABOUT THE WRITERS
NEIL GRANT
Neil Grant was born in Glasgow Scotland in the Year of the Fire Horse. He learnt to speak
Australian at the age of thirteen when he migrated to Melbourne with his family. He
finished high school at the International School of Kuala Lumpur in 1985 and spent the
next fourteen years working on his résumé and travelling to places such as Israel,
Yugoslavia, India, Nepal, Thailand, Greece, Italy, the UK and Tasmania. In 2000 he
graduated from RMIT's Professional Writing and Editing course and had his first novel
(Rhino Chasers) accepted by Allen & Unwin. He travelled through Indonesia for two
months researching his second novel Indo Dreaming which was published by Allen &
Unwin in 2005 and shortlisted for the Queensland Premier's Literary Award and the
Melbourne Prize for Best Writing.
The Ink Bridge is about candles, friendship and refugees and based partly in
Afghanistan. To research this novel, he travelled to Kabul and Bamiyan in Afghanistan in
2009 with the help of an Australia Council grant. After this trip, he worked with teacher
David Williams at Diamond Valley College to produce the student anthology 1000
Pencils: from Kinglake to Kabul (www.1000pencils.com.au) published by Allen & Unwin
as From Kinglake to Kabul in 2011.
At every opportunity he escapes to write and dream to a mudbrick cottage he built
himself on the Far South Coast of NSW.
Neil has three children and lives in Cottles Bridge, Vic.
FRAN KNIGHT
Fran is a retired teacher librarian who loves adolescent fiction. She speaks at
conferences, writes teacher notes and has articles in The Literature Base, Magpies,
ACCESS and Viewpoint and has reviewed since the 1970’s for Magpies and Fiction Focus.
In 2005, her book, Ngadjuri: Aboriginal peoples of South Australia’s Mid North Region
was published, following 20 years of research. Pledger Consulting has published ten
books which reflect Fran’s reading, with lists of books in subject headings, the latest
being Literature to support the Australian curriculum, Annotated lists of fiction and
poetry.
Fran’s contribution to teacher librarianship has been recognised with the South
Australian Teacher Librarian of the Year award in 2005, and Honorary Life Membership of
SLASA (School Library Association of South Australia) in 2007.
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Women in The Ink Bridge
In The Ink Bridge, some women are presented whose situations are quite different.
• Omed’s mother
• Hec’s mother
• Hec’s tour guide, Arezu (Part Three)
• Omed’s sister, Leyli, (Part Three, Chapter 3)
Individual work
Reread the sections of the book which tell the reader about these women characters. Choose one
woman who appeals to you.
Fill in the form below, filling it with information about one of the women.
Relationship to main What work does she do? What does the future hold?
characters
BLM 1
Literature Circle: The Ink Bridge
Group members:
When is the novel set? Where is the novel set? What is the theme of the story?
Reading Schedule
Chapters to read Summary
Week 1
Week 2
Week 3
Week 4
Week 5
Week 6
BLM 2
Literature Circle: The Ink Bridge
Summary of story and its theme(s) The reasons my group enjoyed the story
BLM 3