Class 2 - Letter Writing
Class 2 - Letter Writing
Class 2 - Letter Writing
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Formal Structure
Dear Sir/Madam,
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First complaint:
• Firstly
• First of all
• The first problem is / was
• My first complaint is
• My first concern is
• The first thing I would like to draw your attention to is
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Further complaints:
• Secondly
• Also
• In addition
• In addition to this
• Added to this
• …… is / was also unsatisfactory / unacceptable
• Not only ……, but also
• To make matters worse,
• Furthermore,
• I am afraid that…
• Unfortunately,
Expressing Dissatisfaction:
Demanding action:
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You will need to practice these to make sure you know how to fit
them in correctly to your letter as they may all vary slightly
depending on the particular context.
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4 Steps Method
- Closing sentence
- Sign off
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Question analysis:
Background information:
Instructions:
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Make a Plan:
- Formal complaint letter
- Dear Sir or madam,
o I am writing to express my dissatisfaction regarding a pricing
discrepancy I encountered during my recent purchase from your
company.
o I am writing to address/inform an issue that I encountered with
my recent purchase from your company.
o I am writing to complain about an issue regarding the price of
an item that I encountered/faced with my recent purchase from
your company.
- Situation:
- 1st : bought camera from online store in discounted price/
price showed ok in shopping cart but deducted full amount
instead of discounted price.
- 2nd : company’s website homepage, 50% off
- Closing:
Yours faithfully,
full name
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Sample Answer:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to address/inform an issue that I encountered with my recent
purchase from your company.
I recently ordered a digital camera from the Nokia range, model number
SL452, from your online store, attracted by the advertised discount. The
discounted price was shown in the shopping cart and also reflected in the
payment amount in the system. However, upon reviewing my final payment
receipt, I noticed that the discount was not applied as expected. Instead of
the discounted price, your payment system deducted the full amount from
my wallet.
I came across the advertised discount while browsing your website's
homepage last week. It was prominently/clearly displayed on the main
banner, stating a 50% reduction from the normal price for the item that I
purchased.
I am very satisfied with the camera itself and do not wish to return it.
However, I would like to request a refund of the advertised 50% discount to
my credit card. If this is not possible, then I regretfully will have to send the
item back as I can obtain it for a cheaper price in other stores.
I appreciate your prompt attention to this issue and look forward to a swift
resolution.
Yours faithfully,
Sumaiya Shimu
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You have bought a new camera but when you got it home you
found it had some problems. You returned the camera and spoke
to the company representative a week ago but the camera has still
not been repaired.
Write a letter to the company.
In your letter:
• Introduce yourself
• Explain the situation
• Say what action you would like the company to take
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Question analysis:
Background information:
You have bought a new camera but when you got it home you
found it had some problems. You returned the camera and spoke
to the company representative a week ago but the camera has still
not been repaired.
Instructions:
• Introduce yourself
• Explain the situation
• Say what action you would like the company to take
Make a Plan:
- Formal complaint letter
- Dear Sir or madam,
- Introduce: name Sumi Akther and I am writing to you
regarding a Nokia camera that I bought…..
- Situation: bought camera, returning home- shutter
mechanism not functioning; a small scratch on the lens;
- returned to the shop; assured me for repairing; no update;
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Letter writing:
Dear Sir / Madam,
My name is Sumi Akther and I am writing to complain you
regarding a Nokia camera that I bought at your department store
on Basundhara City, 1st floor, on the 5th September.
The camera seemed to work fine in the shop. However, upon
returning home, it became clear that the shutter mechanism was
not functioning properly. In addition to this, there was a small
scratch on the lens.
I therefore returned to the shop the following day, on the 6th
September, and spoke to a company representative about the
issue. I left the camera with the assistant, and they assured me that
they would look into the problem with a view to repairing the camera
and get back to me a few days later. However, it has now been one
week and when I contacted the shop again, they said that the
camera has still not been fixed and they do not know how long it
will be.
As I am sure you will understand, it is not acceptable to be waiting
for such a long time for it to be repaired. I would like to request to
get a full refund or a replacement camera.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
Sumi Akther
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In your letter, include what you have done about it and suggest what
action you'd like them to take.
Sample Answer
Dear Sir/Madam,
The first malfunction that I noticed was safety lock that demanded applying
of great force. My wife had to ask me for help, because she wasn't strong
enough to push the safety lock through. We discovered another problem
when tried to use the blender. I put some ice-cream and milk in the blender
and pushed the "Start" button. It started working but suddenly got stuck and
we were unable to use it since. I was very surprised to discover that much
problems in a quite expensive model.
Naturally, I returned the blender to you to be replaced with a new one. Your
assistant said that I would have to wait only a week. After two weeks the food
processor had still not arrived. Finally, four weeks later, I was contacted by
your representative.
Imagine my feelings when I learned from him that I cannot receive the same
model of food processor as I bought. As a solution he offered that I upgrade
my model to a better one and this too will take two weeks.
I am very disappointed with both the equipment and the service have I
received. Therefore, I expect a full refund of 180$ as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Mr. Smith.
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Yours sincerely,
Sumaiya Shimu
Sample:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the service that I received at
your establishment a couple of days ago.
I visited your shop to purchase a new phone, hoping for a pleasant
experience. However, I was disheartened by the behavior of your employee,
which left me feeling disappointed and frustrated.
Firstly, upon entering the shop, I was met with indifference from your staff
member. They appeared disinterested and lacked professionalism in
their approach. Moreover, when I sought assistance in choosing a phone,
the employee was unhelpful and seemed impatient with my inquiries. Their
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with my recent stay at your hotel,
'The Four Seasons Hotel,' in Moulovibazar, Sylhet. Unfortunately, due to a
malfunctioning air conditioner in my room, I suffered three miserable nights
at your hotel from March 26 to 28, 2024.
Upon my arrival in Moulovibazar, the weather was exceptionally hot, with
temperatures reaching approximately 35 degrees Celsius. Despite the
unusual sweating weather in March, my room lacked an air conditioner. After
informing a verbal complaint, a technician was sent to install a new unit.
However, despite my request to be relocated to another room, I was informed
that the hotel was fully booked.
Regrettably, each night after returning from work, I found that the problem
persisted. Consequently, I spent three uncomfortably hot nights in a room
which is ill-equipped to manage the heat, resulting in significant discomfort
and ultimately, falling ill with a cold due to excessive sweating in the confined
space.
I am deeply disappointed by this unacceptable level of service, especially
considering the significant nightly rate of 8000 BDT. To address this
inconvenience, I kindly request an immediate refund and the provision of a
complimentary stay in one of your superior suites in the future. If this is not
possible, I am prepared to escalate my complaint to higher authorities.
I eagerly await your prompt response.
Yours faithfully,
Sumaiya Shimu
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manner of your staff. If you fail to take any steps to uphold your reputation
concerning food quality and customer service, you may risk losing many
customers, including myself.
I anticipate your prompt response to this matter.
Yours faithfully,
Sumaiya Shimu
Checklist:
1. Have I read and understood the instructions?
4. Have I included both the reason for writing and the 3 bullet
points?
vocabulary?
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mistakes?
Feedback:
Task Achievement
The letter meets all the requirements of the task. The three points
have been covered, each point has been extended with further
appropriate and relevant information, and the tone is consistent
throughout the letter.
Coherence and Cohesion
Paragraphing has been used appropriately, ideas have been
organised logically, and cohesion within / between sentences and
paragraphs is appropriate.
Lexical Resource (Vocabulary)
Word forms and spellings are all correct. There is a range of
vocabulary and the writer collocates well.
Here are some examples of good vocabulary / phrases /
collocations for this letter:
• upon returning
• shutter mechanism
• functioning properly
• assured me
• with a view to
• company representative
• not acceptable to
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HomeWorks
1. Read All Rules to write Informal & Formal Letter
2. Learn phrases to write a complaint letter (make a short
list for your own and apply in your writing)
3. Read all sample letter very carefully
o Take a pencil and analyze your sample. Notice and
underline the following points:
▪ Notice how they start, how to initiate complain, how
to make story about a complain, how to write what
you want now, how to close
▪ Sentence structure (compound, complex, simple,
conditional)
▪ Topic related formal vocab, phrases
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▪ Tenses
▪ Punctuation; referencing; paragraphing; connection
between sentences and paragraphs;
▪ How each bullet point covers each paragraph
4. Now write 3 letters from all Sample letters in your own.
Don’t copy any sentences or phrases directly, you should
learn it, then write it from your own understanding.
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