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    New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time.

    Do you think the


    advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

    Outline

    Introduction

    Technology change the way children spend their freetime (1), disagree (2)

    Body

    Paragraph 1: Inadequate rest of children(3)

    (4) Available interesting entertaiment  children easilier find things make


    them fun (5) spend much time for them  their brain gets less rest.

    (6) EX: study a lot  stressful  find interesting things on websites such as
    watching film, playing video games  sleep too little  insomnia

    (7) Moreover, adult use technology almost day for entertainment and work
     children copy this habit mechanically eventhough they don’t like doing it
    children not enough time to sleep.

    Paragraph 2: consume their freetime ineffectively for their development of


    health(8)

    (9) Available social website  many new things and make friends easilier 
    (10) children like and depend on  decrease their outside social interaction
     depression

    (11) EX: Messenger, instagram, skype  chat with many other children 
    not excited and not have enough time to connect outside

    (12) New knowlegdes  spend much time for study on them  sedentary 
    poor health

    Conclusion. (13), (14)

    How children use their freetime has changed in a worse way by technology.

    Technology makes children’s sleeping time and development of health


    decrease significantly.

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