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3.1(С_662647) Letter for Ms.Adams
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Dear Ms.Adams,
1. Thank you for your willingness to work with us.
We offer you to monitor the prices for the
listings this week.
Feel free to check out the price and product listings
You will find in the attached file the list of
for this this week attached to this message.
the products.
Make a detailed prices report for the
products. Please provide a detailed pricing report for the
We need to know the minimum and maximum products in question.
(start bids and winner bids), number of views for We require the minimum and maximum (including
each and the number of auction participants for start and winner bids) number of views for each item,
each auction. and the participants at each auction.
Our management plans to buy some lots.
You will get an interest 5% from each deal. Our management is working on purchasing some lots
We will wait for your report within seven work from which you will receive a 5% interest on each
days. deal.
We will be waiting for your report within seven
business days.
2. The control at the deals will be available
for you next week.
We have found the clients for you and at the In addition, the deals tracking record will be
moment they are working with our experts. available to you next week.
We will always keep you informed about it. potential clients who are currently working with our
Looking forward to your reply if you have experts..
any questions. We will always keep you updated about it
Best regards, We look forward to your reply should you have any
further questions.

3.2(С_1002178) letter for customer

Thomas_________________________________
Dear Thomas,
We've received your report about printing
machines and motorcycles.
You reviewed a huge number of items. We
appreciate your work.
At the moment we are interested only in Dear Thomas,
the printing machines. Thank you for sending us your report about printing
According to our information, they are in machines and motorcycles.
high demand. We appreciate your efforts for reviewing a significant
This is easier and faster to make a profit. number of items.
Our management is ready to buy twenty Nevertheless, We are only interested in the printing
units of these machines. machines for the time being.
Just for the prices that you have given
(maximum purchase price of each machine Our records indicate that there is a high demand for

must not exceed $5000). these items.

We plan to make a payment in within 2 This is a more straightforward and time-efficient way

days. So you can start selling this week. to generate profit.

We will immediately put up for sale the Our management is prepared to purchase twenty units

bought machines at low prices from $5000. of these machines at the price you offered,

As we agreed before your fee will be (expecting the maximum purchase price will not

approximately $ 450 from each deal. exceed $5,000) we intend to make the payment

it's not a bad bonus to your monthly within two days.

salary. Therefore, you can proceed with the sales this week.
The purchased machines will be made available for
You are a valuable employee for us and we
sale at competitive prices starting from $5000.
are pleased to work with you.
In line with our previous agreement, your fee will be
Keep in touch with us.
approximately $450 per transaction.
Regards,
This is a fair addition to your monthly remuneration.
You are a valuable member of our team, and we are
pleased to have you on board.
3.3(С_7237575) Letter for the customer Milena
Please keep in touch.
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Kind regards,
Dear Milena,
We have received the payment from you, but
your simulator has been returned. Unfortunately,
you gave us a wrong shipping address. This
situation happens sometimes. Please send 3.3(С_7237575) Letter for the customer Milena
us the right shipping address, so we can send
you the simulator during 2-3 days and Dear Milena,
provide the tracking.
Thank you, We have received an incorrect shipping address
3.4(С_25245153) Letter for the customer John which leads to unexpected delays.
___________________________________ Please send us the correct shipping address so that we
Hello John! can send you the simulator as well as the tracking
Our congratulations with your purchase of information within 2-3 business days.
one of our chests. We are glad that you We apologize for any inconvenience.

liked it. We also have other antique chests. Thank you for your purchase

Soon we will put them up for sale and give

you the item numbers. 3.4(С_25245153) Letter for the customer John

The payment for the chest is still pending,

as the eBay account of our seller holds the Hi John !

funds, so now he is trying to remove the Congratulations on your purchase of one of our

hold and to deposit the payment to us. We chests. We are pleased to hear that you liked it.

will let you know immediately as soon as We also have a selection of other antique chests that

we get the payment. will be soon put up for sale so you can get its item
number in due time.
Regards,
Please be advised that the payment for the chest is
still pending due to a hold in the eBay payment
processing, and our seller is working on the payment
release at this moment. We will notify you as soon
as we receive the payment.
3.5(С_1017532) Letter for the customer Charles.
Kind regards,
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Dear Charles,
Please let us know if you received our good
and whether you are satisfied with this
purchase.

As the tracking shows, the goods are

delivered, but the money for the goods is
not available on our ebay account yet.

If you are satisfied with the purchase and not Dear Charles,
going to return it, please confirm it, so that We are pleased to Inform you that the item has
we could get the money from ebay. Please been delivered. Please confirm receipt of the goods
leave positive feedback. It will help. and satisfaction with your purchase.

Regards, Please note that the payment for the item is still
pending whose funds are currently held by our
eBay seller,.

If you wish to keep it, kindly confirm this so that

we can receive the payment from eBay.
as this will be greatly appreciated.

Have an amazing day !,

3.6(С_10132462) Letter for the manager Peter

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Dear Peter,

You received the money for 2 sales at once

because the number of sales has been increased.
The fact of it is that you have been working with
us for a long time, and we are satisfied with your
work. You said that you wanted to have more
profits. We do not mind about it.

3.6(С_10132462)Letter for the manager Peter

By the way it’s time to get a salary, how do you Dear Peter,
prefer us to send it to you? We may send you a
check via e-mail so you will be able to do a Please be advised that the payment for two sales
Mobile Check Deposit. We do not need anything have been made in one transaction due to an
else but your full name. increase in the number of sales.
We want to express our satisfaction with your
Regards, performance and consistency in our company for
which we want to review your request for a pay
raise.

On the other hand, your salary is ready for

collection. Please indicate your preferred method
of payment. We can send a check via e-mail for
you to be to do a Mobile Check Deposit.

3.7(С_114320) Letter for the customer Jim. Please provide us with your full name.

___________________________________ Kind regards,

Dear Jim,

We have not received the payment for the item

from our seller and we should ask you to put
the dispute to the deal.

The funds will be returned to you immediately

and we will inform you how to send the
payment to us again in a different way.
Confirm us once the disput is completed
and the funds are returned. 3.7(С_114320) Letter for the customer Jim.

Reagrds,
Dear Jim,

Therefore; we ask you to file a dispute with the

deal.

and we will provide you with directions on how to

resend the payment in a different method.

Please confirm when the dispute has been

resolved and the funds have been resent
successfully.
Kind regards,

C.A.Z.M.