CSS 210 Lecture Notes
CSS 210 Lecture Notes
Introduction
Law enforcement or security officers are at the forefront of dealing with crimes. As one
part of their work, they are required to write reports, such as crime reports, traffic and
accident reports, disaster report, or reports on sudden and unnatural deaths. These
reports can be disseminated verbally or in writing. When the reports are sent in writing,
they are documented for reference purposes. More specifically, crime and security
reports are used as information to aid investigation, legal documents for law
enforcement and outside agencies such as insurance companies. In extreme cases,
reports from law enforcement or security agencies could make its way to the Supreme
Court. Most importantly, crime and security reports can be used to guide effective
policies in security agencies. Given the need and significance of crime and security
report, it should be detailed and contain accurate information about an incident or
crime (e.g., factual, accurate, clear, concise, complete, timely (Sacramento State
Police Department, 2014, p. 3).
Report writing is a much-needed skill that can make or break a successful career in
law enforcement and security sector in general. Most law enforcement officers will
spend as much or more time in their career writing reports than at any other single
task. It is important to ensure all officers receive guidance and training with report
writing, beyond what they are taught during basic course in their respective colleges.
As a security officer, learning to create accurate security reports may improve your
qualifications and help you perform your day-to-day tasks. After learning about
different types of reports, you may also educate your subordinates and set clear
documentation standards. The topic of report writing, however, is of little interest and
is not the most exciting subject to read about or bring up in a discussion among law
enforcement officers.
Likewise, Bagley (2013) states the last thing on the minds of the average new law
enforcement agents is how they will document what they did in the field. Yet their report
is, by far, the most important part of the job. Until events are recorded, written down
for others to read, understand, and comprehend technically nothing has transpired.
Events only become events when they are recorded for posterity, and recording for
posterity makes everything a law enforcement officer does have historical implications.
Hence, it is imperative that recork keeping is taken seriously in security agencies,
especially by leveraging on digitalization in management of records.
In the light of the above, this course (CSS 210; Reports writing and record keeping in
security agencies) introduces students to the rudiments and practices of report writing
and records keeping in security agencies. Students are expected, at the end of the
semester, to understand the attributes and principles of effective report writing and
record keeping; types, focus, and protocols, characteristics, styles and dissemination
of reports; types of records and record keeping systems; report analysis and security
information management system (SIMS). It is also hoped that the students would be
exposed to the challenges and solutions of report writing and record keeping in
Nigerian security agencies.
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kept in the office. It is also possible that the officer is provided with digital devices and
software that automatically submits complete reports to his supervisor or head of
department.
2. Notes-taking
While a security or law enforcement officer is completing each shift, he should make
sure to take notes. He is expected to describe anything unusual that happens or simply
tick off safety spots that he checks every few hours. Taking notes is helpful, as it allows
the officer to remember more details and provide his supervisor of head of department
with more detailed information about suspicious events or people he encountered.
3. Creating a report header
The officer may create a report after each notable event or at the end of his shifts. He
needs to start writing his report by creating a header. A report header includes writing
the report's date, time and location, and full name and job title of the reporter (officer).
4. Introducing the event or incident
The officer should use the first paragraph to introduce the event or incident. This part
of the report is also known as the summary, as it provides readers with a general
overview of the shift and prepare them for the additional details he may mention in
later sections. In the summary, you may also mention which security protocols you
used to address a threat or help someone who injured themselves during your shift.
5. Providing more details
After introducing the event or incident, the officer needs to proceed by developing a
new paragraph and provide as many details about the incident or accident as possible.
Whenever he chooses to elaborate on the summary, there are a few techniques he
may use to guide his narrative. For example, the use of five “Ws” technique would
allow him to answer the key questions of Who, What, When, Where, and Why. The
five Ws are effective because they help the officer create more comprehensive,
accurate and clearer reports describing his actions.
6. Using templates and forms
If the security agency the officer is reporting for has specific forms it requires him to fill
in as a part of the report, he should include them at the end. He may also submit the
forms as an attachment if he sends his report via email. Forms help organisations
standardise processes and documentation. Many agencies and organizations use
them to make strategic decisions.
7. Proofreading and editing
Last is proofreading and editing of report. Ensuring the document includes no errors
or typos helps the officer improves readability of the reports. It also makes it easier to
understand for the consumers of the report.
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There are four generally accepted reasons for a police officer to write a report: for
historical records, as a management tool, as an aid for testifying in court and as a
guard against civil or related actions that may be brought against the officer or the
agency.
Historical records are critical to the department, the public and elected officials.
Among other things, these records provide the ability to see how well an agency is
doing compared to previous years or to other jurisdictions.
From a managerial perspective, police reports are also important to the local budget
process. The information that they provide, for example, can mean the difference
between hiring a construction worker or a police officer. Law enforcement
professionals recognized the need for good records as long ago as 1829, when Sir
Robert Peel persuaded the British Parliament to pass the Metropolitan Police Bill. Peel
included two records-related tenets in his proposed reform of police services. He
wrote: “The absence of crime will but prove the efficiency of police” and that “the
deployment of police strength by both time and area is essential.” Determining the
level of crime and responding with the proper deployment of personnel is at least as
important today as in the early 1800s.
The third basic reason for writing a report focuses on the narrative portion of
the police report. The objective of police reports, according to the International City
Management Association publication Local Government Police Management, is, “...to
develop a system that yields the most complete and accurate information for police
use.” When written properly, the officer has the best possible tool for helping him
recollect necessary details to present the case successfully in court. As a tool for use
in the prosecution of criminal cases, officers must not report conclusions or opinions
as if they were facts. A law enforcement officer’s ability to document the facts and
activities of an incident directly reflects of the professionalism of the officer and the
department, and also affects the ability of the justice system to successfully prosecute
a criminal case.
The fourth purpose for the police report, simply stated, is to protect the officer and
the agency from false accusations. Frequently, officers fail to write about their behavior
during an incident because the action may be controversial or involve the use of force.
Many officers have been led to believe that providing detailed descriptions of and
reasons for their actions could raise uncomfortable questions. In fact, the opposite is
true. A detailed, factual statement explaining an officer’s actions is usually the best
way to avoid charges of improper or illegal conduct.
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The five “Cs” of good police reports are: complete, clear, concise, concrete and
correct. To successfully meet these five requirements, officers must use commonly
accepted English that does not contain police jargon or technical terms unless
necessary.
Complete
To make a complete report, an officer must understand the elements of a particular
crime and be able to answer the six basic questions that police hear about so often. It
is much easier to tell someone to answer the Who, What, Where, When, Why and
How questions than it is to do it. There are literally dozens of questions relating to
these six basic ones. These may include but are not limited to the following examples:
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Of course, these questions are not all-inclusive nor does each pertain to every event
or incident. However, officers must take the time to ask such key questions as these,
then try to answer them as they relate to the case at hand.
Clear
A police report may be complete but still lack clarity. Collecting the information needed
for a good report is vital, but organizing and focusing the information is equally
important. A police report contains an abundance of facts that must be coordinated
and focused to relay useable information. However, in doing so, there is little room for
an officer’s opinions and conclusions. Readers must be able to draw sufficient
understanding from the facts to formulate their own conclusions. Ideally, everyone who
reads the same report will be guided to the same general conclusions.
There are four basic strategies to accomplish this goal. First, the officer should use
direct and explicit language. Second, the officer should try to avoid police jargon
whenever possible. Use short words and short sentences to express yourself. Also,
the active voice is more expressive than the passive voice. The third element of clarity
involves organizing thoughts before writing.
Concise
Conciseness and clarity are directly related. A police report should only be as long as
necessary to provide requisite information. Conciseness - brevity of expression -
aids emphasis no matter what the sentence structure. Unnecessary words detract
from necessary words. They clutter sentences and obscure ideas.” The language in
the report should be simple and direct. The efficiency of any report is found partly in
the economy of words. Get the message across in the shortest and easiest way
possible. Simplicity is the key. To be concise, separate each idea into its own sentence.
Do not try to combine several thoughts into one long sentence. Length confuses the
reader. Reading tests have demonstrated that shorter sentences are easier to read.
One of the best ways to eliminate long sentences is to replace connective words such
as “and” and “but” with a period.
Concrete
The language used in the police report must be specific. Officers must stick to the facts
while including sufficient detail. Ambiguous worded sentences may result in different
readers reaching different conclusions. Sometimes the officer has no choice but to be
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vague in the report, but specific information should be used when it is available. For
example, “approximately 50 to 60 people were present when I arrived on the scene.”
Correct
An officer can satisfy all other requirements of a good report, but if it is incorrect, it is
of little or no value. The best way to prevent incorrect reports is to proofread. Make
sure each sentence makes complete sense. Does the verb matches the noun or
pronoun? If the noun is singular, the verb also must be singular. Is the sentence
complete? Is the idea communicated clearly? Are sentences too long and confusing?
Would dividing the sentence into two or more sentences make the thought flow faster
and better? Look for transposed letters and numbers. Corrections must be made
before the report is submitted.
Double-check all days, dates and times mentioned in the report. Carefully proofreading
your report should identify these and related types of common errors. If errors are
missed even after proofing, reading the report backward may help. In this way, reading
is slower, and errors may be identified more easily. The report reflects an officer’s level
of education, degree of competence and professionalism. As such, the credibility of
the officer is in many ways linked to how well his report is written.
Another potential problem area involves spelling. When spelling the names of victims,
witnesses and suspects, officers often automatically use the spelling that is familiar to
them. Tinubu could be spelled T-u-n-u-b-u-, and the name one thinks is Johnson may
be Johnston. When in doubt, an officer should always ask for the correct spelling. Most
of us like to be called by our correct name and resent it when it is misspelled. Officers
should remember that misspelling records of names and addresses may result in
misdirected subpoenas and missed court dates.
Fundamental Report Contents
The following general content elements are fundamental to an effective report,
however, it should be noted that in some crimes or incidents, a specific element may
not be applicable.
1. Initial information. This should establish how the officer became involved with the
specific incident and additional background information. The initial information should
also describe the officer’s immediate observations and any actions they took upon
arrival at the scene.
2. Identification of the crime or incident. Always include the facts that are necessary
to show that the specific crime or incident has taken place. The report should include
the common name of the crime, the statutory reference number and the required
elements necessary for the crime to be complete.
3. Identification of the involved parties. Regardless of the type of report, the report
should always identify the reporting persons, victims, witnesses and suspects, if
known. Always include full names, address, home, work and cellular telephone
numbers. Include alternate contact information, such as work or school addresses,
email addresses, and their role in the incident.
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In all, it generally takes about 40 percent of an officer’s time to prepare a good first
draft, 40 percent to evaluate and edit the draft and 20 percent to write a professional-
looking final report.
Report Writing in the era of technology
With modern technology advancing so fast, why do you need report writing? Machines
such as computer system, Grammarly, and AI are a means used to complete reports.
They cannot write or organize your work. They can help fill in forms fast, compare
fingerprints and identifications, and speed information for law enforcement, security,
corrections, and probation and parole personnel. However, they do not organize or
think; they just do as they are told. They can speed misinformation as well. The spell-
checking function on a computer or word processor will accept any word that is spelled
correctly, e.g., seen for scene, bale for bail, miner for minor; anything goes, including
your credibility.
Being computer literate is almost a given today, but the computer does not organize
material, use correct grammar, or select the specific words to write an accurate and
complete narrative. Your writing is important both to yourself and to the public, whether
you are in law enforcement, probation or parole, corrections, security, or some other
agency. The sooner you take a businesslike view of writing and develop a skilled
approach, the faster you will progress in your writing—in both your own estimation and
that of others. You are also less likely to wind up in court (usually long after the report
is written) with insufficient material to aid the cause of justice. Knowing why you write
will positively influence how well you write.
Record and Record-keeping
Records in security agencies can be found in different forms and formats such as
paper documents (correspondences, reports, and books), electronic databases, audio
and video recordings, images and photographs, emails and instant messaging logs.
Security records can be stored on paper, on optical or digital storage media, or, on an
organization’s internet pages. Furthermore, security organizations may receive these
records through regular mail or electronic mail, facsimile machines (fax), special
couriers, or by accessing computer networks including the internet and computer
intranets.
Other forms of records are oral records that capture the human voice and are stored
on cassettes and other magnetic media. With the popularity of forensic science
(criminalistics), investigation agencies could record fingerprints, digital prints, and
other digital evidence electronically.
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Authenticity of Records: This will apply to both hard copy and electronic records.
There are some specific difficulties with maintaining the integrity of electronic records,
for instance records kept on email, or data contained in a database, both of which can
be changed easily. Measures to be taken should include: Controlling access to the
record or data, knowing who has responsibility for and access to the record or data,
preventing accidental or malicious change as far as possible, checking the accuracy
of the information or data recorded, at regular intervals.
Preservation of Records: Organizations should consider which format or medium to
keep records in and choose that which is most likely to be the most secure. And to
guard against loss they may need to back up their documents, particularly if they are
vital or business critical in some way.
Location of Records: Records should be stored safely and securely, both
electronically and physically. Sensitive documents should not be left on the desk or
computer screen when unattended. Organizations should consider the best method of
disposal of the records, at the end of their lifetime.
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