SUPER 50 PROGRAMME FOR

MAINS 2023

VIJAY RAGHAV GOYAL

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Full LengthTest 2301

Syllabus : GS paper 4
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Section A:-
-Brilliant content , exact expressions
-keywords although at times missing but still the quality of ans was very
good
-diverse and effective example
-scope for improvement in this section is one silly mistake ( which i have
marked in the subsequent ques) , and use of few more syllabus specific
keywords.

Section B:- ( few improvements )

- identify case from which part of the syllabus
-use those specific terminologies
-structre the case better for a comprehensive analysis
-Prioritize your points better
-write what is asked ( pros n cons in every ques not required )

-Handling of case study is good

 marks: - 5 / 10

Better to use
the name of
proponents
of emotional
intelligence
such as
Daniel
Goleman

Objectivity versus subjectivity in policies for example beneficiaries of

Aadhaar
Fortitude and integrity

Well answered.
Examples were
also relevant
 Marks:- 6 /10

Suppose if in
exam there are
more than one
question of
emotional
intelligence Well connected
then use the with the
name of Daniel present events
Goleman in
one and the
Mayer and
Salovey model
in another
Very well
answered. It's
good that you
have
addressed the
entire question
in a holistic
manner with
relevant
examples
 Marks: - 4 /10

Definition is
good and Always put the
re-presentation diagram in the
via diagram is box
excellent

Do not commit
this mistake.
The question is
for public
servant , All
civil servants
can be public
servants but
the vice-versa
may not be
true
The role of public servant is
much larger than just being
philosophers
 marks: - 4 / 10

sicne the
question is
about
decision
making you
may write the
example how
our choices
are depicted
on webpages
by collecting
information
from cookies

Digital
technology has
modified
consumers
choices with its
The diversified
question is platforms and
not how multiple
digital avenues to
technology cater to the
helps us in demands of a
various larger
forms of consumer base.
decision-ma The angle of
king but
about the
rationality can
rationality be looked from
of such the point of
decisions view of price
comparisons,
services
offered,
grievances
mechanisms,
social
interconnected
ness etc
 this Part has been well addressed by you

digital
Literacy is
the most
important
way forward
here
 Marks: - 6 / 10

Virtue and
Teleological or
consequentialist

Kant

Also include
philosophers
from the virtue
ethics such as
Aristotle and
Plato
Even without
the
philosophers
you have
developed a
very good way
of answering
such
philosophical
questions. Well
done. Keep it up
Can
mention the
philosopher
s from
contractaria
n as well as
contempora
ry
contractaria
n
Well attempted
MARKS:- 6 /10
Political neutrality but not policy neutrality

Given the
current
circumstances
the traditional
neutral way
Webberian
model of
bureaucracy
needs to be
supported with
foundational
values of civil
services such
as emotional
intelligence
 marks: - 6 /10

very good

Very well addressed

GOOD

persons with
integrity
 Very Good . Very well attempted.
Marks:- 6 / 10

very
unique ,
effective,
and Innovative
examples.
very good
 marks: - 5 /10

good.
Empathy
and
compassion
are needed
to uphold
equality and
social
justice , to
decide
ethical
dilemmas
such as
ethical
versus legal,
to balance
objectivity
and
subjectivity
in public
policies, to
develop
emotional
intelligence,
to have a
people
centric
approach
rather than
just
rule-based
conduct

very good

change this
method of
writing
conclusion.
Once its ok but
overdoing it
does not looks
good
MARKS:- 5 /10
 helps in
reasoning,
understandi
ng,eliminati
ng,
avoiding,tac
kling ,
removing
such
conflicts

NOLAN Committee
 MARKS:- 6 /10

very good

profit vs service motive,

greenwashing ,
ENV vs DEV,
rights of shareholders
vs rights of customers,
efficiency vs ethical service
delivery, etc
ethics of management vs management of ethics , Compassionate capitalism , company
belongs to society ,

eg Maggi , dairy
milk

Very good
 Use specific keywords - from thinkers if such ques asked.

Marks:- 4 / 10

Justice ,
Fairness ,
Judiciousness,
- Courage , Justice , temparence ,
wisdom
 MARKS:- 6 / 10

desires as
cause of
sorrows

very
good

and Moksha
 individual
upliftment
as the
basic
goal or
end
of all
philosphie
s

good.
 marks:- 8 / 20

good

-Role of
family in
socialization
-Patriacrchic
al mindset
of blaming
the victim
-attitude of
the society

structure it better
- either through table format
or write the issues and opinion
separately
teach ,
inculcate
values among
diff genders
against such
violence -
Fundamental
duties

one more
issue -
Husband
concured
with father
in law's view
-
generational
value
system -
inter
genereation
and intra
generation
ethics
Delhi Police adverstisements -
Good touch vs bad touch
low E.I.

Ambedkar - women achievment quote

 Marks:- 7 / 20

good summarization
of the topic

crisis of
conscience
trust deficit
to stand
against
friend.

collusive corruption
professional ethics
and prof integrity

coercive
corruption

dont write pros and cons

when its not asked . you
include them within option by
adding 1-2
lines
Read the demand of the question properly.
-write only options
-choose a option
-write HOW WILL u proceed with that option
-explain your choosen course of action
 Marks:- 9 / 20

unethical
management
practises

Rumour
mongering
 Profit motive of the company versus ethics, right to safety of its employees versus right
to employment, no mechanism to address such violence cases such as internal
complaints committee,

issue
of means vs
ends

mention
options in
brief only.

write pro
n cons
for the choosen
option +
long term
solutions
to such
cases
 SHe-Box , and
other various
initiatives such
as protection of
women at
workplaces

Profit only
with ethical
means

gandhiji - business without ethics

 Marks:- 7 / 20

tolerance take a backseat in cases

of natural calamities. Such crisis
triggers emotional reactions
 The case involves showcasing the right attitude. You have to be the change
agent and make the first effort for the rescue operation. Make the public
understand that the rescue team is their only hope for the time being but as
discussed with the higher authorities more help is on the way

This is an ethical
issue in itself.
Moreover it may
lead to further
Reframe it in a violence. Avoid
way like such statements.
volunteers can Any form of
be involved in favouritism in
rescuing the such violence
vulnerable cases may
sections provoke the
public for the
Moreover
a civil
servant
and a
public
servant
can be
guided by
different
conduct
rules
hence
different
values.

Again the case mentions public servant. Moreover a public servant may be required to do
some actions which can very well be against the larger ideology of Jainism. Kindly
change this method of writing conclusion or reframe it like the public servant needs to
incorporate the values which were taught by Mahavir/Budhha/ etc
 Marks:- 10 / 20

good

MAY

-credibilty of
the information
- trust issue
-trust deficit
Means vs Ends , personal and public life realtions , issue of favoritism,
duy as a breadwinner vs duty to the society via company ,
growth vs ethics in management

- corporate espionage
- professional ethics / integrity

against
corporate
ethics
personal growth
 abide by the law

first take
the matter
to the board
of the company

the company must

appreciate the
integrity of
prabhat in taking
such decisions
 MARKS:- 10 / 20

Very effective introduction

Suicides
amongst
students is
due to multi
dimensional
or multi
sectoral
reasons
ranging from
education to
value system
to globalised
order of
technologies
interconnect
edness
where in
games such
as blue
whales have
had a
disastrous
impact in the
past years

education of the mind rather

than that of the heart
Negligence
towards the
subjects such
as moral
science or
moral
teachings
within schools
Fear psychosis due to entrance examination
and pressure buildup by the coaching
industry with respect to such examinations

Sub optimal
teaching levels
with deplorable
state of
teacher to
student ratio
You have well attempted the case but you need to understand the area of the
syllabus from where the case has been framed. Since the case majorly requires you
to deal with attitudes among the student so try to incorporate those specific
keywords from the syllabus. Few other suggestions or Solutions are value-based
education of Mahatma Gandhi and Rabindranath Tagore, quote from APJ Abdul
Kalam with respect to role of family teachers, quality education over quantity
education, happiness curriculum of Delhi government

Dumbing down
of humanity