Close Reading Essay Draft 1
Close Reading Essay Draft 1
Close Reading Essay Draft 1
10/6/2024
English 2010
Time
When you are old and gray and full of sleep, And nodding by the dire, take down this
book, And slowly read, and dream of the soft look Your eyes had once, and of their shadows
deep; How many loved your moments of glad grace, And loved you beauty with love false or
true, But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you, And loved the sorrows of your changing face;
And bending down beside the glowing bars, Murmur a little sadly, how Love fled And paced
upon the mountains overhead And hid his face amid a crowd of stars (William Butler Yeats,
In this poem When You Are Old, William Butler Yeats uses many different styles of
writing to convey the true meaning of romance, nostalgia, and acceptance of change. The author
gravitates its readers to cherish deeper connections that go way beyond physical features and to
really appreciate the type of true love that is timeless and even if time goes on and changes how
we age that the love will always stay the same. At the beginning of When You Are Old feelings
are expressed as nostalgic, warmth, and melancholic. Making readers truly think about what it
means to explore the deeper aspects of love and that memory as they connect to aging. Towards
the middle feelings change to be more complicated beginning with experimenting with the
different types of love, and appreciation for time. At the end feelings combine a mixture of a
sense of loss and reflection of life is brought up. As this poem goes through a rollercoaster of
constant changes of emotions and feelings the style helps create a sense of imagery,
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Close Reading Essay Draft 1
This poem has such a strong sense of detail and realism simply because Imagery plays an
important role. The imagery allows the reader to envision and relate the raw emotions to their
past, present, and future. The imagery wouldn’t be possible without the personification of the
emotions such as how the ‘love fled’. This allows the reader to feel the remorse of losing the
sense of love as we age because of the possibility of relationships dwindling overtime. This
poem also doesn’t only highlight surface level love, but it looks past the surface and personifies
the soul of the individual. Having someone love the ‘Pilgrim Soul’ that is within each of us
means that this person loved us even when we were naive and full of life. The rhythm of this
poem only enhances the story by starting off fast paced and full of life, just as we are in our
youth, and progresses towards a loss of speed that is inevitable, similar to the aging process we
all will endure. The tone plays into a similar pattern of being fast-paced and excited but then
slowly turns into a more reflective piece of work where you reminisce on the different kinds of
love “And loved your beauty with love false or true” that you have felt throughout your lifetime.
This piece wouldn’t be complete without the symbolism it portrays. The symbolism that stands
out to me reads “And loved the sorrows of your changing face” because this line shows that this
person loves you through the good and bad that life has in store. This love is deeper than lust or
infatuation and it’s more about loving this person in their entirety.
At first read, this poem seems to be about the infatuations you experience throughout
your lifetime. However upon close reading and deciphering, this poem is about the depths at
which love is experienced through different stages of life. This poem acts as a reminder that love
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