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Essay Test – 03 Notes (Brijendra Singh)

TOPIC: Build bridges, not walls.

Content for Intro. & Conclusion:


- Sonu Sood
- Draupadi
- Oskar Schindler
- PM CARES fund
- Baba Amte

INTRODUCTION
When the COVID pandemic started ravaging the world, many people chose to build walls around
themselves. The rich stockpiled sanitizers and masks, rich nations hoarded vaccines, the media
demonized certain sections such as the Tablighi Jamaat. In this whirlpool of divisions, for thousands of
people, Sonu Sood emerged as a bridge between hope and despair. He was at the forefront of
numerous relief efforts, organising transportation for trapped migrant workers and students to return to
their homes and providing assistance to those in need of medical supplies. His efforts enabled countless
people, regardless of their religion, caste or political affiliation, to find a new lease of life. Proving why
it is essential to build bridges, not walls.

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WHAT does “building walls” signify?
• Viewing diversities only as differences.
• Fixating on such differences and harboring resentment, suspicions & prejudices towards
others.
WHAT does “building bridges” signify?
• Overcoming our differences and fostering unity, solidarity, brotherhood etc.
WHY should we build bridges rather than walls?
• Facilitates cooperation and collective efforts, which enables better solutions to common
problems.
• United we stand, divided we fall.

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TOPIC: Our lives begin to end the day we become silent about things that matter.

Content for Intro. & Conclusion:


- Gandhi (train incident)
- Princess Diana (AIDS)
- Webb Miller (Dharsana satyagraha)
- Oskar Schindler (persecution of Jews)
- Sunitha Krishnan (saving women)

INTRODUCTION
When Mahatma Gandhi boarded a train for Pretoria in 1893, little did he know that he was about to
change the destiny of India. His eviction from the first-class compartment at Pietermaritzburg station
awakened the realization that unless India secured independence from British rule, such incidents
would never become a thing of the past. Gandhi understood that even though many Indians were silent
against British oppression, even one voice could have a powerful impact. This realization helped Gandhi
understand that while Indians might not be able to challenge the military or economic might of the
British, principles like Ahimsa and Satyagraha could be formidable weapons against the Empire.
Had Gandhi chosen to remain silent that day, the vision of an independent India might never have
become a reality. Proving that our lives begin to end the day we become silent about things that
matter.

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WHY are people silent about the things that matter?
- Because of the bystander effect, pessimism bias, risk aversion etc.
WHY shouldn’t we be silent about such issues?
- Because we could find ourselves in the receiving position in the future.
WHY does our life begin to end if we choose to be silent on these matters?
- Because we are magnifying the possibility of bad things happening to others and us.

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It is said that the worst places in hell are reserved for those who maintain their neutrality in times of
moral crisis. This emphasizes the fact that with regard to issues that matter to humanity as a whole, we
should not remain silent when they are under threat. However, people often ignore or remain indifferent
to important matters, due to the bystander effect, a pessimism bias, risk aversion etc. Our lives begin
to end in a sense because this increases the risk of finding ourselves in the receiving position in the
future, when nobody would be willing to take a stand for us. By remaining silent or not acting in such
matters, we are gradually magnifying the possibility of bad things happening to others and us.
Proving that our lives begin to end the day we become silent about things that matter.

TRANSFORMATION Body Para

When the whole world is silent, even one voice becomes powerful. This means that it is our right and
responsibility to speak up on things that matter to us. There are hundreds of acid attacks that occur in
India every year, but they are not given the attention they deserve. Many people remain silent due to
uncertainty avoidance, the tendency to avoid ambiguous situations. Here, it becomes important to
promote self-determination and a strong internal locus of control, so that people can speak about what
they believe to be right. A case in point is Laxmi Agarwal, an acid attack survivor, who has worked
relentlessly to control the sale of acid as well as for stricter prosecution in such offences. Had it not
been for her efforts, the Supreme Court might not have directed the govt. to take the matter more
seriously. Proving that our lives begin to end the day we become silent about things that matter.

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Our lives begin to end the day we become silent about
things that matter. - 5 Body Paras
Value Level/Benefit Concern/Recommendation Evidence

Compassion Society; address Bystander effect Mother Teresa


serious problems Realization of interdependence

Courage Society; attack Pessimism bias Malala Yousafzai


social evils Strong internal locus of control

Happiness Individual; Excessive competition Happiness Curriculum in


better health Holistic well-being schools
Empathy Society; social Bias & prejudice Oskar Schindler
justice Recognize suffering & help

Transformation Individual; full Uncertainty avoidance Laxmi Agarwal


potential Self determination

TOPIC: Every man is guilty of the good he did not do.

Content for Intro. & Conclusion:


- USA (Vaccine hoarding)
- Yudhishthira (Ashvatthama’s death)
- Dharsana Satyagraha
- Hitler
- Ashoka

INTRODUCTION
When the SARS-CoV-2 virus started ravaging people’s lives in 2020, the eyes of the world turned
towards the sole superpower, the USA, for guidance and support. Yet, the US chose not to lead but to
look inwards and safeguard only itself. Being the most prosperous nation, it had the opportunity to
do a lot of good, by giving other nations financial assistance and moral support. But while people
perished and economies crumbled, the US indulged in vaccine hoarding, diplomatic bullying and
intimidation. In doing so, the US squandered the opportunity to cement its place in the annals of history
as a great nation by helping others. This failure in performing the leadership role expected of it earned
the US widespread criticism and dishonour. Because every man is guilty of the good he did not do.

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WHY do we not do something we know to be good?
• Pessimism bias, Prejudice, Fear of failure, Omission bias, Moral credential effect.
WHY are we to be held guilty of not doing such good?
• Because inaction sometimes can be as powerful as the wrong action.
• Those who have the ability to do good also have the responsibility to do good.
WHAT should be done?
• Develop self-awareness and introspect.
• Identify scope for improvement and act upon it.

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It is said that the tyranny of a dictator is not as dangerous as the apathy of a citizen. This means that
each one of us has the ability and responsibility to do good. But many of us fail to do the good we
are capable of, due to various factors such as a pessimism bias, personal prejudices, or the moral
credential effect. However, each time that we don’t do what we could, it should be seen as a matter of
shame and guilt, because inaction sometimes can be as powerful and dangerous as a wrong action. It
is vital that we develop self-awareness, introspect, identify scope for improvement within ourselves and
act upon it. Because every man is guilty of the good he does not do.

COMPASSION Body Para


Compassion is the basis of all morality. It uplifts human existence and gives us a sense of purpose.
However, many people are guilty of sheer indifference towards others. Such people driven by a high
degree of individualism, meaning that they only value their own well-being, with little regard for
others. In this regard, it becomes important to remember that since the good of the individual is
contained in the good of all, we must do the good that we are capable of. A case in point is the Skilled
Veterans Corp, a group of 200 Japanese pensioners who volunteered to face the dangers of radiation
after the Fukushima nuclear disaster of 2011. They chose to sacrifice themselves, instead of pushing
younger people to the same. Because every man is guilty of the good he does not do.

COURAGE Body Para


Courage is the mother of all virtues, because without it you cannot perform the others. However, many
people display cowardice and fail to do the good they are expected to. Such people usually suffer from
a pessimism bias and overestimate the likelihood of negative results. In this regard, it becomes
important to cultivate a strong internal locus of control and focus on our efforts, rather than the result.
A case in point is the Battle of Saragarhi, where 21 Sikh soldiers of the Indian Army fought against
10,000 Afghan soldiers. Despite knowing that victory was impossible, they fought till the last man.
Because they knew that if they deserted their post, they would be guilty of the good they did not do.

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TOPIC: There are many humans, but no humanity.

Content for Intro. & Conclusion:


- Mother Teresa (Compassion)
- Oskar Schindler (Empahty)
- Baba Amte (Public service)
- Azim Premji (Philanthropy)
- Marie Curie (Sacrifice

INTRODUCTION

When the SARS-CoV-2 virus started ravaging the world, most countries, especially the prosperous
ones, chose to look inwards and safeguard themselves. While people perished and economies
crumbled, these countries indulged in vaccine hoarding, diplomatic bullying and intimidation. Yet,
there were also a few countries like India that generously shared their meagre resources with the
world, in a bid to mitigate the impact of the virus. Whether it was the supply of hydroxychloroquine to
the US or the Vaccine Maitri initiative that helped 96 nations, India did its best to safeguard humanity.
Proving that although humanity may be declining, there are still some people and nations who are
trying to preserve it.

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WHAT does “human” and “humanity” signify?


• Human: what we are by virtue of our birth.
• Humanity: what we nurture by virtue of our good deeds.
WHY do people think that there is no humanity?
• Because most people lack good values.
• Prevalence of more vices than virtues; negative reinforcement from the environment.
HOW do we nurture humanity?
• By making conscious efforts to inculcate and promote good values.
• Lead by example; support people who are doing good.

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The greatness of humanity is not in being human, but in upholding humanity. All of us become human
by virtue of our birth. But humanity requires that we make a conscious effort to improve our thoughts
and actions. Good values, such as compassion, forgiveness, empathy etc. are vital for humanity.
Unfortunately, there are fears that humanity is on the decline, that values such as selflessness,
camaraderie, sacrifice etc. are a thing of the past. While there may be an element of truth in such
fears, there are still islands of hope. There are some, perhaps in minority, who still uphold the highest
standards of humanity, helping some and serving as a beacon of hope for others. Proving that
although humanity may be declining, there are still some people who are trying to preserve it.

COMPASSION Body Para


To preserve humanity, we must understand that compassion is the basis of all humanity. Compassion
towards others uplifts human existence and gives us a sense of purpose. However, many people suffer
from the bystander effect, meaning that an individual is less likely to help a person if other people
present there are not helping out. In this regard, it becomes important to promote the understanding that
since we all depend upon each other for our existence, the good of the individual is contained in the
good of all. A case in point is the Skilled Veterans Corp, a group of 200 Japanese pensioners who
volunteered to face the dangers of radiation after the Fukushima nuclear disaster of 2011, instead of
exposing younger people to the same. In the process proving that although humanity may be declining,
there are still some people who are trying to preserve it.

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FORGIVENESS Body Para
To preserve humanity, we must learn to forgive, even when we have been wronged. Without
forgiveness, life is governed by an endless cycle of resentment and retribution. However, many humans
are unwilling to forgive and use anger as a mechanism for conflict resolution. In this regard,, it
becomes important to view forgiveness as a mark of strength and confidence. Revenge destroys both
parties, forgiveness elevates both. Few people possess the humanity that Draupadi displayed by
forgiving Ashvatthama for having killed her five sons. Draupadi refused Arjuna’s offer to kill
Ashvatthama, saying that she did not want Ashvatthāmā's mother to undergo the same sorrow. Her
decision proves that although humanity may be declining, there have always been some people who
have tried to preserve it.

TOPIC: The aim of education is not just knowledge but action.

Content for Intro. & Conclusion:


- Samagra Shiksha
- March to Million
- Atal Innovation Mission
- NISHTHA
- STRIVE/SANKALP

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WHAT is the aim of education?


- Enlightenment of the masses, enabling people to earn their livelihood and the development
of a good human character.
- Education achieves this primarily by imparting knowledge.

WHY is knowledge not enough?


- Because it may not necessarily translate into earning potential.
- Because people may know about what constitutes a good character but not implement it.

HOW can education aim for action?


- By incorporating actionable/functional elements, that help in using knowledge to improve
human lives.

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Principle Dimension Concern/Recommendation Evidence
Livelihood Vocational Edu. Lack of industry support PM YUVA Yojana
Better industry exposure
Livelihood Technology Disruptive technologies Responsible AI
Advance core research
Livelihood Financial Literacy Difficulties due to lack of RBI- Project
financial literacy Financial Literacy
Financial education
Character Rights & Duties Deteriorating moral standards Firecrackers on
Foster culture of human rights Diwali
Character Scientific Temper Prevalence of irrational beliefs Unscientific beliefs
Promote a scientific temper regarding COVID

TOPIC: Economic development is a strategy, not an accident.

Content for Intro. & Conclusion:


- Nanhi Kali
- Ashoka Univ. study on impact of COVID
- Barbell strategy
- Costa Coffee
- Atal Incubation Centres

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WHAT do these terms signify?


- Strategy: something that is understood and planned for, with time-bound goals and efforts.
- Accident: something that happens by chance, for the better or for the worse.

HOW is economic development a strategy ?


- Because only understanding an issue can enable the planning needed to address it.
- Strategy enables the focused identification of specific sections and issues that need to be
addressed.

WHY can economic development not be an accident?


- Because accidental/windfall gains can only give short-term benefits.
- Development by its very nature needs long-term interventions.

Principle Dimension Concern/Recommendation Evidence


Participation Social Caste system prevents Stand-Up India
occupational mobility
Affirmative action
Participation Technological Lack of Internet penetration BharatNet
Promote e-commerce
Participation Procedural Difficulties in starting a Make in India
business
Simplification of procedures
Equity Gender Low Women LFPR STEP
Structural support to women
Equity Medical People with disabilities Costa Coffee
Improve attitudes

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TOPIC: Poverty is a curable disease.

Content for Intro. & Conclusion:


- PM Jan Dhan Yojana
- PM-JAY
- IRDP
- Shanxi Integrated Agri. Development Project
- Akshaya Patra

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WHY is poverty a disease?


- Weakens social & economic rights, health and education, dignity & justice.
- Creates exclusion, physical and economic insecurity, fear of the future and a constant sense of
vulnerability.

WHAT does curable imply?


- That poverty can be prevented and overcome through well-directed efforts.
- That the adverse impact of poverty can be mitigated.

HOW can poverty be cured?


- Through preventive efforts directed at the empowerment of the marginalized, as well as
curative efforts directed at the alleviation of poverty.

Principle Dimension Concern/Recommendation Evidence


Empowerment Gender Lack of access to assets Stand Up India
Microfinance
Empowerment Informal sector Lack of security + exploitation PM-SYM
Social + Economic security
Alleviation Natural elements Vulnerability to natural elements Rapid Response
Address elements of disaster risk
Alleviation Health Catastrophic health exp. PM-JAY
Affordable health insurance
Collaboration Civil Society Limited reach of govt. Akshaya Patra
Supplement role of govt.

TOPIC: True freedom is not possible without financial independence.

Content for Intro. & Conclusion:


- Costa Coffee
- Gig workers
- Women’s Labour Force Participation Rate
- Stand Up India/ Start Up India/ MUDRA/ PMKVY

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WHEN is a person truly free?

- When he/she is not vulnerable to external factors; has control over his/her life; can take
decisions that suit him/her the best.

WHY is financial independence vital for freedom?

- Because it enables us to deal effectively with unforeseen calamities.


- Enables us to access and capitalize on opportunities (education, entrepreneurship, soft loans)

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HOW can financial independence be promoted?

- By promoting participation, equity, growth, stability and sustainability of economic systems.


- Through renewed focus on the disadvantaged and marginalised sections.

Principle Dimension Concern/Recommendation Evidence


Participation Social Skewed distribution of resources Stand Up India
Soft loans
Participation Technological Job loss due to automation PM Kaushal Vikas
Re-skilling Yojana
Equity Gender Women LPFR STEP
Structural support
Equity Financial Lack of access to financial services PM Jan Dhan
Financial literacy Yojana
Equity Medical People with disabilities Costa Coffee
Innovations to enable PwD to
secure employment

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