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1911241451281808 (1)
1911241451281808 (1)
Unlike a narrative essay that conveys the meaning through a personal story, the focus of a
descriptive essay is to describe a subject or a topic through detailed and sensory
observation.
In it’s true essence, descriptive essay are used by the writers to establish a clear and
vivid picture of a particular thing such as a place, a person or even an incident.
Creating A Dominant Impression
The first step in using effective description is to focus on a dominant impression. A dominant
impression creates a mood or atmosphere in your paper. This mood can be conveyed
through effective descriptive writing.
Example:
My family ate dinner at Merrymead Diner every Friday night while I was a child. We huddled
close in a large, red booth as we scanned the familiar menu. The aroma of gravy over creamy
mashed potatoes lingered in the air. The waitress brought our thick milkshakes out on a tray
and placed them in front of us on a paper doily. The jukebox in the back played songs that
we all knew the words to, and we sang along until our food arrived, hot and enticing on the
table. The diner I was cozy, munching on crispy French fries and enjoying a hot, juicy
cheeseburger.
Sensory Details
Sensory description uses sight, sound, smell, touch, and taste to sketch an impression
in writing. Consider a paragraph without sensory description.
EXAMPLE :
My sister and I walked along the boardwalk each afternoon of our vacation. We
watched the ocean and listened to the waves. Usually we stopped for a snack at one
of the many stores that line the boardwalk. Afterwards, we walked along the beach
and let our feet get wet.
Vivid vs. Vague Language
The sensory details you select in your writing should create for your reader the same
picture you have in your mind. Instead of using vague, general words, your sensory
language should be concrete and sensory-packed. This makes the difference between
vivid and vague language.