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Maureen recalls arriving to Alpha Centauri.
the Barnett's, are, in fact, NOT a good American family. They were in fact an awful horrible family. lying. lying. lying. lying, changing her goddamn age. Making her an adult legally. Abandoning her. Leaving a KID. Knowing in hindsight that she was a kid due to testing done on her a few years ago.
The title of this series is probably sarcastic at best in light of the deceit the Barnett's testimony have. If this series was renewed, it's probably a double meaning of what a good American family looks like and what it most definitely does not look like.
also do applaud for the creators of the show and the actors for their effort in performing how absurd their lies were and how blood boilingly outraged blinded in rage and a ton of words that'll probably filled at what is most definitely a crime at such a wild unbelievable story ripped right out of a movie planted on to a little girl with dwarfism!
i don't know how you post-as-you-go long fic writers do it because i just went back 50,000 words and retconned all of chapter 2 in a 25+ chapter fic and i sure as fuck couldn't have done it if i were publishing it chapter by chapter.
Except that you can. I've gone back and fixed things in previous chapters. I'm gonna do it for one of my incomplete docs here shortly because I madeup a street name in a game and realized just now that there is an actual name for it.
If you're using AO3 it is meant to be a living archive. That means the fic doesn't have to stay perfectly the same since the day you post it. I make grammatical or small word changes to my fic all the time when I go back and read them for fun. Teeny stuff.
But big changes are okay too. Adding in some foreshadowing. Removing a paragraph that no longer makes sense. Make a note to your audience if you think you should or just don't address it whichever. Some people may act like these kinds of changes are bad. But it's your work. It should look how you want it.
And it's genuinely a thing that happens in real publishing too. There are cases where authors on second or third reprints will change some things.
Hey guys! I just recently purchased this book, and i'm so excited to read it. Once i start to read more of it i'll give you guys a little review as i go along. The plot of the book definitely reeled me in and i adore creature-horror survival books a lot!
A little synopsis taken from amazon : A search and rescue team known as Vulture Squad is sent to an isolated jungle valley to uncover the fate of a missing Green Beret platoon. As they hunt through the primordial depths of the valley, they discover ancient horrors that not only threaten to unravel their minds, but to end their lives as well. When the casualties mount, the men of Vulture Squad must abandon their human nature and give in to their savage instincts in order to survive...the Primitive War.
Republicans: we can just have Elon Musk go to Wisconsin and give everyone money. He'll give them a million dollars. It's all legal as long as we hold power forever and can stop anyone from doing anything to stop us. All of Wisconsin is bribed, nothing can go wrong now
The invincible Susan Crawford:
Real Shockwave VS Shattered Glass Shockwave! Will this be more of an epic fight or a silly battle? The original cunning Shockwave trying to use his deadly tricks to remove his counterpart. However, red shocky seems to be very lucky and clumsy at the right moment to dodge those attacks? One for thing is for sure: they are adorable deers!