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SHE REMEMBERS DEFIANCE — a writeblr intro.

ABOUT.

hi, i’m grace, pronouns she/they. previously, i was @feizhen, but i remade so that my writeblr is a main blog. my other main blog is @juliettecai, where i post about literature and aesthetics.
my favourite books and series include the revenge of the sith novelization, if we were villains, and the poppy war trilogy. i have a penchant for motifs, morally-gray themes, and prose poetry, and all three often show themselves in my current wips. i also write poetry, which can find found under my poetry tag!

WIPS.

— a soliloquy of fate.

every year, the mulberry council chooses twenty girls to serve the emperor. known as the mulberry girls, their sole purpose is to provide blood for their emperor, who believes that their blood is the key to achieving immortality. but yun xueying is tired of being a pawn in his game of divination. as she begins to train at the meishu academy, the school for royal courtesans, she discovers a set of rare powers lying dormant within her that could be her means to an end. with the help of the mulberry girls, unlikely allies, and the power that lies at her fingertips, xueying is determined to bring the emperor’s reign and cruel experiments to an end once and for all.

— the evanscence of erlingham.

in the year of 1939, the golden city of erlingham disappears. in its wake is a world who does not remember its once-flourishing riches and sprawling history, a single academic institution that stands in its place, and a scorch on the ground in the shape of a clock. five univerisity students. one lost city. a mission to uncover a forgotten past. the clock starts now.

introduction (coming soon!) ; wip tag

— in the language of songbirds.

in a town where a person is given a song instead of a name and uttering their song means killing them, the only viable form of vocal communication comes in the form of mechanical songbirds. but when an ancient monster who sings cities to their deaths awakens, the fate of the town falls into the hands of an aspiring musician.

introduction (coming soon!) ; wip tag

WOULD YOU RATHER…

tagged by @xiyais , thank you! not tagging anyone but consider yourself tagged if you’d like to do it <3
  • rules: would you rather write…

historical or futuristic / the opening or closing chapter / light + fluffy or dark + gritty / animal companion or found family / horror or romance / standalone or series / one project at a time or always juggling 2+ / one award winner or one bestseller / fantasy or sci-fi / character or setting description / first or final draft / literary or "commercial" genre / love triangle in everything or no romantic arcs / constant sandstorm or rainstorm

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#THEWRITEBLRHIVE — STORY DRAFTERS IS LOOKING FOR MORE WRITERS!

Hi! Hello! #TWH Drafters is returning again for another bout of strenuous writer-scouting. Please apply if you want to join our sprint-oriented little sub server for writers who are dead-serious about drafting.

More info under the cut below.

Anonymous asked:

[1/2] you know, my favourite thing about reading your poetry is that every time i do there's something new that i fixate on and it's amazing how little details pass you by on the first, second, or third reread and how reading your poetry again after x amount of time has passed makes me focus on a different aspect of it each time? your poetry doesn't haunt me everyday like other pieces do but yours is probably the only one that i can read a thousand times

[2/2] - that i can memorize - and still be shocked by and still adore with everything in me because it gets better with time and i don't know your phone call transmit poetry came up on my dash again and i thought it was a completely new piece because everything i remembered about that seemed different but it's still the same piece it's just me that's changed isn't that wild

i’m so so sorry this response is so late because i haven’t checked my inbox in awhile. but…anon? omg? reading this made me so soft on the inside. it means the world to me that my writing can have this kind of impact 🥺 sending you all the love and hugs <33

if anyone wants to keep up with my writing follow me on my writertwt @ graceswritings !

“He’d never cared much for strawberries, but that summer her lips were so stained with the juices that they were all he tasted. And he’d never had a favourite fruit, but two years later, a new girl is sat in front of him, laughing at his jokes. “If you could only eat one thing for the rest of your life, what would it be?” She asks playfully. And he remembers how her hands traced the veins in his neck and made their way across his chest. He remembers her soft breathing and limbs draped across his shoulders. “Strawberries.” He tells her. “I could live a life on nothing but strawberries.””

S.Z. // Excerpt from a book I’ll never write #54 -“Strawberries” (via blossomfully)

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Already having lived longer than she should’ve, Hendricks did not know life. She’d read about it, seen plays and played roles of humans so lively the saccharine still burnt her tongue―but she did not know it. She’d stopped living so long ago, so very long ago, that the idea of surviving was now foreign to her. All she remembered was death and then rebirth, not humanity. Never humanity.
  • TITLE:    intrinsic
  • GENRE:    dystopian academia + sci-fi
  • CONTENT WARNING:    oppression, bleak mental state and disorders, death, gore, multiple beliefs with or against religion, idealisation of death
  • NARRATION:    third-person multiple povs

HENDRICKS:     as per deaths will, she is declared a storyteller. having lived for longer than she can remember, hendricks has spent the last centuries documenting the stories of every soul the collectors bring to her. her house in silvering, pennsylvania is on the foothills of mount pierre and overlooks the town from the clock tower to the lake. it stores more than a million documents of the story of each forgotten life in the town and all the surrounding ones. she lives with blythe, who is a collector.

ANDREY:    considers himself to be a normal fourth year woodsburg student. his parents are divorced and he lives with his father, the mayor. he is the captain of the football team and extremely admired to the point of nausea as his peers are willing to do everything he does. this fact not only annoys or irks him, but almost forces him to run to his death when one of his team-mates goes too far. when half in death, he meets blythe and his life changes.

BLYTHE:    is a collector, someone who brings all the lost souls to the doors of death. he has a cynical scheming personality and is prone to change teams with the one who can handle the most profit. despite this, he can never turn his back on hendricks which most of his colleagues find rather odd. he is the ace collector of his team and no soul has ever run away on his watch…until, andrey.

MALISSA:    a fourth year woodsburg student and daniella’s best friend, malissa considers herself to be the luckiest girl alive. daughter to loving parents and popular at school, there isn’t a thing that malissa can’t get if she wants. but there’s more to her pretty blonde persona than what it seems, apparently, when hendricks finds out that malissa can see her in the cloak that hides her from all mortal eyes―that malissa can see the dead. 

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Creating a Distinct World

what is, in your opinion, the best way to world build? how can you avoid writing a bland, archetypal universe or copying an already existing one? sorry if I’m not being clear, haha, and thanks so much!

Hey there, thanks so much for your ask! I honestly love talking about the world-building process, so I’m really glad you sent this; let’s dive right in!

Best Way to World-Build?

In my opinion, there isn’t a best way to world-build. The “best” process depends on what is needed and what you’ll actually need to know for your writing. What follows isn’t necessarily what I would call the best way, but it’s a good way to cover your bases and opens up a lot of options for going in-depth with details. (It’ll be a bit of a long list, but definitely worth it in the long run.)

For each country you’re going to include or mention in your story, think about:

  • Name
  • Capital and major cities, and locations
  • Border shape
  • 3 most common landforms
  • Historical sites or places that mean a great deal to the people living there
  • General economic scheme (ex. capitalist, Communist, Socialist, etc)
  • Most important laws
  • Major differences from the character’s homeland
  • Military setup (different branches, enlistment age, etc)
  • Climate
  • Relations with surrounding countries
  • Societal norms (gender roles, public & professional behavior, etc)
  • Stance on LGBT+ rights, and treatment of LGBT+ people
  • Most and least respected professions
  • Common religions
  • Stereotypes about this country (any and all)
  • Common pastimes and hobbies
  • Popularity of sports, movies, and other forms of entertainment
  • Genres of music (and possibly stereotypes of people who listen to them)
  • Language(s) spoken
  • Beauty standards and the commercialization of them
  • Commercialization that feeds off of the peoples’ insecurities

For each city you’re going to include or mention in your story, think about:

  • The “aesthetic” (think of it the way NYC’s aesthetic is taxis, skyscrapers, and nightlife)
  • Public opinion of street performers
  • Any recreational centers and common activities
  • Popularity of a town counsel or the idea of opening to the public for improvement ideas
  • How well-known the city is by everyone around it, or how much of a tourist attraction it might be
  • State of educational buildings
  • Percentage of unemployment versus those who are actively searching for jobs, and how this affects the city’s reputation
  • 3+ popular businesses, maybe food or clothing stores
  • The way business is generally conducted
  • Opportunities for nightlife (etc. bars, night clubs, etc)
  • Usual daytime attire, usual nighttime attire
  • Any sort of tradition (ex. sharing dreams in the morning, praying before meals, etc)
  • Stance on more advanced technology
  • Treatment of different age groups
  • Again, cliches and stereotypes that might exist of people who live there
  • Most common architectural style (ex. modern, Victorian, etc)
  • Commonly seen colors
  • Any inflation that might exist, local economic troubles
  • People’s opinion on the government as a whole (then in-depth, if you want)

As you can see, these two lists are very open-ended. I can’t go too far in-depth with world-building ideas and explaining, because it’s all up to you to create this world. Every single item on this list here can be expanded into tons of different things, but if your goal is just to cover your bases and explore needed details then I think this would be a good place to start.

Making Your World Distinct

This can be pretty tough, honestly. There’s (almost) always a world themed around something out there that’s probably more well-known, famous even. Let’s start with everyone’s favorite wizarding world, that of the Harry Potter books. Your world can be as interesting and different as it gets but because it includes wizards, someone out there is always going to relate it to Harry Potter. So how can we avoid this?

There’s one proven way to this this, especially if you don’t want to change your world. Accentuate any and all differences that would set your story apart from a more well-known world. Maybe our wizards’ spells depend on a material transaction, or they won’t work. Maybe there’s some sort of wizarding god who must be pleased to cast a successful spell. Not so much like HP anymore, huh?

Just remember, there’s a huge difference between world-building through details and world-building through exposition. Both are acceptable, but both have their own appropriate time to be utilized. Take a break from telling the reader flat-out how this thing works, and instead reveal it through the world’s details. Not only does this help treat your readers like the competent individuals they are, it also immerses them so much in the world that there isn’t much of a chance to compare your world to others.

Tl;dr—World-building isn’t really something that can be explained for you by someone else. There are certainly questions that exist to help you, but following a guide that works for someone else might not work for you. Explore the details! (And let the reader explore them, too!)

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