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@yzur02

Hello there, I just post whatever and reblog a lot of things, check my likes, there's usually cool/weird shit, cya!

Encouragment for writers that I know seems discouraging at first but I promise it’s motivational-

• Those emotional scenes you’ve planned will never be as good on page as they are in your head. To YOU. Your audience, however, is eating it up. Just because you can’t articulate the emotion of a scene to your satisfaction doesn’t mean it’s not impacting the reader. 

• Sometimes a sentence, a paragraph, or even a whole scene will not be salvagable. Either it wasn’t necessary to the story to begin with, or you can put it to the side and re-write it later, but for now it’s gotta go. It doesn’t make you a bad writer to have to trim, it makes you a good writer to know to trim.

• There are several stories just like yours. And that’s okay, there’s no story in existence of completely original concepts. What makes your story “original” is that it’s yours. No one else can write your story the way you can.

• You have writing weaknesses. Everyone does. But don’t accept your writing weaknesses as unchanging facts about yourself. Don’t be content with being crap at description, dialogue, world building, etc. Writers that are comfortable being crap at things won’t improve, and that’s not you. It’s going to burn, but work that muscle. I promise you’ll like the outcome.

For any writers that need encouragement

I teach writing at a college level. This is all good advice.

This is GREAT advice as a writer who worries about originality a lot, used to dislike writing fight scenes, and hates to kill my darlings (I mean, cut out jokes. I like killing characters).

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Punctuating Dialogue

➸ “This is a sentence.”

➸ “This is a sentence with a dialogue tag at the end,” she said.

➸ “This,” he said, “is a sentence split by a dialogue tag.”

➸ “This is a sentence,” she said. “This is a new sentence. New sentences are capitalized.”

➸ “This is a sentence followed by an action.” He stood. “They are separate sentences because he did not speak by standing.”

➸ She said, “Use a comma to introduce dialogue. The quote is capitalized when the dialogue tag is at the beginning.”

➸ “Use a comma when a dialogue tag follows a quote,” he said.

“Unless there is a question mark?” she asked.

“Or an exclamation point!” he answered. “The dialogue tag still remains uncapitalized because it’s not truly the end of the sentence.”

➸ “Periods and commas should be inside closing quotations.”

➸ “Hey!” she shouted, “Sometimes exclamation points are inside quotations.”

However, if it’s not dialogue exclamation points can also be “outside”!

➸ “Does this apply to question marks too?” he asked.

If it’s not dialogue, can question marks be “outside”? (Yes, they can.)

➸ “This applies to dashes too. Inside quotations dashes typically express—“

“Interruption” — but there are situations dashes may be outside.

➸ “You’ll notice that exclamation marks, question marks, and dashes do not have a comma after them. Ellipses don’t have a comma after them either…” she said.

➸ “My teacher said, ‘Use single quotation marks when quoting within dialogue.’”

➸ “Use paragraph breaks to indicate a new speaker,” he said.

“The readers will know it’s someone else speaking.”

➸ “If it’s the same speaker but different paragraph, keep the closing quotation off.

“This shows it’s the same character continuing to speak.”

omg this is so helpful

Anonymous asked:

*Steve clutches his chest in pain in the middle of a mission*

These are all hilarious ideas! I love how confused the Avengers would be by only having context-free snippets of the Gems' history (though I can see Thor knowing more if you making him help during the Rebellion)

*somewhere in the universe, agent Coulson felt a disturbance in the force*

someone just hurt his hero and they will pay for it

Yeah, they'll probably need some time to understand what the hell is happening or what the gems are

I don't know how Thor's (or Asgard) history would interact with the gems, but I don't think Thor would know more than "gems destroy planets to make more gems and are extremely racist" perhaps they didn't even know there where gems on earth to begin with, or they did and left it to it's own devices when Rose first arrived and then didn't check for survivors after the war

Anonymous asked:

I really like what you've come up with!

Any other ideas for Steven Universe crossovers you have?

I've been thinking of an idea where the Avengers learn about the gems after the end of the series when Fury orders them to guard Greg during a show of one band or another he's managing in order to avoid an intergalactic political incident, so the whole meeting is just Tony getting derailed by tiny bits of Greg lore Fury drops, which leads to Tony getting on SHIELD servers and becoming increasingly impressed by Greg and finding some minor incidents, like:

That time SHIELD sent an agent to retrieve baby Steven, only to end up being run over by Greg, then getting hit by a guitar hard enough to break it before the gems got there,

Or the universally beloved Annual Tax War, where IRS sends private security and a chosen representative to claim taxes and make an appeal for the property of the land of little homeworld, the gems, in turn, send their own representative (generally Pearl) to refute their claims and a small group of volunteers to drive the humans away when that fails.

one scene I always keep in every reimagination is Tony just opening his wallet, throw away a picture of Steve and replace it with Greg saying "bye bye, cap, new role model just dropped"

The whole thing is nonsensical and I find it hilarious

Other than that I been spinning the 3 Pinks AU in my head to see how could it work and reading Opal, Sapphire, Ruby, and STEVEN! on Ao3, I highly recommend it

Steven Universe AU where WD made another Pink Diamond a thousand years after Pink 1 fake shattering, thinking that they would just get Pink back and everything would be business like usual again, only to realize that it doesn't quite work like that.

So while Rose is on earth with Pearl, Garnet and, later, Amethyst, there's Pink 2, who has to live trying to live up to a idealized version of Rose with a new pearl, both failing to meet the higher standards the diamonds have for them and, somehow, being expected to act as a replacement Pink Diamond for Blue and Yellow.

Years later, after stealing diamond essence, she creates a third PD in secret (note that 2 is extremely weaker than Rose and 3 is slightly weaker than 2) to act as a friend and help her manage the ever growing pile of work the diamonds give her.

Over the years 2 and 3 would become like sisters to each other and their pearl would grow to be the one they would go for help in an older sibling/parent kinda way.

The plot would go as usual until they decide to explore Rose's failed colony, where they would meet Steven.

Anonymous asked:

With your SU x SW idea...How do you think the Diamonds feel into the Force? It would be fun to see the Jedi and Sith react to their presence.

I think it would either be like droids (you know they are there, you feel the energy cursing through them) but several times more powerful;

It could be like feel like a moving Dagobah cave, one where you don't necessarily feel the dark side, but whatever the diamonds feel;

Or they could be like giant Kyber crystals (so like an ancient group of natural ones that gained sentience), I think this one would be the coolest, only because of the Kyber song they would make, it would be like Ilum, but walking and breathing and talking. I think the Jedi and the Sith would be blown away for it, it could be easily the most beautiful symphony or the most horrible sound ever

*knock knock*

Ford: *opens door*

Yellow, Blue & White: *crouching in front of the door*

White: hello there

Ford: *takes a step back and looks inside* STAN!

Stan: WHAT?!

Ford: GET ME MY SCHIZOPHRENIA PILLS! *looks at the diamonds before looking back* AND MY CROSSBOW!

Stan: SURE!

Ford: THANK YOU, STANLY!

Stan: YOUR WELCOME!

Ford: STAN!

Stan: WHAT?!

Ford: YOU ARE WELCOME, GRAMMAR, STANLY!

Stan: WELL, I'M SORRY MISTER GRAMMAR FANCY PANTS!

Ford: APOLOGIES ACCEPTED!

Ford: *turns to the diamonds again* apologies, I am Stanford Pines and I own this property... so... can I help you?

Yellow, Blue & White: what do you know of | Steven needs | this pest must be dealt with *confusing talk over each other*

Blue: stop! *points at Ford* the human won't understand us if we talk over each other like this!

Yellow: she's right...

White: I'm sorry, let us start again. I am White Diamond

Yellow: I am Yellow Diamond

Blue: and I am Blue Diamond

White: we have come across a slight inconvenience

Blue: Steven recently passed through your... lovely town...

Yellow: and after that he reported being harassed by a creature that calls itself "Bill", after...

White: ...politely...

Yellow: ...questioning your fellow humans, we where informed the inhabitants of this...

Blue: ...fine establishment...

Yellow: would be able to give us further information on the subject, so we have come to requi... request your... help in finding the whereabouts of this pest to get rid of it, permanently.

Ford: STAN!

Stan: WHAT?!

Ford: GET THE VODKA!

Stan: YOU STILL WANT THE PILLS?!

Ford: YES!

...

Stan: ALRIGHT!

Gestures and expressions I think became part of gem language:

Pulling the skin under one eye and showing your tongue: commonly used to mock someone else in a non aggressive / playful way

Went looking for Jasper: to go on a fool's errand

Putting your palm in the center of someone's chest: used to express companionship "I'm here with you"

(To be) Greg: someone wise, commonly used for people wise beyond their years. Rarely used ironically, almost never mocking (frowned upon)

Playing baseball: being made a fool of

Bingo bongo: playful cheer of victory / happiness, normally used by off colors or otherwise unusual gem kinds. Sometimes used as goodbye or on a mocking way

(Being the) Garnet: being cool, doing something cool, it can also be used to replace the 'chad' in it's normal places

Getting / keeping a lion: keeping important secrets, even from close friends and/or family

Looking for My Dad: struggling with nonsensical instructions

the time between RoTS and ANH feels so much longer but there's practically no difference even if we add AoTC, it's only 22 years

Anakin was 22 years old when the war started, he spent a fourth of his life as a slave, a fourth trying to be happy while manipulated by Palpatine and the other half being miserable, living for the sake of remembering the love he killed

that he thought he killed, only for Luke to say that he still believed in him, that he still loved him

and then he died

Fuck you George

Anonymous asked:

Also depending on the time, Steven could end up meeting either Anakin or Luke

Maybe both, if he meets Anakin first and it's not that much time since the end of the series

If we say 20 and a little Steven meets Anakin around the time of the clone wars he would only be like 40 by the time of the battle Yavin, especially if he ages like at the beginning of the series, so probably younger than 40

Giving him a big chance of meeting both of them... which is kinda weird?

Imagine a Su x Star Wars crossover where Garnet fights Grievous and starts singing Stronger than you remastered, kinda:

Garnet: I think you're just mad 'cause you're single

Waxer: she did not say that

Cody: less talking, more shooting!

Boil: forget the battle, she just murdered that guy in cold blood

Or, better yet:

Agate: ma'am, please, this is the senator's designated rest time, I'm sure this can wait for another half a cycle

Padme: and I assure you the senator will want to know about this as soon as possible *aggressively knocks door*

The door opens to show Blue Pearl, wearing an old t-shirt with a faded print of some band or another, hair completely out of place while Paint it Black blasts in the background and a practically destroyed room

Padme: oh my... has there been an attack?

Blue Pearl:... yes?

*pot is knocked over in another room, followed by quiet swearing*

Blue Pearl: how odd, my... parrot does not know those words

Padme:... I will be back in a few hours, if that's alright

Blue Pearl: wow. thanks. I will be ready in 2 cycles *closes door*

If someone is brave enough, we could get:

Hondo: *Hondo-ing*

Lars: wow... he's an asshole! was I like that?

Off colors: *aggressively deny it*

Emerald: you were worse

Padparadscha: *gasp* I predict the pirate will take Lars' wallet!

Lars: what?! *runs after Ohnaka* come back here, you piece of shit!

Emerald: *laughing*

Padparadscha: oh my... it seems Hondo will steal something from Emerald as well!

Emerald: what?! *checks* *realization* come back here, you defective clod! I will have you shattered!

Alternatively just random ass scenes about the diamonds (post series) being too stupidly big and powerful for literally anything there

Doors? Too small

Palpatine? A sparkly ant

Coruscant? Lame

The Senate? They are faster, and they take decades to do shit! Also a sparkly ant

The Jedi temple? Cramped, but surprisingly comfy

The separatist? Weak

The Empire? Weak ass copycats

The corporate sector? About to be socialized

The Hutts? Now are the butt hurts

The Mandalorians? Funny little guys, they give you massages with rocket launchers

Rhodonite & Ru: you have been hit by~

Fluorite & Tile: ~you have been struck by~

Lars: *spins into frame* ~a smooth criminal~ *finger guns* ☆wink☆

Padparadscha: *spins into frame* ~a smooth criminal~ *finger guns* ☆unseen wink☆

*the message ends and starts reproducing again*

Peridot 1: yikes, imagine being robbed by gems like those. couldn't be me

Peridot 2: seriously, this is so embarrassing... for our emerald

Emerald:

Damian: Brother, I request the uppies

Dick: okay? *picks Damian up*

Damian: *turns to Tim* Observe and weep, foolish mortal, for I have achieved your greatest dreams with nothing but a mere order. Bask in my greatness and despair, for I will take everything you ever desired, I will achieve such feats your name will be nothing but a footnote in my legend. Fear me, insect, for I have become everything you cannot, I am the superior Robin and, once these imbeciles understand this fact, you will receive what you deserve.

Tim: *drinks tea while leaning on a wall* big words for a toddler that just asked for "uppies"

Damian:...

Dick: now, there's no need to be mean, I'm sure Damian just wanted to make some conversation...

*devolves into argument*

Jason: *sitting on desk* this is pretty much the reason I keep coming to the cave

Steph: *eats popcorn* seriously, this is golden

Jason: ohh~ Bruce is going over

Steph: oho! this is getting good

Alfred: *drinks tea* indeed

Steven: hi Paddie! what you got there?

Padparadscha:...

Padparadscha: a knife!

Steven: Paddie no!

Lars: Paddie yes!

Padparadscha: Paddie yes!

...

Padparadscha: what should I do now that we are on earth?

Lars: *hands her a gun* go, be gay, do crime

Padparadscha:...

Padparadscha: *grins and walks out with a gun*

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