I think for a 5 min short it was alright. I think the storyline was haunting and interesting and I feel it can’t really be critiqued too much in the visual of it all because this feels very much like a student film and this is something to be proud of as a student.
However, for as short as the dialogue was, I wish it was even shorter. The beginning when she said “I’m going” felt… unrealistic and forced. I…
I feel the need to make this clear that this just appeared on my TV when i turned it on. The only thing I can say is that I don’t care…if this is the world’s GREATEST film in history…. I CANNOT!!! With that lighting… I will not… I just don’t have it in me. I just cannot sit there for a full length movie with that seeping into my irises, it hurts too bad and I'm sorry 💜
if you have a food fetish, this is your jam. 12 hours strong of a girl eating pie.
