The permanent problem with greatly imaginative storylines:
One unravels a capturing plot, but lacks mastery on concluding.

A waste.

While being reluctant to embrace a musicological approach that narrows the instrument’s ecumenical spread, I can not resist to the musical beauty and warmth of the participants.

I would love it if there were time indications, in relevance to Tom’s life. It wasn’t always clear to me and trying to track the eras from the appearance of people wasn’t always efficient.
I would also like it a bit shorter. But it wasn’t a deal breaker.
The subject was great and I am trying to figure out what would support it even more, and that doesn’t do justice to the whole work. So, I stop here.