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× I am interested in working as a fulltime employee in your company as I believe that my background and qualifications are just what you are looking for.
✓ I am interested in working as a full-time employee in your company, as I believe that my background and qualifications are just what you are looking for.
× I have been working for the one of the top pharmaceutical companies in Ukraine for three years.
✓ I have been working for one of the best pharmaceutical companies in Ukraine for three years.
× I completed my education in Chemistry from University, Ukraine in 2014.
✓ I have completed my education in Chemistry from a University at Ukraine in 2014.
× Now I am looking for an employer from the usa who could help me with obtaining a visa.
✓ Now, I am looking for an employer from the US who could help me with obtaining a visa.
× I found out that your organization employs foreign workers.
✓ I found out that your organization employs foreign workers,
× I’m ready to start working on any terms.
✓ I’m ready to start working on any term.
× The main thing for me is the opportunity to develop and grow professionally
✓ The main thing I am looking for is the opportunity to develop and grow professionally.
× Given the chance I will become a vital member of your lab team in every way.
✓ Given the chance, I will prove to be a vital member to your lab team in any way possible.