Evaluation
Evaluation
Evaluation
SOUND
Within our sequence, at 25 seconds the sequence used an extract from
The Slender Man. This helped to create a child-like abnormal feel which
creates a feeling of uncertainty and suspense. The sound then merges
with the eerie sound effect which then also contributes to the feeling of
suspense. This helped to build up the psychological thriller effect we were
aiming for. In addition to this, the eerie sound then cuts out following
sounds of echoing and radio distortion accompanied with diegetic sound.
This follows the order of the sequence, i.e. when the knife appears and
Red (protagonist) appears writing her name on the mirror. Our sequence
develops forms and conventions of our chosen genre as not only does it
imitate typical codes, it elaborates on it. For example, the use of jump cuts
(sound to accompany these shots) to show instability and disruption.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f8fUFmjqXZo slender man extract
CINEMATOGRAPHY
Our sequence consists of close ups. This was to make the
audience feel inclusive to events that occurred and to increase
the sense of fear. Additionally, the close ups highlighted specific
objects which connote to the audience specific detail. For
example, the use of the close up on the knife connotes to the
audience that perhaps the character has used it for murder
hence why she wipes away any evidence. In addition to this,
there is a close up on the protagonist to emphasise the rage and
hurt in her eyes as she looks at herself in the mirror.
MISE-EN-SCENE
In the beginning of our sequence, the protagonist is holding red wine and tapping the
sides of the glass cup. The use of this body language indicates to the audience that
perhaps the character is irritated and needs to sit down to calm down. In addition to
this, she is then shown to be lighting up candles. This connotes to the audience a
feeling of spiritual activity and perhaps supernatural events. There are voices and
distortion in the background to help add to the overall feel of ambiguity and
discomfort. Followed by this scene, Red is shown wiping a knife. This connotes to the
audience that perhaps she is a serial killer and also shows signs of instability.
Furthermore, the scenes are done in low key red lighting. This is to connote the idea of
Reds name and to also emphasise the genre of our sequence. The red lighting also
helps to add the intensity to the atmosphere and connotes ideas of danger, blood and
fear. "Red" is shown writing her name on a mirror with red lipstick. This connotes the
audience that she wants to show a sense of ownership within herself to suggest that
she owns the room and perhaps the entire house. It also further suggests that she
idolises herself as it is quite weird behaviour to write your own name on a mirror.
EDITING
All members of the team contributed in editing the sequence. We all gathered
our ideas together and chose what was most appropriate. For example, the
use of jump cuts to outline disruption and to emphasise the characters
psychological state. We decided to change the colour of some scenes so all
shots were in the correct lighting. In addition to this, we went through all of
our scenes we had filmed and chose the ones that best fitted our idea. During
editing, we did encounter some difficulties, i.e. not knowing how to use the
editing programme to the best of our ability or our scenes frequently
overlapping with each other. We were able to overcome these difficulties and
learn from them.
Furthermore, we found it quite difficult learning how to insert soundtracks onto
our scenes. This was because occasionally, the soundtracks would delete our
scenes as well as adding the sound onto it. This meant that time was wasted
having to add more scenes and add the soundtracks all over again.
RED
Within the sequence, "Red" is shown writing her name on a mirror with red
lipstick. This connotes to the audience that she wants to show a sense of
ownership within herself to suggest that she owns the room and perhaps the
entire house. It also further suggests that she idolises herself as it is quite weird
behaviour to write your own name on a mirror. Red is portrayed as an unstable
character with a corrupted mind as it seems she gets pleasure out of murdering
her ex-boyfriends. We used the typical irrational, resentful and crazy girlfriend
stereotype to portray Red as a negative representation. This is because black
females are often represented as the female who is out to get her exes once
they have done them wrong. Our character best fitted the title and she was able
to live up to the stereotype. We tried to imitate a scene Gabrielle Union plays
in Being Mary Jane. Her character best represents Red.
QUESTIONNAIRE
AUDIENCE
As a group, we decided to create a
questionnaire in order to find out what type
of films people like; especially in terms of
understanding our target audience a bit
better. The idea of creating a questionnaire
enabled us to have reassurance so we were
sure our films would be suitable for our
target audience. It also exposed us to the
different ethnicities and their age group
which enjoyed psychological thriller. In
particularly, the vast majority agreed that a
good trailer makes them more interested in
watching a film. They felt that if a trailer
does not seem entertaining, they will not
view it. The film producers must capture the
good scenes and construct it into a trailer in
order for people to urge to watch it.