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    Killing animals for products like medicine and clothing can disrupt the natural ecosystem balance. When animals are overhunted as food sources for other species, their predators face extinction due to lack of food. Additionally, animal-derived products are often not as effective as believed and can even cause allergic reactions in humans. Instead of relying on animals, people should use artificial alternatives that do not harm the environment or other species.

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    Killing animals for products like medicine and clothing can disrupt the natural ecosystem balance. When animals are overhunted as food sources for other species, their predators face extinction due to lack of food. Additionally, animal-derived products are often not as effective as believed and can even cause allergic reactions in humans. Instead of relying on animals, people should use artificial alternatives that do not harm the environment or other species.

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    Killing animals for products like medicine and clothing can disrupt the natural ecosystem balance. When animals are overhunted as food sources for other species, their predators face extinction due to lack of food. Additionally, animal-derived products are often not as effective as believed and can even cause allergic reactions in humans. Instead of relying on animals, people should use artificial alternatives that do not harm the environment or other species.

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    Animal 2

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    Killing animals for products like medicine and clothing can disrupt the natural ecosystem balance. When animals are overhunted as food sources for other species, their predators face extinction due to lack of food. Additionally, animal-derived products are often not as effective as believed and can even cause allergic reactions in humans. Instead of relying on animals, people should use artificial alternatives that do not harm the environment or other species.

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    In the modern world, people are no longer necessary to use

    food from animals or products from animals such as


    medicine and clothing. Agree or disagree
    264 words
    In this day and age, more and more contemporary attention has been
    placed on the fact that people do not have to use food and products Commented [MOU1]: Chỗ này lủng củng nè
    unnecessarily use
    made from animals. In my opinion, I support this idea for all reasons
    mentioned below.
    Firstly, killing animals for medicine and clothing may detrimentally
    affect the nature’s ecosystem. To be more specific, It has been Commented [MOU2]: Our natural ecosystem
    Commented [MOU3]: Câu main idea chỗ này nên nói kĩ
    scientifically shown that all living organisms consider each other as a ra là gây mất cân bằng sinh thái luôn, do main idea là
    câu trả lời thứ 1 cho cái câu 2 ở intro em nói á In my
    source of food, which creates the food chain in the ecosystem. As a opinion, I support this idea for all reasons mentioned below.
    Kiểu ý nó phải bao quát
    result, when people over hunt wild animals for medicine or clothing
    industries, the shortage of any pieces in this chain may lead to the Commented [MOU4]: Bỏ

    imbalance of the ecosystem. For example, when rabbits are hunted for
    medicine, their predators such as tigers or lions may be forced into the
    verge of extinction due to the serious shortage of food. Commented [MOU5]: Chỗ này mà paraphrase đc thì
    điểm cao hơn

    Secondly , the products made from animals are not as effective as they Commented [MOU6]: Mấy cái này lo paraphrase đi

    are rumoured. In other words, such medicines do not truly contain Commented [MOU7]: , so …. Ê giải thích kĩ ra vì vậy
    nên là gì gì đó đi em, chứ đọc chưa thấy liên quan lắm
    tới cái câu 2 intro á In my opinion, I support this idea for
    substances which are believed to be the treatment for serious diseases all reasons mentioned below.
    such as cancer. Or worse, when being metabolised, those substances Kiểu main idea em phải viết sao mà examiner nó có
    dốt tới mấy cũng phải hiểu
    can cause the allergic for human being. For example, because it is said
    Commented [MOU8]: Hoặc dùng To make matters
    that the ivory of Elephants and Rhinos is likely to make people feel worse,

    stronger, they end up being over hunted by human. However, it has


    been proven that ivory only contains protein which has the same
    function of that found in human’s hair and nail.  ê kiểu phải lồng
    ghép hoặc kết luận lại nói là nên bữa nay human có thể dùng mấy cái
    alternative products làm bằng mấy cái k phải animals vẫn đảm bảo sức
    khỏe hay gì đấy, kiểu nó phải link vào cái đề em

    In conclusion, I once again affirm that products made from animals


    should be banned for all reasons mentioned above.
    VIẾT BÀI LẦN 2: In the modern world, people are no longer
    necessary to use food from animals or products from
    animals such as medicine and clothing. Agree or disagree

    275 words

    In this day and age, more and more contemporary attention has been
    placed on the fact that people unnecessarily use food and products
    made from animals. In my opinion, I support this idea for all reasons
    mentioned below.
    Firstly, killing animals for medicine and clothing may destroy the
    balance of our natural ecosystem. To be more specific, It has been
    scientifically shown that all living organisms consider each other as a
    source of food, which creates the food chain in the ecosystem. As a
    result, when people over hunt wild animals for medicine or clothing,
    the shortage of any pieces in this chain may lead to the imbalance of
    the ecosystem. For example, when rabbits are hunted for medicine,
    their predators such as tigers or lions may be forced into the verge of
    extinction due to the serious food shortage.

    Secondly, although it is rumoured that natural products have


    extraodinary effects, these products are truly cannot meet the user’s
    expectation. In other words, It is clear that natural medicines do not
    contain substances which can be the treatment for serious diseases such
    as cancer. To make matters worse, when being metabolised, those
    substances can cause the allergic for human being. For example, the
    ivory of Elephants and Rhinos are mistakenly belived to make humans
    stronger although their so-called precious component is just protein
    which shares same function as humans’ hair or nail. Therefore, people
    should use products which are combined from artificial substances
    rather than killing animals for natural products.
    In conclusion, I once again affirm that products made from animals
    should be banned for all reasons mentioned above.

    1. Ecosystem: all the living things in an area and the way they affect
    each other and the environment : hệ sinh thái
    2. Imbalance: a situation in which two things that should be equal
    or that are normally equal are not : sự mất cân bằng
    3. The verge of extiction: bờ vực của sự tuyệt chủng
    4. Meet someone’s expectation: đáp ứng sự kì vọng
    5. Metabolise: to use chemical processes in the body to turn food
    into energy, new growth, and waste products: hấp thụ
    6. Allergic: dị ứng
    7. Artifiical: made by people, often as a copy of something natural:
    nhân tạo

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