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Given Text 1:
The measurement of happiness
Economists have recently begun to pay more attention to studying happiness, instead of just using
the more traditional GDP per person. They have found that in the last 50 years there has been no
apparent increase in personal happiness in Western nations, despite steadily growing economic
wealth. In both Europe and the USA surveys have found no rise in the level of happiness since the
1950s, which seems surprising given that wealthier people generally claim to be happier than poorer
people. In America, for example, more than a third of the richest group said they were ‘very happy’,
while only one sixth of the poorest made the same claim. Although it would be logical to expect that
rising national wealth would lead to greater general happiness, this has not happened. Individually,
more money does seem to increase happiness, but when the whole society becomes richer,
individuals do not appear to feel better off.
One possible explanation has been that people rapidly get used to improvements, and therefore
devalue them because they are taken for granted. Central heating is a good example: whereas 50
years ago it was a luxury item, today it is standard in nearly every home. Another theory is that the
figures for GDP per person, used to assess national wealth, do not take into account quality of life
factors such as environmental damage or levels of stress, which must affect people’s feelings of
happiness. The report of a commission set up by the French president recently claimed that the
French were comparatively better off than had been previously thought, due to their generous
holidays and effective health care system, factors which basic GDP figures had ignored.
A further explanation for the failure of wealth to increase happiness is the tendency for people to
compare their own position to that of their neighbours. Studies show that people would prefer to
have a lower income, if their colleagues got less, rather than a higher income while colleagues got
more. In other words, happiness seems to depend on feeling better off than other people, rather
than on any absolute measure of wealth. Further research suggests that having free time is also
closely linked to happiness, so that the pattern of working harder in order to buy more goods is
unlikely to increase well-being. Yet Western societies generally encourage employees to spend as
much time at work as possible.
Source: Penec, A. (2014) ‘The Measure of Happiness’ Applied Econometrics Vol. 44, pp. 18 – 27
Given Text 2
New research suggests that using money to buy more free time - such as paying for a cleaner or cook
to take the daily chores off your hands - does actually improve well-being.
‘People who hire a housecleaner or pay the kid next door to mow the lawn might feel like they're
being lazy,’ said study lead author Dr Ashley Whillans, assistant professor at Harvard Business School
who carried out the research. ‘But our results suggest that buying time has similar benefits for
happiness as having more money.’
The researchers surveyed more than 6,000 adults in the United States, Denmark, Canada and the
Netherlands. Respondents were asked if and how much they spent each month to buy themselves
free time. They also rated their life satisfaction, and answered questions about feelings of time
stress.
Those who spent money on time saving purchases reported greater 23 per cent greater life
satisfaction. The effect held up even after controlling for income, although lowered to 15 per cent
happiness boost as people had less money to spend on buying back time.
‘The benefits of buying time aren't just for wealthy people,’ said psychology professor and the
study's senior author Elizabeth Dunn, of the University of British Columbia. ‘We thought the effects
might only hold up for people with quite a bit of disposable income, but to our surprise, we found
the same effects across the income spectrum.’
To test whether buying time actually causes greater happiness, the researchers also conducted a
field experiment. Sixty adults were randomly assigned to spend £30 on a time saving purchase on
one weekend, and £30 on a material purchase on another weekend. The results showed that people
felt happier when they spent money on a time saving purchase than on a material purchase. Despite
the benefits, the researchers were surprised to discover how few people choose to spend their
money on time saving purchases in daily life.
In a separate sample of 850 millionaires who were surveyed, almost half reported spending no
money outsourcing disliked tasks. A survey of 98 working adults asking how they would spend a
windfall of £30 also revealed that only two per cent would use it in a way that saved them time.
‘Although buying time can serve as a buffer against the time pressures of daily life, few people are
doing it even when they can afford it,’ added Professor Dunn. ‘Lots of research has shown that
people benefit from buying their way into pleasant experiences, but our research suggests people
should also consider buying their way out of unpleasant experiences.’
The research was published in the journal Proceedings of the National Academy of Sciences.
PLAN:
1) Intro – significant research into relationship between money and happiness, varying degrees of correlation.
2) Common agreement, money in itself is not the only factor – Other factors – stress levels, family and friends,
experiences affect happiness (Futrelle, Uni of Chicago research – importance of friends). Also evidence that once
basic needs are met, money doesn’t continue to improve happiness. But – money can improve happiness by buying
free time – important to use money to have experiences not things (Futrelle) and also to buy your way out of
unpleasant experiences. Futrelle – Gilovich research – happiest people know how to thoroughly enjoy all
experiences.
3) Expectations on relationship of money / happiness – compare ourselves to others (Penec). Futrelle – people
often misinterpret that; believe the purchase itself wasn’t right, not the act of buying something. Expect to be
happier if earn / have more, but never satisfied (Sanderson in Futrelle) and adapt very quickly to new circumstances
and demand more (Penec).
4) Conclusion – there is a relationship, but may not be positive – can cause people to compare/ dissatisfaction.
Essay: Can money buy happiness?
The relationship between money and happiness has been the subject of a significant amount of research, with as
yet, no clear agreement on the impact. Penec (2014), Futrelle (2014) and Knapton (2017) all report some correlation
between levels of wealth and happiness, but with different caveats. Penec highlights the fact that while money can
make an individual happier, the effect diminishes if society as a whole gets richer. Futrelle (2014) cites research from
Harvard University which suggests that there is a limit to the impact on happiness that money brings; while an
increased income does make people earning less than $20,000 per year happier, there is no evidence to suggest that
happiness levels continue to rise once your basic needs are met. Knapton, however, points out that money does
affect happiness, but not in the way expected; money can allow people to buy free time by outsourcing tasks they
find unpleasant, which is claimed to be essential to happiness.
There is common agreement, however, that level of income is not the only factor in determining happiness. Stress
levels and the environment you live in affect reported levels of happiness (Penec, 2014). Futrelle (2014) also cites
research from the University of Chicago, which places family and friends at the centre of happiness; people with at
least five close friends and those in stable relationships were more likely to describe themselves as ‘very happy’.
Experiences, rather than buying material goods is also identified as essential to happiness, with research by Gilovich
(cited in Futrelle, 2014) suggesting that the happiest people are those who know how to fully appreciate and enjoy
the experiences they have.
While it seems there is a clear relationship between happiness and how people spend money, not what they buy
with it, it seems that even here there are limits. Penec (2014) explain that people’s happiness levels are closely
aligned to their perception of others’ circumstances; as long as people feel better off than or peers, they are happy.
This happiness may be short-lived, however, as people quickly get accustomed to their improved circumstances or
elevated status and continually strive for more (Penec, 2014 and Futrelle, 2014).
It seems clear from the research that there is a relationship between money and happiness, but it may not be an
entirely positive one. The human tendency to adapt to improved circumstances and quickly become dissatisfied,
along with the habit of measuring our own success and happiness against that of others may mean that levels of
wealth may cause unhappiness and frustration. To ensure money improves your well-being, it seems the suggestion
is to use it to give yourself more free time, and to spend this free time with loved ones.
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References:
Futrelle, D. (2014). ‘Can Money Buy Happiness’ Available on: www.solonschools.org [Last Accessed 20.05.2019]
Knapton, S. (2017) ‘Money really can buy happiness, say scientists’ The Telegraph Newspaper [Online] Available at:
https://www.telegraph.co.uk/science/2017/07/24/money-really-can-buy-happiness-say-scientists/ [Last
Accessed 18.07.19]
Penec, A. (2014) ‘The Measure of Happiness’ Applied Econometrics Vol. 44, pp. 18 – 27