Comma Splice, Fused Sentence and Fragments.
Comma Splice, Fused Sentence and Fragments.
Comma Splice, Fused Sentence and Fragments.
Directions: Correct the following splices, run-ons, and fragments by using the technique requested
in parentheses.
1. He is nice, she is not. (Edit the splice by adding a semicolon between the independent clauses)
2. My brother always calls me on my birthday I sometimes forget to call him. (Edit the run-on by
adding comma + coordinating conjunction between the independent clauses)
3. Beneath the table you’ll find a pair of scissors be careful because they are sharp. (Edit the run-on
by placing a period between the independent clauses)
Beneath the table you’ll find a pair of scissors. Be careful because they are sharp.
4. Rico, who loves to dance and chat with the ladies. (Delete the word that’s causing the fragment
and rewrite the sentence)
5. I probably won’t come over tonight to watch the game. Especially if you don’t provide pizza and
soda. (Edit the fragment by placing a comma between the dependent and independent clauses)
I probably won’t come over tonight to watch the game, especially if you don’t provide pizza and
soda.
6. The number that you dialed is incorrect, please check the number and dial again. (Edit the splice by
The number that you dialed is incorrect, so please check the number and dial again.
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1. Some people never say thanks when I hold the door; which is very annoying.
C. No change
2. Two people who live upstairs from me in a spectacular penthouse apartment.
A. Add a period after upstairs and start a new sentence with from
C. No change
3. I love water sports. Such as water polo, pool basketball, and synchronized swimming.
B. Replace the period with a comma and combine the two sentences 🗸
C. No Change
4. The boy, whose coat you borrowed last week because you forgot yours.
C. No change
C. No change
6. Not many cars were on the road I headed onto Route 25A east and then to the Sagtikos
Parkway.
B. Delete then
7. When the bell rang at 3:05, I entered the hallway and walked toward my locker to get my books
I was in a rush.
A. Delete When
A. Place a comma and the coordinating conjunction and after the word teenager 🗸
C. Delete my
10. I noticed the flags hanging from everyone’s flagpoles on Memorial Day everything looked so
patriotic to me.
A. Delete everything
From: https://www.sunysuffolk.edu/current-students/academic-tutoring-centers/grant/writing-
studio/documents/Splices-runons-fragments.pdf