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    CSBS-FINAL

    DEFENSE REVISION
    FORM

    Title of Paper THE PHENOMENOLOGICAL STUDY ON CANCEL CULTURE IN


    TERMS OF ONLINE SHAMING AMONG SELECTED YOUNG ADULTS

    Panel

    Type of Revision
    (minor/major)

    Date Received

    Date Returned

    NAME OF COMMENTS/SUGGESTIONS ACTIONS DONE PAGE NO. AND


    PANEL PARAGRAPHS

    Proof or screenshots in online inserted some Page 114 - Some


    shaming happened on the screenshots from the Proofs and
    Mr. Job
    participants participants Screenshots
    Paguio
    from the
    Participants

    Add in the title: Among selected Inserted: Among


    Title Page
    young adults Selected Young Adults

    On chapter 4, Answers should (Unbold) from page 30 to


    "NOT" be bold 52 of chapter 4
    Ms. Mary
    Leyza D.
    Pinzon
    1
    Add theories and related lit and from page 30 to
    analyze and explain your data 52 of chapter 4
    Add literature and
    relate the theories

    Consider your spacing the whole paper

    Checked spacing

    Write an introduction paragraph page 30


    on the beginning of Chapter 4
    Wrote an introductory
    paragraph in the
    beginning of Chapter 4

    Write an introductory
    page 3
    paragraph on the beginning of inserted an
    SOP 1 and 2 explanation introductory paragraph

    End of demographic - (no


    space)

    Removed the space page 30


    Summary of Themes - (In
    answer the SOP #1
    "____________" there are three
    themes that emerged (Themes
    1-3) added the introductory page 31
    sentence

    Themes - (don’t center)

    Adjusted
    from page 32 to
    52 of chapter 4

    2
    Table of Contents - add added in the table of in table of
    Conceptual Framework contents contents
    Dr. Romeo
    Quintos

    Check the spacing from Considered the spacing from page 1, 6,


    Chapter 1 to 5 for every chapter 23, 30, and 56

    End of rrs before definition of added the Conceptual page 21


    terms - insert the Conceptual Framework
    Framework

    End of def terms - "ARE THESE


    It is a operational
    DEFINITION OF TERMS LIFTED page 22
    definition, all of the
    FROM A REFERENCE? IF SO,
    terms started in “as
    INDICATE THE REFERENCE. IF
    used in the study”
    IT IS AN OPERATIONAL
    DEFINITION, START THE
    STATEMENT WITH "AS USED
    IN THE STUDY..." INCLUDE
    THE CHAPTER NOTES IN A
    SEPARATE PAGE"

    Table 1 - ("Use PARTICIPANT


    for the subject")

    Changed the word


    respondent to
    End of Emerging Framework -
    participant
    (figure 1.~) page 30

    Added “figure 1”

    page 55

    3
    Chapter 1 Significance - add Added Social Media page 4
    Social Media User User in the Significance
    Dr. Ronald D.
    of the Study
    Quinto

    Changed the title, from


    Chapter 4 "Understanding the
    Gaining Information page 38
    Impact of Online Shaming" -
    and Awareness to
    Gaining Information and
    Being Called Out
    Awareness (referring only to
    being called out)

    Negative Consequences (Being Changed the title from


    Humiliated) Negative
    Consequences to Being
    Humiliated page 39

    4
    Paper is acceptable for publication.

    Paper is acceptable with minor revision.

    Paper is acceptable with major revision.

    5
    NOTE: ATTACHED HEREWITH IS THE APPROVAL SHEET FOR YOUR SIGNATURE

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