CLM Concepts-Principles-Practice Drama Prof.-Unlayao
CLM Concepts-Principles-Practice Drama Prof.-Unlayao
CLM Concepts-Principles-Practice Drama Prof.-Unlayao
LEARNING MODULE
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STARTING POINTS
In this short, introductory chapter, you are going to explore the meaning and interpretations
of the terms 'drama' and 'theatre'.
CHAPTER CONTENTS
The tasks and activities in this chapter are generally reflective and ask you to consider and
weigh up important ideas about drama and theatre.
You will:
• write about people's motivations for taking part in, or watching drama performances
• compare the dramatic ideas of two key figures: Brecht and Aristotle
• discuss the skills and roles required in different types of theatre
• set out what you hope for and expect from studying Cambridge IGCSE Drama in
the form of a first 'reflective log entry
• reflect on the skills you currently possess, and consider particular areas of interest
you would like to pursue.
1.1 What is drama?
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
Ø Explore the meaning of the word drama
Ø Learn about different views on what drama is for
The Greek philosopher Aristotle (384-322 BCE), one of the first people
to write about dramatic tragedy, said:
"A tragedy is the imitation of an action that is serious and also, as having magnitude,
complete in itself; in appropriate and pleasurable language; in a dramatic rather than
narrative form; with incidents arousing pity and fear, wherewith to accomplish a
catharsis of these emotions.
KEY TERMS
catharsis: a build-up of intense emotion that is released in the audience.
The 20th-century German writer and director, Bertolt Brecht, had a different view. He
believed that if audiences were too swept up in the emotion of what they saw - if they thought
it was real - then they could not learn from the drama. Therefore, actors should make it clear
that what the audience were watching was a play - a made-up thing. He called this the
alienation effect, which he believed helped audiences to make critical judgements so they
would speak out about injustice.
KEY TERMS
alienation: a distancing effect in which audiences are made aware that what they are
watching is not real life
4. What does the word action tell us about what is special about drama (compared to, say, a
written poem or novel)?
5. What do you think Aristotle meant by saying drama should be an imitation?
6. What did he think powerful tragedies could do? Did he mean they could be helpful for
audiences? If so, how?
7. What do you think Brecht thought about Aristotle's view of drama and theatre? Why?
SOUND PROGRESS
• I understand that there are different views on what the purpose of drama is.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS
• I can outline my own views and explain whether I agree with Brecht or Aristotle.
1.2 What is theatre?
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
Ø Identify different interpretations of the meaning of theatre
Ø Consider your own skills and interests in relation to drama
SPOTLIGHT ON: How did theatre start and what does it mean today?
STARTING POINT
In Unit 1.1, you learned about the roots of the word drama and two different viewpoints
about its function and purpose. But what about theatre? On the one hand, you probably
think about a building in which drama takes place. On the other, theatre can mean all the
activities associated with drama - audiences, ticket sales, star performers, performing arts
schools, and so on.
But where did the idea of a theatre as an acting space come from?
Like the word drama, theatre comes from Ancient Greek Aéotpov (théatron), literally 'a place
for viewing. Look at this impression of one of the earliest viewing places in Ancient Greece:
Orchestra
Skene
Théatron
1. What do you notice about some of the words used to describe parts of the theatrical space?
2. How has the use of these words changed today (or what similar words do we use)?
3. What skills do you think are needed for each of these roles? Are they different skills from
those of an actor?
4. Can you think of any other jobs in the theatre that haven't been mentioned here (such as
make-up artist)?
KEY TERMS
make-up: the artificial colors and shading added to the face to enhance the actor's
appearance on stage
SOUND PROGRESS
• I can identify the skills and interests I already have.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS
• I can identify the skills and interests I have and can relate these to the Cambridge IGCSE
CHECK YOUR PROGRESS
ü Use these statements as a way of evaluating your progress throughout this chapter.
SOUND PROGRESS /
• I understand that there are different views on what the purpose of drama is.
• I can identify the skills and interests I already have.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS /
• I can outline my own views and explain whether I agree with Brecht or Aristotle.
• l can identify the skills and interests I have and can relate these to the Cambridge
IGCSE Drama course.
Chapter 2
DEVELOPING ACTING SKILLS
STARTING POINTS
In this chapter, you are going to develop a range of fundamental acting skills that you will
apply throughout your Cambridge IGCSE Drama course.
CHAPTER CONTENTS
The activities you complete will primarily relate to practical work, but you will also be
exploring scripts and other sources as part of the process.
You will:
• improvise short pieces based on detailed development of a particular character or
individual
• devise challenging physical work with a group work arising from a source text
• prepare a speech from Shakespeare and demonstrate vocal techniques in performing
it
• prepare and perform a short dialogue from a modern play
• devise a detailed group work called' The Interrogation' using space and levels for
effect
• answer a range of shorter and longer questions on scripts, processes and performance
• keep a reflective log in which you record what you have done and reflect on, or
evaluate, key aspects of your work.
2.1 Developing a convincing role
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
Ø Identify and explore different techniques for developing character or role
Ø Apply these techniques to a short, devised task
SPOTLIGHT ON: How can I perform consistently and confidently in my chosen role?
STARTING POINT
Many actors talk about getting 'under the skin' of a character or role, in order to have
empathy for the character they are playing, whether a murderer, a madman or a
maidservant. But how do you actually do this?
KEY TERMS
empathy: the ability to see things from someone else's perspective
Read this extract from an article in which the actor Iris Elba talks about playing the role of
Nelson Mandela.
Elba says he constructed 'the feeling' of Mandela from footage from both before and after
prison. 'I would literally watch with the sound off,' he says. And he took tips on how older
men move from his late father. a shop steward at Ford Dagenham'. 'Watching my old man
was part of how I made the transition from a young Mandela to an old Mandela. It was
about my dad.' But above all Elba says he values the night he spent in a cell in Robben Island?
(admittedly with an iPad and mobile phone). Mandela's cell was so small that when he lay
down on his straw mat he could feel the wall with his feet and his head grazed the concrete
on the other side. "I wanted to understand what it was like to have your freedom taken
away,' Elba says. 'I can't compare my one night, obviously, but your sense of appreciation
for things is heightened beyond belief.'
Sally Williams, from 'The making of Mandela: Long walk to freedom
The Daily Telegraph, 7 December 2013
1. What two key methods did Elba use to prepare for playing Mandela?
2. Which of these enabled him to be empathetic (up to a point)? How?
Imagine you have been asked to play a character who has just been offered a dream job and
returns home to tell their parents. However, the job is on the other side of the world, and
their parents are not happy.
3. How would you act this? Identify a time when you were really happy about something you
achieved. Imagine the moment and the physical feelings. What was your body language
like? How did you speak when you told people?
Now, think of a moment when someone told you off, or was cross with vou. How did it feel?
What effect did it have on your movements and facial expression?
KEY TERMS
body language: the ways your body indicates your feelings in posture, gesture, facial
expressions
4. Working with a friend, take it in turns to play both roles in this short dialogue. Try to
actually feel the happiness and disappointment as you perform the lines.
KEY TERMS
dialogue: speech between two or more characters
Son/daughter: So, what do you think? They chose ME out of all those applicants!
I can't wait to start life in New York!
Parent says nothing at first. Just crosses his/her arms and turns away.
Son/daughter: Well?
Parent: (turning round) You think I'm pleased? Abandoning us to go to the
other side of the world. You're so selfish.
Son/daughter: Oh... I thought.. that you'd be happy for me.
Parent: Well, I'm not.
Leaves room.
Write brief notes about the short dialogue and
preparation. How easy did you find it to recall
past feelings? Did it help you in your acting?
Why/why not? What do you think of' The System'
as a technique?
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Another key way of developing a role is through hot-seating. This often takes the form of a
sort of interrogation or interview, with you - and other characters or roles played by classmates
- sitting on a chair and stool. You ask or answer questions related to the character in the hot-
seat.
KEY TERMS
hot-seating: taking on a role and stepping outside the drama to answer questions about
motives and behavior
Often it works best if you (and your questioners) have had a chance to prepare in advance.
For example, think about these questions:
• Why did I/you do that or behave in that way?
• How did I/you feel when... (something happened in the drama)?
• What would I/you do if..?
• What do 1/you think about.. .. (person/situation/idea)?
6. Go back to the dialogue about the job in the Exploring the skills section. Prepare three
questions to ask the son/daughter and three questions to ask the parent.
7. Then, working as a class or small group, nominate a person to play each role and ask them
your questions (plus any others you can think of).
Preparing in this way can help you to 'center’ yourself. This is the skill of deep concentration,
of being in the moment' when you perform so that you really inhabit the skin of the person
you are playing.
8. Work in pairs to think about what might be said, and how each character might behave.
9. Then, decide who will play the son/daughter and who the parent. Spend five minutes
thinking about how you feel, and how this will be shown in your speech and actions. Try to
bring to mind the thoughts your character might have (for example, memories of the
son/daughter as a young child, or as a happy parent after a good exam grade).
10. Now, run the scene. It should only last two to three minutes, but throughout it, try to
show empathy both physically and emotionally. Make sure your concentration doesn't lapse.
SOUND PROGRESS
• I understand my role/character and can match my behavior to it.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS
• I can sustain my role both physically and emotionally so that I feel I totally engaged with
the character.
2.2 Getting physical
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
Ø Learn about how to use movements and gesture to create effects
Ø Apply what you have learned to a short devised piece
SPOTLIGHT ON: How can I use my body and movement to make my acting
convincing?
STARTING POINT
Look at these two photos:
1. Describe what you see: what body positions and posture do the figures show? How are the
figures' hands and arms being used?
2. What emotions or feelings are conveyed? Try not to be influenced by clothing or colour -
focus on the body and positioning in each case.
KEY TERMS
frozen tableau: a living statue that is created to convey an idea, emotion or part of a story
3. Working with a partner, take turns to mold each other into a statue, as if you were clay.
First, try to recreate the two pictures above. Whoever is the statue must allow themselves to
be molded.
4. Now try out some new ideas. Create statues or frozen tableaux for these emotions or ideas:
Ø Victory
Ø shock
Ø Sleepy
Ø Memory
Physical drama involves much more than this, of course. In order to use your face and body
effectively, you need to break down physical elements into different areas.
How you use gestures (any movement of the actor's head, shoulder, arm, hand, leg or foot to
convey meaning), for example:
• particular gestures typical to a character or role (checking a watch or phone, tapping
a foot restlessly)
• gestures to convey relationships (pointing to someone, gently touching their arm).
Look through the list above and identify ways in which you could convey feelings/emotions
for each one. You are not creating statues this time, so you are allowed to move.
A common fault amongst amateur actors is that they cannot keep their feet in the same place
and they tend to shift about restlessly when they need to be still, either when the focus is on
others or when they need to express their own power or personality.
8. Try these two exercises:
a) Decide on a single spot in the room; walk up to it not too slowly, but not too quickly.
When you get there, turn and face the centre of the room/space and take up a still pose
with your feet planted in one place. Fold vour arms and hold the pose for five seconds.
b) Now walk up to someone else in the room. Stop and point out a place on the other
side of the room. Concentrate on pointing and keeping your eyes fixed on the spot. Hold
for five seconds.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS
• I can apply what I have learned about gesture and movement confidently to create
convincing characters and establish relationships with other actors.
2.3 Using your voice
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
Ø Explore different types of voice and vocal effects
Ø Learn how to use voice and vocal sounds to communicate ideas and feelings
2. After you have performed it once, think about the story it conveyed. Did you make some
unconscious decisions about A and how he/she spoke? Is the news good or bad? Is the non-
speaking character interested?
The words might seem to suggest the news is serious enough for A to want attention, but in
fact there are many ways the words might have been spoken.
KEY TERMS:
pitch: how high or low your tone of voice is
syllable: a sound part, or collection of linked sounds in a word - for example, 'sunlight' has
two syllables: 'sun ‘and 'light'
3. Try the lines out again in two or three different ways making conscious decisions about
some or all of the aspects.
What impact on meaning does this have? Can it make the lines funny, for example? Or
tragic, sad or tense?
Vocal sounds can also add to the meaning. These include sighs, yawns, gasps, laughs, cries,
and so on. There are also the speech sounds most of us make - 'umms', 'errs', pursing of the
lips, 'tutting, clearing of the throat - as well as the effect of saying nothing, as indicated
above.
4. Speak the lines once or twice more. This time, as well as choosing deliberate vocal tones,
add at least one vocal sound such as a yawn and a speech effect such as umm'. How does
doing this affect the meaning or impact?
5. Words make amazing sounds - say the words below out loud, one word at a time, making
sure you enunciate each syllable clearly and pausing before you move on to the next.
KEY TERMS
enunciate: speak a word and its parts clearly
infection chatter urchin tumbling
tongue firebrand bog sucks
hiss pitch up
6. Were you aware of how the words made you change the position of your tongue or mouth?
Were any words more difficult than others? Why?
It can be very useful to develop a vocabulary to
describe the sounds of words or lines when you
are directing a performance, or explaining
delivery. Choose four or five of the words above,
and use some of these adjectives (or ones of your
own) to describe them: light, heavy, sharp, soft,
clear, musical, clipped, flowing, rough, smooth,
short, long, deep, dry, round, coarse, harsh.
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A key aspect to bear in mind is the attack you give to words. Enunciating one word is relatively
easy, but in a longer speech, your breathing can mean you drop words, or parts of them. It is
easy to attack a word such as tongue' with the strong initial consonant 't', but it is more difficult
with a word such as 'infection' where the stress falls on the second syllable 'fec.
KEY TERMS
consonant: non-vowel letters (every letter in the English alphabet except a, e, i, o, and u)
7. Try speaking aloud the list of words from Task 5 one after the other without pausing too
much. Can you keep up the attack, or do some words or sounds drop off?
KEY TERMS
onomatopoeic: where the sound of the word reflects its meaning, like 'chatter'
You should try to use adjectives like the ones in the reflective log task For example: (at the
top of this page) to explain how words or sounds might be said.
All' the infections that the sun sucks up…
' Long, drawn out - stress how much he hates Prospero.
‘Spit out the 'f' in 'infections' to make a harsh sound.
Caliban
All the infections that the sun sucks up
From bogs, fens, flats, on Prosper fall and
make him
By inch-meal a disease! His spirits hear me
And yet I needs must curse. But they'll nor
pinch,
Fright me with urchin-shows' pitch me i' the
mire?
Nor lead me, like a firebrand, in the dark
Out of my way, unless he bid 'em; but
For every trifle are they set upon me;
Sometime like apes that mow and chatter at me
And after bite me, then like hedgehogs which
Lie tumbling in my barefoot way and mount
Their pricks at my footfall; sometime am I
All wound with adders' who with cloven tonques
Do hiss me into madness.
9. Now try performing the extract. It will help if you can learn it by heart.
SOUND PROGRESS
• I can speak clearly, adapting sounds to create different meanings for words or phrases.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS
• I can speak clearly, adapting my voice and vocal tones in a wide range of ways to convey
character and create impact.
2.4 Developing dialogue
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
Ø Explore how dialogue contributes to characterization
Ø Learn how to develop a role and relationship through dialogue
SPOTLIGHT ON: How can I work effectively with another actor to create meaning
through dialogue?
STARTING POINT
Have you ever thought about the importance we place on conversations?
1. Think about a recent conversation you have had (or witnessed), either in school or at
home, that has stuck in your mind. Now imagine it as a performance on stage.
• Who were the main players?
• How were they standing? Close to each other? Across the room?
• How did they speak?
• What gestures or movements did they make?
When you are reading a dialogue in a script, you might look for clues to help you with
characterization - how you could interpret the role of a particular character. Take Jem. He
says more, so that ought to give us more insight into his feelings. For example:
KEY TERMS
characterization: how a role is brought to life through speech, movement and interaction
with others
The more you look at the dialogue, the more open to interpretation it becomes.
3. Now you try it. For this first attempt, just focus on the way of speaking. Think about what
you learned in Unit 2.3 about vocal inflection and pace. With a partner, choose who will play
Jem and who Caz (you can swap roles for each version).
• Version A: Jem is pleasantly surprised to see Caz; Caz is happy to see Jem.
• Version B: Jem is pleasantly surprised to see Caz; Caz is not so pleased
• Version C: Jem is embarrassed to see Caz; Caz is also embarrassed.
• Version D: Jem is embarrassed to see Caz; Caz is pleased to see Jem.
When you have finished your four versions, write
brief notes about each one, explaining:
• how you changed your voice in each
• which you found most difficult to do (try to say
why).
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KEY TERMS
mannerism: a regular or repeated way of speaking or moving
• Try out several versions, but don't overload the scene with movements. Less is more in
this regard.
• Use the technique of marking the moment. One way of doing this is to freeze the scene
at a particular line, and explore the effect or relationships at that precise moment.
Who is doing what? Where are they looking? How could we adjust this?
• Once you have rehearsed a few times, choose one version and show it to the rest of the
class or group.
• What impression was given of the relationship between Caz and Jem? Did everyone
present them in a similar way, or were there any surprising differences?
KEY TERMS
nuance: subtle shade of meaning
Read this extract from the opening to the play Sparkleshark by Philip Ridlev. Polly has gone
to the rooftop of her block of flats to fix the satellite dish for her TV. There she discovers
Jake, who is writing. Polly starts reading his words.
Jake: Is it really magical?
Polly: What?
Jake: My writing.
Polly: Bits.
Pause
SOUND PROGRESS
• I can shape and alter the way a dialogue is performed to give a strong sense of character.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS
• I can interpret a dialogue in a range of interesting ways, applying what I know about vocal
and physical skills to create meaning.
2.5 Using space and levels
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
Ø Explore how groups of actors can interact on stage effectively and imaginatively
Ø Learn how to use space and levels to create meaning and impact
SPOTLIGHT ON: How can I use space and levels effectively when I am acting?
STARTING POINT
Exploring how you use space - proxemics - in drama, is fundamental to understanding what
happens on stage. Think back to the work you did on the Caz/Jem exercise in Unit 2.4.
Whether accidentally, or deliberately, you probably used the space between you and your
partner to tell the audience something about the emotions or relationship.
KEY TERMS
proxemics: the study of the amount of space between people and how it is used: in drama,
this can be between members of the cast, or between the cast and the audience
Look at this famous painting. It is called And when did you last see your father? by William
Frederick Yeames and represents a moment during the English Civil War in the 17th century.
KEY TERMS
rostrum (pl. rostra): a platform or raised area of the stage
7. In a group of three or four, discuss how you might use levels to:
• draw attention to Sigurd as the main focus of the scene (how would it change the scene
if he entered from above or behind Raheem? Or if Raheem were watching Sigurd from
on high as he entered the scene?)
• draw attention to a character's actions or emotions (for example, will Sigurd remain
standing?)
8. Now, try the scene out (if you are a group of four, one can be the director). If you have access
to rostra or other physical levels, use them if you wish. Attempt to be creative and different -
it is worth trying out the unusual to see if it will work.
SOUND PROGRESS
• I can identify the ways in which space and levels can affect meaning in my drama work.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS
• I understand how proxemics and use of levels contribute to drama in a variety of ways and I
can apply these to my own work.
2.6 Applying the skills
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
Ø Explore characterization in a script and the potential for performance
Ø Apply the skills you have learned about to a character or characters in a script
SPOTLIGHT ON: How can I demonstrate my acting skills to their best effect?
STARTING POINT
1. What do you remember about the acting skills you have developed so far? With a partner,
take each areas in turn and discuss what you have what you have learned, explaining any key
terms or ideas you remember.
Use the image on the right as a memory aid to help you think about some of the key aspects
of acting.
You may recall reading a speech by Caliban in Unit 2.3, Using your voice'. Caliban is a
creature living on a magical island controlled by a powerful Duke. The Duke and his
daughter were marooned on the island many years earlier by the Duke's enemies. The Duke,
called Prospero, taught Caliban to speak, but Caliban tried to attack his daughter, so
Prospero now treats him like a slave.
2. With a partner, take up the exact position shown in the image above. Then bring the scene
to life by improvising the conversation between Prospero and Caliban. Use your own words
but include as many of these actual lines from the play as you can. Run it for a minute or two.
'Thou poisonous slave'
'A south-west blow on ye and blister you all o'er!'
'Tonight thou shalt have cramps'
'This island's mine'
"I have used thee... with human care
I loved thee..
'Thou most lying slave'
"Vile race
How easy was it for you to draw on the skills you
have learned so far? Will you be able to apply this
knowledge to written scripts?
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Ira is a black American actor in London in the 1830s. He has just started playing the part of
'Othello', a North African soldier, in a tragedy by Shakespeare, but it is highly unusual for a
black actor to get a leading role at this time. If he is successful, he believes he and his wife,
Margaret, will be able to settle down. This scene takes place just after a performance - his
wife has come to his dressing room.
Margaret: I can't believe we're here. After all these years. It's like a dream.
Ira: A few weeks and we'll be able to rent a proper home. A small house perhaps.
Margaret: Goodness!
Ira: And then we can save to buy.
Margaret: Can you imagine?
Ira: What color shall we paint the front door?
Margaret: Green? No, blue.
Ira: We'll look back and tell our children, that we..
Margaret: Ira…
Ira: No, we absolutely will... This is the start of a whole new chapter... It's been
hard I know. Touring isn't good for family life.
Margaret: Please don't.
Ira: If we settle, it'll happen. You need stability.
Margaret: I have stability.
Ira: I mean a place to really call home. I see how it is, Mags. I'm not blind. Every
first night, every public engagement.. But you, you hold your head high and
sail past, like a swan. For every mean-spirited remark. For all the damp, cheap
lodgings.
Every small, peeling theatre. Every mile you've endured on the road, every
penny you've carried to the bank. Every moment of self-doubt you've heard or
had. The reason we're here... and I want you to know that I know... I wouldn't
be here without you.
Margaret: I don't need to...
Ira: You do.
Margaret: A house? Can you imagine?
Ira: You can stay at home.
Margaret: I can buy furniture.
Ira: You can.
Margaret: Paint the nursery.
Ira: The most important room.
Margaret: It's lovely.
A knock at the door.
Lolita Chakrabarti, from Red Velvet
3. In order to try to understand the characters and their relationship, answer these initial
questions.
a) Do Ira and Margaret have any children? How do you know?
b) How would you describe the relationship between Ira and his wife based on this
extract? What particular lines or phrases suggest this?
c) How would you describe the mood of each of them in this conversation? Does their
mood and attitude remain the same throughout?
4. If you were performing the role of either Ira or Margaret, how would you use the script to
prepare? Go back to the acting skills you have learned about. For example, can you see
opportunities for Ira to move or change position as he speaks?
sense of wonder - it's not quite real. Does she look around the
dressing room?
5. Now do the same for the rest on your own copy, or make notes alongside line numbers.
• Add questions about lines you're not sure of and want to explore further.
• Underline key phrases or lines that need stressing or special treatment.
• Put a forward slash in the script where there might be a pause.
• Add any simple stage directions in note form (for example, ‘Moves away’ or ‘Holds
her hand’).
Writing concisely about how an actor would play a particular part is quite challenging. Here
a student writes about how the role of Margaret might be played, up to Ira's speech.
I imagine that Margaret is somewhat quieter than her husband, and she is in his domain
after all, so perhaps at the start she stands by the door, at the back or side of the stage,
slightly cowed, while he takes off his make-up. Her first words should be genuine. but she
sounds hesitant, as if she's can't quite explain how his acting made her feel. Her lack of
confidence is shown by her erm' - as if she is in awe of him. I think she'd be standing still,
perhaps nervously fiddling with a hat, or something, while he is big and bold, very
animated in his movements.
7. Now discuss the script. Decide who will play Ira and who Margaret. Once you have agreed
some initial ideas (even if they change as you go on), you can begin to rehearse the scene. For
the time being, keep the script to hand and scribble down any notes for example, about
where to stand, or when to move or pause.
8. Learn the lines and perform the scene.
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SOUND PROGRESS
• I can make decisions about how a part is played and put those decisions into action.
• I can apply some of the acting skills I have learned.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS
• I can interpret a script in a range of ways, and then develop ways of acting a role that
arise out of my understanding of character and relationships.
• I can choose from, and apply, a wide variety of acting skills.
SOUND PROGRESS
o I understand my role/character and can match my behavior to it.
o l can use gesture and movement to create simple and effective characters or ideas.
o I can speak clearly, adapting sounds to create different meanings for words or
phrases.
o I can shape and alter the way a dialogue is performed to give a strong sense of
character.
o I can identify the way in which space and levels can affect meaning in my drama
work.
o I can make decisions about how a part is played and put those decisions into action.
o I can apply some of the acting skills I have learned.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS
o l can sustain my role both physically and emotionally so that I feel I totally engaged
with the character.
o I can apply what I have learned about gesture and movement confidently to create
convincing characters and establish relationships with other actors.
o I can speak clearly, adapting my voice and vocal tones in a wide range of ways to
convey character and create impact.
o I can interpret a dialogue in a range of interesting ways, applying what I know about
vocal and physical skills to create meaning.
o I understand how proxemics and use of levels contribute to drama in a variety of
ways and I can apply these to my own work
o I can interpret a script in a range of ways, and then develop approaches to acting a
role that arise out of my understanding of character and relationships.
o l can choose from, and apply, a wide variety of acting skills.
Chapter 3
STAGING AND DESIGN
STARTING POINTS
In this chapter you are going to explore the various elements of staging and design, and learn
about how these can be applied to enhance dramatic pieces. You will also be provided with
key knowledge to help you write confidently about these elements and about the role of
designers.
CHAPTER CONTENTS
The activities you complete will primarily relate to design elements, but you will also
consider dramatic meaning and communication with an audience.
You will:
• develop ideas for a concept for a well-known tale
• evaluate the best use of stage configuration for a particular scene
• work on designing scenes in terms of lighting, sound, costumes and props
• answer a range of short questions on design and meaning throughout the chapter.
3.1 What is design?
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
Ø Explore the notion of communication, impact and symbolism within design
Ø Learn how design elements can link together to enhance a director's concept
STARTING POINT
In your devising and scripted work, as well as the exploration of an extended extract, you will
need to consider the role of a designer and how you would use design elements to contribute
to the meaning and intention of your work.
1. Make notes identifying any areas of theatre design that you are aware of or think are
particularly important for drama.
BERNARDA: What kind of fan is that to offer a widow? Give me a black one
and show some respect to your dead father.
MARTIRIO: Take mine.
BERNARDA: What about you?
MARTIRIO: I don't feel the heat.
These very deliberate design decisions were written into the script by the playwright.
Here we have seen examples of prop and costume decisions. Even the smallest details, such
as the color of a fan, can enhance your piece and send a message to the audience, even on a
subconscious level.
DEVELOPING THE SKILLS
Theatre design is usually split into four main elements: set, lighting, sound and costume.
Each of these can be used to convey a multitude of messages, and they often overlap and
complement each other. Design can help set the time period and location of a scene, as well as
enhance mood and atmosphere.
A designer will work closely with the director of a play to realize the directorial concept.
Decisions about each design element will be carefully thought out. For example, a director may
choose to set a piece in a certain time period to make the audience think of a contemporary
issue, or they might use it to highlight certain themes within the play.
KEY TERMS
directorial concept: an approach or overarching idea that a director has for the
interpretation of a particular play
An example of how design can be used to enhance a directorial concept is shown in this picture
of a set used in a stage version of Charles Dickens's novel Great Expectations. In this
production, the director wanted to highlight the fact that the story is told through
the eves of the main character, Pip. The director and designer worked together exploring the
use of perspective, making parts of the set appear looming and ominous to Pip, who, as a boy
at the start of his story, is often beaten and told of his worthlessness.
Look at the picture above once more. This is a Christmas dinner scene in which Pip (the only
child character, pictured here bottom left) is being lectured by Pumblechook, the pompous
uncle of Pip's brother-in- law. Ask yourself:
4. Why do you think that the table has been designed at a tilt in this manner?
5. What message is suggested by the staggered levels and placing of the adults around the
table?
In the same production, another key design aspect was a huge, oversized fireplace in the
home of a wealthy, cruel woman called Miss Havisham.
6. What idea or signal might be suggested by the fireplace when Pip, who is very poor, visits
the house?
7. Later in the play, Miss Havisham's dress catches fire: what further message might the huge
fireplace suggest?
To test out ideas of a concept and ways in which design can develop this, have a look at
how one student has identified possibilities around the story of Little Red Riding Hood.
We want to make the audience think about the dangers of giving strangers personal details.
We will make this relevant to our audience by trying to highlight the risks that social media
presents.
SET LIGHTING SOUND COSTUME PROPS
Forest – to Low level – cold Computer Red Riding Both Red
imply hidden colors to keyboard clicks, Hood wears red Riding Hood
dangers provide ‘sent mail’ ‘hoodie’ and ‘wolf’ have
ominous swoosh noises ‘wolf’ is a man red phones to
atmosphere instead of wearing a long represent
birdsong black cloak, danger
with a high
collar that Red Riding
obscures half Hood also
his face carries white
flowers to
symbolize her
innocence.
This exercise explores the notion of a concept in its simplest form. This chapter will enable you
to look at each design element individually and consider how you can use them to your
advantage on a deeper and even more symbolic level. Remember too that sometimes limited
resources can be just as useful in promoting creativity. You do not have to have the most
elaborate or expensive design in order for your pieces to be effective and inventive.
SOUND PROGRESS
• I understand what a directorial concept is and how design can be used to
enhance this.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS
• I understand how design elements can be combined to create a message for the
audience.
• I can make conscious decisions about how to apply design elements in my own work.
3.2 Exploring sets and stages
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
Ø Learn about the varying configurations of stages
Ø Explore what is important in set design
SPOTLIGHT ON: How can I use different stage and set options?
STARTING POINT
1. Think about any plays that you have seen on stage. Were the stages all the same size and
shape? Where were you sitting?
When putting on a play, one of the first decisions a director will make is to identify which
stage layout or configuration to use. The style of play, or preferred distance of audience
to the stage, are the sorts of factors that are considered.
KEY TERMS
stage layout or configuration: the manner in which the performance space is laid out
and the audience is located
End on
Probably considered one of the most traditional layouts, this is where the audience is facing
the stage in one direction.
An end on stage gives you the stage map shown here - the areas of the stage universally used
by directors and actors to aid blocking. The directions are based on the actor's point of view
and derive from times when many stages sloped downwards towards the audience, hence
the terms downstage and upstage. The slope itself is known as the rake.
KEY TERMS
downstage: the area at the front of the stage
upstage: the area at the back of the stage
rake: the slope of the stage from the back (upstage) to the front (downstage)
In all your work, written and practical, it is very important to use the correct stage area
terminology: This will help your fellow group numbers and anyone reading your work to
visualize any descriptions and ideas that you offer.
2. Following the stage map, what would be the correct terminology to use to describe
someone who is:
• nearest the audience exactly in the middle
• in one of the corners of the stage furthest away from the audience?
Proscenium arch
Many old theatres are end on, but also have a proscenium arch, a frame around the front of
the stage. Proscenium arch stages were particularly popular during the 19th century with the
playwrights of theatrical realism. They helped to create the feeling for the audience that they
were looking in on the scene, almost spying on the characters. This imaginary barrier is
sometimes called the fourth wall'.
Thrust
A thrust configuration places the audience on three sides. This layout provides a more
intimate feel for the audience.
Traverse
A traverse stage is when the audience are on opposite sides of the acting area. It can provide
an interesting dynamic for the audience as they can see each other so clearly. It is also useful
if there are two different locations in the play as these can be set at either end. Strong focal
points are in these areas, rather than center stage. Often a director will decide which ends are
upstage or downstage to make blocking easier.
3. How would you feel performing on a thrust stage such as the one pictured on page 47?
4. If you were in the audience around a traverse stage, how would you feel sitting this close if
the play were a comedy? What about a tragedy? Would you feel differently, and, if so, why?
In-the-round
In-the-round involves the audience entirely surrounding the stage. It can be used to make
the audience feel claustrophobic and is another very 'intimate' configuration. This layout can
also provide a sense of fun and audience camaraderie. This configuration does require
careful blocking of scenes to ensure that each audience member gets a fair
view of the piece.
5. What other potential problems can you identify when using a stage such as this one? How
might they be overcome?
Promenade
In promenade performances, there is no single, fixed performing space. The audience are
required to move around to points where the action is taking place (hence the name,
promenade' meaning walk.) Promenade performances are popular in large spaces such as
warehouses, where the atmosphere of the building adds to the mood of the performance.
Make some brief notes on each of these stage
configurations. Which appeals to you the most?
Why? Do you think that certain layouts can be
used to influence the audience - for example; make
them feel intimately close to the action,
uncomfortably exposed, or distanced from the
stage?
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Both of the sets illustrated serve a purpose for the style of play for which they are designed
With your own performance groups, you can decide whether you want your set to reflect
reality or have a more abstract approach.
APPLYING THE SKILLS
8. In a group, read through this extract from the first scene from Amadeus by Peter Shaffer.
The character of Salieri blames himself for Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart's death.
TWO VENTICELLI are purveyors of fact, rumour and gossip throughout the play. They
speak rapidly - in this first appearance extremely rapidly- so that the scene has the air of a
fast and dreadful Overture. Sometimes they speak to each other; sometimes to us. but always
with the urgency of men who have ever been first with the news.
VENTICELLO 1: The whole city is talking.
VENTICELLO 2: You hear it all over.
VENTICELLO 1: The cafes.
VENTICELLO 2: The Opera.
VENTICELLO 1: The Prater.
VENTICELLO 2: The gutter….
VENTICELLO 1: They say he shouts it out all day!
VENTICELLO 2: I hear he cries it out all night!
VENTICELLO 1: Stays in his apartments.
VENTICELLO 2: Never goes out.
VENTICELLO 1: Not for a year now.
VENTICELLO 2: Longer. Longer.
VENTICELLO 1: Antonio Salieri -
VENTICELLO 2: Shouting it aloud!
VENTICELLO 1: Impossible.
VENTICELLO 2: Incredible.
VENTICELLO 1: I don’t believe it!
VENTICELLO 2: I don’t believe it!
WHISPERERS: SALIER!
VENTICELLO 1: I know who started the tale!
VENTICELLO 2: I know who started the tale!
Two old men – one thin and dry, one very fat – detach themselves from the crowd at the
back, and walk downstage, on either side: Salieri’s VALET and PASTRY COOK.
VENTICELLO 1:
(indicating him): The old man’s valet!
VENTICELLO 2:
(indicating him): The old man’s cook!
VENTICELLO 1: The valet hears him shouting!
VENTICELLO 2: The cook hears him crying!
VENTICELLO 1: What a story!
VENTICELLO 2: What a scandal!
The VENTICELLO 1 move quickly upstage, one either side, and each collects a silent
informant. VENTICELLO 1 walks down eaerly with the VALET; VENTICELLO 2 walks
down eagerly with the COOK.
VENTICELLO 1:
(to VALET): What does he say, your master?
VENTICELLO 2
(to COOK): What exactly does he cry, the Kapellmeister?
VENTICELLO 1: Alone in his house -
VENTICELLO 2: All day and all night -
VENTICELLO 1: What sins does he shout? -
VENTICELLO 2: The old fellow -
VENTICELLO 1: The recluse -
VENTICELLO 2: What horrors have you heard?
VENTICELLO 1 and
VENTICELLO 2: Tell us! Tell us! Tell us at once! What does he cry? What does he cry?
What does he cry?
VALET and COOK gesture towards SALIERI
SALIERI
(in a great cry): MOZART!!!
silence
9. Try performing this same section a few times. Each time you work on it, use a different
stage layout. Although some of the stage directions imply an end on configuration, do not
worry, just try different configurations. Note down how you feel as a performer after each
one and what you found interesting or difficult.
10. Ask some of your classmates to be the audience for this experiment and give you
feedback. How did they feel with each configuration? Which did they feel worked best and
why?
11. What sort of set design do you think would work well for this sequence?
SOUND PROGRESS
• I can identify and understand the different uses of the stage and sets.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS
• I can apply what I have learned about stage layout and sets to convey meaning in
my performance pieces.
• I can write knowledgeably about how stage design aids communication with an
audience.
3.3 Exploring lighting
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
Ø Learn basic technical terminology for theatre lighting
Ø Explore the importance of direction, intensity and color in lighting design
1. Think about how lighting in real life can affect your mood. How do you feel in the following
situations:
• in a changing room that is very brightly lit?
• outside at sunset?
• under a stormy sky?
• on a road at night, lit by street lights?
If light can influence your mood in this way, then it can be used to great effect in your work
to communicate to an audience.
KEY TERMS
rigging: the process of hanging and positioning the lanterns on ceiling bars known as the
'grid'
There are many different lanterns, but the three types most commonly used are the par can,
Fresnel and profile lanterns.
Par can Fresnel Profile
Most basic lantern (Pronounced Fruh-nell) This lantern provides the
most controllable source of
Focused very easily with Soft-edged beam which can light. It has two lenses and
pan and tilt' movement be adjusted the beam can be large or
(up/down and side to side) small, hard or soft.
Barn doors (hinged shutters Shutters control the spill of
as seen in the picture) can light
trim the edges of the beam
Gobos can be used with
Fresnels are used to light profile lanterns
large areas on stage or
‘wash’ the stage in color
2. Which of these would be best for lighting a very specific small area of the stage?
Direction
The direction of the beams will allow you to play around with shadows and generate
atmosphere. Think of the old trick of using a torch under your chin to tell a spooky story.
If a light is needed to create a particular moment within a scene, such as a spotlight on a
character or a gobo, this is known as a special.
KEY TERMS
gobo: a metal stencil that can be placed in front of a profile lantern to project a shape or
image - examples include windows, or leaves to create a forest effect
Intensity
Intensity refers to the brightness of the lantern. It is measured in percentages and known as
high and low intensity.
Color
At the start of Unit 3.1, you explored how important color can be in theatre design. The color
of the light can create warm or cold atmospheres. Color filters called gels are placed in front
of the lanterns to create colored beams.
3. In pairs, identify emotions you associate with the following colors. It may help to imagine
an empty room, lit with each of them to assess the atmosphere it would create; does the
mood feel warm or cold? If you have access to stage lighting, you could do this experiment
practically.
In this description, the playwright makes his intended mood for the scene very clear.
7. Go through the passage and make a note of any sections that refer to the mood and
atmosphere, rather than specific visual details.
8. Identify and write down clues that will help you to make lighting decisions in the following
areas:
• the mood and atmosphere you want to create
• the temperature' - for example, whether warm or cold
• time of day and season
• location - interior or exterior? If exterior, what about windows)
• Will any specials be needed?
You will not always have so many clues given by a script, but this extract illustrates the sorts
of questions you need to ask yourself when working on any play.
9. Make notes on how you intend to use direction, intensity and color to make your lighting
decisions work for this opening scene. Does the lighting change at any point? You may find it
useful to complete a table such as the one below for each intended effect.
Intended Direction Intensity Color Special?
mood
Remember that in your written work, you will have to add a justification for your decisions.
For example:
I decided to light the wolf' in Little Red Riding Hood from the side to cast long, stretching
shadows on stage. This is to represent the darkness and shifting nature of his character and
to associate him with the shadows of the dangerous forest.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS
• I can apply lighting direction, intensity and color in a variety of ways to change the
atmosphere on stage and communicate to my audience.
• I can layer lighting effects if needed, taking into account what is happening on stage.
3.4 Exploring sound
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
• Consider the various sound effects and how they can add to a performance
STARTING POINT
Sound involves the addition of noises or music played while a scene is happening on stage or
during a scene transition. This can be recorded sound played through speakers, or live sounds
created either onstage or backstage. As with lighting, sound can be a very useful element in
developing mood and atmosphere.
1. Next time you watch a film, identify any sound effects or background music underscoring
the scenes. Ask yourself:
• Does the use of sound in the film guide my emotional response?
• Would the scene have the same effect on me if those sound effects were not there?
A horror film, for example, often relies on sound to build suspense and make you jump. A
comedy may include funny noises to exaggerate comic moments. So too in the theatre, sound
is a useful tool to help communicate to an audience.
2. Write down a few ways in which you might be able to use your voice for sound. Sound
effects can be simple everyday noises such as a door knock, or perhaps more extreme like
a gunshot. The need for these sorts of effects are usually written into a script and often
played through speakers using a sound desk to control the length and volume levels.
3. What other everyday sounds, such as a doorbell, could you use in your tale from Unit
3.1?
4. Imagine that you have been asked to design the sound for a busy street scene. Step
outside for a moment and listen to all the sounds that are around us every day. Write
down all the individual sounds that you hear, such as cars, footsteps or birds. Decide
which sounds you would use if you needed to create a soundscape (a layered sound
picture or story) for your scene.
5. Now imagine that within that scene, two lovers spot each other after a lengthy time
apart. How might you show that emotion through sound? It will help to visualize the
scene in your head. Consider the following options:
• All sound completely stops until they touch.
• Music suddenly cuts in.
• Music fades in gently as the street sounds fade out (a cross fade).
• The sound simply continues as before.
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SOUND PROGRESS
• I can add sound effects to my performance pieces that are useful and appropriate.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS
• I can use sound to mark moments within a scene and heighten emotional intensity.
• I can develop soundscapes, if needed, to imply setting.
3.5 Using props
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
Ø Explore how props are useful for action and characterization
STARTING POINT
Stage properties (‘props' for short) are moveable objects used on stage, which provide two
main functions in a play. They can be used to aid characterization or to help move the action
along. Props differ from articles of costume or moving scenery pieces such as curtains,
backdrops, platforms or furniture. They tend to be smaller items that a character brings onto
the stage and can be easily removed.
Think about the messages that a simple everyday object can convey on stage. What meanings
could be intended if a character entered carrying:
• a wet umbrella?
• a teddy bear?
• a pair of ballet shoes?
• a match?
Sometimes, as an actor develops his or her character, they like to allocate themselves a prop,
feeling that the tangible nature of the object helps with their characterization.
SOUND PROGRESS
• I understand how props can be used to develop plot or aid characterization.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS
• I understand that even the smallest details on stage can make an impact and
communicate meaning.
• I can apply what I have learned about props based on clues in the texts.
3.6 Using costume and make-up
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
Ø Think about the signals that costume can give to an audience
Ø Explore reasons for using stage make-up
STARTING POINT
Arguably one of the most noticeable design elements, particularly indicative of character, is
costume. It can indicate the style, genre and period of a production, as well as giving the
audience clues about the characters on stage.
1. Think about how different you feel and look in the clothes you wear to school, as opposed to
casual or evening dress. Identify any particular style of clothes that you like to wear that you
feel help to project your personality or identity.
2. Write down instances in real life where you feel that people tend to wear a form of costume.
Clothing can often identify us in terms of our social role or by linking us to a certain group.
Clothing is also one of the aspects of a person we use to judge them. A designer can play on
this human tendency to judge appearance and will often use costume to highlight aspects of
character or to contribute to the overall aesthetic and style of a production. Practicality and
comfort are also crucial factors to consider. If an actor is performing a very physical role for
example, he or she will not want to wear a structured or restricting costume.
3. Imagine that a cast is dressed in varying shades of blue, apart from one character who is
wearing yellow shorts. What might this signify about a character.
The painting on the left captures the actress Ellen Terry in the role of Lady Macbeth, a queen
from Shakespeare's tragedy, Macbeth.
The second picture is from a more recent production of Macbeth
These productions are far apart in time period and style; nevertheless,
the character remains the same.
4. In pairs, have a discussion about what these costumes indicate
about the character. Consider:
Enter, Claire Zachanassian. Sixty-three, red hair, pearl necklace, enormous gold bangles,
unbelievably got up to kill and yet by the same token a Society Lady with a rare grace, in
spite of all the grotesquerie.
Although you are given some details of her appearance here, the style of her costume is left
fairly open to interpretation.
6. How would you costume Claire in order to ensure that her personality was demonstrated,
as suggested by the playwright? Think about:
• Color - What colors would convey aspects of Claire's character?
• Texture - What materials would this character wear?
• Style - Would you modernize her costume or root it in a particular time period? Why?
• Accessories - Would you add any more accessories or props?
7. Do a few costume sketches (an example is pictured on the right) until you are satisfied
with your design.
8. What sort of make-up do you think should be used for Claire and why?
Write down your costume choices and
justifications for the character of Claire
Zachanassian. You could include pictures, sketches
or fabric swatches as examples to show your
understanding.
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SOUND PROGRESS
• I can identify costume and make-up ideas to enhance my character.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS
• I understand the need to make deliberate and particular choices about costume and make
up.
• I can apply my ideas in a way that creates the meaning I have planned for.
3.7 Applying the skills
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
Ø Explore every element of design for an extract
Ø Think about how you can express yourself in written answers
As dawn breaks, the figure of HECUBA is seen. HECUBA awakens from sleep and begins to
lift herself up.
REFLECTIVE LOG
Make a research and design log, noting the information that you have found out so far about
the Trojan War, jotting down ideas or pasting in pictures that you feel sum up your
interpretation. Add to it as you continue with this unit, so that you end up with a mini design
portfolio.
2. Now you can think about all areas of design for this piece. Put your initial thoughts for
interpretation at the top of your work and refer back to it as you design. Make sure that each
element aids and promotes this concept.
Set:
a) Consider the opportunities and limitations your performance space presents. Then,
decide your chosen configuration for this piece. Why have you chosen this layout? How
did your performance space influence your choice?
What do you hope the audience will gain by setting the stage out in this manner?
b) What choices did you make for your set design?
c) Draw a diagram of your set.
Lighting:
a) What mood will you create? Why? How will you achieve this?
b) Annotate the script with any changes in lighting; for example, how will you open the
scene 'as dawn breaks'?
c) How will your chosen lighting affect the colour or texture of your set?
Sound:
a) What choices have vou made about sound if you want to use any?
b) If using sound, will it be music, noises, vocal? Recorded or live? Why?
Props:
a) Do you need any props for this scene? (It is perfectly valid to say no, as long as you
can explain why.)
b) If using props, what are they and what is the purpose of each one?
Costume/make-up:
a) What time period or location is your piece set in? Is this demonstrated through
costume?
b) Is Hecuba dressed differently from the Chorus? If so, how?
c) Are the Chorus members all dressed in the same costume?
d) What color and texture decisions have you made and why?
e) Do you need to use make-up for any of the characters? What and why?
f) Draw diagrams of your costume decisions.
3. Once you have developed your ideas for each of the design areas, check through again to
ensure that they all complement each other and that there is a working balance between
them. It might be useful now to think about your school's performance space. Would your
designs work in this context? Are there any limitations or extra opportunities that you would
need to consider?
4. Read through the scene again. Can you visualize your design? Does it work?
Student A
Would set this extract in traverse, as it would make the women feel trapped and the audience
feel more involved. At one end there would be a large metal door and the other end would
have a boarded up window that the women would try to see through. I would have debris and
ruble scattered across the stage to show that the city had been destroyed. The women would
be scattered around the stage too, to represent that they are also part of the ruins of Troy,
Student B
I would like to convey the sense of entrapment and helplessness that the women would be
feeling in this extract. In order to do this, I would set the play in traverse, but with only one
exit upstage. This would be a large, bolted metal door to further enhance the prison feel. The
reason for this one exit is so that whenever the door is unlocked, all the women can scatter
downstage like frightened animals. Downstage, I would have a window that has been roughly
boarded up to prevent them fully seeing outside. However, some small cracks would enable
them to see out and react during scenes which are happening offstage, such as when
Astyanax is thrown off the city walls. By having the audience on either side, I would like
them to feel as though they are trapped in with the women, but also that they are partly their
jailors. This could make the audience think about situations in the world today in which
society's failure to act, can lead to oppression of minority groups.
5. Which of these answers do you think provides the clearest detail and justifications for the
chosen design? Why?
6. Now write your own answer to the question, based on your own design.
SOUND PROGRESS
• I can design a piece of theatre effectively and write about my decisions.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS
• I can develop concept-based designs for a piece of theatre that balance each element
and enhance the message I wish to convey.
• can write confidently about my decisions using the correct terminology and justifying
each choice.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS
o l understand how design elements can be combined to create a message for the
audience.
o I can make conscious decisions about how to apply design elements in my own work.
o I can apply what I have learned about the stage layout and sets to convey meaning in
my performance pieces.
o I can knowledgeably write about how stage design aids communication with an
audience.
o I can apply lighting direction, intensity and color in a variety of ways to change the
atmosphere on stage and communicate to my audience.
o I can layer lighting effects if needed, taking into account what is happening on stage.
o I can use sound to mark moments within a scene and heighten emotional intensity.
o I can develop soundscapes, if needed, to imply setting.
o I can apply what I have learned about props based on clues in the texts.
o I understand that even the smallest details on stage can make an impact and
communicate meaning.
o I understand the need to make deliberate and particular choices about costume and
make-up.
o I can apply my ideas in a way that creates the meaning I have planned for.
o I can develop concept-based designs for a piece of theatre that balance each element
and enhance the message I wish to convey.
o I can write confidently about my decisions using the correct terminology and
justifying each choice.
Chapter 4
DEVISING
STARTING POINTS
In this chapter, you are going to develop a range of skills related to devised work that you will
use throughout your Cambridge IGCSE Drama course.
CHAPTER CONTENTS
The activities you complete will primarily relate to devised work, but you will also be
exploring a range of acting and writing skills.
You will:
• generate a range of ideas based on a poem called 'First Frost'
• structure devised work based on a news story
• work as a group collaboratively on a given topic/title
• create distinctive roles within a group piece based on an environmental theme
• evaluate a range of responses to devised work in areas such as performance space,
narrative structure and directorial concept
• answer a range of shorter and longer questions on stimuli, processes and
performance
• keep a reflective log in which you record what you have done and reflect on, or
evaluate, key aspects of your work.
4.1 Responding to stimuli
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
Ø Learn how to generate fruitful ideas from a range of stimuli
Ø Consider examples of devised work by other students
SPOTLIGHT ON: How can I come up with interesting dramatic ideas from a
given stimulus?
STARTING POINT
In your drama work, you will be asked to respond to some stimuli provided in advance; you
use the stimuli to devise work with a group, which you then write about in the exam. Here is
one form of stimulus: a photo.
1. What story does this photo suggest? Does it show something sad or happy, or both?
2. Who might be the central character? What might have happened?
KEY TERMS
impressionistic: providing an impression or idea of something rather than a direct,
realistic account
Here are three ideas that groups of students came up with based on the photo:
Short play about a student, Stylized drama using masks, Five characters wait for a
Jack, who needs certain in which the main character train. One by one they tell
grades to go to university to X' faces a series of strange their stories, each having
study law. He doesn't get tests, exams and suffered a recent
them, but his friends do. He interrogations. Everyone in disappointment. As each
has to tell his parents. The the group except for one person tells their story,
truth is, he doesn't want to student plays multiple roles, the others take on roles
do law, but is keen on including parents, family, from it and show what
music. The play ends with examiners, teachers, and so happened.
him pursuing his real love as on. Most of the drama is
he leaves home to go mimed and uses music.
busking.
6. How does the discussion move from the obvious choice to something a bit more interesting?
7. Who identifies the final idea? Is it just one person, or more than one?
The key to good devised work is to allow the ideas to evolve. So, a photo suggesting failed
exams could lead to work on other sorts of failure, or the idea of exam results could be the
start of a drama about something else (the student finding a new friend).
KEY TERMS
evolve: grow and develop in stages
There are lots of ways to get the imagination going. For example, you could:
• take the stimulus (the photo, given theme or whatever) and run a short
improvisation, seeing where it takes you and what ideas/stories come to mind
• run a group discussion like the one above (you could do this after the improvisation)
• on your own, generate ideas in the form of a spider diagram, like the example shown
here.
BULLYING
8. Try doing your own spider diagram for this theme: Trash'
9. Then, discuss your ideas with a friend and quickly note down the outline of a story on this
theme. The story should have a central character and be in four stages: opening, problem,
climax, resolution.
The range of stimuli you may be given is quite wide. You might, for example, be given a poem
such as this one:
First Frost
A girl is freezing in a telephone booth,
huddled in her flimsy coat,
her face stained by tears
and smeared by lipstick.
Andrei Voznesensky
10. In what obvious ways does the poem already suggest the basis for a
drama? Identify:
• the main character
• the scene or place
• the situation (what has happened).
But it also leaves lots of room for you to add information, for
example:
• Who, or what, has hurt her?
• What does she do next?
If this were a scene in your drama, where would it come: at the
start, in the middle or at the end?
SOUND PROGRESS
• I can identify a few simple ideas based on a given stimulus.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS
• I can generate a variety of ideas and evaluate which is likely to be the most interesting and
effective.
4.2 Structuring devised work.
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
Ø Explore examples of devised work
Ø Consider ways of crafting and structuring devised pieces
STARTING POINT
All drama has a beginning, when the action starts, and an end point, when there is silence,
the drama closes, and the actors leave the stage or quit the roles they are playing. However,
how you get to that end point and what can be done in the given time will vary widely.
In devised work, you are not constrained by conventional narrative structure, but it can be
helpful to consider the dramatic 'arc' of storytelling. For example:
Exposition - the opening up, introduction to the situation
A Rising action - could be a problem or change that pushes the action onwards
A Climax - the point at which tension and drama is at its height
A Falling action - could be the outcomes of what has happened at the climax
A Resolution - the point where the problem, situation or story is brought to an end -
happily or unhappily (or both).
1. Look again at the poem First Frost' in Unit 4.1. Where might the phone call the girl
receives fit in this structure? Could it go anywhere? Could it be the end point (resolution) or
the starting point (exposition)?
2. Working in a group of between three and six, spend two to three minutes working out a
simple sequence for the 'First Frost' story following the arc above.
EXPOSITION: a set of scarecrows in a field, still and silent - me, Ginny, Raj and Sam.
RISING ACTION: a small black crow appears (Jimi) - the rest of us (the scarecrows) come
to life, break free, dance around, surround the crow...
CLIMAX: a terrible fight - we beat the crow down.
FALLING ACTION: the crow lies dead - we begin to feel pity, tears, sympathy - we pick the
crow up, take straw from our bodies and build the crow up.
RESOLUTION: the crow slowly comes back to life - the scarecrows rejoice, but at the
sound of the farmer's voice go back to our still positions. The crow runs up to each scarecrow
trying to get each one to react, but nothing happens. It circles and then flies off.
3. Would this last 15 minutes? How could you develop this initial structure to make sure it
was long enough? Consider the following questions:
• Could you add in an additional scene or two? Could the action move to another
location or context?
• Where would speech and dialogue come, and who would speak?
• Are there additional characters you could add (it would mean group members playing
additional roles)?
• How could you create or develop the idea of contrast in the storyline to ensure it
wasn't all on a single level or mood?
4. Try this devised piece out, using the notes above as a starting point.
There is no need to stick to what has been suggested, but try to keep the idea of a clear
narrative arc that the audience will be able to follow.
KEY TERMS
contrast: dynamic use of opposites, such as movement/stillness, sound/silence and
light/darkness
5. You can see here how you might use a typical commedia storyline.
Copy and complete the table below.
Exposition Two young lovers meet secretly in the cornfields.
Rising action They are spotted by a sneaky and jealous plough boy, who reports
back to the girl's guardian, a corrupt landowner. Fortunately, the
landowner's cleaner overhears the plough boy's meeting with the
landowner. The cleaner lets the lovers into the landowner's office
where they discover.
Climax
Falling Action
Resolution
6. Compare your ideas with the rest of your group and decide on the best storyline. Then run
a five-minute polished improvisation.
Think about:
• how you can get across the key conventions of commedia dell'arte
• how you can make it engaging and appealing to the audience (commedia dell'arte is
often, but not always, humorous and full of slapstick and physical comedy).
So far, the structures you have considered have tended to be linear that is, they take place in
a single, logical time sequence. However, as long as the narrative is present, you can adjust
the actual time and events through the use of various structural devices:
• Flashback - at some point in the drama a character remembers or enacts a scene
from earlier in the story.
• Dreams or 'flash-forward'- the audience sees future events that may or may not
be real.
• Parallel scenes - two or more scenes happen simultaneously, allowing the action to
develop in different places.
• Rewind - the whole action takes place 'back to front', either literally, with characters
retracing their steps, or by starting at the end of the story, with each scene unfolding
through memory or narration.
10. Working on your own to begin with, identify a potential dramatic storyline based on, or
inspired by, this headline. Think about:
• who might be the main or central characters
• whether a particular style or form of drama would suit the story (for example, magic
beans are a common element of fairy tales and myths)
• what the narrative arc might be (what the exposition is, rising action, climax and so
on).
11. Then, move into your group, share your idea and work together to devise a piece of drama
that will last 15 minutes. It will be useful to write out your final devised piece as a script, even
if you do not stick to it word for word.
SOUND PROGRESS
• I can identify a basic narrative structure for a devised piece.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS
• I can consider a range of different narrative structures for a devised piece and help
select the most interesting one.
4.3 Effective group work
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
Ø Explore the most effective ways to work as an individual and as part of a group for
devised work
SPOTLIGHT ON: How can I make sure I contribute positively to group work?
STARTING POINT
Your group will consist of students with different characters and abilities. Some may be
confident and keen to lead; others may be more reflective and happy to take more of a back
seat; still others may say little, but when they do speak, everyone listens.
1. What sort of person are you? Perhaps you are a mix of all of these - after all, we don't behave
exactly the same way all the time!
This should give you some idea of how you can contribute most effectively to your group's
work. Bear in mind, however, that when it comes to performance, you will need to have a role
or roles that gives you as much exposure as the rest of the group. This does not mean you have
to have the exact same number of lines, for example, but it does mean that it is clear you are a
key participant in what is happening on stage.
What is your greatest challenge when working as
a member of a group? Make notes on this, and
consider how you might improve or change.
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3. Think back to the last group activity or discussion you took part in.
Did you or other members of your group work in the ways mention above? If not, how would
you change the way you work next time?
4. Directing your group's work is a bit like chairing a group discussion: it is your job to keep
the group on task and to take the lead on organizing. Is this a role that you could do? What
would you find easy or challenging about this role?
SOUND PROGRESS
• I can contribute ideas to group discussions about devised work.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS
• I can contribute positively and help others develop ideas in group discussions about
devised work.
4.4 Communicating meaning
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
Ø Explore how to shape a role in devised work
Ø Understand how the role can link to the overall concept
STARTING POINT
What does it mean to 'shape' a role? You will have learned some key acting skills during your
course, and will have developed some of these in Chapter 2. One skill that is especially
crucial when it comes to shaping a role is ability to take the bare outline of a person - the
skeleton - and turn it into flesh and blood.
1. On your own, respond physically to these words and the picture:
'After the storm, life began again.
• Begin by: being curled up or bent over, as if by the wind.
• Then: slowly uncurl, stretch...
• Finally... stand tall and spread out, like a tree in full bloom
What further ways could you identify in order to begin to put flesh and Here are three
possible scenarios in which you might shape this person's character through performance.
KEY TERMS
monologue: a single speech by a character telling their story to the audience
ritual: important religious, cultural or social actions that people use or perform, such as
handshakes or bowing in courtesy, or offering gifts to a god or gods
insight: the ability to see deeper connections between ideas, characters, events and so on.
Devising is about shaping your performance: this means paying attention to ways in which
your performance is distinct and shows insight. So, how can you do this?
Like the tree that changes and grows back to life, it can be useful to show progression and
contrast in your acting. Taking the 'A moment in the life of.' scenario, here is an account by
one student of the opening to the devised work:
As the lights go up, I enter, stepping gingerly over a fallen table or chair. I stand for moment,
absorbed, in the centre of the stage, looking around me, helpless. Then, my eyes catch sight
of something on the ground to my left. I crouch down, and pick the item up in my fingertips.
It is delicate, dripping wet, so I shake it gently. It is a photo. I turn it around and hold it up
peering closely at it. Then, I crush it into a ball and throw it angrily to one side and stand up.
I dust myself down, take a broom and start sweeping, slowly at first and then more
vigorously and quickly.
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DEVELOPING THE SKILLS
For your role to be successful, it has to fit into the overall concept of your group's devised
work. This is what we might call ‘integrity’. This means that it fits the purpose of the piece,
but at the same time remains distinctive in its own right.
Look again at the devised work on the flood. Here is one group's set of additional characters
(not including the person who refuses to leave).
A: A reporter, intrigued by B's B: Another family member who
refusal to leave their ruined lives a long way away but has
home. offered the survivor a home.
Here are some possible overall concepts (big ideas) for the devised drama:
• the individual against faceless bureaucracy and government
• how small humankind is in the face of nature
• how hope can grow from the smallest seed.
5. Now, look at the list of characters. Develop a back story' for them by copying and filling
out the character card below. You do not have to use all these details in your devised work,
but they will help make your character come to life. Pay particular attention to the motives.
6. Now, in order to shape your role further work with a partner and Talk about yourself (the
character you have chosen), your life and what you are doing at the flood site. Your partner
(and you when it is your turn), does not have to speak, but just nod or say uh hen in other
words, be a listener.
7. Finally, move into a group and discuss the scenario and the concept you will follow: It
could be one of the three listed above or something different (such as a love story or a story
of revenge), or it could be a combination of several ideas.
Look at this photo:
8. Is it possible to see from this photo what the big concept is?
Identity:
• proxemics and levels
• gestures and movement
• costume and staging.
SOUND PROGRESS
• I can contribute to devised work by developing my own role.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS
• I can fit my role clearly to the overall concept and 'big idea", and at the same time make it
distinctive and individual.
4.5 Evaluating and responding
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
Ø Explore written responses to devised work
Ø Evaluate your own work in a useful way
STARTING POINT
What are the elements of a successful evaluation of your own devised?
work? You will need to:
• explain fluently and clearly what the overall concept of the work was and how you
developed the overall concept through aspects of character, space, design, and staging.
• support your explanation with detailed evidence of what you did and how the work
developed.
• explain what was effective and how you or your group achieved this.
Your reflective log should prove helpful here, but the notes you have made will not be sufficient
in themselves when explaining your own and your group's work.
Read this response to a short question about the structure of a devised piece.
Our piece was about how a group of poor villagers discover some valuable ancient coins in
the village well. Some of the villagers want to destroy the well to dig up any other treasure
that might be there, but others - including my character, the Chief of the village - think there
is too much risk and it will lead to a lack of irrigation for the village farmers. This causes
conflict and leads to a vote, with the Chief being overthrown. The villagers dig up the well,
but there is nothing there. The final scene is of a withered village, with the old Chief slowly
burying the coin in the ground again. It was very sad to watch, and everyone understood the
difficult choice the villagers had to make. The vote was an important part because the
audience play the part of the villagers and they do the vote. We had two endings, but both
were sad.
Think about what you know about dramatic structure and overall concept.
We set it outside because we wanted to use the natural light to make it relevant and realistic.
The cypress tree was really important because it was a clear entrance/exit point for each
character - the idea was that it should look as if each villager almost grew out of the tree so
that this stressed the connection between the people and the land.
The focal point of the drama was the center of the dusty yard in front of the audience. Here,
we placed a large wicker basket, which signified the well. It drew everyone's eyes and no one
touched it till the final scene when it was slowly taken to pieces, symbolically.
The use of the space, the natural surroundings and the way we created intimacy was effective,
but there were some practical issues. Acting outside with bright sunlight and shade from the
tree meant that sometimes you couldn't see characters' expressions. If we had thought more
about this, we could have used it for Xavier, who played a sneaky villager, but we didn't, so
everyone suffered from being caught in the shadows.
4. Now answer these questions:
• Why did the group decide to set the drama outside?
• What was the function of the cypress tree?
• What was in the center of the acting space until the end of the piece?
• What wasn't effective about the choice of location?
You may not have spent much time thinking about your acting space in your devised work.
However, write some brief notes at this point about any of your devised work explaining:
• where it should take place
• what size and shape of space would work for you
• where you think the audience should sit or stand - and in what position - or
whether they should move, as in a promenade performance
• why you would make these decisions and what the effect of your choices might be.
KEY TERMS
promenade performance: where the audience members walk about from place to place
to follow the drama
DEVELOPING THE SKILLS
It is important that you can explain the directorial concept of your group's devised work.
However, as you and your group try out different ideas, your vision (the big idea you are
trying to get across to the audience) is likely to change and evolve. Here are one student's
notes on the devised work about the village/treasure discussed in this unit:
2 We've adapted story - Jac had Now. we've decided By getting audience
idea to make it more about story is about choices to make the
the village being divided. forced on a village by vote/choice as if
Now, will be about how climate change / they were villagers,
villagers vote whether to drought - neither we bring home fact
destroy well for promise of choice is a real choice - that villagers face
more treasure. Chief is short- term gain impossible situation.
against it. but he is against unlikely long-
overthrown. Well is term survival? More
destroyed but nothing is realistic tone/style.
found.
5. What was the original 'big idea' the group had in Week 1?
6. How did the focus of the story change in Week 2 when the group met? What was the new
concept / big idea?
7. How did the style of drama that the group was devising change? It can be useful to try to
express your big idea in a simple few sentences or a paragraph so that you have a general feel
for what you are trying to achieve.
8. Go back to your own devised work, either work in progress or work that you have
completed. What is the overall concept for the work? Write at least one paragraph trying to
capture the essence of the piece.
Here are the responses of two students writing about their development of character in their
different devised pieces.
Student A:
To play the part of the flood survivor, I watched some videos of flood victims picking through
the wreckage of their homes. Some seemed to be going through the motions, not really being
able to focus on the reality; others, were more practical. I decided to make character
practical, so I decided in the first scene that a gesture was important – she should be
mending something, perhaps a torn curtain, or sticking pages together in a book.
Student B:
How does the head of a village act, I wondered? I wanted my Chief to be proud, someone
who only speaks when he has to. I thought about wise people I knew – they listen carefully.
So I developed this idea that my character should always leave a pause before he answers, to
show he is thinking. In the first scene I decided to add a line that would be almost like a
catchphrase: ‘I am going to look at the stars…’
SOUND PROGRESS
• I can identify and comment on a range of aspects of my group’s devised work and say
what went well and didn’t
EXCELLENT PROGRESS
• I can comment on the effectiveness of a range of elements of our devised work, evaluating
the ways in which it met the concept we had planned and the effect it had on the audience.
4.6 Applying the skills
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
Ø Plan, prepare and perform a devised piece of work
Ø Respond to tasks evaluating your work
SPOTLIGHT ON: How can I plan, perform and evaluate my devised work to
the best of my ability?
STARTING POINT
Devised work begins with a stimulus or set of stimuli - this provides the source that will
generate ideas that lead to engaging devised work. Whether you are responding to stimuli
provided by a teacher, or from another source, the skills are broadly the same. Where you have
a choice, it is important to think carefully about which stimulus is likely to generate the most
compelling and fruitful work.
Look at the following three stimuli. One is a topic, the second a painting and the third a poem.
Stimulus 1
An unexpected arrival
Stimulus 2
This is a painting by Gustave Caillebotte called Le Pont de l'Europe.
Stimulus 3
Demeter
Where I lived - winter and hard earth.
I sat in my cold stone room
choosing tough words, granite, flint,
1. To begin with, work on your own and spend 5-10 minutes on each of these stimuli in turn,
generating ideas and considering narratives that might arise from them.
You may find it useful to look again at Units 4.1 and 4.2 to remind yourself of the most
effective ways to do this.
2. Note down your ideas and make sure you are able to relate them back to the original
stimuli.
3. For your devised work, you will be expected to work in groups of between two and six
performers, and your piece should last approximately 15 minutes.
Move into a group as directed by your teacher. Between you, make a choice about which of
the three stimuli you are going to use for your devised work.
4. Now discuss and plan out your basic ideas based on your chosen stimuli.
Another good approach is to focus in on the particular aspects that you may have to write
about. One way of keeping track of your work is to create a series of pages for each lesson or
session spent on devised work divided into four sections. For example:
Lesson 1: date...
Directorial concept Design aspects
5. You may not be able to complete all these parts in a single session, but by focusing on
them from the start, you will keep them as live issues for later sessions. Copy and complete
the tables as many times as you need to.
In a written examination, you are also likely to be asked questions about your piece that will
cover both practical and theoretical issues. Look at this exam-style question (written by the
authors):
Select one design aspect (for example, costume, set, masks, lighting, sound) and explain how
it contributed to the impact and effect of your devised piece.
8. Begin by checking over your notes to remind yourself of a particular design aspect your
group used, how you used it and what its function was.
9. Now, plan an answer based on the following structure, copying and completing the table:
Paragraph Prompts
1 Introduce the stimulus We used the stimulus of …
So…
10. Using a structure like the one in the grid in Task 9 on the previous page, write your
response to either one of these questions.
a) What directorial concept did you base your devised piece on, and how effectively did
you communicate that concept to an audience?
b) How successfully did you use the performance space in staging your devised piece?
Comment
This is a good, basic explanation of the concept which identifies what the group wanted to
achieve, but it is lacking in detail.
11. How do you think this response could be improved? Look at the Excellent progress'
pointers at the end of this chapter to focus your ideas.
Now read this extract from a response to the same question:
We decided to use Carol Ann Duffy's poem, 'Demeter as explains reason given for choice
our stimulus. We felt it played to our strengths as an all-
girl group, and we could utilize our dance and movement
skills as part of the work. shows understanding of main idea in
The core of the poem is the idea that death and corruption stimulus
is brought to the earth when Demeter's daughter is taken.
According to the myth, Zeus commands Persephone to be
released when he sees what is happening to the world, so
we created a scene where Demeter pleads with Zeus for reference to link between chosen
drama and myth basic comment
his help. This gave us our dramatic arc and climax - would
he agree? Myths are like fairy tales with their quests and
challenges so this seemed to work well.
basic comment identifies how
However, because we were dealing with myth, we didn't style
want a realist style drama but one that was mythic in tone, linked to concept
so we initially adopted masks for all characters. This,
however, created some difficulties of expression, so
instead we used simple black clothing. A key idea in the gives example of how
dramatic form can
poem is the connection between gods and the Earth, so we
be applied to source
chose to use our bodies to represent the living, and dying text
world. When Persephone is dragged off to the
underworld, a forest, made from our bodies, withers and
collapses. So, a physical, shape-shifting theatre with sums up concept
ritualized speech was the best concept.
12. How is this more effective than the previous response? Is there anything that could have
been explained in more detail?
13. Once you have completed your devised work on your chosen stimulus, write a response to
the 'directorial concept' task above.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS
• I can explain the directorial concept in detail, drawing on specific theatrical forms
and styles to convey how effective it was.
SOUND PROGRESS /
o I can identify a few simple ideas based on a given stimulus.
o I can identify a basic narrative structure for a devised piece.
o I can contribute ideas to group discussions about devised work.
o I can contribute to devised work by developing my own role.
o I can identify and comment on a range of aspects in my group's devised work and say
what went well and what didn't.
o I can identify the basic concept behind devised work and give examples to support my
ideas.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS /
o I can generate a variety of ideas and evaluate which is likely to be the most interesting
and effective.
o I can consider a range of different narrative structures for a devised piece and help
select the most interesting one.
o I can contribute positively and help others develop ideas in group discussions about
devised work.
o I can fit my role clearly to the overall concept and 'big idea', and at the same time
make it distinctive and individual.
o l can comment on the effectiveness of a range of elements of our devised work,
evaluating the ways in which it met the concept we had planned and the effect: had
on the audience.
o I can explain the directorial concept in detail, drawing on specific theatrical form and
styles to convey how effective it was.
Chapter 5
PERFORMANCE
STARTING POINTS
In this chapter you will develop particular performance skills related to monologues and
longer group scripts, and consider different styles and ways of interpreting them.
CHAPTER CONTENTS
The activities you complete will primarily relate to performance work, but you will
also be annotating scripts and responding to other sources as part of the process.
You will:
• read three short extracts and infer styles and forms of repertoire from them
• explore different interpretations of a famous scene from Shakespeare's Romeo and
Juliet
• make your own interpretation of a role from Cyrano de Bergerac by Edmond Rostand
• develop, structure and perform a monologue from either Invisible Friends by
Alan Ayckbourn or La Bête by David Hirson
• develop, structure and perform a longer group script from The Madness of George Ill
by Alan Bennett
• apply all the skills you have learned to a monologue from Lorraine Hansberry's
A Raisin in the Sun
• answer a range of shorter and longer questions on scripts, processes and performance
• keep a reflective log in which you record what you have done, and reflect on, or
evaluate, key aspects of your work.
5.1 What is repertoire?
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
Ø Explore what repertoire is
STARTING POINT
Not all drama begins on the written page. Famously, playwright and film director Mike Leigh
works with his actors to construct a script around key plots and characters, using
improvisation before the final drama is 'set in stone' and a script created. However, many plays
do begin as written works, with writers constructing carefully thought-out action,
characterization, staging, and so on. The wide range of written plays, from short one-act
monologues to multi-character epics, can be called 'repertoire'
Extract A
WALTER: (at the window) Just look at 'em down there... Running and racing to work.
He turns and faces his wife and watches her a moment at the stove, and then, suddenly -
You look young this morning, baby.
RUTH: (indifferently) Yeah?
WALTER: Just for a second - stirring them eggs. It's gone now - jus:
for a second it was - you looked real young again. (Then
drily.) It's gone now - you look like yourself again.
Extract B
CYRANO: …I ask you only this - when the great cold
Gathers around my bones, that you may give
A double meaning to your widow's weeds' And the tears you let
fall for him may be For a little - my tears.
Do some brief research about each genre and make simple notes about key conventions of
each. Make a list of well-known authors associated with them and any famous play titles.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS
• I can infer detailed ideas about styles, action and tone from a range of plays.
5.2 Interpreting the repertoire
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
Ø Explore the idea of interpretation
Ø Apply what you have learned to a short script
KEY TERMS
interpretation: the particular approach taken to a text in order to bring it to life on the
stage
3. Look at the opening lines, including the dialogue and stage directions, of any play and
make brief notes on:
• what the writer tells us about the style, characters and setting
• what is left to our own interpretation.
In order to test these out, you are going to look at an extract from the play Cyrano de
Bergerac set in 1640. It concerns a flamboyant, witty knight who is both brave and
intelligent. He falls for a beautiful woman, Roxane, but because of what he believes is his
ugliness (he has a very large nose), does not reveal his love until the end of the play. In
the final act, set in late autumn, Cyrano is dying and hallucinating from a wound given him
by one of his enemies. He has gone to see Roxane in the park of a convent where she has
been living since the death of her young lover, Christian. Cyrano has half-collapsed into a
chair by a tree in the garden:
The chapel bell is ringing. Along the avenue of trees above the stairway, the nuns pass in
procession to their prayers. They are going to pray now; there is the bell.
The nuns have gone into the chapel. The organ begins to play.
4. Based on what you have read, what do you think is the style or genre of the play? (You
read a short extract from Cyrano in Unit 5.1, so you can refer to that, too, if you wish.) What
clues are there in what happens and in the subject matter?
5. What role do you think Cyrano plays in the action? Does he fit in with a particular type of
character you have seen in other plays? What clues are we given about his character from
how he speaks and behaves?
6. Based just on what you have read here, what particular challenges would you face in
moving this from page to stage? You could think lighting and sound. about the style of the
play, but also things such as costume, design, lighting and sound.
Now, read this discussion between a trio of students considering how to bring the extract to
the stage. How effective do you think their ideas are?
Saj: So, this clearly has aspects of fairy tale. I mean, Cyrano even talks about
"Beauty and the Beast' so I think it makes sense to try to design it in a
magical way - like the garden is itself magical.
Tim: But Cyrano says it isn't like the story - because when she says she loves him,
he doesn't turn into a prince.
Emma: I agree. I think if we play it too much like a fairy tale, it will become
melodramatic. I think it needs to be sad and sweet, gentle…
SOUND PROGRESS
*I can draw my own conclusions about the style of a play and imagine it on stage.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS
* I can infer ideas about a play's genre and style, consider a number of opinions and
use this to make my own interpretation.
5.3 Exploring monologues
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
Ø Consider factors to help you to choose a monologue
Ø Explore how to develop a character
Ø Begin structuring a monologue performance
STARTING POINT
As part of your work you will be required to choose, rehearse and perform a monologue of
between three and five minutes in length from any play. This may seem daunting, but you can
narrow down your choice by asking yourself:
• Would I prefer a comedy or a tragedy, or something in between?
• What style would I prefer? For example, physical, naturalistic, classical, contemporary?
• When I read the first few lines of a monologue aloud, do I like it? Does it capture my
interest?
There are a number of monologue books available, but these will only give you a brief outline
of the play and the character. It is important for you to read the whole play that your
monologue is from, in order to gain knowledge of your character's emotional journey and
objective for the speech. The historical or social context of the play will also give you a
perspective on the character and provide you with clues and ideas as to how to play the role.
KEY TERMS
monologue: a longer section of speech that is part of the action delivered by one actor,
either alone or usually with other characters on stage
Monologue A
In this monologue, Lucy 'revives' her imaginary friend as she feels ignored by her family.
'Grisly Gary’ is her brother.
LUCY: You may have heard my mum talking about my invisible friend. Do you remember?
Well, that's my invisible friend, Zara. (introducing her) This is Zara. I want you to meet Zara.
Zara, say hello. That's it. Will you say hello to Zara, my invisible friend? I invented Zara - oh,
years ago - when I was seven or eight. Just for fun. I think I was ill at that time and wasn't
allowed to play with any of my real friends, so I made up Zara. She's my special friend that no
one can see except me. Of course, I can't really see her either. Not really. Although sometimes
I... It's almost as if I could see her, sometimes. If I concentrate very hard it's like I can just
glimpse her out of the corner of my eye.
(She is thoughtful for a second) Still. Anyway. I've kept Zara for years and years. Until they all
started saying I was much too old for that sort of thing and got worried and started talking
about sending for a doctor. So then I didn't take her round with me quite so much after that.
But she's still here. And when I feel really sad and depressed like I do today, then I sit and talk
to Zara. Zara always understands. Zara always listens She's special. Aren't you, Zara?
(She listens to Zara) What's that? Yes, I wish he'd turn his music down, too. I've asked him,
haven't I? (mimicking Gary) 'How can I hear it if I turn it down, I can't hear the bass then, can
I?' I used to have pictures in here but every time he put a disc on they fell off the walls.
(Pause. The music continues) I mean, don't get me wrong. We like loud music, don't
we Zara? We love loud music. Sometimes.
(Pause)
Why doesn't he ever listen to quiet music? Just once? Wouldn't that be nice? [...] But if he did
that, he wouldn't be Grisly Gary then, would he?
(Pause)
Oh, Zara, did I tell you I've been picked for the school swimming team? Isn't that exciting?
Yes. Thank you. I'm glad you're excited, too. Good.
(Pause)
Great. Thanks for your support, everyone. (tearful) They might at least... They could have at
least.. Oh, Zara... I know you're always here, but sometimes I get so. lonely..
Monologue B
Valere, a vain actor has just been criticized by a fellow performer. When Valere asks for written
critiques, the other actor asks why; this monologue is Valere's response. NB This play is set in
1654, but was Witten in 1991. The playwright stresses that The pace is frantic
VALERE:
Because I'm anxious to improve!
Is that so strange, my wanting to remove
The flaws from my persona? Surely not!
I loathe a blemish! I despise a spot!
Perfection is the goal towards which I strive
(For me, that's what it means to be alive)
And, hence, I'm grateful for a shrewd
critique:
It keeps my talent honest, so to speak!
We of the theatre share that common view
The criticisms of the things we do
Inspire our interest, not our hurt or rage:
We know it's part of "being on the stage"
To have oneself assessed at every turn,
And thus we show a willingness to learn
From judgements which might wound
another man.
I much prefer to any drooling fan
A critic who will SLICE me into parts!
GOD LOVE THE CRITICS! BLESS THEIR
PICKY HEARTS!
Precisely, and in no uncertain terms,
They halve the apple, showing us our worms.
David Hirson, from La Bête
2. Write down your initial thoughts about each monologue. What insights are you given into
the characters? Think about:
• what we find out about their situation or context
• what emotions each character displays.
3. How does the structure and layout of the language help us to understand the character?
Think about:
• whether the language is formal or informal
• whether the layout on the page suggests a rhythm
• whether the punctuation indicates particular emotions (such as calm or anxiety).
4. Now, copy and complete the following table referring to the style of
each monologue. Tick the boxes that apply in each case.
Monologue A B
Contemporary
Classical
Verse
Prose
Fast pace
Slow pace
Comic
Tragic
To the audience
To other characters
6. How would you like the audience to feel when watching your performance? Do you want
them to empathize and identify with the character, or to feel hatred and scorn? Write a short
paragraph describing your intention for the monologue.
You can now begin to develop your characterization. This will be based on factual
information you have found out (such as the character's age, family situation and so on) as
well as your own interpretation of them (what sort of person you think they are).
7. Look at the diagram below. Copy and complete this, adding in information about the
character and your own ideas. Notice the links that can be made between the different areas,
and add more links of your own.
8. Ask a friend to hot-seat you - they can ask you questions that you must answer
spontaneously in character. Write down any extra character information that you produce.
With a developed understanding of the character and the context of the monologue, you can
now shape and structure it. Think of the speech like a piece of music, with crescendos (parts
that get louder), diminuendos (parts that get quieter), pauses and varying pace. You can
orchestrate the piece carefully to achieve the most effective emotional response.
9. Now draw a graph that represents the monologue. Plot the peaks and troughs' of
emotional intensity so that you can visualize the shape of the piece.
Blocking will also help you to create the mood you want.
KEY TERMS
blocking: the deliberate choices made as to where actors will stand or move to on stage
during a scene; these decisions involve careful consideration of character
relationships and the creation of interesting stage pictures
10. Focus on a small section of your monologue. What blocking do you think should be used?
Think about:
• your character's physicality at this moment
• whether your character should be sitting, standing, or moving (or move between all
these)
• when moments of stillness might be more effective than movement.
11. Now look at this example, based on monologue B, of one student's annotation of part of
the script:
Emphasize sarcasm, focus on contrast between 'interest,
'hurt' and rage. Last two said with bitter, hissing tone
VALERE:
The criticisms of the things we do
Use large, flourishing movements and proud vocal tone to
Inspire our interest, not our hurt or rage:
highlight more sarcasm
We know it's part of "being on the stage"
To have oneself assessed at every turn,
Bring out the words assessed' and every turn by focusing on
And thus we show a willingness to learn
consonants, hissing again
From judgements which might wound another man.
I much prefer to any drooling fan
A critic who will SLICE me into parts!
GOD LOVE THE CRITICS! BLESS THEIR PICKY HEARTS!
Emphasize drooling fan' by elongating the o' sound of the word and
relaxing muscles to produce fluid, pathetic movement
Move swiftly towards other actor, use sharp, chopping hand gesture
to indicate a sudden slice. Slice spoken much louder than other
words, start to build up intensity for climax on the next line
Biggest climax in volume and emotion, with an angry,
sarcastic tone and large open physicality
SOUND PROGRESS
• I can confidently deliver a monologue that is clear and well structured.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS
• I can develop a detailed characterization and interpretation for my well-structured
monologue.
5.4 Exploring group scripts
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
Ø Learn approaches to start exploring and rehearsing an extract for performance
Ø Consider ways to shape scenes and interact on stage, developing meaning and
impact
KEY TERMS
subtext: underlying meaning within dialogue or a scene; often the unspoken, real motives
or thoughts of a character
1. Have you worked on a group script before? What did you find difficult or challenging?
What worked well?
2. Begin by reading the following scene from The Madness of George III by Alan Bennett. Do
it first on your own and then aloud with the rest of your group. The cast read-through, in
particular, will help spark initial thoughts and ideas for characterization and interpretation.
In this scene, King George meets Willis for the first time and has just been delivering a long
'mad', rambling speech. Willis has been employed to try and cure the king of his illness
KING slowly circles WILLIS, looking at him keenly but with no change in his tone.
KING: We can plough a furrow, you know, give us a field, a decent plough
and we could plough you a furrow as straight as a ruler, straight as a
ruler done by a ruler, and another beside it and another beside that
until you had as pretty a ploughed field as you could find this side of
Cirencester. Put us out of our kingdom tomorrow and I would not want
for employment.
WILLIS: I have a farm.
KING: Give me the management of fifty acres and ploughing and sowing and
harvest, and I could do it and make me a handsome profit into the bargain.
WILLIS: I said I have a farm, Your Majesty.
The KING stops, looks at him.
GREVILLE: This gentleman, sir, has made the illness under which Your Majesty
labors his special study.
WILLIS: (TO GREVILLE) Hush, sir.
KING: A mad doctor, is it? I am not mad, Just nervous.
WILLIS: I will endeavor to alleviate some of the inconveniences from which
Your Majesty suffers.
KING: Inconveniences? Insults. Assaults. And salts beside rubbed into these
wounds, sir. See. (WILLIS loosens the bandages to look at the sores on
his legs.) I eat my meals with a spoon, sir. A pusher. George by the Grace
of God King of England, Ireland, Scotland, Elector of Hanover, Duke of
Brunswick. A pusher. By your dress, sir, and general demeanor I would
say you were a minister of God.
WILLIS: That is true, Your Majesty. I was once in the service of the Church, now I
practice medicine.
KING: Then I am sorry for it. You have quitted a profession I have always loved,
and embraced one I most heartily detest.
WILLIS: Our Savior went about healing the sick.
KING: Yes, but he had not £700 a year for it.
(GREVILLE and the PAGES /augh. WILLIS does not laugh.)
Yes, but he had not £700 a year for it, eh? Not bad for a madman.
WILLIS: I have a hospital in Lincolnshire, sir.
KING: I know Lincolnshire. Fine sheep. Admirable sheep. There are pigs, too.
Pigs can be very fine. Hay is the means of maintenance of the cow,
grass of the sheep, goats of the horse, and pigs will eat anything. I have a
fondness for pigs. But I know of no hospitals.
WILLIS: We have cows and sheep and pigs also.
KING: In the hospital? Are they mad too?
WILLIS: My patients work, sir. They till the soil. They cultivate and in so doing
they acquire a better conceit of themselves.
KING: I am King of England, sir. A man can have no better conceit of himself
than that.
WILLIS suddenly takes hold of the KING's shoulder, and the KING freezes
FITZROY, GREVILLE and the PAGES are plainly shocked and the KING rigid with anger.
WILLIS deliberately looks the KING in the eye.)
KING: Do you look at me, sir?
WILLIS: I do, sir.
KING: I have you in my eye.
WILLIS: No. I have you in my eye.
KING: You are bold, but by God I am bolder.
(The KING suddenly goes for WILLS but WILLIS dodges and the force of the rush makes
the KING fall down. He remains sitting on the ground, while WILLIS lectures him.)
WILLIS: You can control your utterance, sir, if you would. I believe you can be
well if only you will.
KING: Do not look at me. I am not one of your farmers.
WILLIS: Your Majesty must behave, or endeavor to do so.
KING: (Still struggling) Must, must? Whose must? You must or my must?
No must. Get away from me.
PAPANDIEK: Easy sir, easy.
KING: (As they try to get him up) No, no. Leave me, boys. Let me sit upon the
ground and tell...tell-tell-tell-tell..tell this lump-headed fool to shut his
gob box. You..
WILLIS: Clean your tongue, sir. Clean your tongue.
GRENVILLE: Hush. sir.
PAPANDIEK: Be still, sir.
KING: I will not be still. I will be a quest in the graveyard first.
WILLIS: Very well. If Your Majesty does not behave, you must be restrained.
(WILLIS opens the door and three of his servants, grim-faced and in leather aprons,
wheel in the restraining chair, a wooden contraption with clamps for the arms and legs
and a band for the head. The sight of the restraining chair momentarily silences the KING.)
KING: When felons were induced to talk they were first shown the instrument
of their torture. The King is shown the instrument of his to induce him
not to talk. Well, I won't, I won't. Not for you or anyone.
(The KING begins abusing them again, with a torrent of obscenity, as, quietly at first,
but growing louder as the scene comes to its climax, we hear Handel's Coronation
Anthem, Zadok the Priest. One servant thrusts aside the protesting PAGES while the
other two lift the KING up and amid the ensuing pandemonium manhandle him into
the restraining chair.)
See them off boys! See them off! (As he is hauled to the chair) Damn you. I’ll
have you all thrashed for this! Horse-whipped. Lie off, you rascals. Lie off.
FITZROY: This is unseemly, sir. Who are these ruffians?
GRENVILLE: You have no business, sir. His Majesty is ill.
BRAUN: Go easy, my old love.
PAPANDIEK: Steady, Your Majesty, steady. Leave off, leave off.
FITZROY: I must inform His Royal Highness. This is a scandal
GRENVILLE: Call off your dogs, sir. Who are these barkers?
WILLIS: If the King refuses food he will be restrained. If he claims to have no
appetite he will be restrained. If he swears and indulges in meaningless
discourse he will be restrained. If he throws off his bedclothes, tears
away his bandages, scratches at his sores, and if he does not strive every
day and always towards his own recovery, then he must be restrained.
(WILLIS's men stand back from the KING and we see that he has been strapped into
the chair, feet and arms clamped, his head held rigid by a band round his forehead.)
KING: (Howling) I am the King of England.
WILLIS: No, sir. You are the patient.
(The Coronation Anthem finally reaches its climax and bursts forth in the chorus of
Zadok the Priest, as the KING struggles, howling, in the chair, with WILLIS's men lined up
behind him.)
3. Now, research some key aspects that will help with your groups performance of the
extract. Each member of your group could take one of these areas: historical, political and
social context, the playwright; the plot; other performances of the play; images.
4. Then, discuss the following points with your group:
• What are your and your fellow cast members' initial thoughts about the extract?
• What is happening in this scene and why is it important?
• What is the context, both within the play and within history or society?
• What has changed or developed for your character in this extract and indeed in the
play as a whole up to this moment?
• How does the specific inclusion of sound (the music) help to shape the scene?
• What impact should this scene have on stage and why?
• What overall themes do you see as being explored here?
5. Begin by identifying key moments within the scene that you feel are important to
highlight: for example, moments when there are changes in emotion, pace or intensity.
It will help to choose one from the very beginning and the final moment, with three fairly
evenly spaced moments in between. Once you have made your choice, copy and complete
this table. (Two suggestions have been made for you but you may want to adapt or change
these.)
1 The King's speech
2
3
4
5 King strapped into the chair with Willis's men behind him
6. Now create a still image or tableau for each of these moments. Try to capture the emotions
and intentions of each character within these images. Use proxemics, thinking
carefully about constructing the tableaux for maximum impact.
Experiment with:
• levels
• facial expressions
• variety in physicality and actions.
Your aim is to capture the feel of the entire extract by presenting the tableaux in sequence,
creating a smooth, silent overview of the scene. By exploring the and sense of modulation
within the piece. Rooting the piece initially in these important moments will help you to
develop tension and emotional peaks.
Jot down any decisions that your group made
about the key characters, themes and intentions,
and remind yourselves of these features as you
rehearse. Check that you remain true to these or
notice and log if opinions change and develop.
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7. Now run through the scene with dialogue, but each time you reach one of your moments,
hold the tableau for four seconds before continuing with the scene. Once you have tried this
technique, makes notes about anything that worked particularly well and whether there was
anything that needed to change.
8. As a group, decide on some general blocking of the scene. You have read about the way
that stage configuration and design can aid you in projecting your message, so agree on the
stage layout first. As you rehearse vou should not be afraid to confirm, tighten up or change
areas if something is not working.
9. Now, take the script a section at a time and annotate carefully as you rehearse. An example
is given below. Think about:
• blocking
• proxemics
• balance on the stage
• variety of action, movement, physicality and facial expressions
• the moments you previously marked as important.
10. Finally, perform your script as a group, using what you have learned to guide you.
SOUND PROGRESS
• I can rehearse and perform a well-constructed scene with my group, giving a clear sense of
plot and character development.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS
• I can confidently perform a scene that demonstrates my knowledge of subtext and
meaning, by identifying and developing key moments and themes within the piece.
5.5 Applying the skills
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
Ø Apply the skills you have learned to a monologue
SPOTLIGHT POINT
Read this monologue that comes from the play, A Raisin in the Sun by Lorraine Hansberry.
Walter, 35, shares a poor, run-down apartment with his wife Ruth, his son Travis aged 10 or
11, and his sister and mother. His mother has given him her savings to put into the bank, but
he has decided to invest it with a somewhat unreliable man he knows.
Walter: You wouldn't understand yet, son, but your daddy's gonna make a
transaction... a business transaction that's gonna change our lives..
that's how come one day when you 'bout seventeen years old I'Il come
home and I'll be pretty tired, you know what I mean, after a day of
conferences and secretaries getting things wrong the way they do.
'cause an executive's life is hell, man - (The more he talks, the further
away he gets.) And I'll pull the car up on the driveway... just a plain
black Chrysler, I think with white walls - no - black tires. More elegant.
Rich people don't have to be flashy... though I'll get something a little
sportier for Ruth - maybe a Cadillac convertible to do her shopping
in... And I'll come up the steps to the house and the gardener will
be clipping away at the hedges and I'll say 'Hello, Jefferson, how are
you this evening?' And I ‘Il go inside and Ruth will come downstairs
and meet me at the door and we'll kiss each other, she'll take my arm
and we'll go up to your room to see you sitting on the floor with the
catalogues of all the great schools in America around you... All the
great schools in the world! And - and I'll say, all right son - it's your
seventeenth birthday, what is it you've decided?.... Just tell me, what is
it. you want to be - and you'll be it... Whatever you want to be - Yessir!
2. Now develop a fuller picture of Walter. Use the spider diagram format from Unit 5.3 or
simply write a sentence or two about each of these elements below:
• Walter's emotional state
• his physicality (how you think he will move, use space)
• his voice
• how he might be dressed - his costume
• his background/life and how this might affect your performance.
3. Next, annotate a copy of the speech, adding your ideas to it. Think about tone of voice,
movements, gestures and how you will block the speech, and what intentions you have in
terms of communicating meaning to the audience. Are there opportunities for you to
contrast pace (e.g. slow to fast), intensity and lightness, or humor and sadness?
SOUND PROGRESS
• I can identify a basic characterization for a monologue and convey a clear idea of my
chosen character.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS
• I can develop a detailed and thoughtful representation of my character and create
the intended impact on my audience.
SOUND PROGRESS /
o l can identify the differences between styles of written play.
o I can draw my own conclusions about the style of a play and imagine it on stage.
o I can confidently deliver a monologue that is clear and well structured.
o I can rehearse and perform a well-constructed scene with my group, giving a clear
sense of plot and character development.
o I can identify a basic characterization for a monologue and convey a clear idea of my
chosen character.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS /
o I can infer detailed ideas about styles, action and tone from a range of plays.
o I can infer ideas about a play's genre and style, consider a number of options and use
this to make my own interpretation.
o I can develop a detailed characterization and interpretation for my well-structure
monologue.
o I can confidently perform a scene that demonstrates my knowledge of subtext and
meaning, by identifying and developing key moments and themes within the piece.
o I can develop a detailed and thoughtful representation of my character and create the
intended impact on my audience.
Chapter 6
EXTENDED
SCRIPTS
STARTING POINTS
In this chapter you are going to develop a range of skills related to responding to tasks
on a longer script.
CHAPTER CONTENTS
The activities you complete will primarily relate to written responses to extended
scripts, but you will also participate in other practical activities as a way of engaging
with the scripts themselves.
You will:
• read and respond with practical activities to extracts from the play Humble Boy by
Charlotte Jones
• write two short written responses about suggested acting approaches for characters in
Humble Boy
• consider how particular props might be used in Humble Boy and what their function
might be
• trace a character's development in Humble Boy across a longer extract and sustain a
written response about the character, addressing a wide range of performance aspects
• read and explore an extract from the play Strife by John Galsworthy
• evaluate a range of responses to Strife in relation to costume design and the role of
two of the characters
• keep a reflective log in which you record what you have done and reflect on, or
evaluate, key aspects of your work.
6.1 Exploring a longer script
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
Ø Explore the opening to a longer script
Ø Consider possible interpretations and approaches
SPOTLIGHT ON: How can I break down a longer script so that I can engage
with its ideas and structures?
STARTING POINT
When tackling a longer script, you will need to use many, if not all, of the techniques and
approaches you have worked on throughout this book. Above all, it is vital to give the script
itself a detailed and thoughtful reading, trying to engage with key ideas in it.
Read the following opening to the play Humble Boy by Charlotte Jones. This is an abridged
(that is, shortened) version.
1. As you read it, make some basic notes about what seem to be the central motifs or ideas
running through it.
KEY TERMS
motif: a symbol, image, or turn of phrase that crops up repeatedly in a text
Scene One
Set: a pretty country garden. Perhaps the suggestions of a house or a glass conservatory from
which the characters enter into the garden. A patio area, perhaps with a path through the
garden. At the back there is an area for gardening tools; a gardening chair or stool. There is a
garden hosepipe wound up there. Something of a lawn with borders. A rose bush. At the end
of the garden there is a large beehive.
The suggestion of an apple tree - perhaps just some overhanging branches with a few apples.
The stage is in darkness. There is music. Perhaps resonant of The Flight of the Bumblebee'.
The beehive lights up to suggest the bees leaving the hive. The lights fade up on the rest of
the garden. The music is still playing and the hive continues to throb with light.
Felix Humble walks in a stumbling, uncertain way into the garden. He is transfixed by the
hive. He is an overweight but not unattractive man of about 35. He wears old and slightly
greying cricket clothes, despite the fact that he is not a sportsman by any stretch of the
imagination. He climbs up the steps and takes off the lid of the hive and looks in. The music
ends.
Mercy Lott enters the garden. She is wearing black clothes with brown shoes. She is in her
late fifties, a petite and timid, mousy woman. She watches Felix with concern. She
approaches him but doesn't get too close. Felix glances at her; then returns his attention to
the hive.
Felix: (he stumbles on the letter "b') The b-b-b-bees have gone.
Mercy: Yes, dear. Will you come in now?
Felix: They took the b-bees away. I saw them.
Mercy: Your mother isn't cross. She just wants you to come in.
Felix: There were four of them. The bee-keepers. All in white.
Mercy: I'm sure if you just say a little sorry to her
Felix: They looked like astronauts.
Mercy: Did they?
Felix: Or cosmonauts. Depending.
Mercy: On what, dear?
Felix: If we were in Russia.
[...]
Felix puts the lid back on and climbs slowly and awkwardly down.
Felix: What do you call a group of b-bee-keepers, Mercy?
Mercy: Is this a joke? I'm not very good with jokes, dear.
Felix: No, I mean what's the word? Like a flock of sheep. A herd of
cows, a pack of dogs, a - a jubilation of larks.
Mercy: Is it really? A jubilation. How lovely.
Felix: What is it for b-bee-keepers?
Mercy: Do you know? I've no idea.
Felix: What is it for astronauts? A group of astronauts?
Mercy: Shall we discuss it inside, dear?
Felix: Something to do with them being white. And weightless.
And silent.
Mercy: We shouldn't leave your mother on her own with all the others.
Felix: I just have to find the right word.
[...]
Flora enters. She is a very attractive woman in her late fifties. She looks young
for her age. She wears a stylish navy blue dress and Jackie Onassis' sunglasses
Mercy: Flora! We were just coming in. Weren't we, Felix? We were just
sorting out what you call a group of bee-keepers and then we
were right with you. Do you need me to do more sandwiches?
She's not angry. You're not angry, are you Flora?
Flora: No.
Mercy: There. I told you she wasn't angry. We can all go in now. Your
mother isn't angry with you.
Felix: Yes she is.
Flora: (calmly) I am not angry, Felix. I am incandescent with rage.
Mercy: Oh dear.
Felix: (stammering badly) An apocalypse of b-b-b-b-bee-keepers. What
do you think of that for a collective noun, Mother? It's not b-b-
bad, is it?
Flora: Stop that, Felix. You haven't done that since you were at prep
school.
'Jackie Onassis: formerly the glamorous wife of John F Kennedy, President of the USA in the 60s.
2prep school: private, independent (fee-paying) school for young children
*Cambridge don: senior academic lecturer at Cambridge University
2. How are each of these things touched on in the extract? Write a paragraph on each one,
giving one example of how each of these motifs or concerns arises in the text. For example:
The idea of absence is introduced in a number of ways. Firstly, there is the obvious absence
of Felix's father who is discussed but does not appear...
A second core element that contributes to the play's effect is the characterization.
There are three distinct characters whom we meet in the flesh in the opening.
3. How does Charlotte Jones suggest their distinctness to the audience? Copy and complete
this table about each one:
From these descriptions it is almost inevitable that there is going to be conflict. For example,
in different ways, one could say that both Felix and his mother are dressed inappropriately
for a funeral.
4. What reasons have Felix and Flora got for being annoyed with each other?
5. What is Mercy's role in this situation?
6. How would your understanding of the dynamic between the three of them affect how this
scene would be played?
KEY TERMS
dynamic: the forces in a relationship that create change or reactions
Make some initial notes on your ideas for how the
scene would be played, identifying the ways in
which the characters speak and seem to behave.
Make sure you update these notes in the light of
the work below.
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7. Working with a partner, discuss your views on the characters of both Felix and Mercy. Go
back to your completed table from Task 3 and look for any other clues about movement.
Consider the proxemics - where does Mercy stand during this dialogue? Does she move?
What about Felix?
8. Try out a number of different ways of playing the lines, all the time with the thought in
your heads - what are we trying to achieve?
What are we trying to say to the audience?
What core ideas do you want to get across? Felix's sadness, or is it anger - or a mixture of
both? Mercy's inability to connect with him, or her kindness, or both?
Go back to all you have learned about status, gesture and speech
and apply it to these few short lines.
SOUND PROGRESS
• I can identify the ways in which the characters are different or distinctive and make
some basic suggestions about their performances.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS
* I can write clearly and confidently about performances, linking my proposals to the
Text itself and making relevant inferences from the evidence.
6.2 Responding to specific
LEARNING OBJECTIVES:
Ø Consider how specific aspects of performance, design, or directional work might be
applied to a longer script.
SPOTLIGHT ON: How can I tackle tasks that re quire me to focus on very
specific parts of a script?
STARTING POINT
Written scripts often provide detailed guidance on sets, what characters wear and what
props they use (when essential to the plot).
Nevertheless, there is a vast empty space for you as performer, director or designer, to make
your mark on someone else's script.
Take the opening two lines from Humble Boy:
Felix: (he stumbles on the letter 'b') The b-b-b-bees have gone.
Mercy: Yes, dear. Will you come in now?
We know that it is the day of Felix's father's funeral and that his mother is hosting a
reception for the people who attended the funeral. They are inside, whereas Felix and Mercy
are in the garden. Mercy has come to fetch him. We also know the writer has described her as
timid.
1. What might she have been doing before she came onto the stage?
Think about these suggestions:
serving food
making tea
collecting glasses
collecting glasses
Or perhaps something else? We can't know for sure, and you would need to read the whole
play to get a full sense of Mercy's character, but on the evidence here it is likely she has been
helping Felix's mother in some way.
Some of these are possible; others unlikely. An item with a lot of significance is likely to be
mentioned in the script, so if Mercy does become a key element in the plot.
EXPLORING THE SKILLS
When props are used, there need to be valid reasons for them. Here a student explains his
suggestion of how a prop might be used by Felix in these opening lines.
I think when Felix goes up to the hive, he sees a pair of gardening gloves on the stool that
the writer mentions. I think he will see these are his father's, pick them up, look at them for
a moment - and then put them down, before looking into the hive. It will emphasise the
connection of the bees, and the garden, with Felix's father and the idea of loss.
If you are stuck for ideas, you could consider one of the following:
an apple
'Order of Service' from the funeral
a glass of water
a gardening trowel
a book or newspaper
a piece of luggage
a fly swatter
a cup of coffee
DEVELOPING THE SKILLS
A similar approach can be used when you are responding to questions about particular
characters. Let us look at Flora's character and how she might be played in these lines:
Felix: I'm trying to find the right words.
Flora: Oh yes, Felix. You carry on. That is what this day has been lacking. Yes. There
we all were, waiting in the church for you to find just the right words. Waiting
for my clever son, my golden boy, the Cambridge don, to deliver his father's
oration.
Start by establishing what we know about Flora, Felix's mother, at this point:
• She is incandescent with rage (extremely angry because Felix failed to speak at his
father's funeral and is now outside rather than talking with the guests)
• She is glamorous, and her appearance contrasts strongly with Felix's rather tatty
clothing.
6. Briefly read her lines aloud, then consider:
• her tone of voice - is she being genuinely complimentary when she says my clever
son?
• her emphasis on particular words - which ones would she stress most? Why?
• her posture - if Felix is possibly bumbling around, trying to speak, how might she
stand in contrast to him?
• her facial expressions and gestures - how does someone show anger?
7. Discuss your ideas with a partner. Then have another go at reading the exchange between
Felix and Flora aloud - and perhaps acting it out, too.
Now, read one student's ideas on how Flora's speeches should be performed.
These lines are addressed to Felix rather than Mercy and establish a number of things about
Flora's character - her somewhat patronizing way of speaking about Felix, as if he is a child
(boy), but also the fact that she is upset by her husband's death even if she has got rid of his
clothes and bees. Her tone of voice, however, is probably bitter and sarcastic, and she would
emphasize clever son' and' golden boy. She doesn't really want Felix to carry on', as she feels
he should have spoken earlier at the service, not now. I think she will say the lines through
gritted teeth, to show her anger and frustration.
SOUND PROGRESS
• I can write clearly about particular ways in which actors should perform a small section
from a script.
• I can write clearly about how a particular aspect such as use of props, costume, set or sound
could be used in a longer script.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS
• I can suggest a wide range of ways actors should perform set lines from a script and support
my views with detailed understanding of the character.
• I can write in detail, and with relevant dramatic references, about how a particular aspect
such as use of props, costume, set or sound could be used effectively in a longer script.
6.3 Writing extended responses
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
Ø Consider how to express detailed ideas about acting, design or directorial vision
with regard to a longer script
STARTING POINT
It is often relatively easy to select individual moments from a drama and explain what an
actor should do, or what prop or lighting design might be appropriate at that point, but it can
be more challenging to trace the development of an idea or a character across a longer piece
of drama.
Imagine you are an actor playing Felix in Humble Boy and have been asked to explain:
• what impression you want the audience to gain of him
• how you want to communicate this meaning.
1. Jot down your immediate thoughts. Start: I want the audience to see that.
He is 'transfixed' by the beehive. The bees were kept by his father, so their
removal might seem like another link gone
with his father, perhaps even a betrayal?
He's wearing old, greying cricket clothes,
even though it is the day of his father's
funeral.
In the conversation with Mercy, he seems
obsessed by the beekeepers who have
taken the bees away.
Even though Mercy tries to encourage him,
he ignores her requests to 'come inside'.
When his mother appears, he speaks to her
directly.
His stammering gets worse when his
mother is talking to him.
3. Once you have completed your table, write a short summary paragraph that conveys what
Felix is like as a character. You could start:
It is important to convey to the audience that Felix is clearly hit hard by his father's death.
His physical behavior and what he says, or tries to say, tell us that…
Equally important is the idea of change and contrast. When looking at a particular character
over the course of a longer piece of drama, you need to consider if there are moments when
the character changes or reacts differently.
6. These three phases are not definitive. You might decide that within each one (or at least
some of them) there are further phases. What ways can you see of dividing up the second two
phases into further phases? Compartmentalizing the script in this way can be a useful
method for actors to visualize the performance, rather like breaking a journey down into a
series of smaller trips.
You may also have to look at the script as a whole and consider the overall mood or ideas the
playwright wishes to convey.
7. One reviewer of Humble Boy called the play funny and touching. Can you identify three
moments from the script that might be response from the audience? Might be considered
touching' - that is, likely to evoke a sympathetic
Once you have decided what these moments are, consider how you could exploit them for
maximum impact with the audience. Read this short example from one student:
I think the moment when Felix has checked the beehive and says, simply, The b-b-b-bees
have all gone' is very touching and sad. It is the first thing Felix says, and it is about
absence - about something that is missing. We find out later that the bees are very
important to Felix as they represent his father, perhaps, so he must speak these lines in a
very sad, downbeat way. I think once he has verified the bees are no longer there, he could
place the lid slowly back on the hive and then move away from it, staring out into the
darkness of the sky ask if looking for the bees to return. I think Mercy might move towards
him, unseen and reach out a hand as if to touch his shoulder, to comfort him, but then
withdraw it just as he turns to face her and say his next line.
8. What particular moment has this student selected? What suggestions has the student
come up with to make this moment touching?
9. Do you think these would be effective? Can you think of any other ideas? How could
lighting be used at this point?
10. Try out the idea above and any of your own for this moment (you may not be able to use
lighting) and evaluate whether or not they created the desired 'touching' effect.
SOUND PROGRESS
• I can write at length about a particular approach or development of character in a script.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS
• I can write about creative solutions to match the ideas I wish to convey to the audience.
6.4 Applying the skills
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
Ø Read and respond to an extended script extract
Ø Evaluate other students' responses
STARTING POINT
The extract you are going to read is taken from English writer John Galsworthy's play, Strife,
written in 1909. It deals with a strike for better wages and conditions by workers at a factory
making tin plate. However, neither the workers, led by a man called Roberts, nor the Chairman
and the directors of the company, show any sign of giving in. Enid has gone to visit Mrs
Roberts, who used to be a maid for Enid and her father, as she is very unwell.
Characters
ENID UNDERWOOD, daughter of the Chairman, Mr John Anthony
FRANCIS UNDERWOOD, her husband, manager of the tin plate company
DAVID ROBERTS, workers' committee member
ANNIE ROBERTS, his wife
JAN, a boy of 10, son of another worker
This extract is from Act 2, Scene 1. It takes place in Roberts' cottage; Enid has already been
there for some time when Roberts returns.
Close to the fireplace in an old armchair, wrapped in a rug, sits Mrs Roberts, a thin and
dark-haired woman about thirty-five, with patient eyes. Her hair is not done up, but tied
back with a piece of ribbon.
Enid: (Very gently.) I'll get him to talk to me outside, we won't excite you.
Mrs Roberts: (Faintly.) No, M'm.
(She gives a violent start. Roberts has come in, unseen.)
Roberts: (Removing his hat - with subtle mockery.) Beg pardon for coming in; you're
engaged with a lady, I see.
Enid: Can I speak to you, Mr Roberts?
Roberts: Whom have I the pleasure of addressing, Ma'am?
Enid: But surely you know me! I'm Mrs Underwood.
Roberts: (With a bow of malice.) The daughter of our Chairman.
Enid: (Earnestlv.) I've come on purpose to speak to you; will you come outside a
minute?
She looks at Mrs Roberts.
Roberts: (Hanging up his hat.) I have nothing to say, Ma'am.
Enid: But I must speak to you, please.
She moves towards the door.
Roberts: (With sudden venom.) I have not the time to listen!
Mrs Roberts:David!
Enid: Mr Roberts, please!
Roberts: (Taking off his overcoat.) I am sorry to disoblige a lady - Mr Anthony's
daughter.
Enid: (Wavering, then with sudden decision.) Mr Roberts, I know you've another
meeting of the men.
(Roberts bows.)
I came to appeal to you. Please, please, try to come to some compromise; give
way a little, if it's only for your own sakes!
Roberts: (Speaking to himself.) The daughter of Mr Anthony begs me to give way a
little, if it's only for our own sakes.
Enid: For everybody's sake; for your wife's sake.
Roberts: For my wife's sake, for everybody's sake - for the sake of Mr Anthony.
Enid: Why are you so bitter against my father? He has never done anything to you.
Roberts: Has he not?
Enid: He can't help his views, any more than you can help yours.
Roberts: I really didn't know that I had a right to views!
Enid: He's an old man, and you –
Seeing his eyes fixed on her, she stops.
Roberts: (Without raising his voice.) If I saw Mr Anthony going to die, and I
could save him by lifting my hand, I would not lift the little finger of it.
Enid: You - you -- (She stops again, biting her lips.)
Roberts: I would not, and that's flat!
Enid: (Coldly.) You don't mean what you say, and you know it!
Roberts: I mean every word of it.
Enid: But why?
Roberts: (With a flash.) Mr Anthony stands for tyranny! That's why!
Enid: Nonsense!
Mrs Roberts makes a movement as if to rise, but sinks back in her chair.
Enid: (With an impetuous movement.) Annie!
Roberts: Please not to touch my wife!
Enid: (Recoiling with a sort of horror.) I believe - you are mad.
Roberts: The house of a madman then is not the fit place for a lady.
Enid: I'm not afraid of you.
Roberts: (Bowing.) I would not expect the daughter of Mr Anthony to be afraid. Mr
Anthony is not a coward like the rest of them.
Enid: (Suddenly.) I suppose you think it brave, then, to go on with the struggle.
Roberts: Does Mr Anthony think it brave to fight against women and children?
Mr Anthony is a rich man, I believe; does he think it brave to fight against
those who haven't a penny? Does he think it brave to set children crying with
hunger, an' women shivering with cold?
Enid: (Putting up her hand, as though warding off a blow.) My father is acting on
his principles, and you know it!
Roberts: And so am I!
Enid: You hate us; and you can't bear to be beaten.
Roberts: Neither can Mr Anthony, for all that he may say.
Enid: At any rate you might have pity on your wife.
Mrs Roberts who has her hand pressed to her heart, takes it away, and tries to calm her
breathing.
Roberts: Madam, I have no more to say.
He takes up the loaf. There is a knock at the door, and Underwood comes in. He stands
looking at them, Enid turns to him, then seems undecided.
Underwood: Enid!
Roberts: (Ironically.) Ye were not needing to come for your wife, Mr Underwood. We
are not rowdies.
Underwood: I know that, Roberts. I hope Mrs Roberts is better. (Roberts turns away
without answering.) Come, Enid!
Enid: I make one more appeal to you, Mr Roberts, for the sake of your wife.
Roberts: (With polite malice.) If I might advise ye, Ma'am - make it for the sake
of your husband and your father.
Enid, suppressing a retort, goes out. Underwood opens the door for her and follows.
Roberts, going to the fire, holds out his hands to the dying glow.
Roberts: How goes it, my girl? Feeling better, are you?
(Mrs Roberts smiles faintly. He brings his overcoat and wraps it round her.)
(Looking at his watch.) Ten minutes to four! (As though inspired.) I've seen
their faces, there's no fight in them, except for that one old robber.
Mrs Roberts:Won't you stop and eat, David? You've 'ad nothing all day!
Roberts: (Putting his hand to his throat.) Can't swallow till those old sharks are out of
the town. (He walks up and down.) I shall have a bother with the men there's
no heart in them, the cowards. Blind as bats, they are - can't see a day before
their noses.
Mrs Roberts: It's the women, David.
Roberts: Ah! So they say! They can remember the women when their own bellies
speak! The women never stop them from the drink; but from a little suffering
to themselves in a sacred cause, the women stop them fast enough.
Mrs Roberts:But think o' the children, David.
Roberts: Ah! If they will go breeding themselves for slaves, without a thought 0' the
future o' them they breed -
Mrs Roberts:(Gasping.) That's enough, David; don't begin to talk of that - I won't 1 can't -
Roberts: (Staring at her.) Now, now, my girl!
Mrs Roberts:(Breathlessly.) No, no, David - I won't!
Roberts: There, there! Come, come! That's right! (Bitterly.) Not one penny will they put
by for a day like this. Not they! Hand to mouth - Gad! –I know them! They've
broke my heart. There was no holdin' them at the start, but now the pinch 'as
come.
Mrs Roberts: How can you expect it, David? They're not made of iron
Roberts: Expect it? Wouldn't I expect what I would do meself? Wouldn't I starve an' rot
rather than give in? What one man can do, another can.
Mrs Roberts:And the women?
Roberts: This is not women's work.
Mrs Roberts: (With a flash of malice.) No, the women may die for all you care.
That's their work.
Roberts: (Averting his eyes.) Who talks of dying? No one will die till we have beaten
these -
(He meets her eyes again, and again turns his away. Excitedly.)
This is what I've been waiting for all these months. To get the old robbers
down, and send them home again without a farthing’s worth o' change. I've
seen their faces, I tell you, in the valley of the shadow of defeat.
He goes to the peg and takes down his hat.
Mrs Roberts:(Following with her eyes - softly.) Take your overcoat, David; it must be
bitter cold.
Roberts: (Coming up to her - his eyes are furtive.) No, no! There, there, stay quiet and
warm. I won't be long, my girl!
Mrs Roberts:(With soft bitterness.) You'd better take it.
She lifts the coat. But Roberts puts it back, and wraps it round her. He tries to
meet her eyes, but cannot. Mrs Roberts stays huddled in the coat. Her eyes,
that follow him about, are half malicious, half yearning. He looks at his watch
again, and turns to go. In the doorway he meets Jan Thomas, a boy of ten in
clothes too big for him, carrying a penny whistle.
Roberts: Hallo, boy
He goes. Jan stops within a yard of Mrs Roberts, and stares at her without a word.
Task 1: In what ways could the costume designer contribute to the realization of the
characters in this extract?
identifies style of play, although a little simplistic
Response A
The play is a realistic one, so I think the characters
would dress in the right clothes for the time. The basic contrast but lacking in explanation in
relation to play itself
most important thing would be to show the
difference between the workers and the rich, so
this means the costume designer needs to show
shabby poor clothing for Roberts and his wife
Annie and have nice clothes for Enid. Roberts says,
useful direct reference to play
..you're engaged with a lady when he comes in, so
it is obvious that she looks different to Annie.
Their clothes would be clothes that people wore in
the early 20th century, such as for Enid quite fancy
embroidery with ribbons. She would definitely thoughtful but rather general detail.
not related to Enid's characterization
wear a dress, probably ankle length and slim-
fitting. The audience will see that there is a
basic detail, lacking development
difference in their lives as Annie would only have
cheaper, working-class clothes, probably a plain,
single-colored skirt.
Comment
This is a clear response, which makes the basic point about the contrast between the working
classes and the better off.
However; it does not really draw out how costumes could specifically develop
characterization for these particular characters; the suggestions could apply to almost any
working- class person and richer woman, not Annie and Enid in particular.
Task 2: Explore the ways in which the role of ROBERTS helps to move the drama along in
the extract.
Response A
Roberts is obviously a very important
character because he is leader of the a clear point identifying his role in the drama
workers and the one who is dead against
going back to work, even if it means his
own family starving. There are quite a few this information needs to be supported by direct
of the other workers who don't completely reference to the text
support him so he is the one who is causing
all the problems - you could say he is the
one who makes the play exciting. there is a good point here, but it is not expressed in a
way that shows dramatic knowledge
Everything could be ok if Roberts wasn't in
the scene as Enid and Annie seem to get
along, but Annie knows there will be
trouble when he comes back as she gives a
good to refer to the dramatic effect but doesn’t
violent start' when he appears. This creates answer the question directly
tension in the audience and they want to
see what will happen between Enid and
him.
Comment
This is a reasonable attempt to try to discuss Roberts' impact, but it does not focus enough
on specific moments within the scene, nor express ideas in suitably professional language.
6. How could this be improved? Think about:
• what particular changes happen in the scene as a result of Roberts' words and actions.
• what dramatic function he serves.
Response B
Roberts could be referred to as the antagonist of
identifies Roberts’ central role in the play
the play: without him, it could be argued there
would be no conflict and therefore no story – the
men would simply go back to work. His function
is to act as a contrast with Mr Anthony, who is
both his opposite and similar in character – he evidence from the text supports the point
says, Mr Anthony is not a coward like the rest of
them.... even though he would not lift a finger to
save him if he was dying! This suggests that End's
efforts to calm things are no match for this shows how his words and actions have a direct
stubborn man. His main role here is to show how impact on audience and developing plot
deep the hatred is of his employers, so much that
the audience begin to realize his own wife is at good interpretation of character and what it shows in
risk. When he forbids Enid to help Annie, the this extract
audience see that his principles are a sort of
madness. It might even be argued that they
refers to his blind pursuit of justice
directly contribute to Annie becoming more
unwell, for example when he fails to realize what
this is leading to: Who talks of dying? No one will
die till we have beaten these-
Comment
This is a strong exploration of Roberts and his general role in the play; a full answer would
need to trace in more detail how what he says and does in this scene moves the drama
forward.
KEY TERMS
archetype: a character that seems to represent a type or category of person (for example,
angry working class) rather than a person in their own right
Task 3: Explore the ways in which the role of ENID helps to move
the drama along in the extract.
SOUND PROGRESS
• I can respond to a longer script identifying and using evidence to support my points
in a clear, logical way.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS
• I can respond to a longer script in thoughtful ways that consider its impact on the
audience, using fluent expression and appropriate dramatic terminology.
CHECK YOUR PROGRESS
Use these statements as a way of evaluating your progress throughout this chapter.
SOUND PROGRESS /
o I can identify the ways in which characters are different or distinctive and make some
basic suggestions about how actors show this in performance.
o I can write clearly about particular ways in which actors working together should
perform a small section from a script.
o I can write clearly about how a particular aspect such as use of props, costume, set or
sound could be used in a longer script.
o I can write at length about a particular approach or development of character in a
script.
o I can respond to a longer script using evidence to support my points in a clear, logical
way.
EXCELLENT PROGRESS /
o I can write clearly and confidently about performances, linking my proposals to the
text itself and making relevant inferences from the evidence.
o I can suggest a wide range of ways actors should perform set lines from a script and
support my views with detailed understanding of the character.
o I can write in detail, and with relevant dramatic references, about how a particular
aspect such as use of props, costume, set or sound could be used effectively in a
longer script.
o I can write about creative solutions to match the ideas I wish to convey to the
audience.
o I can respond to a longer script in thoughtful ways that consider its impact on the
audience, using fluent expression and appropriate dramatic terminology.