IRMA YULIANA
IRMA YULIANA
IRMA YULIANA
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IRMA YULIANA
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PERSETUJUAN PEMBIMBING
Mahasiswi jurusan Bahasa dan sastra Inggris pada Fakultas Adab dan Humaniora
UIN Alauddin Makassar, setelah dengan seksama meneliti dan mengoreksi skripsi
Pembimbing I Pembimbing II
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PENGESAHAN SKRIPSI
DEWAN PENGUJI
Diketahui oleh :
Dekan Fakultas Adab dan Humaniora
UIN Alauddin Makassar,
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ACKNOWLEDGMENT
Alhamdulillah Rabbil Alamin, the writer praises to the Almighty Allah s.w.t.
for His blessing and merciful so the writer can complete this thesis. Peace and
salutation are addressed to the beloved and chosen messenger Muhammad s.a.w.
The writer realizes that this thesis couldn’t complete without getting
, the writer would like to express her deepest gratitude to the following :
1. My beloved parents, Naharuddin and Bansuhari for their love, patience, and
2. My beloved sister Sutriana S.Ei and Isna Syahri Ramadhana for his support and
3. The Rector of UIN Alauddin Makassar, Prof. Dr. H. Qadir Gassing. H.T, M.A., for
his advice during the period when the writer studied at the university.
4. The Dean of Adab and Humanities Faculty, Prof. Dr. Mardan, M.Ag and his staff,
the Head of English and Literature Department, Dr. Abd. Muin, M. Hum, and
secretary of English and Literature Department Serliah Nur, S.Pd. M.Hum. M.Ed,
5. Dr. Abd. Muin, M. Hum and Sardian Maharani Asnur, S.Pd, M.Pd. My first and
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corrections, and over all support since the preliminary part of this thesis until the
end.
6. All lecturers of Adab and Humanities Faculty UIN Alauddin Makassar who have
Syahrul Rahman, Muh. Fausi Rasak, Nurmania, Musdalifah, and with whom I
share experience and knowledge during my study and writing this thesis.
Irma Yuliana
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TABLE OF CONTENTS
ACKNOWLEDGMENTS .................................................................................. vi
ABSTRACT........................................................................................................ x
A. Background ............................................................................................. 1
B. Problem statement................................................................................... 2
C. Objective of research............................................................................... 2
A. Previous findings..................................................................................... 4
B. Novel ....................................................................................................... 5
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1. Exposition ......................................................................................... 11
3. Climax ............................................................................................... 13
4. Falling action..................................................................................... 14
5. Resolution/denouement..................................................................... 14
D. Murder..................................................................................................... 15
E. Synopsis .................................................................................................. 16
F. Biography................................................................................................ 17
B. Source of data.......................................................................................... 19
C. Instrument of research............................................................................. 19
A. Findings................................................................................................... 21
B. Discussion ............................................................................................... 25
A. Conclusions ............................................................................................. 38
B. Suggestions ............................................................................................. 39
BIBILIOGRAPHY.............................................................................................. 40
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ABSTRACT
The method in this research is descriptive qualitative method, the object and
the source of the data of this research is the novel low pressure written by Sandra
brown, which was published in 2012 and consist of 30 chapters and 500 pages, while
the instrument of this research is note taking. The technique of data analysis in this
research used Freytag theory that considered as the plot in Sandra Brown’s novel
“Low Pressure”.
In this research, the writer found that in the novel “Low Pressure” written by
Sandra Brown, the exposition is detective interviewed as many as they could locate,
rising action is Bellamy began to find the killer of Susan, the climax is the killer of
Susan is Olivia, falling action is bellamy straihten out all the problems. The
resolution is tragic. There are 15 data which describe about the plot of murder
revelation.
The writer concludes that murder revelation of plot in the novel “low
pressure” can be seen by five elements according to Gustav Freytag theory, they are
exposition, rising action, climax, falling action, and resolution.
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CHAPTER I
BACKGROUND
A. Background
(1993: 1) says that “literature refers to compositions that tell stories, dramatize
literature is the art of writing that full of expression and idea because it is a
In general, literary work itself can be divided into three kinds they are:
grounded in the most deeply felt experiences of human beings. Drama is literature
Among the genre of literature, novel is one of the prose fiction. Julien
Bonn (2010: 112) says, “Novel is a long fictional narrative written in prose, which
developed from the novella and other early forms of narrative. A novel is usually
action. Action and the characters in the novel made by the writers themselves. So
an action and the events of the novel can be a real story in everyday life it can be
can be an ambition, sadness, joy, happiness, sense, logic, and many others are
based on the facts of one’s life. The novel has the intrinsic and extrinsic elements.
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The intrinsic elements are truly seen from the novel. There are five main intrinsic
elements, they are: theme, plot, character, setting, and point of view.
In this paper the writer just explains one of five elements, just focuses on plot.
The plot is the interaction of cause and effect that develops in a sequence of a
problem. In the novel Low Pressure, Sandra Brown’s shows the clear interaction of
cause and effect. Bellamy Lyston as the main character was only twelve years old
when her older sister, Susan, was killed on a stormy Memorial Day. A tornado
destroyed the crime scene along with Bellamy’s memory of what really happened.
The writer is interested in analyzing the plot in the novel because it can show
the sequence of conflict related to the murder revelation in the novel based on gustav
Freytag theory.
B. Problem statements
Based on the background above, the writer tried to formulate the research
questions as follow:
How is the murder revealed in plot of Sandra Brown’s novel “Low Pressure”?
C. Objective of Research
The study is hopefully can be used enrich the literary study especially in
plot and the reader will understand about plot in a novel and know the story in
E. Scope of Research
There are so many aspects in this novel that can be described, but the
writer becomes more interested in describing the plot in the novel. So, the scope
of study is limited only in describing the plot pictured based on Low Pressure
REVIEW OF LITERATURE
A. Previous findings
This research has some relationship with the previous findings research
such as:
Sheldon’s Novel “The Best Laid Plans”. She found that mysterious murderer in
this case is Peter Tager and the motive of the murder was desire. She uses
descriptive method and aims to find about the mysterious murder and the motive
of murder itself.
Reveal The Murder In Agatha Christie’s Novel “Death In The Clouds”. He found
that Hercule Poirots’ reasons to reveal the murder are: (1) Hercule Poirot is
suspected of being the murderer and (2) Hercule Poirot wants to get back his good
reputation. While, Hercule Poirot’s ways to reveal the murders are: (1) making a
list of people’s possession and (2) revealing the clues found. He uses descriptive
method and aims to find out two problems: What are Hercule Poirot’s reasons and
ways to reveal the murder in Agatha Christie’s novel “Death in the Clouds”.
research. The similarity between the previous researches and this research is
analyzing about murder. While the differences of those two researches above are
Utami focused on mysterious murder and the motive of murder itself. Hendro
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focused on ways to reveal the murder. While in this research the writer focus on
the plot of murder revelation in Sandra Brown’s novel “Low Pressure” using
Freytag theory.
B. Novel
1. Definition of novel
fiction dealing with character; situation and setting that imitate those of real life.
being a fiction in prose of a certain length, typically more than 50.000 words, with
Based on the explanation above, the writer can conclude that novel is a
form long prose with theme, characters, setting and perhaps a plot which is the
complex than a story. Novel is divided into two parts those are novel fiction and
novel nonfiction. Novel fiction is the author tells the story of the novel with his
imagination, and novel nonfiction is the author tells the story of the novel with his
life experiences, and also the story of the life of others. So, novel nonfiction is a
2. Element of novel
In general, novel has some main elements in purpose to build up the story
and to make it feel complete. Those elements are plot, character, setting, and
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theme. In order to give a strong effect and high impression to the writing, the
author mostly emphasize the focus only in one or two elements. According to
Welleck (1978: 217), there are four elements of novel, they are plot, character,
a. Plot
stated that plot is a series of the event in a story. How a certain event affecting
another event that can not be ignore, since the event will be effecting for all story.
Plot is very close to the existence of the character. If the story only has a little in
character, there will be more close and simple to plot; in contrast a novel that has
many characters in the story the plot will be more complicated. Plot also helps the
reader in understanding the story of the novel. The clarity of the plot makes the
reader easier in understanding the story. Usually a good or popular novels uses
simple plot, so, the strength of the novel also depends on the plot.
Plot is a literary term defined as the events that makes up the story,
and effect, or by coincidence. One is generally interested in how well this pattern
“Plot is the sequence of events and actions in a literary work.” Most readers begin
by describing external actions, those that, through the writer’s description, we can
b. Character
Harahap (2007:23), character is the aggregate of traits and features that form the
nature of some person or animal. Character also refers to moral qualities and
ethical standard and principles. Character is one of the interesting things for
personal opinions that the readers want to see how is the other people life and how
they effort to pursue the goals. Character also a vehicle for the author in order to
convey to the reader about her/his view of the world. The reader can learn about
individual characters from their own words and action, from what other characters
said about them and the way others act towards them. Character in a novel can be
character antagonist.
1. Flat Character
static and at the end of the novel he is essential what he has been thought. All his
responses are predictable; so readers can anticipate exactly how the character will
reach.
2. Round character
experiences. His response makes us surprised. He does not embody a single idea,
but is much more complex. Literary work usually portrays some difference types
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characters in a novel.
c. Setting
universe that interacts with events that are taking place. Setting can also be
intangible certain times (day, month and year), weather, or a historical period
The setting of a literary work is the physical world of the literary work, the
place, the time, and the circumstance of the action. Setting, whether realistic or
fantastic, can have symbolic, physiological, and sociological aspect (Cole, 1999:
161).
work of fiction which reveals to use when and where events of the plot. In other
d. Theme
theme is the central ideas that a play discusses. Theme developes every event of
human treason, or even old age. The theme makes the story more focused, united,
and influenced. The beginning and the end of the story would be fitting, suitable,
and satisfactory owing to the presence of the theme. The most effective way to
identify the theme of a work is to examine carefully any conflicts that exist within
it.
C. Intrinsic Approach
The intrinsic approach was originally written by Rene Wellek and Austin.
literary work based on analyzing the internal elements that build that work.
According to Wellek (1962; 332) the natural on sensible starting point for work in
themselves. After all, only the works themselves justify all our interest in the life
from the analysis of the literary work itself because then it would enable us to
identify he many aspects that built that work. Wellek further explained by
introducing elements that from the foundation of a literary work, plot, setting,
theme, character, point of view, and style. By analyzing these elements, a student
could comprehend the work by figuring out how the story flows, where the story
is set, how the characters act and think. Although so many of elements of novel,
Plot is the events that form a significant pattern of action with a beginning,
middle and an end. Plot is also a literary term defined as the events that make up a
cause and effect, how the reader views the story, or simply by coincidence. They
move from one place or event to another in order to form a pattern, usually with
the purpose of overcoming a conflict. The plot is more formally called a narrative.
the story is composed and it may conclude what character says or thinks, as well
as what he does, but it leaves out a description and an analysis and concentrates
ordinarily on major happening. Plot, as a storyline made by the reader in the form
accordance with what was happened to the perpetrators story. From the definition
dramatic order. One is tempted to insert the word “chronological.” But doing so
would exclude many stories that depart from this strict ordering of events.
According to Stanton (2007:14) the plot is story that contains the sequences of
events, but each incident is only connected in cause and effect, an event which
In any story, there are five elements that make the plot a whole and
complete body of work. Gustav Freytag (1863: 113) considered plot as narrative
structure that divides a story into five parts, like the five acts of a play. These parts
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are: exposition (of the situation), rising action (through conflict), climax (or
turning point), falling action; and resolution. These are the following definition of
plot elements:
1. Exposition
The first part of a plot is the exposition. Every story must have a
beginning. The start, or exposition, is where the characters and setting are
established. During this part of the novel, the conflict or main problem is also
introduced. The exposition is the beginning of the story and it is the place where
the characters are introduced to the reader. Also in the exposition, the setting that
the story is taking place is expounded upon so that the reader can get a mental
picture of where the story is taking place. These elements are extremely important
The exposition introduces all of the main characters in the story. It shows
how they relate to one another, what their goals and motivations are, and the kind
of person they are. The audience may have questions about any of these things,
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which get settled, but if they do have them they are specific and well-focused
questions. Most importantly, in the exposition, the audience gets to know the
main character (protagonist), and the protagonist gets to know his or her main
goal and what is at stake if he or she fails to attain this goal and if he eventually
attains this goal. The exposition is the portion of a story that introduces important
setting, events occurring before the main plot, characters' back stories, etc.
story. Alexander Bain and John Genung described exposition as one of four
narration.
2. Rising Action
The second part of a plot is rising action. In this next section, the reader
has the opportunity to see where the problem or conflict arises within the story, as
well as the tension that is a direct result of the conflict, which includes the
motivation as well as obstacles of each of the main characters in the story. The
rising action of a plot is the series of events that build up and create tension and
suspense. This tension is a result of the basic conflict that exists and makes the
story interesting. The rising action can be identified as the ingredients that
complicate matters in a plot. We will see rising action in any story, from a
critical apparatus to categorize plots into types, e.g., man vs. society. The
mode of analysis, while Freytag is talking about the second act in a five-act play,
at a time when all of the major characters have been introduced, their motives and
allegiances have been made clear (at least for the most part), and they now begin
3. Climax
The third part of a plot is the climax. The climax the most exciting point
and the turning point of the story. This is the part of the story that makes the
reader want to know what is going to happen next and all of the major action in
the story comes to a head. Every good narrative takes the reader on a journey,
steadily building the story and the reader's interest. The climax is the point during
a narrative when the action or conflict reaches its peak, and this point in the story
leads to the story's resolution. Writing a good climax requires more than just
exciting when the narrative has a steady, increasing conflict or action that draws
The point of climax is the turning point of the story, where the main
character makes the single big decision that defines the outcome of the story and
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who he or she is as a person. The dramatic phase that Freytag called the "climax"
is the third of the five phases and occupies the middle of the story. Thus "the
climax" may refer to either the point of climax or to the third phase of the drama.
4. Falling Action
The fourth part of a plot is the falling action. Falling Action is the actions
and events that immediately follow directly after the climax. At this point in the
story, this is where the problems begin to unwind. Freytag called this phase
"falling action" in the sense that the loose ends are being tied up. However, it is
often the time of greatest overall tension, because it is the phase in which
In this phase, the villain has the upper hand. It seems that evil will triumph.
The protagonist has never been further from accomplishing the goal. For Freytag,
this is true both in tragedies and comedies, because both of these types of plots
classically show good winning over evil. The question is which side the
protagonist has put himself on, and this may not be immediately clear to the
audience.
5. Resolution/ Denouement
The fifth and final part of a plot is the resolution, which essentially is the
end of the story. At this point all of the problems that the characters faced
throughout the story are worked out and the story is concluded. The resolution,
also often called denouement, which is French for "to untie" or "unraveling", is
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the conclusion of the story. Here, the conflicts are resolved, all loose ends are tied
up, and the story concludes with either a happy or sad ending.
D. Murder
not the reason for someone to kill others. Many factors make someone decide to
kill others. One of the factors is known as kill motive (Dariyo, 2013: 10).
unlawfully within any country of the realm any reasonable creature in being under
the king’s peace, with malice aforethought, either expressed by the party, or
implied by law so as the party wounded, or hurt, die of the wound or hurt within a
Murder is one of the most appalling crimes that human beings commit, but
at the same time one of the most fascinating. The victim is not longer able to
explain events or act as witness as to events leading up to the crime, and cannot
There are different degrees of murder, and punishments vary accordingly. First
degree murder involves malice and premeditation. Second degree murder requires
characteristic of murder is that the victim and criminal often know each other.
transaction, such as a barroom brawl, and is killed in the aftermath (Larry, 2012:
346).
Based on the explanation above, the writer can conclude that murder is
Murder is an evil action to take the soul of others. Everyone can be a murderer.
Murder is one the most appalling crimes that human beings commit, but at the
same time one of the most fascinating. There are different degrees of murder, and
premeditation or deliberation.
E. Synopsis
Bellamy Lyston was only 12 years old when her older sister Susan was
tornado that destroyed the crime scene along with her memory of what really
based on Susan's murder. Because the book was inspired by the tragic event that
still pains her family, she published it under a pseudonym to protect them from
discovers that the book is based on fact, Bellamy's identity is exposed along with
wants the truth about Susan's murder to remain unknown or, even more
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punished.
In order to identify her stalker, Bellamy must confront the ghosts of her
past, including Dent Carter, Susan's wayward and reckless boyfriend -- and an
original suspect in the murder case. Dent, with this and other stains on his past, is
intent on clearing his name, and he needs Bellamy's sealed memory to do it. But
she discovers disturbing elements of the crime which call into question the people
she holds most dear. Haunted by partial memories, conflicted over her feelings for
Dent, but determined to learn the truth, she won't stop until she reveals Susan's
killer. That is, unless Susan's killer strikes her firs (Brown, 2012).
F. Biography
Sandra Brown is the author of more than sixty New York Times
Rainwater (2010), Tough Customer (2010), Smash Cut (2009), Smoke Screen
Brown began her writing career in 1981 and since then has published over
seventy novels, bringing the number of copies of her books in print worldwide to
upwards of eighty million. Her work has been translated into thirty-three
languages.
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embarking on her writing career, she worked as a model at the Dallas Apparel
Mart, and in television, including weather casting for WFAA-TV in Dallas, and
episode on true TV's "Murder by the Book" premiered the series in 2008 and she
was one of the launch authors for Investigation Discovery's new series,
"Hardcover Mysteries."
acclaimed, powerfully moving story about honor and sacrifice during the Great
Depression.
Texas Christian University. She was named Thriller Master for 2008, the top
award given by the International Thriller Writer's Association. Other awards and
commendations include the 2007 Texas Medal of Arts Award for Literature and
METHODOLOGY OF RESEARCH
A. Research Method
concerning correct status of the subject of the study. This method intends to
analyze the murder revealed in plot in Sandra Brown’s novel “Low Pressure”.
B. Data Sources
The source of data was taken from Sandra Brown’s novel “low pressure”.
The novel was published in 2011. It consists of 30 chapters and 500 pages.
C. Instrument of Research
In collecting data, the researcher used note taking as the instrument of the
required by using note cards to write down the data findings from source of data.
In order to find the data easily, the note cards were also completed by number and
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about it.
3. the researcher took note cards and wrote the data which contain the
4. After the all data had been written on the note cards, the researcher
Identification is once the data was collected, the researcher read critically by
identifying novel that used give the clue about data in the study. Classification is
once identified, the data in the novels selected and classified according to the
In this chapter, the writer presents the data which contains the plot of the
murder revealed based on the Freytag’s theory in Sandra Brown’s novel “low
pressure”.
A. Findings
In this part, the writer presents the data which were considered as the plot in
understanding the data the writer presents explanation, C is Chapter, P is Page, and D
1. Exposition
attended the barbecue and had been in the vicinity at the time of the
slaying. D.01/C.6/P.99.
with whom Susan had quarreled that morning, his name had gone to
the top of the list of possible suspect. Right off, Dale and his team of
detectives thought they had issues with authority. Dale heard that from
faculty members of the high school from which Dent had graduated
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c. His interest had shifted to Allen Strickland. Now, Dale hefted his
pistol in his palm while mentally enumerating all the fact that had
But there wasn’t a single, solid piece of hard evidence to prove that
2. Rising action
a. Eighteen years later, Bellamy Lyston price had written a book that
underscored every about Dale had ever entertained about what had
happened in the woods that day just before the history tornado.
D.04/C.6/P.100.
We need someone who was there to fill in the gaps that you and I
“Dale Moody?”
troubled man find out why. He squeezed her hand again. Will you do
d. Moody was pretty straightforward with us, but he fell short of making
a full confession. He didn’t tell us the thing that might have made a
D.07/C.22/P.355.
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e. Then listen up. I felt the case file with haymaker. Go see him. He’ll
enlighten you”.
“That’s it?”
so.
While you’re at it, you may want to take a look at this, too.
D.09/C.28/P.452.
3. Climax
a. Bellamy crossed the room to stand at the foot of the bed. Olivia glaced
down at her hand, in which she clutched the two telling photographs.
When her gaze moved back to bellamy’s face, she looked deeply into
her eyes for ponderous moments. Finally, she said, “you know.”
D.10/C.29/P.467.
b. I didn’t plan it. I just reacted with rage. I bent down and grabbed a
broken tree limb that was lying on the ground, and hit her in the back
of the head with all my might. She fell facedown. I untied the bow at
my neck and took it off.” She raised her shoulders in a slight shrug. “It
D.11/C.29/P471.
4. Falling action
happened since Dent had dropped her there. She was already dying. I
think it must have been a huge relief to her to tell someone about it.
D.12/C.30/P.486.
b. I told the police. At this pained expression, she said, they were
reinvestigating the case. I had to tell them. It was only right. The
5. Resolution
a. No they don’t,” Bellamy said softly. “Because you have to tell the
does Dent, Steven, anyone who came under suspicion. You must clear
them.” D.14/C.29/P.472.
b. I gotta kill them because it was on account of them that Allen died, he
D.15/C.30/P.484.
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B. Discussions
In this part, the writer identifies the data which were taken from the
Freytag’s theory.
c. Exposition
In this research, exposition can be seen in D.01, D.02, and D.03, The
exposition is the beginning of the story and it is the place where the characters
are introduced to the reader. Also in the exposition, the setting that the story is
taking place is expounded upon so that the reader can get a mental picture of
where the story is taking place. These elements are extremely important
arrived, he’d been met by the chief ME, who’d, looked frazzled and near
exhaustion himself. His staff was overwhelmed by the number of bodies still
Dale called by the chief ME because not fallen trees cause he died.
The injuries she sustained during tornado were postmortem. The bruising here
on her neck indicates strangulation. Where she was scraped and cut by the
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falling tree, she didn’t bleed. She sustained blunt trauma to several organs,
which could have been fatal, but she was already dead.
Combing the crime scene for evidence had been an exercise in futility,
a joke. The tornado had ravaged the entire area. Trees that weren’t completely
uprooted had been stripped bare of leaves, their naked branches ripped off and
tossed to the ground like toothpicks. Investigators had to hack through the
natural debris just to get to the scene of the crime. The area had also been
loved ones.
attended the barbecue and had been in the vicinity at the time of the slaying.
Dale interviewed as many as they could locate. Both the pavilion and the
boathouse had been flattened. The gravel lot where over two hundred vehicles
were parked had been turned into an apocalyptic landscape of twisted steel
serious injuries. Many were hospitalized with internal injuries, head trauma,
compound fractures, cuts and contusions, and shock. It had taken weeks to
Then in D.02, in the meantime, Dale had grilled Denton Carter. As the
boyfriend with whom Susan had quarreled that morning, his name had gone to
the top of the list of possible suspect. Right off, Dale and his team of
detectives thought they had issues with authority. Dale heard that from faculty
members of the high school from which Dent had graduated only the week
before. But Dale didn’t have any evidence with which to hold Dent. Not then,
and not days later, after conducting a thorough investigation and repeated
interrogations. The boy’s story never deviated from what he had initially told
dale. No one could testify to seeing him at the barbecue, and the old man from
the airfield provided him with an alibi. Dale had no choice but to let him go.
the last person who was with Susan at night barbecue. There had been enough
to charge him. But there wasn’t a single, solid piece of hard evidence to prove
that he’d killed that girl. But Rupert Collier as the ADA assigned, an eager
bloodsucker if ever there was one, had built a case out of circumstantial
evidence. His summation had been delivered with the fervor of a tent revival
evangelist. As though fearing hell for themselves if they didn’t convict, the
jury had brought in a guilty verdict in under two hours. Allen Strickland had
gone to prison.
Based on D.01, D.02, and D.03, the writer can conclude exposition of
they could locate. Both the pavilion and the boathouse had been flattened. It
had taken weeks to track down and question everyone. In the meantime, Dale
had grilled Denton Carter. Denton Carter as the boyfriend with whom Susan
had quarreled that morning, his name had gone to the top of the list of
possible suspect. But he was not found guilty, no one could testify to seeing
him at the barbecue. Dale had no choice but to let him go. His interest had
he could be in the defendant. But there wasn’t a single, solid piece of hard
evidence to prove that he’d killed that girl. But the jury had brought in a guilty
d. Rising Action
D.08, and D.09. Rising action is the reader has the opportunity to see where
the problem or conflict arises within the story, as well as the tension that is a
In D.04, who been eighteen years later, Bellamy Lyston price as the
main character had written a book that underscored every doubt Dale and
ever entertained about what had happened in the woods that day just before
the history tornado. For eighteen years she tried to bridge that gap. But that
span of time is blocked out in his memory. Like the broken center line on the
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highway. Section of time are missing where she don’t remember what she did,
Next in D.05, Dent said that we need verification for everything you
do remember, or you think. We need someone there to fill in the gaps that you
Bellamy did not want to tell his father because his father was fighting for his
life. So dent said that okay then, Steven. He is the next logical choice of who
we should talk to. When they met with Steven, he does not seem all that
surprised or happy to see Dent and Bellamy. Bellamy, contrary was overjoyed
to see Steven. She slipped out of the booth and waiting for to embrace him
when he reached her. She hugged him tightly and held on even as she felt him
easing away.
No chitchat, no catching up, Steven had gone asked where they meet.
Bellamy was very sad but she had to address his consternation. Bellamy had
gone straight to the heart of the matter. Bellamy asks Steven to share some
recollection and impression in that day. She wasted no time. Bellamy ask
Steven why were you going to the boathouse. But Steven’s recollect of the
Next in D.06, start talk to the detective namely Dale Moody. I watched
him during Strickland’s trial. He was a troubled man find out why. He
Her father was asking her to dig deeper about Susan murder, because
her father doubts the attitude of Dale Moody looked uneasy during the trial.
Bellamy and dent finally meet with Dale Moody. Bellamy leaned
toward him, I want you to tell me that you believe with all of your heart that
Allen Strickland was guilty. He held her pleading gaze for as long as he could
stand it, then looked down and studied the burning tip of his cigarette. Dale
explains his statement, I have heard for hundreds of guilty men and women
swear to God and all the angels that they are innocents. But I believed Allen
Strickland, so, no, Mr. Price, I do not believe with all my heart that he was
Next in D.07, Moody was pretty straightforward with us, but he fell
short of making a full confession. He did not tell us the thing that might have
made a difference in the outcome from the case. We need to talk to Rupe
Collier.
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Bellamy and Dent meet with Rupe at home, but when they meet with
the rupee, Bellamy offended by the statement from Susan, so Bellamy and
signed confession, and to eliminate any doubt or dispute that it is legit, he put
thumbprint on it.
since he retired from the police. Nagle digging in that case file. He will bring
to Susan, because Dale always contended that the guy who had her underpants
was the guy who killed her. Bellamy quest will end when Susan’s undoes
were found, but Bellamy is quest cause so much impact to Dent, Olivia,
Based on D.04, D.05, D.06, D.07, D.08, and D.09, the writer can
conclude rising action of murder revelation when Bellamy Lyston price had
been written a book that underscored every doubt Dale had ever entertained
about what had happened in the woods that day just before the history
tornado. Bellamy Lyston as the main character of this novel for eighteen years
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she tried to bridge that gap, but that span of time is blocked out in his
memory.
e. Climax
In this research, climax can be seen in D.10 and D.11, the climax is
the most exciting point and the turning point of the story. This is the part of
the story that makes reader want to know what is going to happen next and all
glass from the frame, and then ran her fingertips across the photograph itself.
She looked carefully at each family member individually, trying to figure out
what was bothering about the picture. Lighting flashed. She cringed. And for
that instant, she was twelve years old again. In the wooded area of the state
park petrified with fears as she crouched in the underbrush. She needs to take
cover from the weather, but she was too frightened to move.
rushing gasps. Taking the photograph with her, she scrambled around the desk
to the nearest bookcase and dropped to her knees in front of the cabinets
beneath the shelves. Inside was all the research material she’d collected while
writing low pressure. Moving unsteadily, she stacked the bulky folders on the
floor in front of her and began rapidly sorting through them until she found
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the one containing photographs of the tornado and its aftermath. She’d clipped
them from magazine write-ups and newspaper articles, and printed them off
the internet, until she had dozens of pictures that had been taken that fateful
Memorial Day in Austin. But she was searching for one in particular, and her
search was so frantic she flipped through all the photographs twice before she
located it. It had been captioned: prominent family searches for loved ones
had taken the picture within minutes of the tornado. In the background, the
tatters, still in the throes of panic. In the forefront were Howard, Olivia, and
Steven. Howards was clutching Olivia’s hand, his face streaked with tears.
Steven’s arm was raised, his face buried in the crook of his elbow. Olivia’s
expression was stark, vastly different from the smile she’d been wearing in
the photograph taken that morning on the front steps of her home.
Bellamy held the photographs side by side. Yes the contrast between
the different in her blouse. In the photograph taken earlier, it had a bow at the
neck. In the second photo there is not a bow. Bellamy dropped the photograph
and covered her face with her hands as the memory jolted her. Finally she
Next in D.11, “I didn’t plan it. I just reacted with rage. I bent down
and grabbed a broken tree limb that was lying on the ground, and hit her in the
back of the head with all my might. She fell facedown. I untied the bow at my
neck and took it off.” She raised her shoulders in a slight shrug. “It was like
watching someone else. It was remarkably easy. When I realized that was
dead, I insulted her by flipping up her skirt. Bellamy couldn’t believe that
calm and detached manner in which Olivia was relating all this. Olivia
admitted all his actions. Olivia didn’t plan it. She just reacted with rage.
Based on D.10 and D.11, the writer can conclude the climax of murder
revelation is Bellamy held the photographs side by side. Yes the contrast
noticeable was the different in her blouse. In the photograph taken earlier, it
had a bow at the neck. In the second photo there is no a bow. Bellamy
dropped the photograph and covered her face with her hands as the memory
which is jolted her. Finally, she remembered, with the help of these
photograph. And she knew who is the killer. She is Olivia stepmother.
f. Falling action
In this research, Falling Action can be seen in D.12, and D.13, Falling
Action is the actions and events that immediately follow directly after the
climax. At this point in the story, this is where the problems begin to unwind.
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that had happened since Dent had dropped her there. She was already dying. I
thought it must have been a huge relief to her to tell someone about it. During
Bellamy did not know anything but Bellamy was doubts in his life. Finally
eighteen years later, Bellamy had written a book that underscores every doubt
of her. But when Bellamy’s identify was exposed, she become the target of an
unnamed assailant who is out for vengeance. Bellamy also understood why
Steven opposed her book, because he didn’t want anyone to find out, as much
In D.13, I told the police. At this pained expression, she said, they
were reinvestigating the case. I had to tell them. It was only right. The record
about it. But Bellamy tall Steven that, once it becomes known, the backlash
won’t be easy or pleasant for me, we’ve been shackled to this lie for eighteen
Based on D.12, D.13, and D.14, the writer can conclude falling action
of murder revelation which I had to tell them. It was only right. The record
about it. But Bellamy told Steven that, once it becomes known, the backlash
won’t be easy or pleasant for me, either, but we’ve been shackled to this lie
g. Resolution
is which essentially the end of the story. At this point all of the problems that
the characters faced throughout the story are worked out and the story is
concluded.
received Bellamy request and said that he was not afraid anymore because she
had lost her husband, Howard and now, Steven. But a few moments later
Bellamy suddenly realized that, except for her head, Olivia hadn’t moved. Her
face was wet with tears. Her eyes had closed and she didn’t respond. Bellamy
whipped back the covers and although she’d never been a screamer, her
screamer now. Olivia was drenched in blood. Both wrists had been slashed.
Then D.15, I gotten kill them because it was on account of them that
Allen died, he blubbered. Bellamy heard him as one of the arresting officers if
he could have Susan’s panties back. My brother told me to keep them. Ray
the house. It took several officers to restrain him, and all the while he was
hollering about injustice. But he bawled like a baby when his hands were
secured behind him and he was led outside to the waiting squad car.
Based on D.14 and D.15, the writer can conclude resolution of murder
revelation is her eyes had closed and she didn’t respond. Bellamy whipped
back the covers and although she’d never been a screamer, her screamers
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now. Olivia was drenched in blood. Both wrists had been slashed. And Allen
bawled like a baby when his hands were secured behind him and he was led
outside to the waiting squad car. Olivia died and Allen in prison.
From all of data, the writer can conclude that the murder revelation in
this novel is rather difficult because the plot is too complicated using flash
back plot, beside that, it used too many terms of aircraft. In this novel, Sandra
Brown describes too many the aircraft which make the writer very difficult to
due to a flash back to the past. So the search for data on the direct disclosure
Sandra Brown’s novel “Low Pressure” the writer gave some conclusions and
A. Conclusions
After analyzing the data using Freytag theory, the writer concluded the
a. Exposition
Exposition of the story started of Dale and other detective had tried to
question everyone who’d attended the barbecue and had been in the
b. Rising action of the story is when Bellamy began to find who the
killer of Susan.
c. Climax
In the Climax of the story is where conflict began to find the answer.
d. Falling action
When Bellamy straighten out all the problems that have occurred by
notifying the police. Bellamy did not want to shackled a lie for the
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e. Resolution
The resolution in this story is tragic. Olivia died and Allen in prison.
B. Suggestions
Based on the analysis and conclusions before, the writer would like to
1. Plot is the soul of the literary work, so it is important to look at the plot
first when analyzing literary work. For further research, the writer suggests
2. For the readers, the writer suggests that to learn and to know more about
plot, because the plot is not only to analyze a case or conflict. There are
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CURRICULUM VITAE
23th, 1990 in Soppeng. She has two sisters and two brothers.
2003 continued her study in junior high school SMPN 4 Marioriwawo, and graduated
in 2006. Then she continued her study in SMKN 1 Cangadi and graduated in 2009
and then she was accepted as a student in English and Literature Department Faculty
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