E Mail Etiquettes
E Mail Etiquettes
E Mail Etiquettes
Good Subject Line Examples FYI ONLY: Meeting minutes from 3/14 discussion WSR: Joe Smith Operations WW17 ARs Included: Minutes from MRC, all ARs due Friday 4/1 DISTRIBUTE: Program POR updated & related information Bob, Joe: need you at noon meeting Wed w/ your updates AGENDA: Staff meeting Thurs 3/12 10:00 pm Mary: I will attend the WW FTF & present summary. (EOM) Poor Subject Line Examples Weekly Minutes Here are the URLs Re: presentation (blank subject line) Unrelated subject line sending an email with an old subject line that does not relate to this message
In the first 1-3 lines of your email, specify what this email is about. Does it include action required? Does it require a reply back by a certain date? What information is contained that the reader will find necessary for their job? Use the To: and Cc: addresses appropriately
Recommended Standards
Recommended Subject Line Tags: URG - Stop everything, read me first HOT - Need immediate attention RSP - Need you to respond, either way MTG - New/modified meetings FWD - Forward to your respective group(s) HLP - Need information,assistance with a problem FYI - Just for your information ACT - Needs action Rules: 1. No outlook templates or pretty stationary" when sending/replying messages 2. Reply to sender only. Only "Reply to All" when absolutely necessary 3. PowerPoint Files: Zip all attachments. Large files; use shared server or websites 4. When possible, short messages should be written in the subject line, with the EOM tag 5. No discussions in email. When people start "talking" in email, please stop 6. Carbon Copy your manager if you really need to 7. Do not use UPPER case alphabets unless using it as a title. This gives a negative connotation (looks like you are yelling those words)
No subject line
Put yourself in their shoes. Try to picture the daily routine of the people you're contacting and reflect that in your writing: "I know you're busy, so I'll get right to the point." Watch out for a "knowledge gap." Don't assume recipients have the same knowledge about your product or service you do. After you've captured their interest and have reached the "additional information" stage, try offering a step-by-step walkthrough of whatever you're marketing to help them understand what you're trying to say. Write business e-mails as letters, not as ads. In the B2B world, a forthright communication in letter format is much more effective than an e-mail that looks and smells like an ad. Take your time. As you would with B2C (and any other communication, for that matter), let your B2B e-mail message sit for a day or two after you complete it. Show it to colleagues and other business people, and get their opinions. In almost every case, the passage of time and other people's input will help you improve your messaging and writing. Remember your e-mail is likely to be passed around. Because it's so easy for e-mail to be forwarded, assume your message will be sent to others if the initial recipient has any interest. You may want to include links to information that is relevant to others, including technical details, operations info, and financial data.
Mimic your verbal presentation. Although a lot of what you say in person may not be necessary or appropriate for an initial e-mail, you should still consider how you verbally present your product or service, whether by phone or in person. Think about what points you stress (those could be underlined or bolded in your e-mail) and the words you use (stick with verbal explanations that people understand). Check your signature block. Make sure it's complete: your full name, title, company, address, phones, pager, fax, e-mail, and Web site links. Give the recipient a choice of how to contact you for more information. Carefully choose when you actually send the mail. Most business people spend Monday mornings catching up on the e-mail, postal mail, and phone calls that have piled up since the previous Friday. You don't want your e-mail mixed in with dozens or even hundreds of communications that are being reviewed by recipients. Prepare your subject line carefully. After the sender address, the subject line is the first thing B2B e-mail recipients will look at. It's akin to what you might say on the phone in the first 5 to 10 seconds. The subject line should directly relate to the primary benefit your product or service offers. Use graphics wisely. Business people are interested in benefits, details, other customers, and so forth. Unless graphics enhance your message in a meaningful way, don't use them.
Make sure links within your e-mail display and work properly. When you list "for more information" links, make sure they are clickable so the recipient does not have to cut and paste. Also make sure they go to the exact page you want and this landing page is up to date and provides the information you want them to have. Sending people to your home page and leaving to them to figure out where to go is not a good idea. Be wary about sending attachments. Most of the time, you don't know what software the recipient has or what filter settings are enabled. Sending PDFs, Word documents, or Excel spreadsheets may not be a good idea, since you don't know if the recipient can read -- or even receive -- what you send. A better idea: links to Web pages where the information contained in the attachments is displayed. Test. Just as you do with any consumer e-mail campaign, test subject lines and message copy. Testing is no less critical with B2B e-mails. Be complete. Most B2B e-mail recipients will form some sort of preliminary conclusion about your product or service before they respond to your e-mail. They'll determine for themselves whether your e-mail helps meet their needs. That's why providing details and complete information is important -- to give recipients the details they need to make the decision to call you or act on your offer. Don't look like everyone else. Spend some time reviewing B2B e-mails you get to see what others are doing. Get on the e-mail lists of your competitors so you can see how they communicate. Analyse them all and find ways to differentiate yourself from the pack.
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From: XYZ Sent: Monday, January 08, 2001 5:46 PM To: ABC Subject: Information Dear Sir, With reference to the below mentioned mail, I would like to mention here that the required action was taken long back and hence there was no need to escalate the issue to a higher level. With reference to the below mentioned mail, the issue to a higher level.
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From: XYZ Sent: Monday, January 08, 2001 5:46 PM To: ABC Subject: Information Dear Sir, With reference to the below mentioned mail, I would like to mention here that the required action was taken long back and hence there was no need to escalate the issue to a higher level. With reference to the below mentioned mail, I would like to mention here that the required action was taken long back and hence there was no need to escalate the issue to a higher level With reference to the below mentioned mail, I would like to mention here that the required action was taken long back and hence there was no need to escalate the issue to a higher level With reference to the below mentioned mail, I would like to mention here that the required action was taken long back and hence there was no need to escalate the issue to a higher level With reference to the below mentioned mail, I would like to mention here that the required action was taken long back and hence there was no need to escalate the issue to a higher level With reference to the below mentioned mail, I would like to mention here that the required action was taken long back and hence there was no need to escalate the issue to a higher level With reference to the below mentioned mail. Regards, XYZ
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