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All the people are fake,

@barelytoxic / barelytoxic.tumblr.com

They're made out of metal.
he/him🕷️ 2010s sideblog: obscuremelodies

- Intro to me/my account .*

General:

pronouns; he/him

sexuality; gay

age range; minor.

current read; crooked kingdom - Leigh Bardugo

interests; bones, typewriters, zombies, tim burton movies, 80s goth

fandoms; creepypasta, wednesday, young royals, 5sos, 1d

inspirations; hozier, luke hemmings, jeff buckley, peter murphy, & edgar allan poe

fun facts:

  • im autistic, thus i have a strange speech pattern, so my 'poems' may not make sense aside from in my own voice. It also means i really struggle with telling tone (ironic as a writer, i know.)
  • ive enjoyed writing since i learned how, and never really stopped.
  • idk how to write straight couples as ive never experienced it, so I do it very rarely.
  • i really like "The tell tale heart"; i think it solidified my want to pursue writing as a career.
  • i lovee jeff buckley
  • i own a remginton 2 typewriter, though it doesnt work yet..

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information on my writing (+masterlists) below the cut.

nothing more humiliating than misusing a word because i was remembering its etymological origin and not its contemporary meaning. like damn i guess this would've been really useful 700 years ago.

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writing tip #3781:

"i use ai to proofread!" shut the fuck up how about you use A EYE to look at it YOURSELF

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Full offense but your writing style is for you and nobody else. Use the words you want to use; play with language, experiment, use said, use adverbs, use “unrealistic” writing patterns, slap words you don’t even know are words on the page. Language is a sandbox and you, as the author, are at liberty to shape it however you wish. Build castles. Build a hovel. Build a mountain on a mountain or make a tiny cottage on a hill. Whatever it is you want to do. Write.

Your voice is what makes your writing kickass. Do not do not do not strive to make it sound like everyone else’s.

This! So so so much this!

But especially this:

use said, use adverbs

I don’t know who is out there telling y'all not to do these things but they should be taken out behind the woodshed and shot. I heard the same dumb advice when I was young and it pains me to see it still going around.

Only you can write like you. There’s no shame in copying or parodying while trying to find your style; we all do it. It’s like trying on a new outfit. But you don’t wear the same outfit as the mannequin at the store, you assemble your own outfit. If you’re really gung-ho, you tailor your clothes to be flattering to specifically you. Apply the same principle to your writing.

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If you read the fic, leave the kudos. Leave a comment too, if possible. Just do it. It takes a few seconds of your time and it means the world to the writer.

Sincerely, me who just got told that my writing feels like watching a blockbuster movie. I don't care if they were sincere or not, I'll be thinking about that comment for the rest of my life and every time I feel bad about my art, I'll remember that someone once liked it.

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specific tropes in romance that always heal something in me that it never broke

  1. like, forehead kisses, soft love confessions, peppering kisses all over the lover's face. promises that are kept, hands those are held with a gentle love, and hugs that engulf the heart too.
  2. or when they rest their head on your chest, or lean on you for support.
  3. "your tears kill me," kinda thing. or when a sunshine character finally cries and bawls their entire life's hurt out into their comfort grumpy character (plus point, if the grump feels guilty thinking if they had done something to trigger this emotional outburst)
  4. communication. no matter hard the topic is, how big your differences are.
  5. listening to the other person yap
  6. admiring their facial features and seeing not just the outer structure but the person that they really are.
  7. them getting angry on ur behalf
  8. cradling each other in hugs basically
  9. feeling emotional walls break when you're with that one person particularly
  10. gentle communication. yearning to do more for your lover (!!!!)
  11. affectionate smiles and eyes crinkling with a smile that's directed specially at you.
  12. finding their laugh contagious.
  13. the feeling of being accepted, despite flaws and all
  14. silent domestic acts like being in the kitchen together, dressing up together, them drying ur hair while u sit between their legs
  15. occasionally stolen kisses
  16. or one deep kiss that just lights your world and fulfills your soul and heart.
  17. sleepily nuzzling into each other!!
  18. reaching for each other despite being asleep, with mumbled endearments and whispers of need!!!
  19. laughter coming easily by their side, like happiness is just another day to day thing (this can also be about self love. when u truly love urself and prioritize your own rights and cherish the fact that you're you. happiness becomes beautiful even in solitude)
  20. their fingers buried deep in yo- OOPS.?! :)
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hey if you're the type of writer that's like me where you tend to write specific scenes first that vaguely weave together into a plot, you might like using obsidian as a writing app.

my frustration with other writing applications is that i will write my scenes out of order and it's hard to move things around and rearrange them on a regular document.

but with obsidian there's this canvas feature where you can just write all your scenes and plot moments on these little cards that you can freely rearrange. you can color code them and connect them too.

here's the canvas i've created for my current multi-chapter fic: (if you zoom in you can see all the text in each card this what it looks like zoomed out)

as you can see, i color code them based off chapters and will group them next to a document card with the working title of the chapter. anything not color-coded are scenes that don't have a proper place quite yet or it's just world building references. this app can also be good for note-taking and collecting research!

best of all, it's FREE!!! the only downside is that if you want your stuff to sync across devices, you do have to pay for that. i constantly hop between my laptop and desktop so i pay for the syncing. but if you write on only one device it's completely free! EDIT: some reblogs have mentioned that you can apparently link your own personal cloud storage (dropbox, gdrive, icloud, etc.) to obsidian for free! that way you can access your obsidian vaults across multiple devices without the extra fee. i don't mind supporting the devs but just something to look into if costs is a concern.

i typically use it for organizing my thoughts for a first draft. once i get all the scenes arranged and mostly written out, i will copy and paste them into ellipsus (also free & highly recommended as a google doc alternative) so that they're all in one document that i can edit.

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