How much to me does AFOβs writing not make sense?
This was created due to an ask I received which is basically the title of the post. Originally I just meant to answer the ask but as this got too long I decided to make a post just for it. I hope itβs okay.
It feels bad to say so but the problem with AFO (and Yoichi) is that their writing mostly doesnβt make sense, it feels as if the author continues ask for suspension of disbelief, retcon himself or tell us things he doesnβt show in the story. All this for the purpose of a plot that wasnβt planned in advance but that he just seems to improvise and to create supposedly saint/martyr Yoichi and an evil monster AFO that heβll pointlessly destroy at the last minute to claim heβs not a monster but a lonely man.
In case someone missed the hint this is going to be a very critical post, so if you donβt feel like reading further the back button is your best friend.
Now... Iβll list all that doesnβt work for me.