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a writer, perchance

@space-writes / space-writes.tumblr.com

a.l. thorne, they/he, writer of queer fantasy and erotica, both fanfic and original-flavour. follows from @thespacelizard. tag & ask game friendly! this blog mostly runs on a queue. (banner art by @rukafais)

hello (again) writeblr! i decided to make a new intro that has all my current wips on it, since i have way more than when i first started out on here.

about me

  • I go by Space, my pronouns are they/he, and I’m in my third decade of existence, which is absolutely wild. I’ve been writing for most of it, so I like to think I’m pretty decent
  • I write mostly fantasy and erotica (sometimes at the same time), both original and fanfiction, and all of it's queer
  • You can find my work on my AO3 here, crossposted to my neocities here, and under my snippets tag
  • I’m open to tag and ask games, and my inbox is currently open to anything as well. I don’t always reply the fastest, but I’ll get to it eventually! (I don’t take part in chain asks, so please don’t send me them)
  • I use obsidian.md for all my writing, and it’s my favourite notes app ever, so I also talk about that occasionally. The tag for it is here, and I’m hoping to write some more showcases/tutorials this year!
  • my main goal is to actually finish some damn books and also to inflict my OC brainrot upon people. so far the second one is the only thing that’s actually happened, but i live in hope
  • My current wips are Chronicles of Valloroth (Renegade Prince being book one), Obedience, Obsession, and claws—summaries and links for all four are under the cut!
  • this is my writing sideblog, you can find my main @thespacelizard, and i follow/like from there
  • tag directory is here

Chapter Eighteen

In which there is an ending.

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Emmyr didn’t have a shop as such. They worked instead out of the back room of the narrow, four-storey town house they shared with the rest of clan Lightfist, squeezed between two shorter residences at the north edge of the Trades Ward. Said clan was a loose collection of dwarves and halflings, all of whom frequented Kelran’s House—many having done so for nearly as long as Rizeth—and most of which plied a similar trade to Emmyr. Three of the clan, shirtless for the heat, were presently sprawled on the floor of the living area adjoining Emmyr’s workshop, engaged in a lively debate about the various merits of wyvern leather. Rizeth tuned them out.

“Alys sent her deepest apologies along with it,” Emmyr said, handing him the bit gag. “Shouldn’t be any problems with this one, not with one of my boys helping out.”

Rizeth cast two divinations this time, examining every last thread of magic set into the bar. He could find nothing wrong, but then he’d found nothing wrong the first time and look how that had turned out. Still, one did not look a gift gag in the mouth.

“She’ll get there,” Emmyr said quietly. “Give her time. She’s got big shoes to fill.”

Rizeth dropped the gag into his bag of holding. “You may send her my thanks.”

“Will do. Need anything else whilst you’re here? A leash and a paddle do not a full collection make.”

It was tempting. But he didn’t need a new collar, or new manacles, and Emmyr’s other main trade was in floggers, which Rizeth was not inclined to touch. The half-finished cat-o’-nine-tails on the workbench was a thing of beauty to be certain, but too many priestesses had wielded weapons too similar for it to appear anything other than an instrument of real torture to him.

“Another time,” he said. Emmyr shrugged.

“You know where I am.”

The sun was almost intolerably bright as it neared its zenith. Rizeth kept to the shade where he could on his way to the market; fruit, he wanted to get—strawberries were in season now, and he wanted Ashenivir to try them—and they were almost out of the ginger tea Ashenivir liked; and they needed eggs, and bread, and soap, and Goddess, he missed this already. Tomorrow was Midsummer. Almost a year gone from Mythen Thaelas, and that meant it was time to stop pretending and start making arrangements to go home.

He didn’t bother to haggle for the tea. Home didn’t make him think of Mythen Thaelas any longer. Home was the apartment, with his abandoned notes and Ashenivir’s mess of books. Home was a leash in the entryway and manacles on the bedframe, his cufflinks and Ashenivir’s hair ties on the nightstand; it was tangled sheets and sunlight glinting on the links of a collar, the mark beneath his hand and Ashenivir on his knees with hungry eyes and an eager smile.

Mythen Thaelas without him would never be home at all.

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find the word

tagged by @chauceryfairytales, thank you! my words are letter, sunrise, return and close. These are all from The Perils of Wanting

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letter

He’d known what the letter was the moment he’d seen the envelope on the doormat that morning. He’d tossed it atop the pile of half-abandoned notes and books—which had spread from the table to the kitchen counter and showed no sign of slowing its march of expansion—with full intention of ignoring it. Kelran’s non-House parties were elaborate, tedious, and full of exactly the sort of people Rizeth spent as much effort as possible avoiding. He had no desire whatsoever to subject himself to an evening of pointless small talk and mediocre wine.

sunrise

Ashenivir made no reply. Rizeth glanced down—he was asleep. He smoothed Ashenivir’s hair back from his face and tried not to dwell on how impossibly good it was to have him lying here like this. He knew he should move, put him to bed and leave him to rest. I’ll just sit a few more minutes. In case he wakes up again. He stayed there until sunrise.

return

“No. No! I’m fine, I promise I’m fine.” He was lying, and they both knew it. No blood on him, no bruises, the mark still shrieking with distress but no pain, nothing to suggest anyone had touched him at all. No-one to blame, but clearly something had happened. Rizeth’s hand slid to his cheek, and he leaned into the touch, a flicker of relief finally slipping through the mark. His breath stuttered against Rizeth’s wrist. “Alright,” Rizeth said. “Have you eaten yet?” Ashenivir shook his head. “Would you like to come with me to get something, or shall we return to the apartment?” “I want to go home, please,” Ashenivir whispered, and it took Rizeth a moment to realise what he’d said. When it hit him, the street turned momentarily upside down. “Very well, xi’hum,” he said softly. “Home it is.”

close

His other hand curved over the back of Ashenivir’s neck, and the mark seemed to thrum beneath his touch, calling to its maker. Ashenivir moaned into his mouth, rocking against him. Rizeth bit his lip. “I told you to behave.” Ashenivir bit him back. “Make me.” Rizeth knew exactly what he was doing and let him, because it was Ashenivir and what other choice did he have? He pulled him close and put his mouth to his neck, over his racing pulse. Wet skin, hot beneath his tongue, and this impossible boy grinding atop him, apparently in a disobedient mood today, and he would punish him later; right now Rizeth wanted and damn it, he was going to have

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no-pressure tagging @winterandwords @charlesjosephwrites @cwritesfiction and @the-inkwell-variable with the words bright, echo, night, and done.

Anonymous asked:

Advice for writing smut???

gonna do bullet-points of things i tend to live by when it comes to smut (this is just my opinion):

  • don't switch styles: the way you write the smut has to be consistent with the way you write the rest of the story, so if your story is more comedic or romcom-y in nature, the way you write the smut should have those stylings. i personally find it very jarring when authors decide to break the format for the smut, almost like the story has to stop for the sex intermission; if you're writing a horror story, the smut must be informed and influenced by that genre, and if you are breaking genre for the smut portion, tell us why you're suddenly switching gears (it has to be an aesthetic choice you're making on purpose). likewise, if your style in that story is more lyrical, the smut has to be somewhat lyrical too, or if your story is more cormac mccarthy-esque-cut-and-dry, the smut can't suddenly involve an effluvia of purple, sappy prose. integrating the smut in the story and treating it like any other part of the story is key to me. too often i've seen ppl switch to this anonymous pornified style when they get to the smut
  • which brings me to specificity. i'll talk about het sex, since that's what i tend to write most: not all men are going to be fingering or eating pussy the same way, not all dicks are big and they shouldn't be, not all women immediately get excited by fingering, not everyone moans the same way or makes the same sounds. you're writing about particular characters so it has to be particular to them. i know this is very old advice, but i think it bears repeating
  • there isn't an exact formula or sequence you have to follow, there aren't precise steps, you don't have to go "well, first he has to kiss down her neck, then reach the boob area, then play with the nipples, then put the nipple in his mouth, then slowly go down on her, then prepare her for entering her etc. etc. etc." this can get boring and repetitive and you start thinking of your characters as these mechanical dolls who have to fuck for your audience. and that can be a vibe too, if you do it on purpose. but sometimes you can get stuck in a porn routine (and ofc, having only the guy show initiative can also get boring)
  • in order to break that, insert some character moments. what are the characters thinking during this? sometimes they might be thinking of something completely unrelated on the surface, but which has a thematic relevance that can make the scene hotter. likewise, maybe they're doing smth that seems unsexy on the surface, but which, within the context of the story might be really hot. sex doesn't just involve, well, sex, but so much weirdness and humanity and creativity. two bodies (usually) are trying to do this really awkward thing together and they might have a lot of baggage and history to inform it. there's a lot you can do with that.
  • don't make it glossy and clean, where everyone smells of strawberry shampoo and there is never anything out of sync. the most boring smut tends to be the kind where no one makes any mistakes and everything is super efficient. i imagine it feels like using an industrial pump to milk various farm animals.
  • and you know what? you can make that hot too. you CAN write a kind of robotic efficient smut and make it really interesting based on the context. let's say you're writing a 1984 AU fic where ppl are forced into intimacy only to procreate and their sex drive is diminished. you can play with that premise and lean into the dehumanizing industrialization of sex, but you have to mean it, aka your narratorial voice must be conscious of these factors.
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Tag: 9 Lines 9 People VII

I was tagged by @winterandwords! Thank you!

Have something from a very old concept I'm playing around with again, currently called GAPS WIP:

“Are any of your sisters engaged?” Elia asked. She knew they weren’t, at least not officially, but there had been engagement rumours about all three of his sisters at various points over the past several years. “No, though not due to a lack of trying on the part of my parents and various officials,” Hugh replied. She looked at him curiously.  “Cath is too focused on her studies to meet suitors, Mags refuses to come home from her travels if there’s a suitor waiting to meet her, and Beth…” He trailed off with a smile. “Beth is just too stubborn.” Too stubborn? What did that mean? “At first they tried to introduce her to men, and she wasn’t interested. She actually challenged one to combat and beat him so badly that he rescinded his offer out of shame before she had a chance to turn him down. And then they gave up on men and started introducing her to appropriate women, and that’s when she decided she would only marry for love,” he said.

Elia is speaking to her fiance one-on-one for the first time ever. His family is not like hers at all. Also she hates meeting new people. It's... not a good time, though Hugh is trying to be charming enough for both of them.

I tag @keen2meecha, @corishadowfang, @space-writes, and anyone else who wants to play! As always, no pressure!

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Day 4: Unrequited Love

4: Least favourite trope to write?

Enemies to lovers. Admittedly I've never actually tried it, but it makes so little sense to me that I cannot see myself ever bothering. Way too much sexual attraction in there. My ace ass cannot comprehend even reading it. The seemingly controversial less extreme versions, like rivals to lovers, make much more sense to me, and they're okay. But mortal enemies to lovers loses me

Unrequited Love

WIP: Steampunk Dragons Wordcount: 198 (I have more of this one but could not wrangle it into an ending so let me know if it's grabbed you <3)

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WIP Acrostic tag

Thanks for the ancient tag @duckingwriting! Today is my first emptier day in a LONG while, I'm so excited I plan to eat and catch up on laundry and house chores and maybe just maybe write something :) I'll hunt in Invisible Girl for this one today.

Rules: given a word, find a sentence in your WIP that starts with each letter

REALITY

R. “Right after sunup,” Crowley assured him. “And then I’ll get my pay?”

E. “Excuse me,” Paris said from behind her, nodding at the doorman, who cautiously opened the door for him.

A. “Aww, you’re too kind.” Antonio tilted his head and stuck out his tongue; Velia jumped back into the wall. “But please stop worrying over me. I promise you; I’ll see the marker. Now, it’s almost time. Where is Fynn?”

L. Like usual, her words were clumsy, ineffective. “I thought—”

I. “It’s a half-plan,” [Paris] warned, starting off down the hall away from the bright conservatory lights. “But what we can’t think up now, we’ll improvise on the way. God, I sound like Antonio, don’t I.”

T. There would be no identifying Crowley from a crowd of strangers, and there would likely be little to no conversation to listen in on. Other than dangling Antonio as bait again – a scenario Velia would prefer to avoid – there was nothing to do until the morning.

Y. “Yes,” Paris said solemnly. “I’m the angel Gabriel. This here, well, this is God.”

Tags for anyone!!! 🎉 And also to the lovelies @reneesbooks @sleepyowlwrites @sleepy-night-child @eccaiia @charlesjosephwrites @space-writes and @chauceryfairytales <3 Your word is WEALTH.

almost at the end of this revision plan and the good news is the ending is not actually as broken as i suspected

the bad news is that chapters 11 through 15 are the actual problem, which is more than the two that comprise the ending

the surprising news is that i think i know how to fix it already. it just requires a chunk of rewriting.

heads up seven up / writing share tag 🎸

Thank you for the tag @elkieselkiewrites! I stole the guitar too heheh. Here we have about 7 lines from Goose Prince :3 (I had such a hard time figuring out how to count the 7 lines)

She sighed and rolled her eyes. "No, not yet. Apparently a couple of the apprentices knocked it over when it was being forged and they have to start over. Not entirely a bad thing, mind you. I had some new ideas for the patterns I want after studying the culture of warrior women over in Jaquir, and this gives me a chance to make some changes. Still, the helm won't likely be finished until the end of the Mage's Final Festival." "I'm sorry, Kiki, I know you wanted it all finished by then," Tavar said with a little nod. "You still look wonderful, though. Have you sorted out where all of your knives go?"

A demure tag for

and an open tag too of course

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🫣 for the writer asks! (--@space-writes)

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What scenes are most difficult for you to write?

Action scenes of any kind can be a struggle because I lack the ability to visual, so it sometimes takes me extra time and effort to get all the things in the right order and place and confirm that it all makes logical and practical sense

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visualisation difficulty solidarity! and in the tags re fight & sex scenes also being hard; i feel you on that, getting all the pieces of a person in the right place can be a challenge at times

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tagged by @reneesbooks, thank you! since next friday i’ll be posting the last chapter of The Perils of Wanting, what better for this friday than a sneak peak snippet from there?

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Home didn’t make him think of Mythen Thaelas any longer. Home was the apartment, with his abandoned notes and Ashenivir’s mess of books. Home was a leash in the entryway and manacles on the bedframe, his cufflinks and Ashenivir’s hair ties on the nightstand; it was tangled sheets and sunlight glinting on the links of a collar, the mark beneath his hand and Ashenivir on his knees with hungry eyes and an eager smile. Mythen Thaelas without him would never be home at all.

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I've said this ten thousand times in the past but, when it comes to planning/writing a novel, DON'T TRUST YOUR MEMORY.

Got a cool idea? ✍️ Write it down!

Thought of a cool line of dialogue? ✍️ Write it down!!

Came up with a twist for book 3? ✍️ WRITE. IT. DOWN.

Here's your evening reminder to carry a notebook with you at all times~ 📓✨

find the word

tagged by @writingrosesonneptune, thank you! my words are reach, turn, held, and crack. since the final chapter (!!) comes out tomorrow, these are all from The Perils of Wanting.

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reach

Rizeth glanced to where the wagons and all their occupants sat and talked and laughed and ate, and Ashenivir wanted them gone, all gone. Why did it matter if anyone saw them simply touching? He started to reach out, but his hand stuttered to a stop before it reached Rizeth’s arm, fingers curling uselessly into his palm.

turn

The light domestic clatter behind him was bitterly wonderful; the warm scent of ginger mixed with the faint sound of Ashenivir humming idly under his breath made his heart turn over in his chest, and if he closed his eyes he could pretend, for a moment, that this was real. That Ashenivir would bring him tea with a light touch to his shoulder, kiss him without either of them asking for it. Be as much his in this quiet moment as he was in any scene. It wasn’t going to happen. He opened his eyes and focused on the runic deviations in front of him without really seeing them. If Ashenivir was going to find domestic bliss with anyone, it wouldn’t be him.

held

“You could get him what I got Cain for his last birthday,” River suggested. “Would he wear cuffs like that?” Ashenivir thought of the metal bands that always adorned Cain’s wrists, and transposed them to Rizeth’s. Silver to match his collar, glinting in the candlelight of the bedroom as the hands that wore them held him down and— He cleared his throat. “I think so.”

crack

The storm seemed fixed in place, refusing to budge from above the inn. Every sky-rending crack of thunder rattled the room, every lightning strike illuminating Ashenivir’s fear in awful, flat brightness. His fingers dug painfully into Rizeth’s leg—his turn to leave bruises tonight, apparently.

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