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I think a slightly drunk Emmrich would be very... honest?
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I am not taking a risk
Not risking it pals
U know what I want potato of luck
Damn right I’m reblogging. See previous post re wrath of whatever from high atop the thing.
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Lucanis and Long share a shy, tender kiss. Then Spite comes out and decides to devour his man.
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"get a job" "unemployed behaviour" okay but like. girl your ableism
also having a job doesnt make you a better person and employment is not inherently good
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pwetty Lasombra girlie Amare comm for @swoomoo! 🦇
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Hey I need some help. I notice when I look at what I write, I tend to use the same things to start off sentences or say "I then" before going into the sentence. What is a good way to start off something if its in first person? Hope it makes sense.
If you find yourself stuck in the “I did this. I went there. I then…” loop, you’re not alone. First-person can feel limiting at times because everything filters through you. But here's the good news: there's a simple way out.
Vary Your Sentence Structure
Instead of always leading with “I,” shift the focus:
Action first: The cold wind hit me before I even stepped outside.
Emotion first: Nervous, I double-checked the text before sending it.
Setting first: The kitchen was silent. I stepped in like an intruder.
Dialogue/Thoughts: “This is stupid,” I muttered, knowing I’d still go through with it.
Cut Fillers Like “Then”
You often don’t need “then” at all. Try tightening it:
I stood up, grabbed my bag, and walked out. vs. I stood up. Then I grabbed my bag. Then I walked out.
Use Internal Reactions
Instead of narrating every action, show your MC’s thoughts, feelings, or instincts:
My stomach twisted. Something about her smile was wrong.
I didn’t move. Couldn’t. Every cell in my body screamed at me to run.
Basically: your character doesn’t always have to be the sentence’s subject. Show the world around them, their sensations, their spiraling thoughts—let those take the lead sometimes.
You got this.