Questions about example sentences with, and the definition and usage of "Makd"

Q: Could you correct my English and makd it sound more natural?
I met someone who I admire very much in my marathon team. Her kindness deeply moved my heart. At the point of 20km, she gave her sports drink since had none. She said that was OK to drink all of it. I cried because she was so compassionate. I don't know I would have done the same if I were in her shoes. We all were thirsty. I was filled with her thoughtfulness and love. We broke the barrier of our age and the experience difference. I want to become stronger physically, but also more mentally fit as an athlete. I also want a heart filled with kindness to others, sharing feelings happy and sad, caring, compassion and thoughtfulness. I want to be filled with love and spend my lifetime being compassionate and considerate of others. I'll never forget her kindness and encouragement for me. I could reach at the goal because her compassion and kind supports.