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The Insuppressible Electra Ray: A duology.
A good villain sees themselves as the hero of their own story. THE INSUPPRESSIBLE ELECTRA RAY, a 240K upmarket duology told from four points of view, features a hero dead convinced that she’s the villain.
Electra enjoys a life of infamy from inside a prison cell, where every day of her silence brings a fresh new hot take.
Like, she’s what happens when power is left unchecked. Having magic turns normal people into maniacs; look how she ripped that poor boy’s magic right out, left him cold and dead on the forest floor. People shouldn’t be allowed to have that kind of power and she’s the perfect example. A cautionary tale.
Wait. Maybe it’s the opposite.
Surely she knows the war against magic is coming and Peter was too lily-livered to use his power against their enemies, but she isn’t. She’s a soldier. A strategist.
Or maybe she’s nothing but an apex predator. The monster under the bed. Pure, simple evil.
It’s all a bunch of bullshit, and when a fellow prisoner whispers of an arcane artifact lying deep in the caves below Delaney School for Magicians, it sounds like it just might be the perfect time to start making some noise.
Breaking out won’t be easy; they’ve stuffed her full of enough magic suppressants to kill an ox. But she also happens to be the only magician alive who can burn that garbage off like carbs. Plus, Delaney was Electra’s childhood home, so she knows every inch of the castle; every flickering enclave, nautilus staircase, and ivory-carved constellation in its soaring ceilings.
And before you go mistaking that for nostalgia or anything so saccharine and unproductive, know that she’d raze it to the ground to get that artifact and the power it holds into her unrepentant hands – the power to reshape reality in her own viciously exquisite image.
Because if Electra Ray is anything, she’s the fucking end.
The Insuppressible Electra Ray mixes parallel redemption and corruption arcs, enemies-to-friends slow burns, twisted queer feelings, cinematic magic fights, and unapologetically bombastic dialogue into a steaming cauldron that’s been stirred long enough to form a thick, spicy two-book series, not for the faint of heart.
Peter Silver’s best friend, Simon Bell: A magician who grew up with Peter, just as strong, but a telepath. A genuinely decent guy who never thinks he’s trying hard enough. Cinnamon roll. 🗝
Peter Silver’s sister, Eve Silver: A medium. Can speak to the dead but does everything she can to avoid it. Cares deeply for Peter but if you’re not Peter you wouldn’t know it. Geneticist. Stoic as a marble statue but simmering under the surface. 🔬
Peter Silver’s .. ?? .., Electra Ray. Your worst nightmare. The best night of your life. Fireworks on legs; nice legs. Dumpster queen. 👠
magic // castlecore // women with deep, deep issues // queerness // diverse cast // found family // WHY don’t you hate me? // the chaotic one and the stoic one // roaring fires // snow // genetics // deep interpersonal drama without a sniff of romance // begrudging fondness // telepathy // angst and fluff in damn near equal measure // spirituality // childhood trauma can take many forms // I hate you but I’ll work with you for this very specific purpose and I won’t like it // empathy // dialogue out the wazoo // what the fuck does being a good person look like? // enemies-to-besties // slow-burn everything
- Finished at ~240K and querying!
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