The Insuppressible Electra Ray: A duology.

A good villain sees themselves as the hero of their own story. THE INSUPPRESSIBLE ELECTRA RAY, a 240K upmarket duology told from four points of view, features a hero dead convinced that she’s the villain.

Electra enjoys a life of infamy from inside a prison cell, where every day of her silence brings a fresh new hot take.

Like, she’s what happens when power is left unchecked. Having magic turns normal people into maniacs; look how she ripped that poor boy’s magic right out, left him cold and dead on the forest floor. People shouldn’t be allowed to have that kind of power and she’s the perfect example. A cautionary tale.

Wait. Maybe it’s the opposite.

Surely she knows the war against magic is coming and Peter was too lily-livered to use his power against their enemies, but she isn’t. She’s a soldier. A strategist.

Or maybe she’s nothing but an apex predator. The monster under the bed. Pure, simple evil.

It’s all a bunch of bullshit, and when a fellow prisoner whispers of an arcane artifact lying deep in the caves below Delaney School for Magicians, it sounds like it just might be the perfect time to start making some noise.

Breaking out won’t be easy; they’ve stuffed her full of enough magic suppressants to kill an ox. But she also happens to be the only magician alive who can burn that garbage off like carbs. Plus, Delaney was Electra’s childhood home, so she knows every inch of the castle; every flickering enclave, nautilus staircase, and ivory-carved constellation in its soaring ceilings.

And before you go mistaking that for nostalgia or anything so saccharine and unproductive, know that she’d raze it to the ground to get that artifact and the power it holds into her unrepentant hands – the power to reshape reality in her own viciously exquisite image.

Because if Electra Ray is anything, she’s the fucking end.

The Insuppressible Electra Ray mixes parallel redemption and corruption arcs, enemies-to-friends slow burns, twisted queer feelings, cinematic magic fights, and unapologetically bombastic dialogue into a steaming cauldron that’s been stirred long enough to form a thick, spicy two-book series, not for the faint of heart. 

Peter Silver’s best friend, Simon Bell: A magician who grew up with Peter, just as strong, but a telepath. A genuinely decent guy who never thinks he’s trying hard enough. Cinnamon roll. 🗝

Peter Silver’s sister, Eve Silver: A medium. Can speak to the dead but does everything she can to avoid it. Cares deeply for Peter but if you’re not Peter you wouldn’t know it. Geneticist. Stoic as a marble statue but simmering under the surface. 🔬

Peter Silver’s .. ?? .., Electra Ray. Your worst nightmare. The best night of your life. Fireworks on legs; nice legs. Dumpster queen. 👠

magic // castlecore // women with deep, deep issues // queerness // diverse cast // found family // WHY don’t you hate me? // the chaotic one and the stoic one // roaring fires // snow // genetics // deep interpersonal drama without a sniff of romance // begrudging fondness // telepathy // angst and fluff in damn near equal measure // spirituality // childhood trauma can take many forms // I hate you but I’ll work with you for this very specific purpose and I won’t like it // empathy // dialogue out the wazoo // what the fuck does being a good person look like? // enemies-to-besties // slow-burn everything

  • Finished at ~240K and querying!

Comment to be added or removed :)

✍🏼 Last line tag

Thanks to @thegreatobsesso for the tag!

📝 Share the last line you added to a WIP (or a last chapter line, or the last line you edited, or the last whatever works for you)

I haven't written or edited anything since the last time I did one of these, so here's today's Bluesky microfiction (the tag is #vss365 and the prompt is life)...

There's a quote from a film, something about how #life finds a way. And I want to believe it. I really do. But it's been eighteen weeks and more empty roads than I can count. I woke from a coma to silence like a fucking Hollywood cliché and if this is the apocalypse, I am not impressed.

Tagging @cheerfulmelancholies, @cowboybrunch, @cc-writes-stuff and @diphthongsfordays if you'd like to do it, with an open tag for anyone else who wants to join in 💜

Reblogs, replies etc on my tag posts are always welcome, but if you're doing this tag yourself, please make your own post instead of using mine to start a reblog chain.

holy shit in hell, winter. I don't know how you do it but damn am I impressed. this is just so... ugh. I'm in love with this one. 😍

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tagged by @vacantgodling, thank you! a touch more than nine from the current revisions im doing on A Question of Trust, ft ‘Rizeth Why Are You Already Making Problems For Yourself, You’ve Been Dating Him For Ten Days’

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He could just about make out Ashenivir from here, on the floor amidst a group of laughing, smiling guests, River and Mara to either side of him. His collar glittered in the light of the chandeliers, a sparkling beacon of ownership that now went so much further than the playroom. Everything Rizeth had wanted for so long, sitting right there. Behind his back, his fingers dug into his wrists. Kelran rapped the top of his head with his fan. “What’s wrong?” “Nothing,” Rizeth said, sharpening his glare to ward off another assault. Kelran spun the fan instead, twirling it in somehow accusatory circles. “This is the first relationship you’ve been in for the better part of a century. Your mulish silence and the fact you look as if you might throw up all over my very expensive sandals does not incline me to believe that everything is, in fact, perfectly fine. What have you done?” “Nothing,” Rizeth reiterated, and that was both the truth and the problem.

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i’ve done a bunch of 9/9s lately and i cannot think of anyone i haven’t tagged for it, so if you haven’t done it, consider this an open invitation to share 9 lines with me

KELRAN APPRECIATION SOCIETY

last line tag

tagged by @zmwrites, thank you! continuing with revisions on A Question of Trust, i have these lines for you today, ft the boys being awkward dumbasses. guys, you’ve been hooking up for over half a decade ;;_;;

(in their defence, they've only been together-together for about ten days at this point)

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“Go and recover the rest of your clothes. Then we will speak with Master Fellbranch, and—have you had breakfast yet?” “Not properly.” “Then afterwards we shall acquire some.” Rizeth hesitated—only minutely, but Ashenivir caught it, and almost had time to worry, before he continued; “On the beach, if you are agreeable to such a venture.” “Like a date?” The words came out before he could stop them. Behind him, he was sure he heard Xalin smother a giggle. If Rizeth could see her laughing, he paid it no mind. “Quite so,” he said.

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"if you are agreeable to such a venture" Sometimes I am Rizeth and Rizeth is me 🥰

Making a chain cause why not!? Hdisiwisjs

Put your name/nickname in the Character Headcanon Generator and see what you get!

Erm...so-

@starsinthenigth @mxnaceo @duckp0t + Anyone who wants to do it! (No pressure)

hehe thank you for the taggg

true true true

@falling-rose-petal, @k1-2-ur-heart, @return-to-limbo, @pixo0, @softkiten, @yanmenherakun, @menhera-cutie, @ace-detectiv3, @bl00dn0t3-x3 + everyone who sees this!! /sorry if I double-tagged anyone uwah

I mean I sure am (caffeine💯💯)

okay so like im not sure but i think that this is actually like really accurate but like i wish the color was purple instead of that shade of red because like it doesnt look that good with black for some reason like idk but like i-

Short name version and long version - nothing to see here!!!! xDDD Second one is hearsay! I never got a complain (so far). No comment on the first one... ; P Have fun: @drizzit @writingtoolofdubiousintegrity @chaotic-conundrums and everyone else who wants

Hiiiii thank you for the tag!!!!!

Tagging my frens @missrosiewolf @nabanna @foxboyclit @lesbianbillygibson @bluewolven @immortalarizona and anyone who wants to do this !!!!!!

nah i just blair witch it

why is mine so fucking weird, what does this even mean

open tag 😂

wip wednesday (on friday)

Tagged by @space-writes, Lord of the Slow Burn. ❤️‍🔥

One of these days I'm actually going to finish the part where Octavius get appendicitis, which (spoiler alert) is a mechanism to get Milo and Aster in the same room for the first time, but it has gotten so, so unwieldy!!!

Anyway, here's Octavius coming out of anesthesia.

He does not want to be here - that’s easily fixed. He will get up and leave. He just needs to get these damnable things out of his veins and he'll be right as rain- “Hey, whoa, stop stop stop.” Milo’s grabbing his wrists, stopping him from disconnecting himself from all the tubes. “Let go.” “I don’t think so.” “Red. Red!” “Nice try, but we’re not in a scene. Sorry, but I’m not gonna let you rip out your IVs, now quit it.” “Horrible man,” he complains. At least he’s here. Octavius is glad to not be alone. Plus, he’s cute. “You’re cute,” he says. “You’re loopy. If I let you go, are you gonna behave?” “You behave. You’re a bad, bad boy.” Milo blushes, perfect little pink clouds on his cheeks like one of those strange Japanese cartoons. “Well, maybe so, but don’t talk to me like that in front of the nurses, okay?” Nurses. Doctors. Flimsy sheets, flimsy gown, florescent lights in a stucco ceiling. Hideous. “Hospital’s where people go to die.” “Actually, the hospital’s very much a place people go to stay alive.” “I don’t feel well,” he groans, taking stock of his physical form. Nothing’s like it should be. His guts feel like they're going to spill out. “I feel very, very bad.” Milo’s grinning like something’s funny and that is making him quite cross. “Well, you’re septic,” he says, patting Octavius’s knee under the nubby blanket. “Stay put, I’ll tell them you’re up and talking.”

Tagging @winterandwords, @zmwrites, @pertinax--loculos and @asher-writes if they'd like to share, bonus points if you're a rebel like me and share not on Wednesday 🤪

wip wednesday

tagged by @writingamongther0ses, thank you! i’m finally starting on revisions for A Question of Trust, and i decided to rewrite the opening scene into Ashenivir’s POV, which i am still on the fence about whether i like it or not, but it does exist, so here’s a snippet from it:

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“You like watching me choose things as well. You like seeing me struggle, so you can have the satisfaction of seeing me overcome.” He rose on the balls of his feet, bringing his lips within kissing distance of Rizeth’s. “You like making me work for my rewards.” “You know your Master very well, it seems,” Rizeth murmured. “Of course I do,” Ashenivir said, moth wings uncurling to flutter beneath his sternum as he spoke. “I love him.” What a wonder it was to finally be able to say it. And he had said it, frequently, though he worried he was saying it too much, that it would diminish the meaning of the words. He didn’t think it had so far, though; every time he said it, the way Rizeth’s eyes softened put him right back on that clifftop with the sun sinking below the horizon and the grand, rushing delight of reciprocation. Rizeth drew him into a kiss, and Ashenivir hummed into his mouth, tongue pressing hungrily to his. Reciprocation still tasted incredible.

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rest assured that every single preview I get of this, I am doing grabby hands at the screen 💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙

ashenivir is so fucking cute I could just die. everything about this is 👌 A++++++ can't wait to read 100k words about it

thank you for the tag!!!

last line(s) tag

Thank you for the tag, @asher-writes!

Oh.. hehe.. these are the last lines I edited from The Insuppressible Electra Ray. Enjoy!

Simon 12-years-ago POV

The sex was impersonal, quick, and about as simple as he could hope for. The only time he even felt like he had anything to do with it was when she asked him to say it again.  “Huh?” he asked, having absolutely no idea what the last thing he said might’ve been.  “That it’s only me,” Electra breathed from above him, hair stuck to her forehead in sweaty strands. “That I’m different from everyone else. That I’m special. Say it.”  Oh, that. “It’s only you,” he repeated. He’d have sung a sea shanty if it got her moving again. “You’re special.”  She threw her head back and laughed, thoroughly satisfied. He didn’t ask her to explain, not then and not later, because he didn’t particularly care.

Tagging @winterandwords, @foxboyclit, @pertinax--loculos and @chauceryfairytales if they'd like to share last lines!

my people, are any of you watching Wheel of Time?

if so can we. talk about lanfear. can we talk about lanfear? because they pretty much put every kink I've ever had into a bottle, shook it all and poured her out, and I'm dying over here

heads up seven up

tagged by @zmwrites, thank you! final Perils of Wanting chapter on FRIDAY so here’s some good good lines from the fic so far, ft Classic Rizeth Pining Behaviours (this bit is from Chapter Two)

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He did pick up a few shards of the crystal that proliferated on the cavern ceiling from her—if nothing else, the fact that it continued to glow after it had been harvested made it useful, and he thought perhaps Ashenivir might like it. He realised afterwards that what he’d just done was buy Ashenivir a souvenir, and debated whether throwing himself into the geyser might not be the simplest cure for his idiocy. A long, distracting walk seemed the second-best solution, and one considerably less scalding, so Rizeth went wandering. He spent a good few hours taking in the small town and the svirfneblin ingenuity prevalent throughout. Not a speck of magic in the machines that harnessed the heat of the springs; all of it was pure engineering. Ashenivir would be fascinated, he thought, then winced. So much for a distraction.

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nine lines nine people

tagged be @writingamongther0ses, thank you! another bit from A Question of Trust today - my revision plan is going well so far, i’m actually excited about this book again, yay!

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Kelran’s eyes flicked to Ashenivir, who remembered to drop his gaze respectfully—though not before noting the smug curve of the sun-elf’s painted lips. “Your favourite miscreants are holding court by the punch table,” Kelran said. “Master Velkon’yss, might I suggest you send him to inform them he still lives?” As hints went, it was far from subtle. Ashenivir swallowed a huff as Rizeth unclipped his leash. “Enjoy yourself, Ra’soltha,” he said. “Is that an order, Master?” The corner of Rizeth’s mouth twitched. “Yes.” “Then I shall obey. Good evening, Lord Stillgleam.”

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character voice tag

Tagged by my trope soulmate @space-writes with the line, “I don’t want you.” (I'm taking this to mean disinterest in a romantic overture) 😍

Rules: Rewrite the line of dialogue from the person who tagged you into the voice of your OCs! (You can include a short beat of action to help establish character if you want.) Pass on the tag with a new line of dialogue.

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Octavius: "That'll be a no from me, but don't take it personally. I'm highly selective."

Milo: "Ha. Oh. That's.... wow. Thank you, that's really sweet, but, no. No thank you."

Electra: "Cute." (smirks; eyes rake up and down her admirer's body] "Nah."

[[that's tough tho... if somebody were hitting on her, i.e., paying attention to her, I don't actually see her them down :P]]

Simon: "You know, it's not you. You're incredible. It's me, I wish I could, but I just... I can't. I'm sorry."

Riley: [literally just walks away]

Grace: "No thank you. Do you want to just hang out instead? It's beet harvest time and that's always a big job to do by myself. I could dig the beets and you could hold the sack."

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Tagging @pertinax--loculos, @diphthongsfordays, @avrablake and @revenantlore with the new line... you know, let's get right in there with the angst: "I loved you." :)

HAHA

Oh my god I was just looking at a scene that didn't make the final cut and absolutely cracked up, having no memory of whatsoever of writing this line:

Electra paused a moment and almost looked pained; Riley realized she was probably thinking.

I have to find a new place to put that; making this post so I don't forget. This is tiny glinting nugget of pure gold.

sunday snippet

A bit from the chapter I just polished off; I didn't have to make a ton of changes on this but made some little tweaks that I'm pretty sure slap. :) Enjoy poor Simon going through it.

The Insuppressible Electra Ray // Simon POV

Time forked - he saw all the way down the not-guilty road in a flash. He heard her voice dripping with smugness, saw himself getting dragged through a trial. Felt the weight of the coming weeks, months, years. He saw himself getting up there and being forced to lay his soul bare in front of hundreds of hungry eyes.  It felt as real as anything, and then her actual voice reached his ears.  “Not guilty,” she said.  Not his imagination. The shocked gasps and the gauche, intrusive popping of cameras; Virginia next to him, making a pained whimper, grabbing his hand. His heart stopped.  But what if she really hadn’t-?  “No, no. Wait.” Electra’s voice cut through the clamor. “Oh, geez. I’m sorry, I meant the other one.”  Virginia squeezed his hand. Riley sat stone-still as ever, her gaze fixed on Electra. The judge banged his gavel and called for silence, for Electra to take the proceedings seriously, and to restate her plea for the record while she looked around the room, feigning alarm through thinly veiled delight.  “Guilty, I swear,” she declared, her voice as loud and clear as it’d ever been. “You have to forgive me, your honor, it’s been a tiring couple days. But I totally did it, hundred percent, guilty of murder in the first degree.”  She articulated the last couple words with pride, a confident student center-stage at a spelling bee. Then she saw him, and locked her eyes on his.  He held her gaze, but it wasn't easy. It only lasted a second before she turned back around in her seat to face the judge again, but not before blowing him a little kiss - just a tiny puckering of her lips and a breath behind it to send it through the air.  The air caught fire and his throat clenched shut and what he wanted to was to run from the room and find a place where no one was watching and no could hear him and just scream. At the same time, an unfamiliar voice told him not to give her the satisfaction. It was a new voice, just born, and it hated her. His skin prickled.  “You realize,” the judge grumbled, “that by pleading guilty, you give up your right to trial by a jury of your peers?”  “Yep.”  “You also know that you forfeit your right to cross-examine your accusers?”  “Yes, I do,” she said wistfully, as if that, of all things, was what she regretted the most. He half-expected her to turn around again. If she had, he might have snapped.  She didn’t. It just went on like that, the judge asking her if she understood this and that. The press continued snapping photos behind them, shifting in their seats to get a good angle between everyone’s heads, but Electra - Electra had clearly grown bored. She cocked her head and answered the questions put to her in a monotone after that, and Simon came back down to the room, to the emptiness of it all.  So vacant: Virginia and Riley next to him, Electra up in front, the judge, the guards, the reporters, everything. A movie with a predictable ending on a flat screen, and he was the only idiot in the audience that didn’t see it coming. Who had expected more for some reason and could only sit there slack-jawed as the credits rolled.  Even when they walked her out, she didn’t look his way again. 

snippet!

I was able to power through a lot of third draft editing this morning and managed to reach that state where it felt not just good, but like I was one with the Source channeler and vessel at once, filled with mighty purpose and phenomenal cosmic power. So here's a snippet from a scene where I am very happy with the edits I made, near the beginning of the book.

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The Insuppressible Electra Ray // Simon POV

“The missing kid,” he grappled, facing Ken. “You said a student was missing, what’s their name?” Ken pulled a ledger off the wall - even she couldn’t keep it all inside her head. She flipped through the log of keys and ran her fingers over the braille. “Grace Gallagher.”  It should have felt like a relief - she’d been on her way to train station, so of course she wasn’t in the castle, and yet, her key was. And he’d never met the girl before today but he’d touched her hand twice now, and. And. And wild mood swings weren’t unheard of in twelve-year-old kids and it had been notable, the difference, but he simply had too much on his mind and too much to do to stop and give it any serious thought. He did now, and the first time he’d touched Grace’s hand, she’d had a gentle, diminutive feeling about her, folding herself up contentedly, no wish to be perceived.  The second time, in the flurry of falling papers, a flash of her mind: bursting at the seams, boiling over, screaming to be seen. It had been hot, loud, painful. It bled red and he had almost recognized the sting. And then he’d shaken it off, handed Ken her things, and walked away. He left her there, free to slither way way through the school, to wreak havoc, to take, hurt. Kill. “It’s Electra,” he managed, his voice hollowed out in his certainty. “She’s here.” 

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tagged by @oh-no-another-idea, thank you! nine from A Question of Trust today, since i’m about to shove my hands back into the guts of this thing and fix it so help me god-

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It wasn’t ideal—the beds weren’t the same height, and the heat remained regardless, despite the open window, but it would do for one night. Rizeth lay there in the gathering dark as Ashenivir drifted into reverie, listening to his slow, steady breath. Lucky. That was what he kept thinking; how incredibly lucky had he gotten, for this to be his life now? He settled a hand on Ashenivir’s hip, and his heart clenched as Ashenivir shifted unconsciously towards the touch, mumbling some wordless nonsense that nevertheless held a world of affection. Rizeth wanted to tighten his grip. To dig his hands in tight so Ashenivir wouldn’t be able to leave. He’d ruined one relationship, and the idea of ruining another—ruining Ashenivir—terrified him beyond reason. Things right now were good, impossibly so; the kind of good he’d never dreamed he’d be allowed anywhere near ever again

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