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Henry (The Beck Brothers, #1)
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1.5 Noooo no no no!
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I couldn't even get to 30% of the read, it was awful!
The story was from two different POVs, but they were exactly the same (and the guy sounded so damn feminine, it was annoying!).
The writing was bad (and I don't mean just the writing style...). Grammar, tenses (at one point the narrator's voice was in the present, then it changed to past, then back to present)... grammar! Proofread, people!
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And gah, I didn't like the characters. They were so fucking annoying!
I couldn't even try too hard to finish the book.
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I couldn't even get to 30% of the read, it was awful!
The story was from two different POVs, but they were exactly the same (and the guy sounded so damn feminine, it was annoying!).
The writing was bad (and I don't mean just the writing style...). Grammar, tenses (at one point the narrator's voice was in the present, then it changed to past, then back to present)... grammar! Proofread, people!
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And gah, I didn't like the characters. They were so fucking annoying!
I couldn't even try too hard to finish the book.
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Reading Progress
July 30, 2015
– Shelved
July 30, 2015
– Shelved as:
maybe-later
May 8, 2016
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Started Reading
May 9, 2016
– Shelved as:
dnf
May 9, 2016
– Shelved as:
bad-writing
May 9, 2016
– Shelved as:
annoying-chars
May 9, 2016
– Shelved as:
nope
May 9, 2016
– Shelved as:
romance
November 12, 2016
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Finished Reading
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May 08, 2016 10:44PM
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It's awful right now, think I'll DNF it soon lol
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Tnx Arianna, hope so too!
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Tnx Judith. I'm lucky with the one I'm reading now though :D
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Tnx, hun! I've been ok with the last two books or so, they turned out to be pretty decent, lol
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I hope you have better luck next time.
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The one I'm reading is pretty cute so far :D
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I hope you have better luck next time."
Totally agree! I no longer feel bad for DNFing :D