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Medicine and sociology
developing rapidly from one century to the other. This is because it is one of the most critical
sectors in any country. However, due to different societies and cultures all over the world, there
are challenges which still must be addressed so that medicine can improve in future.
Thesis: The medicine sector has performed remarkably well when it comes to the treating of
patience as doctors have intelligence of how to deal with any disease. However, societal
challenges like affordable health care as well as the racial classification are the things that should
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Topic Sentence: Societal difference has result to racial comparison which is a nuisance to the
Illustration: The American Medical Association has acknowledged that there is harm caused by
Explanation: Evidently, ethnicity and race are continuously used as key variables in genetic
studies (Hunt & Megyesi, 2008). As such, due to racism in America, it is easy for patients to be
mistreated due to the racial difference and therefore this should be addressed thoroughly.
Transition: Apart from the racial problem in the health sector, the affordability of the health
care seems to bring a challenge. In this regard, biological knowledge essential for individuals to
understand their world besides enabling them to arrive at informed decisions regarding their
Paragraph 2 Topic Sentence: When it comes to affordability, the rates have become unbearable especially for
Illustration: The graphs show very high rates of payment for the non-elderly who are not
Explanation: The high cost of living might become unbearable in future if it is not regulated.
Also, most of the people in the society do not earn high income which makes it difficult for them
Conclusion: The health sector has improved over the years and it is very impressive. However,
the minimal issues especially in the society level should be addressed before they go out of hand.
However, it has not been established how differentials of socio-economic status in line with
