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  • 04:0204:02, 30 August 2024 diff hist −8 Joseph Brummer The 7th para of the Biography section was hard to understand, the way it was written. I restructured it. Hope I didn't change the meaning. Hard to tell. current

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3 November 2023

  • 10:1910:19, 3 November 2023 diff hist +65 m Peter Farquhar In the Murder section, rewrote a sentence to clarify what was meant by "engaged" (in quotes). Use of quotes suggested that the engagement was false in some way.

26 October 2023

  • 23:2023:20, 26 October 2023 diff hist −266 Roxie Hart (film) Rewrote the Plot Summary section, because it was confusing and not really encyclopedic tone, and fixed a couple of confusing sentences in the intro. No changes in actual content.

22 July 2023

  • 22:3022:30, 22 July 2023 diff hist −45 m The Crime Doctor (1934 film) In Plot section, characters were referred to sometimes by their first name and sometimes by last name. Same character, I mean. This makes it unnecessarily confusing. I standardized to first name (because two characters had same last name).

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  • 23:1423:14, 15 February 2023 diff hist +4 m Fantastic Voyage All male characters were referred to in this article by their last names (after first mention), and the one female character by her first name. Common misogynist error. I fixed it.

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  • 03:3303:33, 19 May 2020 diff hist +106 m Martha Shelley In the Books section, added the 3rd book in her Jezebel trilogy, published in 2019. Added the ISBN for the 2nd book in the trilogy, which was missing.

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4 December 2019

  • 23:5623:56, 4 December 2019 diff hist +2 V. K. Ratliff Since V.K. Ratliff is a character and sometimes narrator of all three of Faulkner's Snopes novels, I changed the redirect to the first of these, _The Hamlet_. Tag: Redirect target changed

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14 September 2019

  • 07:1207:12, 14 September 2019 diff hist −1,704 Jean de Florette Rewrote the entire Plot section because it was far too long and hard to follow. I tightened it up, cut out information unnecessary in a summary, and rewrote for clarity. It's still too long.

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  • 02:5502:55, 11 March 2018 diff hist −34 Monk (TV series) Removed "along with several other phobias" which implicitly describes OCD as a phobia, which it is not, and anyway the phobias are introduced in the very next sentence, so this clause was unnecessary as well.

31 December 2017

8 June 2017

  • 16:2216:22, 8 June 2017 diff hist −1 m Names of God in Judaism Changed "My Lords" to "My Lord". "Adonai" is singular, not plural, and means "My lord," not "My lords." The author was thinking of certain other words for God that are indeed plural.

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9 December 2016

27 November 2016

5 October 2016

  • 00:0400:04, 5 October 2016 diff hist +41 Allerleirauh The synopsis made it sound as though the king she married was her father. I added a sentence saying she went to a different kingdom. Also, "king" should not have initial caps. I fixed that.

3 August 2016

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16 December 2015

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7 August 2015

  • 05:1905:19, 7 August 2015 diff hist +32 m Owyhee River Sacagawea's son was stuck in there under Mining. I inserted a new heading for him to remove that confusion. Also made a couple grammatical edits.

6 August 2015

  • 18:3718:37, 6 August 2015 diff hist −63 m Advance copy Article was full of grammatical, style, and organizational errors that made reading difficult. I fixed them. Am hoping I understood correctly what was meant.

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24 December 2013

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  • 04:0204:02, 20 December 2013 diff hist −4 m G.I. Jane In the Plot section, last para, removed the "Self-pity" link, which was to article abt the psychological phenomenon of self-pity, not to anything abt the poem by that name..

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  • 19:5519:55, 2 March 2013 diff hist −39 m Hosea Removed reference to Isaiah being same generation--later in the article it says Isaiah was a generation later, which seems more accurate.
  • 19:4719:47, 2 March 2013 diff hist −9 m Hosea Removed the words "from God" in 1st intro para. Either makes no sense at all or else says that Talmud is from God, not a neutral POV

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  • 17:2817:28, 30 July 2012 diff hist +38 m Fenugreek In Cuisine section: "Hilbeh" redirects here, but "hilbeh" wasn't mentioned anywhere on this page, just the spellings "hilba" and "helba". I added "hilbeh" & rewrote slightly for clarity...

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