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The Eccentric Raven

@theeccentricraven

Writer, reader, SciFi/Fantasy fan, Celtic fan, opera fan, autistic, foodie, harpist, fan of scambaiting

Introduction

Name: Just call me Raven.

Dream: Become a published novelist.

Hobbies: play the harp, bake, cook, read, sew, go on walks outside, watch YouTube, storytelling

Likes: Opera, Celtic themes, food, true crime stories, history, fantasy and scifi, the coast, faith, family, scambaiting, and great stories

Favorite Books: Harry Potter series, The Giver, Mistborn, Uglies, Frankenstein, The Two Princesses of Bamarre, Jane Eyre, A Walk to Remember, Silas Marner, The Otherworld, The Hunger Games, Ender's Game, The Chronicles of Narnia, Anne Frank: The Diary of a Young Girl, Jacob Have I Loved, Forestborn, Defy the Stars, Tom Sawyer, The House on Mango Street

My WIP's:

The Blood Cleaners (YA dystopia)

Columbus Day (YA scifi)

The Keeper of Maralla (unconventional high fantasy)

The Star House Club (MG/YA urban fantasy)

Brigid Aideen Quinn (sci-fi fantasy superhero)

Sanctuary Calling (Space sci-fi Dystopia)

Voice of Shadows (high fantasy)

The Enchantress (MG fantasy)

New Victoria (steampunk sci-fi)

Greyhat (Cyberpunk)

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1 to 5 Tag

Thank you @ieppiq for the tag

Rules: Follow the prompts for one of your WIPs. You can change them around if you'd like.

I'm doing this for The Blood Cleaners of course.

One word to describe your WIP:

Affliction

Two lines that are your favorite:

“I must be good at making pancakes. Those lils were as flat as them.”

“Do you have sawdust in your ears, lumberjack?”

Three tropes featured:

The Chosen One

Found Family

Love Triangle

Four songs from your WIP/OC playlist:

(I purposely chose songs different from those on this OC/WIP playlist here the entire playlist is here)

Five feelings from/about your characters:

Suffering, self-confidence, love, sorrow, and courage

Writer’s Readathon Bingo 📚✍️📝👩‍💻

Poemathon is not my only readathon going on. I've also created the Writer’s Readathon Bingo, a reading challenge for writers to help writers get down to reading and writing. This challenge lasts for four months, from April to the end of July. The challenge includes writing prompts and reading prompts, as well as a couple self-care activities. You can join the challenge on this Storygraph link.

To complete the challenge, complete at least five boxes in a row in any direction. Since the challenge lasts four months, it will be even better to complete all of the boxes.

Announcement video

Bingo board was created by a Canva template.

Poemathon - Challenge to Read Poetry 📚

This year, I launched my Read More Books by Reading Short books challenge to help me and others go through their TBRs and fulfill their dream of reading 50 - 100 books in one year. I held a March Tic Tac Toe Readathon partly to work towards that goal. I'm happy to announce that for April, I will host Poemathon, a readathon to encourage reading books in verse form. April is National Poetry Month, crrated by the Academy of American Poets. You can join this challenge on Storygraph. The objective is to read at least five books in verse form, such as anthologies of poetry and novels in verse form. The Storygraph page lists books to choose and allows you to add books if you join. Learn more about my TBR and book recs by watching the announcement video.

Books Read in 2024 (and 2025) 📚

Thank you @forthesanityofstorytellers for the tag here 🐦‍⬛

Rules: list 9 books you’ve read and loved in 2024 (and so far in 2025)

Time travel, Historical Fiction, Horror

The first Stephen King novel I read. I can tell why people love him. Although the book is long, the story and characters were fascinating. Teacher Jake Epping finds a portal that brings him back to 1958, which he then uses to go back in time to prevent the JFK assassination. During his journey, he impacts many lives including romancing the librarian Sadie, but will these changes be for the better or for the worse? Will he uncover Lee Harvey Oswald's secrets?

Graphic Novel, Contemporary Fiction, Middle Grade, Cooking

A graphic novel about a 12 year old girl, Cici, who immigrates from Taiwan to the USA. She's an expert on cooking Taiwanese cuisine, as she's learned a lot from her grandmother, who is still in Taiwan. Cici wants her grandma to visit for her 70th birthday. She finds a way when she learns of a cooking contest for youth where the prize money is enough to buy a plane ticket. Cici ends up partnering with Miranda, who carries the family tradition of cooking Italian-American. I really loved the story and beautiful illustrations. I love to cook myself. It's fun if you're a foodie like me!

Nonfiction, Reference

This was one of the most impactful writing craft books that I've read. Jessica Brody bases how to write a novel using Blake Snyder's Save the Cat technique for screenwriting. She previously wrote Save the Cat! Writes a Novel. I especially love this Young Adult version because it's up to date on the latest Young Adult releases. I studied Young Adult literature in college 20 years ago, so I was happy to see how YA fic has evolved over the years. I love the Save the Cat! method because of how it studies the way good movies and good books pull off great story arcs and character arcs. I learned what I was doing wrong and what made my favorite books and movies so great. I recommend this to any new writer.

Nonfiction, Reference

This is the greatest book about the craft of fiction writing. I slowly progressed on this because each chapter ends with a writing exercise, and the exercises involved a lot of creative sweat and blood. But that's what makes it good. Ms. Levine provides some of the best writing advice and provides many opportunities for writers to learn. I consider this a must for aspiring writers.

Dystopia, Scifi, Young Adult, New Adult

As a lover of dystopian fiction, I had to check this out. Set in a future where classes of people are divided by colors, Darrow is a 16 year old Red, the lowest of classes, and a helldiver, one of the men who dig the underground of Mars. When tragedy hits his life, Darrow ends up in a clandestine operation to rise against the highest of the color classes - the Golds. Darrow goes through the process of transforming into a Gold to infiltrate their ranks. It has everything I love about the genre - a the oppressed rising against the oppressors, fascinating future technology, tensity, morally gray characters not without pure evil characters, and raises thought provoking questions. Darrow goes through a lot of suffering, often being at the receiving end of deception. This makes it pay off in the end when he's able to turn the tables. You'll have to read to find out what happens.

Children's Lit, Chapter Book, Fantasy, Humor, Adventure

The Princess in Black series are for ages 6-9 years old, but the child in me digs them. The series tells the stories of Princess Magnolia, a princess by day who dresses in black and becomes a super hero when there's danger. The Prince in Pink is the 10th books in the series and the cutest. Here she meets Prince Valerian, who acts like a prince and knight in shining armor by day, but when a party is ruined, he becomes the prince in pink to save the party. A whimsical, sweet story that is great for new readers and anyone who wants a cute, humorous story.

Historical fiction, Middle Grade, Young Adult

Set in 1968, sisters Delphine, Vonetta, and Fern were raised by their father in Brooklyn under the constant eye of their grandma, until one day when the mother who abandoned them has custody for the summer. The sisters have a difficult time getting along with their mother, but try to get closer to her through her love of poetry. The sisters go to centers run by the Black Panther Party, originally just for breakfast, but become involved in the arts and movement for black civil rights. I love this book! The three sisters are cute, have cute conversations, and have pretty names (and there ends up being significance to Fern's name). The story overall was powerful.

Historical Fiction, Middle Grade, Young Adult

Set in medieval Korea, the story's main character Tree-ear is an adolescent beggar boy who dreams of becoming a potter like Min. When Tree-ear accidentally causes damage, he offers himself to work for Min to pay off the debt. Even after he pays off his debt, Tree-ear offers to keep working for Min in hopes of becoming his apprentice. It's not easy when Min is a difficult person, but Tree-ear is willing to work hard. On the one hand, I didn't like the passive voice. It could have used more editing. However, I love the story and characters. I love a story that portrays how hard work pays off, a value that not enough people know. The Korean setting and overview of celadon pottery was just plain fascinating.

Sci-fi fantasy, Middle Grade, Young Adult, Urban Fantasy

This has been on my TBR so long, glad I finally got down to read it. It feels a lot like my favorite, Harry Potter, with the magical, whimsical tone. The title character Artemis Fowl is a 12 year old genius and criminal mastermind who wants to find his missing father. He does so by kidnapping a fairy, Holly Short, a captain in the LEP recon unit (it turns out, leprechauns are actually recon officers of the fairies, and the fabled pot of gold is actually a ransom fund). I love the mix of magic and modern technology. One thing that did bother me is the head hopping. I wish the POV's were more limited, focusing more on Artemis and Holly's POVs. Nonetheless, I couldn't help but love this book.

Six Song Soundtrack Tag Game 🎼🎵🎶

Thank you @forthesanityofstorytellers for the tag here

Rules: Make a soundtrack for your WIP/OC following the prompts

Blank prompts:

Event that defines your character's past: How your character sees themselves: How others view them: Their closest relationship: A major fight scene: End Credit Scene:

Justin (The Blood Cleaners):

Event that defines your character's past: Ballad of Accounting - Karan Casey 

How your character sees themselves: Swinging on a Star - Bing Crosby

How others view them: You Raise Me Up - Josh Groban

Joselyn (The Blood Cleaners):

Event that defines your character's past: Luka - Suzanne Vega

How your character sees themselves: Mi Reflejo - Christina Aguilera 

How others view them: Girl on Fire - Alicia Keys

Their closest relationship: Flora’s Secret - Enya

End Credit Scene: I Follow the Moon - Malukah

Writing References: Tips & Advice

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OC Kiss/Friday Kiss/Valentine's Day Edition ❤️🩷💕😘💋💘🥰

It's been so long! I've been tagged in so many wonderful tag games, I'm sorry I haven't been able to reply to them. Hopefully this weekend I can reply to some tag games. Since it's Single Awareness Day Valentines Day, I couldn't pass the chance to post a kissing snippet. Thank you @gioia-writes-and-others for the tag!

From The Blood Cleaners

Justin wrapped his arms around her. “You are your own person. You don’t have to live the life that your parents want you to live. Just go and be what you want to be now.” Clarice buried her face in Justin's shoulder. “I wouldn’t know that’s true if it weren’t for you.” Justin couldn’t have felt more like a fraud. “I’m sorry,” he said hoarsely. “I need to go back to work.” “Ok,” Clarice said with disappointment. “I was hoping we could make out because you know, closet.” She grinned. Maybe it was because Justin needed any trace of warmth, hint of passion, and love flowing in his veins. He touched her waist and smooched her lips. She wrapped her arms around him.

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A common misconception I hear people say about "show, don't tell" is that showing lengthens the description, but I find the opposite to be true. "Showing" involves the right word choice that portrays a lot in just a few words, whereas telling takes more words to describe things.

For example:

Telling: After Seth listened to the disturbing song, he said, "I am so traumatized. That song will give me nightmares. It has changed me forever."

Showing: After Seth listened to the disturbing song, he said, "I miss the person that I was three minutes ago."

Readathon 2025 - Read 50-100 Short Books Challenge 🏆📚

Hey Writers and Readers! I hope to make 2025 the year that I read 50 books, possibly even 100 books! I set out to challenge myself to focus on reading short books as a way to make room to read more books. I'm not only going to challenge myself, but open the door to anyone who would like to join in. I set up the Read More Books by Reading Short Books in 2025 Challenge on Storygraph. If you have a Storygraph account, feel free to follow/friend me. When you join the challenge, you can earn badges as you read more books. When you reach milestones, you unlock the privilege to use the applicable badge in this post. I created these badges using Canva templates. I obviously can't physically lock and unlock them so this is based on an honor system - please only use a badge if you have read that number of books in 2025. You are welcome to use the earned badge anywhere! Tumblr, YouTube, Good Reads, IG, you name it! I will change my icon as I earn badges myself 😊I will soon have a video announcement on my YouTube. Thank you and welcome to all who join!

Happy WBW! What, if anything, do your characters wish was different about their world/their society/culture?

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Thank you for the question! In The Blood Cleaners there's a lot! Justin definitely doesn't like the way that Corpa's society is set up where children grow up to work the same occupations as their parents. Initially, he's not valiantly opposed to the rulers, the Fists, though as the story progresses he realizes how they are part of the problem with how they discourage workers from earning more because this would cause "jealousy" and "unrest". He soon wants a society where people are free to be what they want to be and free to get rich. Joselyn is ardently against the Fists, believing that they restrain the freedom of the people. She also doesn't like the culture of how many farmer girls enter abusive relationships to be able to support themselves. She wants girls to be free to control their future. What really riles her is how the blood cleaners are not allowed to marry or have children. She becomes a blood cleaner to be independent and support herself, but she's angry to sacrifice her dream of marrying a good man and having a family. She longs for the day when the blood cleaners aren't bound by this rule. This becomes a major subplot.

Let's just say Corpa's society is ripe for a revolution!

Nine lines, nine people

Rules: Share nine lines from your story and tag nine people.

Mine is from The Blood Cleaners. In Chapter 1 where Justin has a flashback to his childhood, he meets someone who will change his life forever.

The girl had the same medium brown skin, dark eyes, and black hair as Justin, as if she was his twin sister. Justin was surprised to see that she wore the overalls, scarf, straw hat, and plaid shirt of farmers. She appeared to be his age. She lay sprawled and crying on the concrete floor. If he wasn’t in such a hurry, Justin would have asked what the hell she was doing down there. Behind her, she was being chased too. She had it worse. Clad in yellow and black, the uniformed enforcement officers ran toward them. They were getting close.
The 24th Day of Writemas 💚🤍❤️🌟👩‍💻✍️

It is now Christmas Eve! The last day of Writemas is here! Thank you so much @agirlandherquill for making Writemas possible!🫂 It helped me reach my writing goals, be productive, and get creative. I've enjoyed posting snippets of my writing. Thank you to all who have complimented and accepted this gift! 🤗

For the 24th Day of Writemas I chose the prompt "One day, everything we know will be gone. Until that time, you owe it to history to enjoy it." I liked how this and a couple of the dialogue prompts fit in with my YA Dystopias where a character speaks up against the oppressive region. I realized that it was something my Sanctuary Calling OC Luana would say in the scene where she invites Nari to join her cause, especially with the context of how the two enjoyed VR simulations with historic periods. This was a great excuse to write a scene I wanted to write for so long. I hope you all enjoy this girl 🎀🎁

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Luana sits in my tea table chair while I sit in my desk chair. She glances around at the old toys, Korean decor, and plane models. 

She looks at me as she says, "One day, everything we know will be gone. Until that time, you owe it to history to enjoy it."

I rarely hear something like this, if ever. The WC’s media focuses on the immortality of a civilization they believe will last for thousands of years. They describe humanity’s ancestors as fools who defiled Sanctuary’s beauty as a basis for how the WC will foster a greater humanity. 

“Yes,” I agree. “We wouldn’t be here if it weren’t for the hard work and sacrifices of our ancestors. We can’t take life for granted.”

I watch Luana’s face, taking in every detail of her long dark hair, observant dark eyes, floral crown and leis. A feeling tells me there’s something inside her, brewing in her mind. I have no idea. I brush it aside. 

She points at the models of my planes. “Is that why you do what you do? Making the most for our future just as our ancestors did?”

“Of course,” I say. “I mean I love it. From the time my father first taught me. I was really little. And if I can use what I love to create a better life, a better future for humanity, why not?”

Luana nods. “I…I should be honest with you.” Her voice draws melancholy. “I overheard that argument with your parents. I didn’t mean to eavesdrop….”

I sigh. “Oh, it’s fine. I was afraid you heard it. I’m not surprised. Honestly, that’s how it is every night.”

Luana closes her eyes for a second, then opens them. “I take it your parents have a different view of what’s best for the future than you do?”

“Well, yeah,” I say because of how obvious it is. “My parents are biased. They’re from families full of doctors. They believe medicine is superior. They believe I need to save as many lives as my father has to continue the family legacy.”

“I’m sorry,” Luana says softly. “Having to put up with that every night. I can’t imagine.”

I nod. “That's why it’s so important to go to the Lunar School. I’ll finally leave them behind. Do what I want to do.”

Luana tightens her lips. “Will it ever end though? What if five years from now, you’re an aerodynamics engineer and one of the best in the field. Will your parents talk about how proud they are of you? Or will they talk about what could have been?”

I hang my mouth open. I try to process. All that had dreamed the Lunar School would give me seems to drift away. “I never thought about it but…” But yes. For all that I envisioned of going to school, graduating, and designing the flying machines of the future, there’s not a light at the end of the tunnel when my parents are standing where the light should be. I know them well enough to know they will spend the rest of their lives ranting about what could have been, even if I develop the fastest flying land vehicle ever. 

I raise my voice a little. “Why are you saying this?” I almost forget the wonderful day we spent in the simulators with Myeongseong and Liliʻuokalani. I now wonder who this exchange student is who had to come into my life. 

Luana slowly looks around the room.

“Well?” I ask, losing my patience.

“Nari,” Luana says gently. “Are you able to turn off the home AI?”

“Oh, sure,” I say. I’m not supposed to cut Cho off from my bedroom, but my parents won’t notice if it’s only for a few minutes. If we’re going to keep talking about my parents behind their backs, it makes sense. “Jin, turn off Cho’s connection in this room.”

“As you wish!” Jin chirps giddily. 

“Also,” Luana adds, “are you fine with turning off your quant?”

I blink. I’ve never heard that phrase before. I suppose it makes sense for a few minutes if we want a private conversion. “Um, okay. Jin, turn my quant off.” I’ll have to manually turn it back on when we’re done, but I’ll live. 

Luana smiles satisfactorily. “Sorry for the secrecy. I have to be extra cautious with your parents. They’re so close to the Chancellor that I’d say they’re friends.” 

I chuckle. “My mom is friends with the Chancellor!”

Luana nods. “So I had to be careful.” She stands up. “Nari, what if I were to tell you that you have the chance to connect the roots of our ancestors with the present for a better future?”

I tilt my head. “I would ask what does that mean?”

Luana strides around me. I watch. 

“Nari, you are very different from everyone else. The speech you gave at the student aviation show. Everything that I’ve seen you do and say today. You have a good head on your shoulders. And a good heart. That’s why I’m trusting you with a secret. What if I was part of a group who knew a way to free you from your parents while freeing all of humanity? Giving you the chance to live your dreams? Giving your chance to walk where your ancestors walked? Enjoying the beauty of this universe?”

I freeze. I feel tingling. Butterflies in my stomach. Chills running up my veins. “I would ask what’s the catch?”

I turn to watch as Luana sits on my bed. “It doesn’t come free. It comes with a lot of sacrifice, but it’s worth it.”

I peer at her. I’m catching on to what our visitor is really about. I should have known back when I saw her profile’s bold bio line: You deserve to be free.

“Come on,” I say. “If you’re part of the Return to Earth Initiative, just say it!”

Luana laughs. “You’re smart Nari! Nice of you to call us that instead of the not so nice names the WC calls us.”

I tap my knee. “Look, I have no interest in reporting you. But I believe you’re barking up the wrong tree. Whatever you’re asking of me, forget it.”

Luana leaned forward. “I can walk away. I appreciate you keeping this a secret. If you give me a chance to make my case, will you listen? I think you want to hear it.”

“Ok,” I say amused. “I’m listening.”

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The 23rd Day of Writemas! 🎄🍒❄️👩‍💻✍️

Wow Christmas is almost here! Writemas is almost done! Thank you again @agirlandherquill for this wonderful set of writing prompts that helped me in so many ways!

From the list of writing prompts for Day 23, I chose a chapel. Originally I hoped to write this scene a few days ago when there was a prompt for an altar. I didn't have much inspiration at that time. Now I was able to get inspired and dive into this scene. This is from Brigid Aideen, currently working on the first draft. This is a superhero story that deals a lot with my protagonist's faith so this prompt was perfect.

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The altar at Saint Matthew's is not as sumptuous as altars in cathedrals where I used to live, but not any less beautiful. The empty chapel stirs soft whispers in the air. I feel cozy in my pew. I turn my eyes to the stained glass windows. A king with a crown looks down on me, holding up two fingers. I wonder if He is blessing me, telling me that I’ve been worried for nothing.    

“Hi!”

A young girl at the back of the chapel runs down the pews toward me. She’s round faced and looks about ten years old with long dark brown hair.

She stops where I sit. “Hey! I haven’t seen you before. Are you new?”

“Yeah,” I say. “Do you know everyone here?”

“Oh, yeah,” says the girl. “I’m an altar girl. My name is Veronica.”

She extends her hand. I shake it. “I’m Aideen. Well, it’s my middle name. My name is Brigid, but I go by Aideen.”

“Pretty name. So are you new to our parish? New to town? Just checking out the cathedral?”

I fiddle with my fingers. I shouldn’t be shy in front of a young girl, but when nothing in my life has been normal, talking to anyone feels like I'm on the spot.

“My family and I just moved here.” That’s all that I can say. 

“Cool, where are you from?”

“Oh,” I breathe and shrug. “Everywhere. We lived in Florida. Before that, New York. I was born in Ireland.”

“No way! Why don’t you have an accent?”

There’s something about Veronica’s puffy, rosy cheeks and bubbly voice that makes me smile. “We came to America when I was just a baby. My dad has been everywhere so he doesn’t have an accent either, but he is 100% Irish.”

 “My mom says we’re part Irish. And part Spanish. And part Swedish. We’re even a little Jewish.”

I smile as I say, “100% Irish as my parents. I don’t need 23andMe.”

Veronica laughs. She takes a second to look around the chapel, as if checking for anyone else. “So, Aideen, what brings you here tonight? Just touring? Are you going to come to mass?”

“Oh, yeah,” I say. I don’t know if she’ll understand, but I feel the need to let it out. I’ll just have to take it slowly. “Veronica, if you don’t mind my asking, do you have friends?”

“Oh, yes,” she says matter of factly. “Some are in the parish. Some are from school. I take it you don’t know anyone here yet?”

I rub my fingers against the armrest. “When I was your age, I had friends. Now I’m sixteen. I don’t have friends anymore.”

Veronica’s face turns gray. “What happened?”

“I don’t know.” It’s the truth. “At first I asked, ‘What did I do wrong?’ Now I ask, ‘What’s wrong with me?’”

Veronica shakes her head. “How could there be something wrong with you? My mom teaches me that we’re all special to God.”

I lightly tap on the armrest. I don’t know if I know her well enough. I switch to a smile. “So, what school do you go to? What grade?”

“Brookwood Elementary. Started 5th grade this year.”

“A public school?”

“Yeah, my mom wants my brothers and sisters and me to experience being with all of the other kids. Keeps my dad happy. What about you?”

“I don’t know what public school is like.”

Veronica shrugs. “We’re all different.”

We’re all different. We’re. All. Different. We. Are. All. Different.

“We are,” I say.

Veronica looks around. “Are any of your family here? Are you just touring the place? Have you seen Fr. Roberto? ”

I tighten my lips. “My parents don’t know yet if they plan to go to this parish. I was actually here for Confession. But the line was too long.”

Veronica widens her eyes. “Confession? What did you do?” She shakes her head. “Sorry, I shouldn’t have asked.”

“It’s okay,” I say. “You wouldn’t understand. You don’t need to.” I stand up. “I actually should head home now. But it was nice to meet you.”

Veronica smiles. “You too, Aideen. I hope you come back! Mass is tomorrow at 8:30am.”

I nod. “I’ll see what my parents say. My sister Kathy is about your age. You’d get along well.”

“I bet! You have a good night, Aideen!”

“Thank you, Veronica.”

I leave the cathedral feeling a little more blessed than I expected. 

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The 22nd Day of Writemas 💚🤍❤️

Thank you so much @agirlandherquill for setting up these writing prompts!😇 This has so helped my productivity! To any who haven't seen it yet, you can find the rules in the invitation post. 🎄🎀☃️

From the list of Day 22 prompts, I chose: "It's a time for celebration, wipe that frown from your face."

I used it to create a new scene mixed with a rewritten scene for my YA Dystopia The Blood Cleaners. This takes place at about Chapter 3 or 4 (still working out chapter lengths). This is early on in the story when Justin and Joselyn have just met. I hope this scene doesn't seem too silly. I added in a couple of quirky characters who replaced the original boring teacher I created in Draft 1. If they seem weird, it's just because I'm still working on them.

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"Hey, wassup new bloods!” chirped the first young man. “Guess what we get to be as junior blood cleaners? We’re your teachers! I’m Mel! And this is my partner Rupert!”

The second young man, Rupert, pointed to the door, rolling his eyes as he crowed, “And down the tunnel are the offices of the shrinks to keep us sane. Might as well head over before you lose yours.”

Mel gently elbowed Rupert. “Hey, ignore my ironic partner! It's a time for celebration! Wipe that frown from your face!"

The class erupted in laughter. Oscar wiped off his scowl to hint at a smile.

Mel skipped forward. “Lady Mariana has given the rundown of the boring stuff! Medical forms, yeah it hurts but you forget the pain later. You’ve got your packets. Lord Lucio had to act out his show. Don’t worry, he’s only mean to you if he catches you in a bank vault. Don’t ever do that! There’s no goodbye party if you screw yourself up. But we have a welcoming party! Come on! The others are waiting in the break room!”

Justin stuck his papers in his packet and along with his book. He saw that Joselyn eyed him as she held her packet, too.

Mel and Rupert guided the class of fifteen into the corridor. As they walked down into the tunnel, many questions flew out from the recruits.

“They have psychologists just for the blood cleaners?” Wanda asked, cringing. 

“Yep,” Rupert replied. “Don’t worry, they’re nice. They don’t take us for granted as much as the Fists do.”

“Hey,” Mel squeaked while lifting his knees high, dancing along the way, “if Señor Presidente didn’t care, he wouldn’t have so many shrinks for us. They are the candle on the path of training and stick with you for years to come on the job.”

Wanda widened her eyes. “Blood cleaners always see psychologists?”

Mel slowed down his walk. “Our work is draining. We need our therapy. Don’t worry, ‘we’re all a family here. You need a shoulder to cry on, go to a colleague. It’s why we need love and partners. And smiles!”

 Mel had said his last two words just as Roberto, the quarry worker about their age, walked to the front of the party. “How many casualties are there each year?”

Rupert interjected, “No sugarcoating, we honestly don’t know. Not every year is the same. One year, we only lost one trainee. There was another year when we lost three fourths of the trainees!”

“Yeah, so cut Lord Bo some slack,” Mel added. “He’s a meany, but a goody. He pushes us hard in the gym because the fitter you are, the more likely you are to survive.”

Justin eyed Joselyn as the group walked down the middle of the tunnel. She eyed him. He stepped up to her.

“Are you all right?” he asked. 

“Oh, I couldn’t be better.” She relaxed her face. “I thank you so much for helping me go through that all. I thought I was going to go home with my tail between my legs.” 

He smiled. “Now you can go home with your head held high!”

She tilted her head. “Justin, right?”

“That’s my name. Joselyn. That has to be one of the nicest names I’ve ever heard.”

As Joselyn began to open her mouth, Mel shrieked from ahead, “There it is!”

The group crossed the crosswalk to a doorway with a sign that read: Blood Cleaners Only

The group entered a room full of men and women wearing the cerulean and white uniform. A few sat on leather couches, reading or watching the TV. A few sat at card tables playing ratscrew. A few chatted by the counter with packs of tea and coffee. Cigarette fumes mixed with the aroma of microwaveable food. These experienced blood cleaners ranged from many ages, from young adults to the middle aged. There were a handful of gray-haired elders. Justin even recognized the couple he watched all of his life - Ben and Mia. 

They all turned to the newcomers and applauded. 

“WELCOME NEW BLOODS!”

“Let’s get out that cake!” Mel exclaimed.

Justin wondered why the blood cleaners had only one break room, not an adult lounge and a family lounge. He smacked himself to remember there were no child workers among the blood cleaners. They didn’t even have their own children. He looked for Joselyn. She was still only an arms length away. Her eyes surveyed the welcome party, though she turned to focus on Justin.

Ben placed a vanilla frosted cake at the end of one dining table. The blood cleaners and new recruits quickly mixed, shaking hands, and conversing while getting in line. 

Joselyn took a step closer to Justin. “Why did you do it?”

He blinked. “Do what?”

“Help me. Both times.”

Justin doubted anyone in the break room would care about the time almost a decade before when two chicos scurried out of their designated areas to escape the police, but he didn’t want to advertise it.

“This isn’t the place,” he whispered. “Let’s talk somewhere else.”  

“Right,” Joselyn agreed. “I actually can’t linger for the party. I have…something at home. Since we all have clearance now, would you like to come with me? Not the whole way if you don’t want to, but maybe to the bus stop.”

“Absolutely,” Justin said. 

He could skip cake to take surface air for the first time in years.

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