TUGAS TUTON BAHASA INGGRIS

Disusun Untuk Memenuhi Tugas Mata Kuliah Bahasa Inggris

Dosen Tuton : Bapak I Gede Adiyana Putra, S.Pd., M.Pd.

TUGAS 2
MKWI4201/ BAHASA INGGRIS

Nama Mahasiswa : MUHAMAD FARHAN

Program Studi : TEKHNOLOGI PENDIDIKAN
NIM : 050099595
UPBJJ : BANDAR SRI BAWONO

FAKULTAS KEGURUAN DAN ILMU PENDIDIKAN

FKIP UNIVERSITAS TERBUKA
2023.2
 KATA PENGANTAR
Assalamu'alaikum Wr. Wb.

Dengan rasa syukur yang tak terhingga, kami panjatkan puji dan syukur kehadirat
Allah SWT atas segala rahmat, hidayah, serta karunia-Nya yang senantiasa mengiringi
langkah-langkah kami dalam menyelesaikan tugas ini.

Saya ingin memulai tugas ini dengan mengucapkan terima kasih kepada Bapak I
Gede Adiyana Putra, S.Pd., M.Pd. atas bimbingan dan arahannya dalam menjalani mata
kuliah ini. Tugas ini merupakan bagian dari proses pembelajaran yang saya alami selama
kuliah, dan saya berharap dapat menunjukkan pemahaman yang saya peroleh melalui
penyusunan tugas ini dan saya telah berusaha semaksimal mungkin untuk memberikan
jawaban yang tepat dan relevan.

Meskipun tugas ini mungkin belum sempurna, saya telah berusaha sebaik mungkin untuk
menyajikan jawaban yang memadai. Saya terbuka untuk menerima masukan dan saran
untuk perbaikan di masa depan.

Wassalamu'alaikum Wr. Wb.

Braja Harjosari, 16 Mei 2024

Muhamad Farhan
 PEMBAHASAN

TUGAS TUTORIAL 2

Program Studi : Teknologi Pendidikan

Kode Mata Kuliah : MKWI4201
Nama Mata Kuliah : Bahasa Inggris

Soal Nomor 1
Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.

Linda Lau
123 Main , Anytown, CA 12345 Street· linda.lau@email.com
March 5, 2020
Oscar Lee
Managing Editor
Acme Graphic & Design
123 Business Rd.
Business City, NY 54321
1 Dear Ms. Lee,
2 I would like to invite you to attend our upcoming Liberal Arts department job
networking event. The event will be held on the afternoon of May 1, 2020. We wish to
provide our graduating seniors with an opportunity to meet business leaders in the area
who may be looking for new hires who hold degrees in the Liberal Arts.
The event will be held at the Cox Student Center at Northern State University, and will
last about 2 to 3 hours. If you have an interest in attending or sending a company
representative to meet with our students, please let me know at your earliest convenience
and I can reserve a table for you.
Thank for your time and I hope to hear from you soon.
Respectfully,
3 Linda Lau
Linda Lau
Liberal Arts Department Chair

Pertanyaan / Questions
Identifikasi bagian surat yang ditandai oleh nomor 1-3. / Please identify the part of the
letter numbered 1-3.
Jawab/ answer :
1. Address Block: This includes the sender's (Linda Lau) contact information (linda
lau, 123 Main , Anytown, CA 12345 Street, linda.lau@email.com ), date of mail
(March 5, 2020), and recipient's contact information (Oscar Lee) (Managing
editor Peak Graphics & Design 123 Business Street. Business City, NY 54321).

2. Letter Content: This is the main body of the letter in which Linda Lau invites
Oscar Lee to attend the Liberal Arts department's upcoming networking event. He
provided details about the event, such as date, time, location, and purpose, and
expressed his desire for Oscar Lee or a representative from his company to attend.

3. Closing and Signature: This includes the closing of the letter (“Thank you for
your time and I hope to hear from you soon.”) and Linda Lau's signature, followed
by her typed name and title (“Linda Lau, Chair of the Liberal Arts Department ”
).

Soal Nomor 2
Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.
Bridgestone International Co.
1660 Maple Court
Kennett, MO 63857
July 21, 2021
William Reed
Purchase Manager
The Cooking Store
2175 Rivendell Drive
Mineral City, OH 44656
Dear Mr. Reed,
Thank u for your letter of 4 july inquiring about our latest catalogue, price list, and terms of
payment?
We are pleased to enclose our latest catalogue, price list, and terms of payment together with
samples of our promotional gifts. We hope you will find our prices n terms satisfactory.
I look forward to receive your order.
Yours sincerely,
Robert Brown
Robert Brown
Sales Manager
Pertanyaan / Questions
Identifikasi 3 (tiga) kesalahan pada surat di atas. / Please identify 3 (three) errors in the
letter above.

Jawab / Answer :

1. Spelling and Grammar Errors: There are several spelling and grammar errors in
the letter, such as "thank u" instead of "thank you", "july" instead of "July",
"catalogue" instead of "catalog", "terms of payment?" instead of "terms of
payment.", "n" instead of "and", and "receive" instead of "receiving". These errors
can make the letter appear unprofessional.

2. Punctuation Errors: The letter lacks proper punctuation, such as the absence of a
comma after "July 21, 2021" in the date, and the use of a question mark instead of
a period after "terms of payment?".
 3. Informality: The tone of the letter is too informal for a business communication.
Phrases like "thank u" and the use of shorthand ("n" instead of "and") are not
appropriate for a professional letter. Additionally, the sentence structure is
somewhat fragmented, which reduces the clarity and professionalism of the
communication.

Soal Nomor 3
Anda baru saja membeli biskuit secara online dan menerima produk yang kedaluwarsa.
Tulislah sebuah surat singkat sebanyak kurang lebih 100-200 kata yang menyatakan
kekecewaan Anda dan bahwa Anda meminta produk pengganti atau uang kembali.
You ordered some cookies online and received an expired one. Please write a body
letter Please write a body letter in approximately 100-200 words that explains your
disappointment and you are asking for a refund/exchange

Jawab / Answer :
Dear [Customer Service],

I hope this email finds you well. I recently ordered a batch of cookies from your online
store, and while I was excited to receive them, I was disappointed to discover that one of
the cookies in the package was expired. As a loyal customer, I have always enjoyed the
freshness and quality of your products, so this experience came as a surprise.

As you can imagine, receiving an expired item not only undermines the trust I have in
your brand but also raises concerns about the quality control processes in place. I value
the high standards that your company upholds, and I believe this incident falls short of
those expectations.

In light of this, I kindly request either a refund for the entire purchase or an exchange for
a fresh batch of cookies. I am confident that your team will take the necessary steps to
rectify this situation promptly and ensure that such incidents are not repeated in the future.
Thank you for your attention to this matter. I look forward to hearing back from you soon
and resolving this issue satisfactorily.

Sincerely,
[Farhan]

Soal Nomor 4
Anda sedang menggalang dana untuk korban bencana alam dan ada seorang donatur
yang memberikan bantuan dalam jumlah besar. Tulislah sebuah email ucapan terima
kasih terkait pemberian donasi tersebut sebanyak kurang lebih 50-100 kata.
You initiate a fundraising event after a natural disaster and there is one person who
donated a large amount of money. Write a thank you email about the donation in
approximately 50-100 words.

Jawab / Answer :
Subject: Sincere Thank You for Your Generous Donation

Dear Mr Jono,

I am writing this letter to convey my deepest gratitude for your extraordinary donation to
our fundraising event for [natural disaster relief]. Your contribution will have a significant
impact on the lives of those affected, providing much-needed help and support during this
difficult time. Your kindness and generosity inspire us all, and we are so grateful for your
support.

With sincere appreciation,

[Farhan]
[Chairman]
[hanhan123@gmail.com]