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♡Dearly beloved♡

@faux-ecrivain / faux-ecrivain.tumblr.com

I am utterly ♡obsessed♡with you.

Welcome

Welcome, My Dearest Darlings, please enjoy your stay. This is a placeholder post, tomorrow I shall post something official. There will be rules for this blog, but I’m sure you’re big enough to handle them. Most of my posts will be yandere headcannons, stories, fanfics or blurbs. I can’t promise five star posting, but I can promise yandere that are obsessed with you! Kisses! 💋💋

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[Posting Schedule]

Sunday- 0 to 1 posts

Monday- 1 to 2 posts

Tuesday- 0 to 1 posts

Wednesday- 1-2 posts

Thursday- 1 post

Friday- 0 posts

Saturday- 1 to 2 posts

[This is my schedule, it may change but for the most part I will abide by this schedule.]

[Notice; Requests are open, if you want me to write a story, headcannon or Drabble then send in a request through the ask system.] [You have a high possibility of having your request accepted and then written, but please do not expect to be chosen and remember that I have every right to reject your request.]

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[Anons] (yes, I will do emoji anons) Anon 1

Anon 2 (Also known as 9 cat anon)

Anon 3

Anon 4 (Also known as najma anon)

Anon 5

Anon 6 (also known as Doll)

Anon 7

Anon 8 (also known as ૮₍ ˶• ༝ •˶ ₎ა anon)

Anon 9

Anon 10

Anon 11 (Henceforth referred to as Banana Bread Anon)

Anon 12 (._. Anon)

Anon 13

Anon 14

Anon 15

Anon 16

Anon 17

Anon 18

————- [Socials] Wattpad (@CuddleBuddy3) Quotev (https://www.quotev.com/ForgetfulFerret) Main Account (@circularcatinspace) ————

Masterlisturl (https://www.tumblr.com/faux-ecrivain/738086533063655424/masterlist?source=share )

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The Rules

  1. Do not spam requests, asks or comments.
  2. I reserve the right to reject any requests that make me uncomfortable.
  3. Do not share any personal information on this account, that means don’t share your name, address or anything similar in a request or comment. 
  4. If you want to request something, or send in an ask, please offer details, such as pronouns, the setting, the year and basic info about your requested yan. (Eg; could you make a yan that hates their darling and only obsesses over them because they look like yan’s ex?)
  5. I will not do smut, I can’t write smut and the most you’ll get is a suggestive tension. 
  6. If you send in a request, ask or make a comment, and it has triggering content, please label it with the symbol TW.
  7. Do not send any asks, requests or make any comments that contain derogatory remarks towards a certain group. (In simple terms; no bigotry, which means prejudices towards a certain group.)
  8. Do not rush me, but do motivate me. (which means I accept compliments, analysis of my works and comments of a similar manner)

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[Fun Facts About Me]

  1. I don’t like making grammatical errors, they are irritating and embarrassing (in my opinion). However, mistakes are part of life and I have to learn to how to move on. That said; if you do see some grammar mistakes please let me no and I’ll try to fix it. (Ugh, it’s embarrassing that I was born, and live in, Mississippi yet I make numerous grammatical errors. I’m so bad, most of the time, at English, it’s hilarious.)
  2. I have a tendency to ramble, over explain and procrastinate. I can also appear quite pushy, this is probably because of some deep seated worry that I haven’t yet uncovered.
  3. I love mysteries, they are my favorite genre and I especially love the femme fatale mysteries or mysteries with a female lead.(IE; Miss. Fisher’s Murder Mysteries, Murder She Wrote and there’s more but my mind is blank right now.)
  4. I have a soft spot for cute fuzzy cats and I like taking photos of scenery that I believe to be beautiful.
  5. Alice in Wonderland is one of my favorite books, it was a childhood favorite and it still is to this day. (The animate movie and the book are my preferred versions of Alice In Wonderland.)

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Anyway, daily reminder from a culturally isolated Romani person.

Gypsy does not mean wanderer.

It literally means ‘people from egypt’ or similar, as europeans believed Romani people were from Egypt. It has become known similar to nomad due to how our ancestors have been forced to be nomadic due to racism and ostracization, but it is a SLUR.

Romani people are STILL being forcibly sterilized.

Romani people are STILL being forced into ghettos.

Romani people are still facing violence and danger in countless European countries- and recently, I’ve seen the beginnings of the extremes in the United States.

Have a little fucking respect and DON’T USE A SLUR THAT’S BEEN USED FOR CENTURIES AGAINST US.

And for the love of whatever’s up there, ESPECIALLY do not use it to describe your witchcraft. It is playing on the ‘magic gypsy’ trope, and is EXTREMELY insulting.

non romani people, please reblog this.

Masterlist fanfic Yandere!Batfamily X Reader

NONE OF THESE FANFICS BELONG TO ME, this is more of a personal reading list of fanfics I follow and such, all the links lead you to the creators' direct blogs.

Almost all the fanfics in the 'platonic' section are with Neglected!Reader, I'm addicted to that trope.

More than one link will lead you to the authors' master list instead of a masterlist for the series. This is because they don't have a dedicated list for the series, and it was easier for me to keep them this way. (There are also links to the first chapter, in this case, the author probably left the other chapters there, in addition to imagines, headcanons, and drabbles on their own.) I thought about adding a short description below the links to explain what the fanfic is about… maybe I'll do it later or just leave it as it is.

  1. Not - series
  2. Again and. Again - series
  3. Bruce hears Reader call someone else "dad." - drabble
  4. Reader who only recognizes Alfred - drabble
  5. [UN] Fair - series
  6. Adorned in pearls (although Bruce here is not platonic…) - one shot
  7. Batfamily with a Shallow Reader - imagine
  8. Reader in Squid Games - imagine
  9. Crack Baby - series
  10. Smalltown Meta!Reader - series
  11. Forget me not - series
  12. No more Chances - series
  13. Inmorta! Reader - series
  14. Undoing Fate - series (it's not yandere but it has my favorite cliche so…)
  15. Tip toes - series
  16. Meet The Waynes - series
  17. Bring back the dead - series
  18. Obsessive reader in the shadows - imagine
  19. There are two fanfictions here, the first fic doesn't have a name and I don't know what to name it. - series
  20. Who said money can´t buy hapinness (considering the # I assume that the batfam is platonic….but I'm not sure) - series
  21. Between life and death, death is tempting - series
  22. Ain´t no sushine - series
  23. Beyond the Bat - series
  24. Crow choir - series
  25. Waterbone - drabble
  26. Marine!Reader - one shot? drabble?
  27. Saboteur - series/imagine
  28. Unwanted embrace - series
  29. I'm almost sure this was one of the pioneering stories in this trope. - one shot
  30. Little Demon - one shot
  31. Goodbye World - one shot
  32. Batsis wakes up in a fanfic - imagine? drabble?
  33. Batfam playing with Reader - I think it's a drabble…I don't know
  34. Pity Party - series
  35. Yandere Al Ghuls! - series
  36. How would they spend time with you after the kidnapping? -drabble
  37. You´re a fucking weird hacker - one shot
  38. Lucid Dreams - series
  39. Ghost of the Past - series
  40. Soulamate Soul Animal - series
  41. Good Look(includes more DC yanderes characters) - series
  42. Web Bound (It is NOT yandere, but it does have obsessive characters) - Series
  43. Bug like Angel - series
  44. The other family - one shot
  45. Batman! Damian Wayne x Robin! Reader - one shot?
  46. Children!Reader who loves Tim more than Dick - headcanon
  47. Yandere!Batfam Headcanons - headcanon xd

  1. What We Want - series
  2. The sinfull Allure (the story is not yandere, but it has the batboys, and I love this reverse harem) - series
  3. Seven Days a Week - Hit me Hard and sort - two series
  4. First married to Bruce - one shot
  5. As Yanderes´ Universe - one shot series?
  6. Polyamory with Aged Up! Damian Wayne and John Kent - imagine
  7. Sisters!Reader x Batboys - Headcanon? (according to the hashtags)
  8. Greetings - drabble?
  9. How Dick and Damian would handle learnig reader is dating somebody? - Drabble?
  10. Addictive - Series
  11. Do You Think We´ll Be In Love Forever? (includes more DC characters) - various drabbles
  12. Perfect Life - one shot
  13. Batboys and reader who knows - headcanon set?
  14. Checkmate - one shot
  15. Tim Drake x nursing student!Reader - one shot
  16. Remedial Lesson (18+) - One shot
  17. Dommy Mommy!Reader - headcanon
  18. Reader hosted by Tim Drake - one shot
  19. Yandere self-aware Dick Grayson - headcanon set
  20. Moon Prism Power! - imagine
  21. What types of yanderes would the Batboys be? - headcanon
  22. Yandere!Batboys x Reader HC - Headcanon

Took this from Instagram because this is urgent US folks.

You need to call and email your reps no matter if you live in a red or blue state. This cannot be allowed to pass.

It will prevent anyone who has ever changed their name from voting (including their last name)

Here is an article explaining the ambiguous language of the bill how it’s intention is to strip millions of Americans their right to vote

& how its republicans top priority to get passed

Spread this far- this could end voting rights for hundreds of millions of Americans

Keep sharing this folks. & take action. This is a major bill that has republican’s support. It is essentially the reversal of the 19th amendment using citizenship as a scapegoat

There will be a lot of distractions preventing folks from focusing on this bill. Because this is the one that will bring democracy down.

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why is this post completely broken in every way imaginable

Broken notes… deactivated account… removed image….

Finally, we have them all.

In addition: OP’s name is just… gone. No “[insert username]-deactivated[insert a bunch of numbers]” as is the standard for deactivated blogs.

Just the world “deactivated.” Look upon their post, ye mighty, and despair.

It’ll be almost impossible to find this post unless it wanders across your dash.

It also only has 1 note. Truly a broken post

hey folks if you have an android phone: google shadow installed a "security app".

I had to go and delete it myself this morning.

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unexpectedyarns

And several others as well. Clear data, disable, uninstall if you can.

Heads up, you can't find this app by searching for it in the app store either, though clearly many have tried. You have to directly clink the limk above to see if it's installed to uninstall it.

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Anonymous asked:

Weird question here: do I need to describe my character's clothes? Obviously I need to if it's important to the story or setting (if they're wearing a beautiful ruby gown at a ball, or maybe dirty and torn to indicate a fight) but just on a normal day? Do readers need to know what characters are wearing?

As writers, we often get caught up in the details of our characters. We describe everything from their eye colour to their favourite breakfast cereal, and it can be so easy to go overboard with unnecessary description. Describing a character’s clothes is a danger zone for too much description. It’s incredibly easy to get lost in the minutiae and forget the most important element when writing for readers; will they find this interesting?

The short answer

No, you don’t need to describe every piece of clothing your characters wear throughout your story. Like all elements of writing, clothing descriptions should serve a purpose.

Just like clothing in real life, descriptions of a character’s clothes serve a function. This means that your chose in when to describe things should be intentional; usually for the purposes of character development, world-building, setting a mood, social commentary, plot advancement, or symbolic representation.

When should you describe clothing?

Every plot is different, but there are some key moments in a story when knowing what a character is wearing or how they are dressed could be important:

  • When it reveals a character’s personality or status (e.g. do they favour muted tones or bright, bold colours? Do their clothing choices signify wealth?).
  • During important story moments or turning points if it highlights that moment’s significance (e.g. wearing black at a funeral, or an academic gown at graduation).
  • If the clothing affects the plot or action (e.g. Cinderella losing her glass slipper).
  • When establishing the time period or setting (e.g. historically appropriate clothing descriptions to put readers into the right headspace to appreciate your setting).
  • If it shows a significant change in the character (e.g. a shy character who likes to blend in suddenly switching to bright colours to display their newfound confidence).
  • When it symbolises something deeper in the narrative (e.g. a meaningful piece of jewellery, or a bride wearing her mother’s dress for her wedding).

When should you skip clothing descriptions?

Readers don’t need to know what your character is wearing at every moment of every day. The best way to think about it is, if it’s not important to the story, don’t describe it in detail. Usually it’s enough to know that someone is wearing a jumper on an overcast day, and it won’t actually enhance the scene to know it’s a plain black one. Here are some moments when it’s probably not all that important to go into too much detail:

  • During routine daily activities.
  • When the outfit doesn’t add meaning to the scene.
  • If it interrupts the flow of important action.
  • When it feels like “outfit cataloging” rather than storytelling.
  • If you’re describing clothes just to fill space.

Tips for how to effectively describe a characters’ clothes

  • Make it matter: Make sure your descriptions reveal something about the character, whether that be a personality trade, social or economic status, or their cultural background.
  • Illustrate change: Highlight a change in your character, whether that be something external or a internal, emotional change.
  • Create uniqueness: In the case of a protagonist, especially, the way they dress can make them unique. It can contrast them with other characters.
  • Set something up: Describing a character’s clothes can be used for foreshadowing a future plot point.
  • Be selective: You don’t need to describe a whole outfit. Instead, you can focus on one or two distinct pieces, items that have significance, clothing that affects movement or action, or elements that reflect the character’s state of mind.
  • Don’t info-dump: You should try to seamlessly weave descriptions into the narrative. Describe actions and interactions, use sensory language, have other characters react, or let clothing be a part of a scene’s atmosphere.

Common pitfalls to avoid

There is a fine line to tow when describing a character’s clothes in a way that is effective. And essentially, the pitfalls happen on either side of that line. You will either over-describe or under-describe. So what does that mean?

Over-description

  • Listing every item of clothing, regardless or relevance or usefulness.
  • Describing outfits for every scene. We rarely need to know what all characters are wearing at all times.
  • Including brand names unless relevant. Sometimes, a character’s brand loyalty might be important to the plot, but if it’s not, it’s unnecessary, and potentially alienating to readers.
  • Getting too technical with fashion terminology. Most readers won’t be au fait with the specifics, so make sure you write in a way that most readers can follow.
  • Focusing on clothes at the expense of action. Nothing will bring an action scene to a screeching halt faster than a detail dump.

Under-description

  • Don’t ignore clothing when it would be significant. If a character has undergone a significant personal change, then it would make sense to describe how that might also affect how they look on the outside.
  • Don’t miss opportunities for characterisation. A lot of a character’s personality can shine through their clothes, so if you’re telling the kind of story where that could be relevant, make sure you don’t miss those opportunities.
  • Don’t forget period-appropriate details in historical fiction. Research and authenticity are essential in certain genres, and clothing can go a long way to setting the scene.
  • Don’t overlook clothing that affects movement or action. The clothing a character wears can hugely affect the believability of a scene. If a character has just stepped out of a coronation and is dripping with heavy jewellery, it wouldn’t make sense for them to go for a leisurely swim.
  • Don’t skip descriptions that could build atmosphere. If it’s cold and dark, make sure your characters fit into that setting. Or you can use it to contrast your character and invert expectations (like a character who only ever wears shorts, even in winter).

When in doubt, ask these questions:

  • Does this detail reveal character?
  • Will it matter later in the story?
  • Does it help readers understand the world?
  • Is it necessary for visualisation?
  • Could the scene work without it?

Like all descriptions, clothing is a tool that you can use. Describe clothing when it serves your story and skip it when it doesn’t. The key is to make every detail count, whether you’re describing a ball gown or a worn-out pair of sneakers.

The bottom line is that you must trust your instincts and your readers. They don’t need a detailed inventory of every character’s wardrobe, but they do appreciate thoughtful details that enhance their understanding of your characters and story. When in doubt, less is often more, but make the descriptions you do include count.

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The State department has changed LGBTQ to LGB.

If you claim to care about trans people now is a good time to show genuine ally ship.

And I mean being an ACTUAL ally.

I don't mean sexualizing us or watching trans porn.

I don't mean treating trans mascs like "uwu soft baby boy" and trans femmes as "yass queen girl boss".

I don't mean expecting praise for using the right pronouns and using incorrect ones when "they're a bad trans person".

I mean ACTUAL SUPPORT.

Donate to trans shelters or organizations. DON'T out us to people we aren't out to. Go to protests if you're able, FIGHT ALONGSIDE US. Don't bring us around people you know are transphobic or dangerous, the list goes on. The LGBTQ community is ALL of us not just some of us.

Trans people who are documented as trans on government documents are currently not able to get passports - whether or not they accept their passport being issued as their birth sex, any indication that you're trans on a document that can be accessed by the government is being used as reason to deny a passport.

This is incredibly alarming. Even agreeing to be labeled as your birth sex is not sufficient. They want to deny trans people the ability to leave the country. Any possible reason for this is horrifying.

We need to rally now. Protect the entire community, do not allow them to throw any of us under the bus. None of us will be spared, they're just coming for the most vulnerable people first, and soon enough the most vulnerable people will be YOU.

How is bnha anime of the decade...... they aren’t even anime of the hour of the minute of the second

The notes on this post were so toxic that staff just axed em

1969.........

Yes, when the original post is deleted from the server (not just the blog, but the Tumblr servers), there is no root post for notes to be added onto, and also no root post for time to be counted from, so it starts from zero. Most computer operating systems use Unix, which was launched in 1971 with t.he epoch date of midnight on January 1, 1970 as 1. Therefore zero is one second behind that date: December 31, 1969. Also, very unfortunately, this also means nobody except you and anyone you reblog it to will see this explanation, as you cannot open the notes to see comments when there are no notes.

Tumblr is truly one of the webbed sites ever

post's haunted.

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"I don't want to read this" is totally valid.

"This is disgusting to me" is totally valid.

"I don't want to read this because it is disgusting to me" is totally valid.

"I don't think anyone should be allowed to read or write this because it is disgusting to me" is authoritarian.

As we see a barrage of evil executive orders come in, they are not immediately enforceable and will takes months or years to implement.

That’s still not great, but don’t let these pile up to the point of hopelessness. Take a breath, and look community leaders who will fight it every step of the way.

Reminder that when Trump was in office before a LOT of his orders got overturned or held up in lower courts for long enough that they became irrelevant. It also does not mean they WILL be enforced. Stand with your community where you can. The fight is not over. Do not obey in advance.

Last sentence above is the most important. Tyranny requires people to shut up and fall in line. Do not obey in advance.

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Writing Theory: Dialogue

One question, I often get asked on this blog concerns dialogue and how to write it. Dialogue is the characters speaking to one another or even to themselves and while it sounds easy, it can be difficult to chose what your character might say or how they might say it or even how it might present on the page/word doc/napkin you're writing it on.

Content: The What and Why

What is your character actually saying? Your character is in a situation (which hopefully you put them in or at least know what is going on, if you do not, it is OK). But in most situations, most characters interact in some way, whether it is verbal or not. What your character says has to link to the situation in some way. Picture yourself on a bus sitting next to a friend and you have just seen a dog out of the window. What would be the response or the natural line of conversation here? Probably 'Oh, that dog is cute.' or 'This journey is taking forever.' etc. It unlikely would be a long monologue about a character's deepest darkest secrets or an admission of murder. It is unlikely, but of course not impossible. But generally, one usually tries to keep the conversation to the present and the now. Allow your character to get their point, or even part of it, across to who they talking about clearly. Remember not only does their companion need to know what is being said, but as do your readers.

Why is this person saying this? There is a deeper level to what anybody says and we all know this. A person will generally keep to neutral phrases or topics in order to keep the peace, distance themselves from whoever they are having the conversation with or a person will be curt and short with somebody they are not getting along with or a person will be polite and formal to somebody who demands the respect. There is a reason behind word choice, a reason behind tone and even topic. You won't have to delve into the intricacies of the 'hello' or 'hey' types of dialogue but say if a character was in a situation they must or do chose their words carefully, then you have to consider the why of it as you write the conversation.

Characteristics of Speech

Characters don't talk like they are reading from an instruction manual. Personality, experience and other factors effect how your character might speak. Next time you are in a group setting, focus on how the people around you speak, whether its the sentence structure, the tone, the volume or the flow of their words. No character speaks the same as another, and nor should they. I go further into this in this post here. Now you have established your character's voice as it pertains to personality, now consider the actual voice of your character. How would you describe your character's voice? Even if you don't include a description of it in your narrative, you should have some idea of how your character speaks. Some people have gravelly voices, high pitched voices, clear, garbled, etc. You can of course, fan cast a voice if you wish. The way your character speak can give away things about them as people. Contractions, slang and colloquial phrases are often used to denote those of working class or poorer factions whether the lack of them, including a larger vocabulary, are often attributed to a wealthier, more educated class. You can say a lot about somebody by the way they speak and is an important tool in the entire show don't tell deal. Speaking of...

Showing, Not Telling when Your Character is Yapping

People don't often come out with what they really want to say. Thankfully or else I would be unemployed and in jail.

  • Concealment: Like I said before, characters will sometimes chose words or specific tones when speaking or breaking off at certain points to conceal what they are thinking. The dialogue might look something similar to using different approaches either with a character trailing off before the offending phrase (...) or catching themselves (-) or hesitating/considering their words/pausing before speaking. It doesn't often mean a character is being evasive, they may be avoiding harming somebody's feelings.
  • Class/Social rank: Like I said above, the way somebody speaks can be an indication of their status in society. This is not a bad thing, we have different ways of speaking because we come from different walks of life, we have totally different experiences. Writing the character's voice with this in mind can indicate your character's background.
  • Nationality/Culture: As in the real world, we don't all speak the same language, it makes us who we are and marks out our culture and place in the world. Phrases, sayings and specific words or even pauses to consider the wording or sentence structure can denote a character from having a different mother tongue or culture than those around them. Your character may sometimes have to tailor what they say to somebody of a different culture or nationality even if they speak the same language. For example, if I'm writing a post here or in my WIP, I often have to steer clear of slang, sentence structure. grammar structure and phrases that non-Irish people are not familiar with.
  • Emotion: Emotion and dialogue walk hand in hand, a character will not speak without some emotion behind it and most emotions make us want to say something. Anger will make our words sharper, harsher, more abrupt. Happiness will make words flow faster, more positive and sometimes even jumbled. Grief will make one sound disconnected, numb and unable to think straight. The way your characters speak can tell your reader and the rest of the cast able to read their emotional state even if they cannot see their face or your helpful dialogue tags.
  • Sensibilities and Personality: Word choice and avoidance of certain words can tell somebody a lot about the person speaking. Somebody who avoids cursing or using 'vulgar' language might be considered proper, mannerly and formal. Somebody who does might be judged. Somebody who avoids topics that are considered taboo is somebody who aligns to social norms and expectations while somebody who tends to venture into incendiary topics is likely not and more free willed. These are not bad things but it can tell you a lot about the person speaking or in the way that person responds to somebody's words.

On Dialogue Tags and the Controversy of 'Said'

(nobody would ever fucking say that)

I don't buy into this drama over dialogue tags. Some writers will denounce them, some swear by them and they have been arguing over this as often as we do about the Oxford Comma. The real truth is that it is up to you. It is not a cardinal sin to use them and there is nothing - NOTHING - wrong with using the word said. There are of course some dialogue tags I personally hate and some I love but there is nothing wrong with the word 'said' or 'says'. Here are a few commonly used tags.

A

  • Accused: Used to pin the blame on somebody.
  • Added: Usually used when the character is adding to something they or somebody else has said.
  • Agonized: When a character is distressed over something.
  • Agreed: Used when a character allows something or agrees with something that is said.
  • Acknowledged: Used when giving voice to a fact.
  • Announced: Used for a statement.
  • Asked: Posing a question
  • Answered: To address a question.
  • Addressed: When a character draws attention to something or draws the attention of somebody.
  • Affirmed: Used when a character is stating an opinion or fact.
  • Apologized: When a character is saying sorry for something.
  • Approved: When a character is giving their support to a fact or something somebody has said.
  • Articulated: When a character expresses a thought/idea.
  • Asserted: When a character affirms an opinion firmly.
  • Advertised: Used when a character is drawing attention to something.

B

  • Babbled: Used when a character is talking excitedly, often nonsensically.
  • Backtracked: Used when a character is going back on something they have said.
  • Badgered: Used when a character is nagging another.
  • Bawled: Used when a character is crying out, usually wildly and very loudly.
  • Bellowed: When a character is shouting.
  • Began: When a character begins a sentence or thought.
  • Bemoaned: When a character complains of something.
  • Bit: Used when a character is being sharp with something that is irritating them or angering them.
  • Blamed: Used when a character is assigning blame for something.
  • Bleated: When a character is complaining or moaning, usually used in a derogatory way.
  • Blurted: When a character says something without pause or thought.
  • Boasted: When a character displays self-pride.
  • Boomed: When a character speaks loudly.
  • Broadcasted: Used when a character is announcing something, usually loudly.

C

  • Called: When a character cries out for somebody.
  • Chanted: When a character speaks in a monotone or often repeating words over and over.
  • Chattered: When a character speaks rapidly, usually out of nerves or excitement.
  • Chastised: When a character rebukes another character.
  • Cheered: Used when a character is excited or pleased about something.
  • Chimed: When a character adds something to something already said.
  • Choked: Used when a character is having a difficult time getting the words out.
  • Chuckled: When a character laughs slightly.
  • Chortled: When a character laughs slightly and breathlessly.
  • Coughed: When a character’s breath catches.
  • Croaked: Used when a character’s voice is strained or dry.
  • Crowed: When a character boasts loudly about something.
  • Cried: When a character exclaims or weeps.
  • Cursed: When a character use swear words or denounces another character.
  • Cautioned: Used when a character warns somebody.
  • Complimented: Used when a character is lavishing praise on somebody.
  • Condemned: When a character denounces something.
  • Considered: Used when a character is thinking aloud.
  • Conferred: When a character discusses something with another, usually quiet.
  • Commented: Used when a character is expressing a thought or opinion.
  • Complained: Used when a character is annoyed over something.
  • Criticized: When a character comments negatively on something.

D

  • Declared: When a character announces something.
  • Denoted: When a character is indicating something.
  • Dictated: When a character is insisting on something, usually forcefully.
  • Drawled: When a character is talking in a low, slow voice.
  • Droned: When a character is talking on and on, usually derogatory.

E

  • Elaborated: When a character goes into detail explaining something.
  • Emitted: Used when a character makes a sound.
  • Enunciated: Used when a character makes their words clear, often to add emphasis.
  • Expressed: When a character conveys their thoughts and opinions on something.

F

  • Fumed: Usually when a character is angry over something.
  • Fretted: When a character is anxious, usually a reputation of intrusive thoughts.

G

  • Gasped: When a character inhales suddenly, usually in shock or pain.
  • Giggled: Used when a character laughing.
  • Gloated: When a character is boasting over besting another character.
  • Grinned: When a character is smiling widely when speaking.
  • Groaned: When a character makes a low sound, usually in pain or discomfort.
  • Growled: Used when conveying anger.
  • Grumbled: Used when a character is complaining but in a quiet, low way.
  • Gulped: When a character swallows.
  • Gushed: Used when a character is talking excitedly about something they care about.

H

  • Hissed: Used when a character is angry or irritated.
  • Howled: Used when a character is making a loud, drawn-out sound noise out of pain and grief.

I

  • Insisted: When a character speaks or lends their support persistently.
  • Interjected: When a character adds something into somebody else’s discussion.
  • Insulted: To speak negatively about another character.

J

  • Jabbered: Used when a character isn’t making sense but talking rapidly.
  • Joked: Used when a character is making a jest or fun of something.

L

  • Lamented: When a character expresses a deep thought or grief over something.
  • Laughed: Used when a character is laughing.

M

  • Mewled: When a character’s voice is talking in a feeble voice.
  • Mentioned: When a character interjects something but doesn’t explain it.
  • Mocked: Used when a character is teasing, either in humour or spite.
  • Moaned: Used when a character is complaining, in pain or discomfort.
  • Mumbled: When a character is speaking in a low, almost unintelligible voice.
  • Muttered: When a character speaks quietly, usually in an effort to not be overheard.
  • Murmured: When a character talks quietly, usually not to be overheard or to not gain attention.

N

  • Noted: When a character brings attention to something.
  • Nattered: When a character goes on about something almost absent-mindedly, usually when nervous or preoccupied.

O

  • Observed: When a character is offering their view on something.
  • Ordered: When a character is giving instruction to another, usually forcefully.

P

  • Panted: Used when a character is out of breath or panicked.
  • Praised: When a character is showing positive attention to something or somebody.
  • Prattled: When a character is talking about something without a line of thought or sometimes reason or attention.
  • Persisted: When a character keeps at a thought or opinion.

Q

  • Quavered: When a character’s voice warbles usually out of fear or anxiety or sadness.
  • Quipped: When a character makes a witty remark.

R

  • Raged: Used when a character is angry.
  • Ranted: When a character goes on about something, usually in a monologue expressing their emotion about the subject.
  • Rambled: Used when a character is talking about something that doesn’t matter or warrant attention.
  • Relayed: Used when a character is telling another character about something that happened previously.
  • Remarked: Used when a character speaks about something.
  • Replied: When a character answers back.
  • Reprimanded: Used when a character is rebuking another for an action or word.
  • Responded: When a character replies to something said.
  • Recited: When a character repeats something from memory.
  • Repeated: When a character says something again, usually right after they have said it.
  • Retorted: When a character replies tartly or sharply.

S

  • Sang: Used when a character is happy or light about something.
  • Scolded: When somebody is reprimanding a character.
  • Screamed: Used when a character is scared or angry.
  • Squalled: When a character is crying out loudly.
  • Smiled: When somebody speaks when they are smiling, usually positively but can be negative.
  • Smirked: Used when a character is being smug.
  • Sneered: When a character is speaking in a derogatory way.
  • Snarled: Used when a character is being aggressive or angry.
  • Snivelled: When a character is speaking through a runny nose or tears. It is usually used to denote a character as weak or vulnerable.
  • Sniffled: When a character is speaking with a runny nose and tears.
  • Shouted: When a character is saying something loudly or with extreme emotional.
  • Shrieked: When a character makes a sharp sound, usually from extreme emotion.
  • Stammered: When a character’s voice becomes halted with pauses, usually an indicator of a speech impediment or nerves or anxiety or fear.
  • Stated: When a character makes a statement.
  • Stuttered: When a character speaks with difficulty, often repeating the beginning of words, usually out of fear, anxiety or nerves. But it can also be attributed to a speech impediment.
  • Swore: When a character curses or uses vulgar words to express their anger.
  • Scoffed: Used when a character is being derisive about something.
  • Sighed: When a character exhales out of annoyance, anger, tiredness or boredom.
  • Screeched: When a character’s voice becomes high-pitched and erratic.
  • Spat: When a character speaks so forcefully that they almost spit saliva in their effort to get their often emotion driven words out.
  • Sputtered: Used when a character is unable to get the words out, usually out of disbelief.
  • Sobbed: When a character is crying so hard that their voice is garbled by their tears and gasps for breath.
  • Suggested: When a character proposes an idea.

T

  • Thundered: When a character is talking about something in an angry way, usually loudly.
  • Told: When your character is relaying something to another.
  • Tittered: Used when a character is half-laughing, half-trying to stifle it.
  • Thanked: When a character expresses thanks.
  • Trumpeted: Used when a character is excitedly announcing something.

U

  • Uttered: When a character speaks.
  • Urged: Used when a character is prompting another to take an action.

V

  • Voiced: When a character expresses their opinion verbally.
  • Vociferated: When a character argues vehemently.

W

  • Wailed: When a character makes a sound of grief, pain or discomfort.
  • Warbled: used when a character’s voice quavers.
  • Wept: When a character cries when speaking.
  • Whispered: Used when a character speaks quietly, so not to be overheard.
  • Whimpered: Used when a character’s voice is feeble and weak, usually in pain or fear
  • Wheezed: When a character’s voice is strained from lack of breath, such as after a coughing fit.
  • Whined: When a character complains usually in an irritating way.

Y

  • Yammered: When a character is talking about something with no line of thought.
  • Yelped: When a character cries out in shock, pain or discomfort.
  • Yawned: Used when a character is tired or bored.
  • Yelled: When a character speaks loudly out of anger or panic.
  • Yowled: When a character cries out, usually high-pitchedly.

Overusing dialogue tags can sometimes take a reader out of the narrative and make your scenes read more like plays. I generally follow the rule of 'if it not essential' it is out the window. You can simply write dialogue in speech quotes and nobody will stop you.

What's in a Voice?

While we have already gone through the personal sound of your character's voice, what does it actually sound like when they are speaking? When describing the voice of your character while they speak, allows the reader to hear what they can only read and offer a clue how the character is feeling in the moment.

  • Absent-mindedly: When a voice betrays one’s distraction
  • Booming: When a voice is loud and carrying.
  • Breathy: When a voice is peppered with breathes.
  • Brittle: When a voice betrays a strained mind or fragile sense of mind.
  • Clear: When a voice is devoid of anything to obstruct or conceal it.
  • Deep: When a voice is low pitched.
  • Flat: When a voice is devoid of pitch or emotion.
  • Gravelly: When a voice is rough, croaking like when one just wakes up.
  • Guttural: When a voice is rough, coming from the back of the throat.
  • Harsh: When a voice is unkind and hard.
  • Husky: When a voice is rough.
  • Monotonous: When a voice is unvaried in pitch, all in one tone of voice.
  • Muffled: When a voice is obstructed, such as when the mouth is covered.
  • Nasally: When a voice sounds like it is coming from the nose, often sharp.
  • Piping: When a voice is high-pitched, almost sing-song.
  • Raspy: When a voice is dry and rough sounding.
  • Rich: When a voice is pleasant sounding to the ear.
  • Shrill: When a voice is high-pitched.
  • Silvery: When a voice is clear, soft, and musical.
  • Soft: When a voice is quiet.
  • Sonorous: When a voice is deep in sound.
  • Thin: When a voice is strained, with uneven pitch and tone.
  • Throaty: When a voice comes from the throat, often rough and croaky.
  • Tremulous: When a voice is shaking.
  • Velvety: When a voice is smooth.
  • Warm: When a voice is comforting, gentle.
  • Weak: When a voice lacks any strength.
  • Whispery: When a voice is low, hushed.
  • Wobbly: When a voice is unsteady.

Avoid the monologues if you can

Nobody can really have a conversation with somebody when that person is rattling off about themselves or their dastardly plans etc. It's not really realistic but in fiction, we kind of want to allow characters to do on a little, to let loose and bare their soul in a speech worthy of Peter Dinklage's best work (Laws of Gods and Men, GoT Season 4). Personally I only give somebody monologuing a few minutes before I interrupt with the good old "that's crazy" or multiple "yeah"s. A character has to be captivated - or captive - to listen to somebody keep talking, talking, talking.

Interaction

Again, your characters are meant to be real people, they are not robots on stage. When people are talking, it isn't perfect. When emotions are high, people will often cut across one another or interrupt one another. When characters are excited or in agreement, they might finish one another's sentences. The dialogue in The Bear, is fantastic for this as the interactions feel real. The characters interrupt one another, talk over one another and finish each other's thoughts. People follow a pattern of talking with people they know, they are less guarded and more prone to speaking their mind if they are comfortable with them or know what to avoid saying. People are more formal when speaking to strangers. People will speak differently to different people, there are things you can only say to your sibling and you wouldn't talk to a classmate you barely know the same way you will speak with a dear friend. The way character's interact can tell the reader a lot about the relationship between the characters.

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