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Kippie

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She/Her | 32 | Married Polyamorous Asexual | Multishipper DNI if hostile Your boundaries are valid, but if you are cruel to others about shipping or drama then please do not consume my content.

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I THINK I wanna do a thing where I use this as a sort of "central" main acct and then have little sideblogs for different fandoms

And then Reblog art posts from those side accts?

that way yall don't have to get flooded with any particular fandom brainrot if you just wanna see my work itself

that's been kinda my plan for a year now I just haven't actually Enacted it, oops

i might elaborate later but fanfic replies literally develop writerโ€™s metacognition and make them better writers

so, Metacognitionย is theย practice of thinking about thinking or identifying oneโ€™s cognitive processย . in essence, metacognition is understanding how you prepare for academic challenges, exams, or tasks, and then being able to reflect on whether you did well, you prepared adequately, and what was most effective. in a writing setting, this type of self-awareness helps you transfer skills in writing, say, fanfiction into writing academically, competitively and professionally.ย 

hereโ€™s an articleย from brown university on the subject iโ€™ll discuss further. there are 3 parts of practicing metacognition identified in this article: planning, monitoring, and evaluation. how might this look like for a fanfic writer?ย 

planning: asking oneselfย โ€˜what is my goal?โ€™ย โ€˜what strategies should i use to meet that goal?โ€™ย โ€˜how much time/length do i need to meet my goal?โ€™. so maybe my goal is to write a meet cute where two characters kiss. iโ€™ll need to use a perspective, an upbeat tone, and forward characterization to do this. itโ€™ll probably take 5000 words and two days to write.ย 

monitoring: asking oneself: is my story making sense? am i reaching my goal, or do i need to summarize more succinctly to keep it to 5k? maybe you started with a lot of exposition and now youโ€™re 6k in and the characters havenโ€™t met yet. what went wrong/changed? is it ok that it changed or did you not realize it got away from you? what now?ย 

evaluation: asking oneself: did i reach my goal? was it effective? what would i change next time?ย 

this is where comments come in

it is incredibly difficult to evaluate yourself. comments likeย โ€œi love this!โ€ actually do begin to touch on the evaluation step of metacognition. it means, in general, the writer isย on the right track. comments likeย โ€œi loved the dialogue between x and yโ€ orย โ€œthe emotions of this section really hit meโ€ begin to answer the questions of was it effective, did i reach my goalย and conversely answer what would i change next timeย (by adding more of whatever was specified as working well). HYPER SPECIFIC comments, like analyzing the story between the lines or pasting in a line that you really liked and explaining why, is like jet fuel for the metacognition process and iโ€™m not exaggerating. specifically pointing out what was effective and why is incredibly usefulย 

i can straight up credit my writing style to all of my friends and readers who have given incredibly detailed comments. when i found a community who gave feedback like that, my writing improved a thousand times faster than before. so! i guess what iโ€™m saying is give feedback! it goes so much further than you realize!

This is exactly the post I was thinking about when I wrote that recent post about how fanfic authors develop as authors by adapting to what they perceive as successful with their audience -- based on positive feedback.

Feedback absolutely does not need to be "critical" to help an author improve, and anyone who insists that fanfic authors need negative feedback or they'll never grow is. Well. To start with, incorrect.

I have some thoughts about comments and feedback and I will put them behind this cut tag.

hi, a lot of you need a perspective reset

  • the average human lifespan globally is 70+ years
  • taking the threshold of adulthood as 18, you are likely to spend at least 52 years as a fully grown adult
  • at the age of 30 you have lived less than one quarter of your adult life (12/52 years)
  • 'middle age' is typically considered to be between 45-65
  • it is extremely common to switch careers, start new relationships, emigrate, go to college for the first or second time, or make other life-changing decisions in middle age
  • it's wild that I even have to spell it out, but older adults (60+) still have social lives and hobbies and interests.
  • you can still date when you get old. you can still fuck. you can still learn new skills, be fashionable, be competitive. you can still gossip, you can still travel, you can still read. you can still transition. you can still come out.
  • young doesn't mean peaked. you're inexperienced in your 20s! you're still learning and practicing! you're developing social skills and muscle memory that will last decades!
  • there are a million things to do in the world, and they don't vanish overnight because an imaginary number gets too big

Found my 53yo very-much-not-online father in the kitchen today meticulously arranging cutlery on the countertop and i was like 'what are you doing' and he looked up at me with the world's most shit-eating grin and said "Your mother told me this is how you rick-roll the Youth" and i looked over and it was fucking. Loss.jpg.

i must stress that he's never seen the original comic. My mother simply showed him the shorthand symbol and he memorized it. As far as he is aware this is just a fucking hieroglyph that deals instant psychic damage to everyone under the age of 30

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watching @nanowrimo within a single hour:

  • make an awful, ill-conceived, sponsored post about "responsible"/"ethical" uses of ai in writing
  • immediately get ratio'd in a way i've never seen on tumblr with a small swarm of chastising-to-negative replies and no reblogs
  • start deleting replies
  • reply to their own post being like 'agree to disagree!!!' while saying that ai can TOTALLY be ethical because spellcheck exists!! (???) while in NO WAY responding to the criticisms of ai for its environmental impact OR the building of databases on material without author consent, ie, stolen material, OR the money laundering rampant in the industry
  • when called out on deleting replies, literally messaged me people who called them out to say "We don't have a problem with folks disagreeing with AI. It's the tone of the discourse." So. overtly stated tone policing.
  • get even MORE replies saying this is a Bad Look, and some reblogs now that people's replies are being deleted
  • DISABLE REBLOGS when people aren't saying what nano would prefer they say

im juust in literal awe of this fucking mess.

AND THEY'VE DELETED THE POST. PACK IT IN EVERYONE GO HOME

in light of NaNoWriMo the nonprofit org announcing that they'll be shutting down less than a year after this horseshit may i just say

i'm still fucking frustrated, i'm still fuckign disappointed, i'm still just SO furious that some stupid repeated management dipshittery took a fun event that encouraged people to just WRITE and not get stuck in their own heads and fucking turbo spiked it into the mantle of the fucking earth. FUCK them for ruining this. FUCK them for killing something that helped me connect with other writers. FUCK them for ruining something that actually made me write. Clowns and fucking fools.

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Reblogged modmad

I think every computer user needs to read this because holy fucking shit this is fucking horrible.

So Windows has a new feature incoming called Recall where your computer will first, monitor everything you do with screenshots every couple of seconds and "process that" with an AI.

Hey, errrr, fuck no? This isn't merely because AI is really energy intensive to the point that it causes environmental damage. This is because it's basically surveilling what you are doing on your fucking desktop.

This AI is not going to be on your desktop, like all AI, it's going to be done on another server, "in the cloud" to be precise, so all those data and screenshot? They're going to go off to Microsoft. Microsoft are going to be monitoring what you do on your own computer.

Now of course Microsoft are going to be all "oooh, it's okay, we'll keep your data safe". They won't. Let me just remind you that evidence given over from Facebook has been used to prosecute a mother and daughter for an "illegal abortion", Microsoft will likely do the same.

And before someone goes "durrr, nuthin' to fear, nuthin to hide", let me remind you that you can be doing completely legal and righteous acts and still have the police on your arse. Are you an activist? Don't even need to be a hackivist, you can just be very vocal about something concerning and have the fucking police on your arse. They did this with environmental protesters in the UK. The culture war against transgender people looks likely to be heading in a direction wherein people looking for information on transgender people or help transitioning will be tracked down too. You have plenty to hide from the government, including your opinions and ideas.

Again, look into backing up your shit and switching to Linux Mint or Ubuntu to get away from Microsoft doing this shit.

there are multiple options here depending on how comfortable you are digging into your computer's registry. You can either simply disable it surface level through settings or excise it entirely from the system registry

reblogging again as a cautionary tale to please PLEASE fucking make a system restore point before you do anything. i consider myself tech savvy and still nearly bricked my computer. and make sure you know how to access safe mode

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The Trump administration accidentally included the conservative editor of The Atlantic in a group chat where they were discussing, in great detail, the US bombing campaign in Yemen

In all, 18 individuals were listed as members of this group, including various National Security Council officials; Steve Witkoff, President Trumpโ€™s Middle East and Ukraine negotiator; Susie Wiles, the White House chief of staff; and someone identified only as โ€œS M,โ€ which I took to stand for Stephen Miller. I appeared on my own screen only as โ€œJG.โ€

...I had very strong doubts that this text group was real, because I could not believe that the national-security leadership of the United States would communicate on Signal about imminent war plans. I also could not believe that the national security adviser to the president would be so reckless as to include the editor in chief of The Atlantic in such discussions with senior U.S. officials, up to and including the vice president...

At this point, a fascinating policy discussion commenced. The account labeled โ€œJD Vanceโ€ responded at 8:16: โ€œTeam, I am out for the day doing an economic event in Michigan. But I think we are making a mistake.โ€ (Vance was indeed in Michigan that day.) The Vance account goes on to state, โ€œ3 percent of US trade runs through the suez. 40 percent of European trade does. There is a real risk that the public doesnโ€™t understand this or why itโ€™s necessary. The strongest reason to do this is, as POTUS said, to send a message.โ€

The Vance account then goes on to make a noteworthy statement, considering that the vice president has not deviated publicly from Trumpโ€™s position on virtually any issue. โ€œI am not sure the president is aware how inconsistent this is with his message on Europe right now. Thereโ€™s a further risk that we see a moderate to severe spike in oil prices. I am willing to support the consensus of the team and keep these concerns to myself. But there is a strong argument for delaying this a month, doing the messaging work on why this matters, seeing where the economy is, etc.โ€...

At 8:27, a message arrived from the โ€œPete Hegsethโ€ account. โ€œVP: I understand your concerns โ€“ and fully support you raising w/ POTUS. Important considerations, most of which are tough to know how they play out (economy, Ukraine peace, Gaza, etc). I think messaging is going to be tough no matter what โ€“ nobody knows who the Houthis are โ€“ which is why we would need to stay focused on: 1) Biden failed & 2) Iran funded.โ€

The Hegseth message goes on to state, โ€œWaiting a few weeks or a month does not fundamentally change the calculus. 2 immediate risks on waiting: 1) this leaks, and we look indecisive; 2) Israel takes an action first โ€“ or Gaza cease fire falls apart โ€“ and we donโ€™t get to start this on our own terms. We can manage both. We are prepared to execute, and if I had final go or no go vote, I believe we should. This [is] not about the Houthis. I see it as two things: 1) Restoring Freedom of Navigation, a core national interest; and 2) Reestablish deterrence, which Biden cratered. But, we can easily pause. And if we do, I will do all we can to enforce 100% OPSECโ€โ€”operations security. โ€œI welcome other thoughts.โ€...

The account identified as โ€œJD Vanceโ€ addressed a message at 8:45 to @Pete Hegseth: โ€œif you think we should do it letโ€™s go. I just hate bailing Europe out again.โ€ (The administration has argued that Americaโ€™s European allies benefit economically from the U.S. Navyโ€™s protection of international shipping lanes.)

It was the next morning, Saturday, March 15, when this story became truly bizarre.

At 11:44 a.m., the account labeled โ€œPete Hegsethโ€ posted in Signal a โ€œTEAM UPDATE.โ€ I will not quote from this update, or from certain other subsequent texts. The information contained in them, if they had been read by an adversary of the United States, could conceivably have been used to harm American military and intelligence personnel, particularly in the broader Middle East, Central Commandโ€™s area of responsibility. What I will say, in order to illustrate the shocking recklessness of this Signal conversation, is that the Hegseth post contained operational details of forthcoming strikes on Yemen, including information about targets, weapons the U.S. would be deploying, and attack sequencing.

The only person to reply to the update from Hegseth was the person identified as the vice president. โ€œI will say a prayer for victory,โ€ Vance wrote. (Two other users subsequently added prayer emoji.)

According to the lengthy Hegseth text, the first detonations in Yemen would be felt two hours hence, at 1:45 p.m. eastern time. So I waited in my car in a supermarket parking lot. If this Signal chat was real, I reasoned, Houthi targets would soon be bombed. At about 1:55, I checked X and searched Yemen. Explosions were then being heard across Sanaa, the capital city.

someone I follow on the bird app just announced they're starting a very exclusive private fic server because they and a bunch of other people want to talk about how much they love the fics they're reading, and as an author can I just say that a really great place to talk about a fic you love is in the comments for that fic

I understand that people are trying to create safe spaces, but as the number of comments that I get on my fics dwindles with each passing year, knowing these spaces exist where my fics are being discussed, places that I am excluded from, makes me want to write fic LESS

I mean I guess who cares, right, because if I stop writing, there's 10,000 other people that will continue...but if you participate in a fic "book club" server and you say nice things there about a fic you loved, maybe copy and paste that into a comment on AO3?

the only thing fanfic writers are asking for in return for hours of hard work is attention. please don't rob us of the one thing that we hope for when we hit "post"

this is directly related to this post I made about how fanfic authors now are treated like content mills, and not like valued members of a creative community who thrive on interaction. for the past decade, we've watched the fandom ecosystem disrupted over and over, as NSFW fan artists seek safety by putting their work behind paywalls, and self-conscious fic readers squirrel away their feelings in invite-only communities

an easy way to do your part to fight against the evils perpetrated by social media is to leave a comment on a fanfic you love

but don't take my word for it -- here are some responses that my fellow authors have left on this post:

The fact I had a fic that was fairly beloved and NO ONE commented on it because it was all being done in a fucking book club server made me want to scream.

I haven't updated that fic in two years now.

I cannot express enough how imperative it is to show the writer how much you love their work. The comments don't have to be novels themselves - even just an "I loved this so much!" Or keyboard smashing works wonders to keep the writer going. Please, we need to bring back supporting writers and artists now more than ever!!!

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