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awhile back I bought this lime juice from HEB and started straight drinking it because I fully thought it was like a lemonade and not just pure citrus... I got a little over halfway through the bottle before I realized and I think that says everything you need to know about me.
you should love & cherish trans girls by the way. you should buy them flowers and hold their hands. you should try to make them smile
do you all like me? do i blog well?
4. phone in bed
I've already said that my number one piece of writing advice is to read.
But my number two piece of advice is this: be deliberate.
Honestly this would fix so many pieces of bad writing advice. Don't forbid people from doing something, tell them to be conscious and deliberate about it. This could help stop people from falling into common mistakes without limiting their creativity. Black and white imperatives may stop a few annoying beginner habits, but ultimately they will restrict artistic expression.
Instead of "don't use epithets": "Know the effect epithets have and be deliberate about using them." Because yes, beginners often misuse them, but they can be useful when a character's name isn't known or when you want to reduce them to a particular trait they have.
Instead of "don't use 'said'" or "just use 'said'": "Be deliberate about your use of dialogue tags." Because sometimes you'll want "said" which fades into the background nicely, but sometimes you will need a more descriptive alternative to convey what a character is doing.
Instead of "don't use passive voice": "Be deliberate about when you use passive voice." Because using it when it's not needed can detract from your writing, but sometimes it can be useful to change the emphasis of a sentence or to portray a particular state of mind.
Instead of blindly following or ignorantly neglecting the rules of writing, familiarize yourself with them and their consequences so you can choose when and if breaking them would serve what you're trying to get across.
Your writing is yours. Take control of it.
It probably sounds like I'm preaching to the choir here because most of my mutuals are already great writers. But I'm hoping this will make it to the right people.
can't stop thinking about this
patron request. caption this
The sky is clear. It's a good day for small ghosts.
Image description: art showing a group of ghost (that look like white blobs with black holes for eyes and no other feature) in a field, some are standing in the grass some float above, in the background birds fly, the sky is blue, yellow and pink. end Image description
Lammergeier aka Bearded Vulture (Gypaetus barbatus), Accipitridae, order Accipitriformes, Catalunia, Spain
photograph by Lars Icke
