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    The document summarizes an essay that compares and contrasts perspectives from four classmates. It finds that the essay followed the proper format and structure, using either a block or point-by-point structure. It also notes that the essay used compare and contrast words accurately, although some words like "but" and "while" were overused. The essay had a clear thesis statement but did not always clearly connect or elaborate on its points of comparison/contrast. Overall, the feedback was positive about the essay's structure, support, and conclusion while noting some areas for improvement in expanding points and varying vocabulary.

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    The document summarizes an essay that compares and contrasts perspectives from four classmates. It finds that the essay followed the proper format and structure, using either a block or point-by-point structure. It also notes that the essay used compare and contrast words accurately, although some words like "but" and "while" were overused. The essay had a clear thesis statement but did not always clearly connect or elaborate on its points of comparison/contrast. Overall, the feedback was positive about the essay's structure, support, and conclusion while noting some areas for improvement in expanding points and varying vocabulary.

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    The document summarizes an essay that compares and contrasts perspectives from four classmates. It finds that the essay followed the proper format and structure, using either a block or point-by-point structure. It also notes that the essay used compare and contrast words accurately, although some words like "but" and "while" were overused. The essay had a clear thesis statement but did not always clearly connect or elaborate on its points of comparison/contrast. Overall, the feedback was positive about the essay's structure, support, and conclusion while noting some areas for improvement in expanding points and varying vocabulary.

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    The document summarizes an essay that compares and contrasts perspectives from four classmates. It finds that the essay followed the proper format and structure, using either a block or point-by-point structure. It also notes that the essay used compare and contrast words accurately, although some words like "but" and "while" were overused. The essay had a clear thesis statement but did not always clearly connect or elaborate on its points of comparison/contrast. Overall, the feedback was positive about the essay's structure, support, and conclusion while noting some areas for improvement in expanding points and varying vocabulary.

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    The essay is She did follow the format that was given by our tutor. The essay evidently
    a comparison and
    contrast essay
     compared and contrasted her perspective from her other three
    classmates.

    An
    appropriate structure is She used an appropriate structure by using point-by-point. Although, I
    used,
    either block or point-
     believe she could have expanded on her points more if there wasn't really
    a limit on the number of sentences per paragraph.
    by-point

    Compare and
    The compare and contrast words were properly used. Although, she
    contrast structure
    words are used  should widen her vocabulary and not repetitively use the words "but"
    and "while".
    accurately

    The criteria for She was able to compare and contrast, but not properly elaborated.
    comparison/contrast X Some points were strong but somehow not totally connected or related
    are clear with each other.

    Aside from having a very unique initial statement, her thesis statement
    The essay has
    clear thesis statement  was direct. She clearly stated the purpose of this essay and the details
    about whom this topic is focusing on.

    Each paragraph has rightfully divided from the introduction, comparison,


    Each paragraph has a
    clear topic sentence  contrast, and conclusion. Hence, the content of each paragraph did not
    come out as misleading.

    I do believe that she gave out facts, used a good example from the
    The essay has strong
    support (facts, reasons,
    examples, etc.)
     situation, and used good reasoning for the points that she has stated. Like
    what was previously said, she could have elaborated more, but her effort
    to try on giving out a clear reasonable point was worth appreciating.

    The conclusion includes The conclusion, clearly gave out a good summary of the points. What I
    a summary of the main
    points  also liked about the conclusion is that she didn't stop from summarizing,
    but was able to relate how the differences and similarities are actually
    beneficial in keeping things balanced.

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